A Super Villain I Invented

[Ghostrider87]

Bar fighting is not a style or "form" of fighting. It is more of a venue for a no-holds-bar or no-rules fighting. I have never heard of it being used in the context of which you are.

Oh ok. Now that you have explained it to me it sounds like it would be like Ultimate Fighting except a different setting with able to use chairs, and other items as weapons since there is no rules.

 

[spdrknight]

Along the same lines... it seems like all your characters are experts at hand-to-hand combat, in some form of another. This may just be me, though, I don't know. You may want to go back and think about your characters a little more. Abilities and super powers are not good ways of differentiating characters. Focus on the backgrounds and psychology of the individual. This is just what I am seeing when you bring to us all these different characters.

 

[donaldthe3rd]

I dont know why it keeps double posting, my computer is all screwed up. But thats beside the point.

 

[Ghostrider87]

Longhorn

Real Name: Marcus Palmer
Height: 6'4"
Weight 263
Eye Color Brown
Hair Color Black

Powers Abilties He has superhuman strength able to lift up to 75 tons. He has superhuman durability and is a experienced bar fighter. He has horns that are the exat same as Longhorns in his mutant form and can charge through just about any surface and material. In his mutant form his arms are the shape of bodybuilders.

I will be working on his bio.

 

[donaldthe3rd]

Do you got a picture on him?

 

[Ghostrider87]

Do you got a picture on him?

No but I will be drawing him soon. His colors so for I have come up with for his costume Orange, brown, and gray.

 

[SniktSteven]

Thats makes no sense what so ever! Experienced bar-fighter? What are you talking about? You cant be an experenced bar fighter! Thats like being a professional walker, or a champion breather . Seriously you need to think about your characters.

 

[Ghostrider87]

Thats makes no sense what so ever! Experienced bar-fighter? What are you talking about? You cant be an experenced bar fighter! Thats like being a professional walker, or a champion breather . Seriously you need to think about your characters.

Ok let me explain this to you. Officially since being in High School he was hired at a bar as the official muscle should things get out of hand and officially he has fought plenty of people in the bar and has yet to lose. They use chairs, tables, bottles, glasses, etc but they still failed to beat him. That is what I mean. So he is an experienced barfighter.

 

[spdrknight]

I think your still trying to refer to 'bar fighting' as a skill or a style of fighting. It makes more sense that something like that would be in Longhorn's history and that he would have some kind of skill in hand-to-hand combat. It might be more accurate to say that his fighting skills lend themselves to no style and that he is merely a brawl, using a mixture of skill he picked up from the street.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I think your still trying to refer to 'bar fighting' as a skill or a style of fighting. It makes more sense that something like that would be in Longhorn's history and that he would have some kind of skill in hand-to-hand combat. It might be more accurate to say that his fighting skills lend themselves to no style and that he is merely a brawl, using a mixture of skill he picked up from the street.

So you are saying that he would be an experienced brawler.

 

[SniktSteven]

So he's like a bouncer? One of those huge guys that stand at the door of a club and say "your in, your not, your in, your not".

 

[spdrknight]

So you are saying that he would be an experienced brawler.

Yeah, I would place it under his experience and not his abilities. Because it sounds like it is not a style, like I had said.

 

[venomscurse2]

This super-villian is based off of my username:

Venomscurse


Real Name- Nathaniel Newton
Aliases- None
Identity-- Only one knows, his father, which he murdered
Occupation- 1. Worked for J. Jonah Jameson Then worked in the White House


Citizenship-- None anymore
Place of Birth-- Manhattan, New York
Known Relatives-- Father: Don Newton (Deceased) Mother: Luara Newton (deceased) Step-Father: Kile Johne (deceased)


Group Affiliation-- None
Education-- Docturete Degree

Powers-- Venomscurse can:

rip the souls out of humans
Disappear and then reappear
Bend metal, plastic, with his mind
Turn humans into a substance such as water, magma, fire exc.
Super-strength: 4 tons
Super-speed: His top speed is 3 times the speed of light.
and when he is close to dying he can regenerate. (only when close to dying)

Origin- Nathaniel Newton was born 1952 April 18, in Manhattan, New York. His Father was a farmer in the fields and mother worked at an ice cream shop. On Nathan's 17th birthday he walked down the longest way to school. When he would talk to himself he would sense a force behind him. The "force" eventually drove him crazy. He ran to school but sort of leaving his inner-self behind. He killed everyone at the school using his new powers. He was arrested and sent to prison for life suddenly he went to Hell confronting Satan face to face Satan and him made a ghoulish deal. If Nathaniel killed his family and everyone in his town he would be granted eternal life. He did so along with his eternal life he was granted 2 more powers Disappear and Reappear and also rip the souls out of humans.

Venomscurse killed: Spiderman, Eddie Brock, Hulk, She-Hulk, Flint Marko, Shelly Osborn, Betty Bryant, Jonah Jameson, John Jameson,
His Family, Dr. Connors, Spawn, Iron Man,and the entire Justice League

Ill have his picture up as soom as I can

 

[donaldthe3rd]

Thats sounds pretty dam sweet to met:

 

[venomscurse2]

mine?

 

[donaldthe3rd]

Yeah.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I just finished drawing Longhorn. I will be uploading him soon.

 

[donaldthe3rd]

Ok Im looking forward to seeing it .

 

[WeaponZed]

Ok let me explain this to you. Officially since being in High School he was hired at a bar as the official muscle should things get out of hand and officially he has fought plenty of people in the bar and has yet to lose. They use chairs, tables, bottles, glasses, etc but they still failed to beat him. That is what I mean. So he is an experienced barfighter.

He is in highschool and he was hired as the "official muscle"...I've worked in a bar. You can't even be a waiter unless your 18.

 

[donaldthe3rd]

Myabe he's failed? Just a thought.

 

[Ghostrider87]

He is in highschool and he was hired as the "official muscle"...I've worked in a bar. You can't even be a waiter unless your 18.

Officially his birthday is in June and this happened in July before his Senior year of High Schoo. So he already is 18.

 

[Ghostrider87]

 

[donaldthe3rd]

That looks pretty sweet, I like the two different tones of brown in his costumet: It looks really good.

 

[jallain]

did u do that with markers?

 

[Ghostrider87]

did u do that with markers?

Yes I used markers.