Sequels My X5; X-Men Mutant Chaos.

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Heeey you all this is my 3rd book.
As some of you may know I made my own X3 called: "X-Men The Last Stand" LOL yes the same name the thread name is My X3 Tottaly Different. I wrote an X4 Called: "X-Men A New Existence" and that is also the name of the thread. And now X5 called "X-Men Mutant Chaos.

I hope you all will like it.
And I will update as much as possible.
Manips will be added later.
 
Chapter One: Getting An Inventation.
Xavier Voiceover:
Mutation, since our existence mankind lives in fear.
We all try to protect an love them.
We now have peace in our world, Apocolypse is no more.
But sometimes things take a turn, and peace becomes war.
Our scroll came true, but there was no Chaos.
Now we can expect Mutant Chaos, and shall we all survive that?

At a Bar in Los Angeles:
The White Queen entered the bar and all the guys looked at her and she said: "Hello boys, I am looking for the Helfire Club". "You should meet Sebastian Shaw, he is their leader" said the bartender. "Where is he"? asked The White Queen. "He is up in the lounge" said the bartender. The White Queen walked towards the stair but then some guy grabbed her butt. "If you love yourself, you better take that hand away" said The White Queen smiling. "Or what else honey" said the man with a nasty smile. The White Queen used her telepathy and made him walking away and then punched another guy, the other guy stood up and was much bigger, he grabbed the man and threw him through the bar. The whole bare was fighting and The White Queen smiled and walked upstairs. She came at the lounge and knocked on the door. "Come in" said a manly voice. The White Queen opened the door and a man was sitting there and she said: "I am looking for Sebastian Shaw". "You are looking at him" said Sebastian. "Well what a pleasure" said The White Queen. "Pleasure is all mine, and who are you"? asked Sebastian. "I am The White Queen, I am a mutant a telepath" said The White Queen. "Queen huh, well what do you want of me"? asked Sebastian bored. "I know what you do, I know you are the leader of the Helfire Club" said The White Queen. "Well it is a high standard club" said Sebastian. "Oh please, I know you are acting like a decent club, but I know your clubs tries to rule the world" said The White Queen. "That is not true" said Sebastian. "Please I am a telepath, I already read your mind so spare me the lies so we can get to the point" said The White Queen. "Okay then what do you want"? asked Sebastian. "I would like to work with you, be partners and destroy the X-Men and dominate the world" said The White Queen with a smile. "Who are the X-Men and why destroy them"? asked Sebastian. "They are a a bunch of mutants who are for world piece and they are going to kill everyone who tries to concur the world" said The White Queen. "Okay and how do you know that"? asked Sebastian. "Because I was one of them, but I am different than them and Xavier their leader knew that" said The White Queen. "How do I know I can trust you"? asked Sebastian. "You don't, you have to take my word" said The White Queen. "Well you told the truth and you have an evil look on your face, so okay I will work with you what is your plan"? asked Sebastian. "Well first there has to be a big fancy party and the X-Men should be invited, a revelation party that will make them get here can so make that happen"? asked The White Queen. "Yes I can and who should be invited"? asked Sebastian. "All the X-Men and some humans, but mainly the Helfire Club" said The White Queen. "Okat so you are planning an attack to"? asked Sebastian. "Yes and we will blame the X-Men" said The White Queen. "Ah I like it" said Sebastian. "Me to, when will be the party so my people can come to"? asked The White Queen. "This saturday is perfect" said Sebastian. "Perfect where will it be"? asked The White Queen. "Here we have an underground disco to" said Sebastian. "Well perfect we will be here" said The White Queen. "You will get the inventation" said Sebastian. They shook hands and The White Queen turned arround and walked out the door. "Perfect, she will help me to concur the world hahaha" said Sebastian laughing.

Meanwhile at the Mansion:
They were in a classroom and Bobby and Rogue were standing in front of the class as teachers they were telling about the history of Napoleon. "One of the greatest military leaders in history, Napoleon Bonaparte, 'The Little Corporal', was born in Corsica. Educated at French military schools, he distinguished himself early on. He commanded troops that quelled a royalist Parisian uprising in 1795 and as reward was given the army of the interior to lead. Soon after, he was made commander in chief of the army of Italy" said Rogue. "He married Josephine de Beauharnais in 1796, before going off to lead the poorly equipped army based in Italy. The Italian campaign was a success over the Austrians. With victory across Italy, and his signature on the Truce of Leoben, his popularity across much of Europe was sealed. He set his sights on British domination and planned to attack at Egypt, then India. While he won a number of triumphs along the way, his fleet was destroyed by Nelson at Abu Qir in 1798" said Bobby. "The Ottomans then declared war on France, but were defeated by Napoleon in Egypt. Back in France, the government was in crisis. Napoleon secretly left Egypt for Paris, where he conspired to stage a coup d'etat and was named first consul on 9 November 1799. His rule saw the centralization of government, the creation of the Bank of France, reinstatement of Roman Catholicism as the state religion and law reform with the Code Napoleon" said Rogue. "Over the next two years he would defeat the Austrians at Marengo, and sign the Treaty of Luneville (1801) and Amiens (1802), which established French power on the continent. In 1802, the constitution of France was altered so Napoleon could be consul for life. Soon after, Britain declared war on France and sent support to Napoleon's enemies to aid in his murder. In 1804 he had himself proclaimed emperor of the French. Within the year he claimed Kingship of Italy and annexed Genoa, enraging Britain, Austria, Russia and Sweden who allied against him" said Bobby. "Notable battles followed, including a victory at Austerlitz over the Russians and Austrians (1805) and a cruel defeat again at the hands of Nelson at Trafalgar (1805). However, Napoleon gained much territory elsewhere, including annexation of Prussian lands which ostensibly gave him control of Europe. The Holy Roman Empire was dissolved, Holland and Westphalia created, and over the next 5 years, Napoleon's relatives and loyalists were installed as leaders (in Holland, Westphalia, Italy, Naples, Spain and Sweden). In 1810, he had his childless marriage annulled and re-married in the hopes of getting an heir. Napoleon II was born a year later" said Rogue. "The Peninsular War of 1808-14 saw the beginning of Napoleon's decline. Costly defeats, an empire that was unexpectedly difficult to control and growing unrest with his iron will all contributed. His invasion of Russia cost him further. His Grande Armee of 500,000 men would be virtually destroyed during 1812 and Napoleon returned to Paris in December with fewer allies then he started with" said Bobby. "The Allies defeated him in battle over the course of the next two years, and finally, on March 31, 1814, Paris fell. Napoleon abdicated to Elba. There Napoleon learned that the French, and especially the army, were unhappy with the treatment of the restored Bourbon leadership. He took this opportunity to march on Paris and reinstate himself for his fateful '100 Days'. The Battle of Waterloo ended his brief reign. He surrendered to Britain, hoping for leniency, and instead was exiled to St. Helena where he would die on 5 May 1821" said Rogue. "And that kids is the history of Napoleon" said Bobby. "So he dies"? asked Artie. "Yes he will on 5 May" said Rogue. "Are there any questions"? asked Bobby. No one said a thing and Rogue said: "That is great, I hope everyone took notes because next week you all will get a test of the history of Napoleon" said Rogue. "Cool" said Cypher. "Okay well, time is almost up you all can go now and have a little break" said Rogue. "Yay" yelled yje kids, the packed their baggs and left. "Well that went well" said Bobby. "I know, I have to go now because Shawn needs his feeding and Anna has to take a nap soon" said Rogue. "Okay see you later" said Bobby, he kissed Rogue and she said: "You deffinitly will tiger" said Rogue. She took of and walked into the living room where Jean, Kitty and Storm were feeding their kids. "Hey ya'll" said Rogue. "Hey class over"? asked Jean. "Yeah it was great" said Rogue, she took Shawn out his crib and Anna came walking to her and said: "Mommy me hungry". "I know honey I will get you a sandwich" said Rogue with a smile. She made a bottle for Shawn and a sandwich for Anna. Anna took the sandwich and played further and ate her sandwich. Rogue took a seat on the couch and fed Shawn. "What class do you all have later"? asked Storm. "I medicine with some" said Jean. "I am teaching care of animals next" said Rogue. "And I have to teach math" said Kitty. "What about you Storm"? asked Jean. "Some english litrature this afternoon" said Storm. "And what about the guys"? asked Kitty. "They all teach the kids about cars, motors and that kind of stuff" said Jean. "Typical a guys thing, excpet for Kurt he is more of God and all and teaches the kids everything about the Faith in God, and Hank and Angel they both are into sience and they teach the kids that" said Rogue. Jean said: "Yeah exactly, oh Rachels bottle is finally empty". "Great James his to" said Storm. "Okay Sarah to" said Kitty after a while. "Shawn almost" said Rogue. A couple of minutes later Shawn finished his bottle. Everyone stood up and Rogue held Shawn in one arm and holded Anna's hand, they walked to Xavier's room because he wanted to babysit and their were already 4 cribs and on playing corner with a blanket and toyes for Anna. The kids were laid down in the crib and Anna was playing already and Jean whispered: "Thanks professor". "Yes thank you" whispered the others. "It is my pleasure" whispered Xavier. They left the room and took of to their classes. Xavier looked at the babies and said: "You all are the future". Then he looked at Anna and said: "You are the past, present and the future".
 
Meanwhile at Muir Island:
The White Queen walked into the base and said: "He is willing to partner up with me, this saturday will be a party and all the X-Men are invited hahaha". "Aaaaaah chaos will come I can feel it" said Sinister. "Yeah Xavier will pay, and seen what I have in store for him he will be living like a unhappy man" said The White Queen. "You really hate him don't you"? asked Avalance. "Yes I hate him with all my heart" said The White Queen. "Why"? asked Blob. "Because he called me arrogant while he says he is the world's most strongest telepath, well I will show him what powerful telepathy is" said The White Queen angry. "Yes you will" said Sinister. "Yes, well lets prepare ourself for the party" said The White Queen.

A Couple of days later in the Mansion:
Xavier sat in his office and was looking through his mail and saw and envelope he opened it and a beautiful card came out of it, Xavier opened it and read:


"I think the X-Men will like this" said Xavier. He read it again and thought: "Lucky I have lots of tuxedo's". Then he concentrated himself on the X-Men and sended a telepathic message saying: "X-Men when you all are done teaching I want you all in my office, thank you".
"I am curious about what he wants" said Logan. "Well we will find out soon" said Scott. "Yeah class is almost over" said Bobby. "Sir, when can we begin driving these cool cars"? asked Mike a mutant kid who his abbility is that everything he touches warms up till it caughts fire, but he can controle it. "Soon, first learn how to sit in one" said Logan. "Very funny sir" said Mike a bit sarcastic. "I thought so to" said Logan sarcastic. "Well I want to ride a big motorcycle" said Henry a kid who's abbility is atral projection. "We all do kid" said Gambit with a smile. "Okay people clean up class is almost over.
Storm, Jean and Kitty walked into the house where all the animals were and Rogue was still teaching. "Okay so everybody knows what to do, and remember don't be affraid of the animals because they can sense that" said Rogue. "Okay Miss Drake" said Jimmy. "Oh and Jubillee watch out with those snakes, they can escape so close the cage with a lock" said Rogue. "Okay I will" said Jubillee a bit scared. Rogue turned arround and saw Kitty, Jean and Storm and said: "Heey what are you doing here"? "Well our classes are over and we wanted to check you out" said Kitty. "Ah like that, I think you all got the professor's message" said Rogue. "Yes, we just were talking about it" said Storm. "Yeah I really don't know why he wants to speak with us" said Jean. "Maybe a meeting with all the teachers" said Kitty. "Yeah I think so, if you guys can hold on a sec I will come with you, they only have to feed them and they know how to do it now" said Rogue. "Sure thing" said Kitty. "Okay kids, you all can proceed now, I have to go now you all will get a practical test next week to see how you handle some animals" said Rogue. "Okay bye" said everyone. "Bye" said Rogue with a smile and turned arround and walked away with Jean, Kitty and Storm.
Hank, Angel, Polaris and Magma were in the lab and Hank said: "Hmmm interesting". "What is it"? asked Angel. "This animal contains some weird genes" said Hank. "But Hank we also don't know what animal it is" said Polaris. "Well we know it is a dog, but he isn't in the books" said Magma. "Maybe he has more bloodlines" said Angel. "Well we know that all, we have to find out what bloodlines" said Hank. Then the door opened and Kurt came in and said: "Hello, we need to get to the professor all the classes are over". "Ohh crap already"? asked Magma. Hank looked at his watch and said: "Yes it is time, we will go further with this next time". "Cool" said Angel and they all walked of to Xavier's office.
Everyone arrived at the same time and they all walked in. Bobby took Shawn out the crib. Logan took James. Colossus took Sarah and Scott took Rachel and they all sat down and so did the others. Anna was still playing in her corner and was enjoying herself so they didn't bother her. "Where is Jubillee"? asked Xavier. "She is in class, taking care of her animal" said Rogue. "Oh I needed her here to" said Xavier. "Is something wrong professor"? asked Jean. "Wait a second I am sending a telepathic message to Jubillee now" said Xavier. Everyone looked at each other and Xavier said: "Okay that is done, I guess she will be here in a couple of minutes". "Okay then what is it"? asked Storm. "I will tell you all when Jubillee arives" said Xavier with a smile. "Oh okay" said Rogue. A couple of minutes later the door opened and Jubillee walked in saying: "Okay I am here, sorry I am a bit late". "Doesn't matter take a seat" said Xavier. Jubillee sat down and Xavier said: "Well I have some good news, we all are leaving for a big party in LA tonight". "What"? said Jubillee with a big smile. "We all have been invited for the party of the year this year it is called The Revelation Party and we all are going" said Xavier. "Oh my god that is just great, we only have to take care of a babysitter" said Jean. "I already took care of that, Moira and Banshee take care of them, they said if we needed a sitter we should call them and I did and they agreed they will be here in an hour" said Xavier. "Aaaah" yelled all the girls and they all hugged. "There is a dress code" said Xavier. "Okay what is it"? asked Logan. "The men have to wear a tuxedo and the ladies all need to wear a dress" said Xavier. "Oh then we have to begin soon" said Kitty. "How late does it begin"? asked Bobby. "We will be expected in 5 hours" said Xavier. "Oh then we have to hurry" said Rogue. "Didn't hear the professor we have 5 hours" said Bobby. "Yes and that isn't much time for a lady" said Jean with a smile. "Why are we invited"? asked Scott all of a sudden. "Well because they want better comunication between mutants and humans and they wanted to honor us" said Xavier. "Oh that is great" said Scott. "Yes real great we have to get ready now" said Kitty. "Yes not much time left" said Storm. Everyone kissed their partners and kids and took of to prepare themselves. "Women" said Logan. "Yeah this was a tragedy" said Angel shocked. "Well I guess we better not bother them" said Colossus. "Nope we better don't" said Scott laughing.

Meanwhile at Muir Island:
"We got the inventation" said The White Queen laughing. "Tonight we will bring chaos" said Sinister laughing. "I have to wear a tuxedo"? asked Blob. "Yes you fat dummy, rent one now" yelled The White Queen. Blob and Avalance both took of quickly to rent a tuxedo. "Tonight we will start our plan" said The White Queen. "Yes our great plan" said Sinister. "How far are you with the machine"? asked The White Queen. "I am almost done, we can use it in a couple of days" said Sinister. "Great, then the X-Men won't excist anymore in a couple of days hahahah" laughed The White Queen. "Hahaha" laughed Sinister. "You better watch your steps Charles because The White Queen is coming to get you hahahah" said The White Queen laughing.


 
Great start to your story. Good job, again. Can't wait for your manips. :)
 
Wow what a great start very interesting i wonder where things will lead this time around for the X-Men???? i am very curious now!!! :D :D
My favorite parts are :
the introduction, Rogue and Bobby teaching about Napolean, the ladies nursing their babies then getting ready for the party, the CARS???!!!??? the invitation to the Revelation Party, emma and sebastian shaw conversation, beast and the animals?????????? Sinister and the machine???????
A lot of things to ponder!!
 
Well I updated the first chapter with a manip.
It it the inventation of the Hellfire Club.
Made by PhoenixRisen
 
Update:

Just came up with Chapter Two how it will go and the Title of the Chapter I know to

Title of Chapter two
The Revelation Party

What will happen overall
Well the go to the party with the X-Jet.... no fancy limo LOL. When they come their they eat and drink a bit dance a little bit. Then the first fight starts between human Vs mutants and mutants Vs mutants mainly Emma Sinister Blob Avalance etc

Okay BIG SPOILER
There will be 2 plots what it is you have to find out
 
Chapter Two: The Revelation Party
At the Mansion:
Moira and Banshee walked into the Mansion and Charles welcomed them he already had his tuxedo on and said: "Moira, Banshee welcome back". "Charles you look good" said Moira. "Hey Charles" said Banshee. "So where are the children"? asked Moira they all are in the living room we had some extra beds and cribs so they lay in the living room, Anna is still playing but the babies are sound asleep" said Charles. "Okay, I can't wait for tonight, some training for our big day" said Banshee smiling at Moira. "What do you mean"? asked Charles. "Oh Charles, Banshee and I am expecting a baby" said Moira with a smile. "Ow, how far are you"? asked Xavier. " I am pregnant for 4 months now, I got pregnant almost right after we started with our relationship" said Moira. "That is great" said Xavier slightly dissapointed seen that he ones had a relationship with Moira. "Yeah it is, after I lost Tess I tought I would never get another kid again" said Banshee. "At first I didn't know how to tell him, he just lost Tess and I was already pregnant and I was affraid of his reaction" said Moira with a smile. "Yeah but I was really happy with the news, I can't wait and if it is a girl we already decided that her name would be Tess not Theresa but just Tess how we called Theresa" said Banshee. "That is beautiful" said Charles. "Well show us to the room" said Moira. "Okay follow me" said Xavier. And they went on.
Meanwhile the ladies were all putting on their dress. Rogue wore a beautifull big dress with and emerald green colour and green diamonds on it, Storm wore a white knee dress with some grey diamonds on it. Jean wore a big red dress with some red diamonds. Jubillee wore a yellow knee dress with yellow, red, green, pink and grey diamonds on it which she borrowed from the other ladies. Kitty wore a big pink dress with some pink diamonds on it. Magma had a orange knee dress with orange diamonds on it. Psylocke had a big purple dress with purple diamonds on it. And Polaris had a bright green dress with white diamonds on it."We need some more bling bling" said Rogue. "I agree we already look hot, but we can be hotter" said Jubilee. Everybody laughed and Jean said: "Well then we have lots of more bling in this box so lets get it girls". Storm grabbed the box and opened it is was full of big necklaces, rings and braceletts. "Wow that is amazing" said Kitty. Everything was shiny and real bling Rogue took all the green out of it, Storm all the white, Jean all the red, Kitty all the pink and Jubilee all kinds of colour and mostly yellow. Magma all the orange. Psylocke all the purple and Polaris all the grey. "Oh god we are gong to look so hot" said Jubilee. "We will, our guys will look at us all evening" said Rogue smiling. "If we make it to the club anyway" said Jean laughing. "Oh I will" said Jubillee. "Hahaha yeah you don't have kids" said Storm. "And not married" said Rogue with a wink. "Well not yet" said Jubillee smiling. "What, tell us details who do you like"? asked Magma. "I can't tell, you will laugh at me" said Jubilee. "Aaaah so it is one we know, he is an X-Men isn't he"? asked Magma. "Uuuh yes" said Jubilee blushing. "It isn't one of our man is it"? said Rogue laughing. "Oh god no" said Jubilee. "I think I know" said Kitty. "Who do you think"? asked Jean. "Warren we know him as Angel to hahaha" said Kitty. Jubilee's head turned all red and Polaris said: "Oh you are blushing even more, you are in love" said Rogue. "Yes, but don't tell him, I will tonight" said Jubilee. "Oooh are you excited"? asked Psylocke. "Hell yeah..." said Jubilee. "Well good luck, you look beautiful we only have to do our hair now" said Rogue. Storm putted it some extensions so it looked longer and then made it into a knot in her neck. Rogue styled her white streak and sprayed some hairspray in it, then she took her curl device and made some curls in her long red hair. Jean took a little bit off her hair and then used some spray and make it real big with style and curly hair. Jubilee made her hair curly and wavy. Kitty made her hair into a knot on her head and had a ponytail and styled it. Magma coloured her hair blond with fire red streakes and made it wavy. Psylcoke made her hair purple with black streakes and had it loose but all styeled up. Polaris made her bright green hair a little bit dark green and made it curly, the girls were now ready to go.
Meanwhile in another room, the men were putting on their tuxedo's. Everyone grabbed a scraf. Bobby had an icy blue scraf. Scott a bright red scarf. Logan a yellow scarf. Kurt a black scarf. Colossus a grey scarf. Angel a dark blue scraf. Hank a blue with yellow scarf. Gambit a purple with black scarf. John had a red with orange scarf and Xavier had a grey scarf. "This doesn't feel good" said Logan a bit anoyed. "Don't worry man you look good" said Bobby. "Yeah? I look like a monkey" said Logan. "Remember the buzz" said Gambit. "Yeah I look forward to the beer" said Logan. "I look forward to the speeches" said Kurt. "Yeah of course whatever" said Logan. Kurt looked a bit hurt and Bobby said: "Oh he didn't mean it like that Kurt, he meant he is there for the party but we all look forward to the speeches" said Bobby lying but smiling. "Ah like that" said Kurt smiling. "I will ask Jubilee if she wants to date me" said Angel all of a sudden. "Excuse me"? said Hank. "Oh Hank I like her, really like her" said Angel. "Well tonight is a special night tell her how much you live her" said Gambit. "I will" said Angel laughing. "I wonder how the girls look like" said Gambit almost drewling. "Well seen that they haven't been out of that room for hours they will look hot" said Bobby. "I think they will" said John. "Well we will find out soon cause we have to leave in 20 minutes" said Scott. "And we still have to do our hair" said John. John's hair, Scott his hair and Angel's hair were a lot shorter and they spiked it up like Bobby and Kurt. Hank used some gel and putted it backwards. Logan just used a bit gell and made it like he always has it and said: "That looks good". "It is like you always have it" said Scott. "No I never use gell" said Logan laughing. "Should I wear a wig and put gell in it"? asked Xavier. Everyone started laughing and Kurt said: "Hahaha why professor"? "Well because some of you are like ladies with the hair" said Xavier joking. Everyone started laughing again. "Well we better get the our ladies and take of" said Bobby. They all downstairs and waited there for the ladies arrival. After a couple of a minutes later they all came to the stairs, every guy's mouth fell open. The women came down one by one and stood in front of the men and the men couldn't say a word. "Well? what do you all think"? asked Rogue. "That you are hotter then fire" said Bobby. "Yeah cause I am melting" said Angel. "Thanks boys" said the women with a wink. Bobby took Rogue's arm and kissed her. Scott took Jean and kissed her. Colossus took Kitty and kissed her. Logan took Storm and kissed her. But all of a sudden Angel took Jubilee and kissed her. "Wow" said Jubilee and she smiled and walked with him. Gambit took Polaris her arm. Hank took Psylocke's arm. John took Magma's arm and Xavier rolled behind them. They checked on the kids and kissed them and also congratulated Moira and Banshee with the new news and said their goodbyes. They all stepped in the X-Jet and flew to the Hellfire Club in LA.

Meanwhile in The Hellfire club:
Sebastian sat in the lounge and The White Queen walked in. She wore a beautiful long dress covered in diamonds. "Hello Emma" said Sebastian. "Hi, and the name is The White Queen" said The White Queen. "Oh really, then you really belong with the Hellfire Club" said Sebastian. "Why"? asked The White Queen. "Well we all have a status and we have the White Queen and the White King and the Black Queen and the Black King" said Sebastian. "Aaah like that and what are you"? asked The White Queen. "I am the Black King of course, we didn't have a Queen here yet so you are the first one" said Sebastian. "And is there a White King"? asked The White Queen. "Yes you will meet the other members soon, I first have to tell you something" said Sebastian. "And what is that"? asked The White Queen. "Now you are a Hellfire Club member your status is The White Queen, but you will be known as Emma when we comunicate, like I am Sebastian is stead of The Black King" said Sebastian. "Okay I can life with that" said Emma. "Okay I first want to meet the people of you" said Sebastian. "Okay Sinister, Blob, Avalance come in" said Emma. The door opened and they walked in. "Aaah interesting" said Sebastian. "What do you mean"? asked Emma. Sebastian looked at Sinister and said: "I like you, you can be a part of the club to and those two can be assistents but can't join the club itself but they can join as assistents". "Why not us"? asked Avalance. "Because I say so" said Sebastian. "Are you okay with that"? asked Blob to Sinister. "Of course I am" said Sinister. "Well as far as I am concerned you can stick it at the place where the sun doesn't shine" said Avalance. "Exactly we are leaving, you go further without assistants" said Blob angry and they both walsed out the door. "Should we get them"? asked Sinister. "No they are of no use, I would like to say you will take your normal name to Nathaniel and your name here will be Mister Sinister and not only Sinister do you agree with that"? asked Sebastian. "Yes I do, I don't like my human name but I can life with it" said Sinister. "Yeah that is maybe true, okay here you are Sinister and your status is Mister Sinister" said Sebastian. "Thank you" said Sinister. "Okay get ready and don't draw attention to yourself because the X-Men know you so you will take attention when we make the first attack" said Sebastian. "We will, can we now meet the other members"? asked Emma. "Yes I will let them in one by one first of Donals Pierce as the White King his powers are superstrength he is cyborg like and he has great reflexes and is very fast" said Sebastian. The door opened and a blond man came in he was very big and looked very strong and said: "Hi, I am Donals and I take care of financis" said Donals. "Next is Canandra Nova her name here is Ernst her powers are extraordinary telepathy, telekinesis, DNA duplication, healing factor, phasing and shapeshifting" said Sebastain. The door opened again and a bald old looking woman came in and Emma said: "Oh my god you look like a female Charles Xavier". "That is because I am a part of Xavier I came out of him and created a body for myself" said Casandra smiling. "Yes she is our telepath" said Sebastian. "Okay that is interresting" said Emma. "Okay next is Ellie Phimister and her name here is Faith and her powers are precognitive telepath and she has limited reality manipulation powers" said Sebastian. The door opened again and Ellie walked in with black hair and she was also tall and slim and said: "Hi, well I am a telepath and I manipulate things and I am welcoming the guests" said Ellie. "Okay the next one is Trevor Fitzroy and his name here is The White Rook his powers are absorbs life-energy from humans, can use this energy to open portals through time" said Sebastian. The door opened and a thin large guy with brown hair came through it and said: "Hey there, I can open portal for you to any place". "And last but certaintly not least Tessa her known as Sage her powers are jumpstart, includes perfect memory and data analysis everything" said Sebastian. The door opened and a woman with purple black hair came in she was quite tall and had a nice body to look at and she said: "Hi, you wanna know anything about a database and I will find it for you". "This is great" said Emma. "Yes it is" said Sinister smiling. "Yes the Hellfire Club will finish of the X-Men first and then we will concur the world hahahah" laughed Sebastian. "Okay we need to prepare" said Casandra. "Yes Tessa, Ellie welcome all of our guests" said Sebastian. Tessa and Ellie walked of and Emma said: "We know what to do to, stay close but don't get attention". "Exactly Casandra, Donals, Trevor and I will be downstairs to and drink and eat some with the guests we will make the first attack and then you all will join us and make the humans believe that the X-Men did it" said Sebastian. They all started laughing and then took of to the club.
 
Meanwhile in LA:
The X-Jet landed on the roof of the Hellfire club. The stairways opened and everyone walked out arm in arm. "How do we downstairs"? asked Kitty. "We use our powers of course" said Rogue with a wink. "Okay and what about the professor"? asked Storm. "I can grab him and fly down" said Rogue. "Oh yeah of course. Kitty grabbed Colossus and jumped down and phased through the ground. Rogue grabbed Xaviers wheelchair and flew to the streets. Angel took Jubilee in his arms and flew down with him. Then Bobby made a stairway of ice and the others walked downstairs. "Well we are down, now let's get this party started" said Jubilee. "Oh yeah" said Bobby. "Yeah I need a beer" said Logan. "You always need beer Logan" said Storm a bit annoyed. "Hell yeah, beer is good" said Logan smiling. "Okay X-Men move in" said Xavier smiling. "This isn't a mission professor" said Jean smiling. Everyone walked in and came through the bar and then used the elevator to go down. They could hear the music and Jubilee said: "Oh my god that is Evanescense". "Cool great music" said Kitty. The walked out the elevator and Ellie said: "Hi there, I am Ellie welcome to the party, can I see your inventation please"?. "Of course " said Xavier and he handed over the inventation. "That is correct have a good time" said Ellie. "Thank you" said everyone. Sebastian walked to them and also said: "Hi I am Sebastain Shaw the owner of this club, I hope you have a good time". "Thank you for the inventation Mr Shaw" said Xavier. Sebastian walked over to Ellie and said: "They are here, so the fun is about to begin". Ellie laughed and said: "Yes I can't wait". "Wow look how crowded it is here" said Kitty. "What does everyone want to drink"? asked Bobby. "Beer" said Logan. "Me to" said Scott. "And me to" said Angel. "Me to" said Colossus. "I want a diet coke" said Storm. "I want a martini" said Rogue and the other ladies said: "Same for us". "And for me a wodka" said Gambit. "And I want some water please" said Hank. "And for me some scotch" said Kurt. "Okay coming right up" said Bobby. He came back and said: "They are going to bring it soon, so we can get something to eat first". "Great I am starved" said Colossus. Everyone walked to the table with food and Jean said: "Wow they have everything here". "Yeah they do" said Angel. And that was true, there was crab, other fish, some seafood, some fries and a lot of fancy meat, all kinds of deserts and also ice. "I am going to entertain myself here" said Magma. Everybody grabbed a plate and a knife and fork and threw some food on their plates. They walked to their table and ate it all in peace. "This is delisious" said Rogue. "Yes it is very good" said Xavier. "It almost feels normal" said Angel. "Yeah exactly like we are normal human beings" said Rogue. "This is a great place, maybe we should get here more often" said Scott. "Yeah maybe we should" said Kurt. After they finished eating Angel said: "Jubilee can I talk to you for a minute"? "Yes of course" said Jubilee blushing and they stood up and walked away. "He is finaly asking her if she wants to date him" said Logan. "What serious? Jubilee likes him a lot" said Kitty with a smile. "Oh then we have nothing to worry" said Bobby. "Exactly lets get some more ice" said Jean. And everyone went to the table with food and got some fruit and ice and started eating again.
Meanwhile in a hallway, Angel and Jubilee stood in front of each other and Angel said: "Jubilee, I really like you, and I don't know if you feel the same for me, but I would really like to date you and be together". "Oh my god" said Jubilee. "What is it, you don't like me right"? said Angel. "Oh no not like that silly, I really like you to but I wanted to ask you the same thing tonight" said Jubilee blushing but smiling. "Must be fate" said Angel. "Yeah it must be" said Jubilee staring in his eyes. Angel leaned forward and Jubilee to and they started kissing, after a couple of minutes they stopped and Angel said smiling: "We better go back, before they miss us". "Good idea" said Jubilee. Angel took Jubilee's hand and they walked of together.
The party really started and all kinds of light came on the dancefloor and everyone started dancing. "Shall we"? asked Bobby to Rogue. "Always sugah" said Rogue she winked to the other ladies who all said: "Men we are going to the dancefloor". "If we must" said all "the men. Everyone stood up and Angel and Jubilee came walking to them hand in hand. "Well done buddy" said Bobby. "Thanks" said Angel. "Shall we dance to"? asked Jubilee. "Sure" said Angel. And everyone walked up the dancefloor and Evanescense yelled: "Okay next song is : Call Me When You Are Sober". Everyone went balistic on the dancefloor and started dancing, after a couple of minutes Evanescense said: "Okay we will have a break first but the DJ will play some great songs". The DJ took some cd's and started playing some rock, r&b and some pop songs the X-Men were still dancing on the dancefloor and were having a blast. Then there was a real romantic song and all the couples holded each other and danced a little bit and were kissing and hugging. After a while Storm said: "I am getting thirsty, I am going to get something to drink". "I think wel all are" said Rogue. Everyone agreed and walked to their table where their drinks were. "You all are having a good time"? asked Xavier. "Yes, sorry we let you alone for such a long time" said Rogue. "Aah don't worry, Hank and Kurt held me company to, and if you all enjoy yourselves I enjoy myself to" said Xavier. Everyone smiled and Magma said: "This is the best party I have ever been to". "I agree" said Polaris. "Yeah this is great" said Gambit.
Meanwhile at Sebastian's tabele: "Okay we will attack soon, is everyone ready"? asked Sebastian. "Yes" said Emma laughing. "Okay Ellie you know you have to manipulate everyone's mind her and make the humans believe the X-Men attacked them" said Sebastian. "I will" said Ellie. "Casandra you use your telekinesis and your shapeshifting powers and look like a X-Men" said Sebastain. "That is okay" said Casandra. "Emma, Tessa, Sinister, Donals and me will attack the humans and the X-Men" said Sebastian. "And what about me"? asked Trevor. "You will steal the humans life energy so you have enough to open a portal to another world" said Sebastian. "Aaaah okay" said Trevor. "Okay everyone knows what to do so we can begin the attack" said Sebastian laughing. Everyone stood up and walked over to the crowd and started the attack. Ellie sat by the table and focused herself on all the humans and she started to manipulate everyone's mind so they thought the X-Men were the Hellfire Club and that they were the X-Men. Donals and Sinister stood in the crowd and grabbed and smashed everone onto the floor. Casandra used her telekinesis and threw some of the people in the air. "Oh no we have trouble" said Scott. "Okay team attack and save those people" said Xavier. The ladies stood up and took a knife and cutted of their dress to above the knee so they could fight better. "My dress" said Rogue angry. "Thos fools will pay for make us ruin our dresses" said Jean angry. The men took of the scarfs and the jackets and they all rand towards the crowd that was screaming. Rogue, Jean and Storm flew up in the air and Storm said: "That is Emma". "Aaah let me take care of her" said Jean with pleasure. Jean flew to Emma and used her telekinetic waves and threw Emma into the skye, Emma transformed into solid diamond, but Jean used another telekinetic wave from the air and Emma was thrown to the ground she stood up and threw a telepathic wave at Jean. Jean was hit and fell to the ground she recovered and landed on the ground. Emma ran towards her and tried to hit her, but Jean was faster and kicked her in the stomach and then kicked her in the back. Rogue flew to Trevor and he grabbed her in the neck to drain her life energy but then Rogue touched him and drained his powers away and kicked him to the ground. "Hahaha doesn't mind I already have enough life force" said Trevor. "Okay sugah get enough of this" said Rogue and she punched him in the air. Donals came from behind and kicked her to the ground and grabbed her and threw her through the air. Logan and the other guys attacked him and Sinister walked up to Rogue and yelled: "You are still alive"? "I am not that easy to kill" said Rogue standing up. Sinister used his super strength and threw her through the air again. "Aaah I am getting sick of this throwing arround" said Rogue. Sinister came up to her again but Rogue activated her fire powers and grabbed Sinister and flew into the air with him, she spinned arround and made a fire explosion. Sinister was thrown away and was badly hurt, but then he started healing himself and stood up again. "O oh" said Rogue. and she flew up in the air so he couldn't reach her. Logan chopped of Donals hand and saw that he was a cyborg. Donals looked at it and threw Logan to Bobby who both fell on the ground. Then he took care of Gambit, Polaris and Magma. Hank Jubilee and Angel were all fighting Casandra but she used her telekinesis and her telepathy to throw them of guard and sended them flying into the air. Colossus and Kitty were fighting Sebastian so he couldn't hurt Xavier. Xavier shot a telepathic wave at Sebastian and he was thrown backwards, then Kitty phased his legs threw the ground and Colossus used him as a boxing ball, andc then smashed him out the ground. Then all of a sudden Sebastain yelled: "Stop". Everyone stopped, but the X-Men didn't knew that Ellie still was manipulating the humans mind and the humans turned to the X-Men and a women said: "Why did you attack us"? "That wasn't us miss, that were them" said Gambit. "How dare you, they tried to save us" said a man. "You are giving mutants like them a bad name" said another lady angry. "What the hell are you talking about lady"? said Rogue angry. "What, you wanna hit me again"? asked the lady. "I never laid a finger on you, you stupid cow" said Rogue getting angrier. "Ah make excuses we all saw the X-Men attack us" said another man. "Professor I think it is better if we go" said Hank. "Yes I think so to" said Xavier. And they quickly took of and flew to the X-Jet so the humans couldn't get after them.

Meanwhile in the X-Jet:
"What the hell was that"? asked Logan. "I don't know I do know I sensed a some telepaths" said Xavier. "All those people said we attacked them, while we were trying to save them" said Kitty. "Yeah I don't get it, it started all so good" said Jubilee. "Professor, could it be a telepath who can also manipulate minds"? asked Jean. "Yes that is possible, but who"? asked Xavier. "Don't know, it wasn't Emma or one of the others, but the Hellfire Club members attacked us" said Jean. "Yeah, Sinister and Emma are part of them now" said Storm. "Sinister lives"? asked Logan. "Yes he attacked me" said Rogue. "So we are dealing with powerful mutants this time" said Scott. "Wait a minute, that girl that welcomed us, I didn't see her in the fight that Ellie person" said Rogue. "Yeah I forgot, she must be the one who manipulated the mind of the humans" said Bobby. "I am affraid you both are right, we have to be prepared now, cause mutants and humans will attack us now" said Xavier sounding stressed.


 
Spoilers:

Title of Chapter:
A Plan Beginning

What will happen
Xavier gets trouble

What more
The Hellfire Club begins their plan to detroy Xavier so the X-Men
 
Cool chapter. I loved the fight scene, great to read. Can't wait for more. :up:
 
Yeah great chapter and funny that Evanesence song is on TV some morning video show on vh1 right now. Anyways I loved the
battles at the Hellfire Club, introduction of the Hellfire members, the woman and men getting ready for the party--I hope Angamb does some hair manips for it that would be perfect!!!--and also the sense of letdown that the party started fun but turned to tragedy. But I also felt sorry for Charles, all alone all the time and just happy with others being happy and also when he rolled all alone behind them and then at the end was stressed :( I hope he finds love too but don't tell me I don't like spoilers
 
Hahaha I won't and he is devestated because is old love Moira is pregnant of Banshee of Course ;)

But Thanks PhoenixRisen and TKing for the nice comment :D
 
Malerogue, could you do me a big favor. Everyone has had the chance to be called by thier given names, except for Ororo. Please have someone actually use her name, not Ro or Roro. Please. This is no different than the movies. She was only reffered to as Ororo once in X1 by Xavier, and once by Beast. I mean, it is her name.

And one more thing, use her powers, or her personality. I want to see her lead, or do something besides collect dust and whine at Logan. She doesn't have to be the star, but she doesn't need to be helpless.

Do some research about her powers. She can take out Logan, BTW. As a ranged fighter, and with her precise ability to control winds, she can keep many enimies at bay. Logan's claws are nine inches.

But yea, some more personal character detail, letting thier own uniqueness shine throw, would make this even better. Good job otherwise.
 
very good, very good. Well update!!
Please do what I offered
 
Goddessreicho said:
Malerogue, could you do me a big favor. Everyone has had the chance to be called by thier given names, except for Ororo. Please have someone actually use her name, not Ro or Roro. Please. This is no different than the movies. She was only reffered to as Ororo once in X1 by Xavier, and once by Beast. I mean, it is her name.

And one more thing, use her powers, or her personality. I want to see her lead, or do something besides collect dust and whine at Logan. She doesn't have to be the star, but she doesn't need to be helpless.

Do some research about her powers. She can take out Logan, BTW. As a ranged fighter, and with her precise ability to control winds, she can keep many enimies at bay. Logan's claws are nine inches.

But yea, some more personal character detail, letting thier own uniqueness shine throw, would make this even better. Good job otherwise.

Hmmm, I don't know to be honest. I am taking the names of everyone how they were always reffered to in the movies.
I never used Shadowcat, or hardley Pete for Colossus.
Maybe you are right that I should throw it in sometimes, but she is Storm.
Thanks for the advice, but just wait I only used Storm for the movie and all but in this book things will happen that she takes her name Ororo. So you will get your Ororo don't worry ;)

Well I don't know if you read my X4 but there she used her powers a lot and I even made up techniques for her.
I don't really recall her whining, and she can take on Logan, but she is insecure sometimes, at least in my eyes.
I did reasearch of everybody inclueding Ororo :p.

And I must say I did some pretty good job on the character development :D
 
Ororocity said:
very good, very good. Well update!!
Please do what I offered

I am thinking about it :)
Could you send me a pm with the link please?
 
Sorry guys for the lack of update now,
I am very busy with school at the moment, but I hope I can begin writing soon :)
And I also hope next chapter will be up sunday :D
 
Chapter Three: A Plan Beginning
The next day at the Mansion:
Everyone sat by the breakfast table and Moira said: "So how was it last night"? "It was a complete dissaster" said Xavier. "What happened"? asked Banshee. "We we were attacked" said Storm. "By who"? asked Moira. "By the Hellfire Club and it seems that Sinister and Emma are a part of them to" said Scott. "Emma? Emma Frost"? asked Banshee. "Yeah that little piece of scum" said Jean. "You really hate her don't you"? said Rogue. "Yeah the arrogance of her, she is a fake person who I don't like and never will like" said Jean. "But what about all the people there did anyone get hurt"? asked Moira. "No no one get really hurt, but something more worse happened" said Xavier. "More worse then it already is"? asked Moira. "Yeah, those humans said we attacked them, there probably was a mutant who manipulated their minds, but they see us as the bad guys while we saved their pathetic asses" said Rogue angry. "What? They said you did it"? said Banshee shocked. "Yeah, we denied it of course but they were manipulated to much" said Bobby. "What now"? asked Moira. "Well I think it maybe is best that you and Banshee leave as soon as possible" said Xavier. "But why Charles"? asked Moira. "We will be attacked here, that is for sure the humans are angry and I don't want you in the middle of it" said Xavier. "But Charles, we can handle it" said Moira. "I know, but what about your baby he or she could be in danger are you prepared to lose another child"? asked Xavier. "Another child"? asked Storm. "That was before your time here love" said Moira. "But what, I don't get it" said Jean. "I and Charles had a relationship a couple of years ago, a long time ago I could better say and we had a son called David, but after a couple of days the baby was dead" said Moira. "What"? said Kitty shocked. Xavier looked sad and looked down but said: "Yes our David, that is why I want you to leave Moira I don't want this baby to get hurt". "But where is David burried"? asked Jean. "He is in Scotland, we burried him there because Charles and I met each other there" said Moira. "Oh god I don't know how I should react" said Scott. "Well we were quite calm, we both had a weird feeling about him, but we didn't know he was going to die" said Moira. "That is terrible" said Bobby. "Yes it was, terrible but we pulled is through it so Moira and Banshee please leave us we will keep you posted" said Xavier. "Charles I can stay" said Banshee. "No, Moira and the baby needs you to be with them this is the only way" said Xavier. "Okay Charles we will go if it makes you feel better" said Moira. "It will make me feel better, I don't want you hurt" said Xavier. "Thanks Charles we will pack our bags and leave as soon as possible" said Banshee. "Thank you both" said Xavier. Everyone looked at each other and Rogue said: "What about our kids professor, we don't wanna lose them". "I know Rogue, but they will be fine, I am guessing they won't kill us yet, but I do know something terrible is about to happen" said Xavier. Everyone looked worried and Storm said: "I can't believe this is happening to us again". "Don't worry Storm" said Logan. "I think everyone should sleep in the bedrooms next to each other, for security if anything happens we will all be together" said Rogue. "That is a good idea Rogue, tell the students and pack all your stuff everybody we will begin now" said Xavier. Everyone stood up and walked away. Rogue walked to all the classes and told everyone they will get another bedroom for their safety. Everyone aggreed and so Rogue took of to her bedroom to pack all her stuff. After an hour everyone was ready and had a room, Xavier slept in the first one, Jean, Scott and Rachel to the second one, Rogue, Bobby, Anna and Shawn in the third one, Storm, Logan and James in the fourth one, Hank and Gambit shared a room to in the fifth one, Jubilee and Angel in the sixth one, and Magma, Polaris and Psylocke in the seventh one. Then the brought Moira and Banshee to their jet and when the were there she hugged Xavier and said: "Charles be careful and if you need anything call us". Banshee gave him a hand and said: "Good luck Charles I hope God stands with you all". "Thank you both, take care of each other we certainly will" said Xavier. "Bye" said Moira and Banshee. "Bye" said all the X-Men. They took a seat and flew of to their new home in Scotland. Their was a loud noise and Kitty said: "What wasd that"? "We are being attacked by the humans" said Xavier sad. "No it can't be" said Scott. "Well it's true Scott I sense them to" said Jean. "No this can't be happening what should we do"? asked Storm. "We are going to kick their butt back home" said Rogue. "Rogue no, I respect human beings I don't wanna attack them" said Xavier. "Your love for the humans could get us killed, you want that"? asked Rogue angry. "They won't kill us" said Xavier. "Oh no and how do you know that, you know they want us dead, what about all the kids here, our kids" said Rogue. "Rogue don't" said Bobby. "No I am right and I will stop this" said Rogue, she flew in the air and went over to the courtyard where the humans were. "Stop her now" said Xavier a bit angry. "But professor, she is right" said Jean. "Don't argue with me on this stop her I said" yelled Xavier. Everyone was shocked because the professor was yelling and they followed Rogue to the surface. "What just happened"? asked Storm on the way. "He isn't himself Ororo" said Hank. "Rogue is in so much trouble now" said Bobby. "How come"? asked Logan. "The professor loves humans and we respect that, Rogue didn't this time and I am afraid it has consequenses" said Bobby. "Well we first have to stop her because she is angry to, she loves every kid here and she doesn't want to get them hurt" said Angel. "Exactly Rogue is in her right to do this" said Kitty. When they came in the courtyard they saw some kids on the ground and Cypher said: "They attacked us with explosions". "Where is Rogue"? asked Jean. "Don't know, she saved us but Artie is in bad shape he is still uncounsious" said Cypher. Jean flew to Artie and took him from the ground and said: "Oh no he is in trouble I have to take care of him, Bobby you try to stop Rogue, everyone else help the kids in the Mansion so I can take care of them" said Jean. Everyone nodded and they began taking kids from the ground who all were badly injured. Bobby made and ice slide and searched for Rogue, he saw a fire whirlwind and went to the whirlwind and yelled: "Rogue stop this, the kids are fine". "No Bobby they will pay" said Rogue with tears in her eyes. "No Rogue stop it" yelled Bobby in fear. Then Rogue sucked a human in the whirlwind and burned him a bit and threw him out the whirlwind. "No Rogue this isn't you, please stop they will pay" said Bobby. Rogue stopped spinning and looked at the ground and the people and said: "If you ever attack us again and the kids will get hurt, you won't get burned but I will fry you all like the pigs you are". The humans ran away screaming and yelling in fear. Rogue flew past Bobby and went into the Mansion and went right to all the kids and when she came in the lab she asked: "Jean how are they doing"? "They are fine, Artie is in bad shape but I think he will make it" said Jean. Everyone else came in to and everyone looked at Rogue. "What are ya'll looking at"? asked Rogue angry. Xavier came in and was furious and yelled: "We are looking at a young women who doesn't have respect for my wishes, I should throw you out immediatly for this action, you tried to kill a human and you almost did". Rogue stepped up to Xavier and stood in front of him she was furious to and said: "What are you talking about, do you want us dead cause it lookes like it, look at these kids they were playing and living in peace and the humans wanted to kill them, you love the humans more then your own kids here". "Don't you say that, I love those kids like they are my own" said Xavier furious. "Yeah well I couldn't tell, and maybe I do leave with Anna and Shawn I am not risking my kids because your stupid foolish actions" said Rogue angry. "Rogue stop it" said Logan. "No shut up Logan I am not talking to you, this is between me and the professor" said Rogue. "Your hart is beginning to fill itself with hate" said Xavier. "Oh really, now you see how much I hate you at the moment" said Rogue and she walked to a wall and smashed it away and walked through the hole and went to her kids. "How could you professor, she is looking out for the children" said Jean with tears in her eyes. "Don't you start with me Jean" said Xavier. "Okay then I won't" said Jean and she walked out to like all the others leaving Xavier behind. He looked at the kids there and a tear appearred in his eye.
Meanwhile in Rogue and Bobby's room, Rogue was packing all her stuff and took the children and walked towards the entrance door when all the other walked up to her. "What are you doing"? asked Bobby. "I am leaving Bobby, Charles is on his own now I can't respect a man who leaves children to their fate" said Rogue with tears in her eyes. "Please stay here, we need you here" said Scott. Rogue looked down and said: "I am sorry, I can't my family comes first the kids need to be save and this is the only way now that Charles doesn't do a thing about the humans attacking" said Rogue. "Please consider it Rogue please stay one night" said Bobby. "No I am going now, you can stay here Bobby and fight but I am done with this I am staying in a hotel here so you can visit I am no longer an X-Men" said Rogue a bit angry. "No Rogue you don't mean that" said Kitty shocked. "Oh yes I do, I am done Kitty I gave my life for Xavier I was dead I don't want this anymore my kids need their mom" said Rogue. "Are you leaving me"? asked Bobby. "Course not sugah, but I need some time on my own now and think about everything that is going on" said Rogue. She walked up to Bobby kissed him and he kissed her and the kids and said: "Okay but please keep in touch they are my kids to, I wanna go with you but I need to protect the kids here to" said Bobby. "I know and I love you for that, and I will keep in touch of course" said Rogue with a smile. She hugged everyone and said goodbye and opened the door and left the Mansion. Bobby stood there with tears in his eyes. "She will be back kid" said Logan. "I know I am just worried about her, this isn't the Rogue I know" said Bobby. "That is mother Rogue, she wants to protect her kids and I can't blame her" said Jean. "You wanna leave to"? asked Scott. "No of course not, I need to be here with the professor, something is wrong with him I can tell" said Jean. "Yeah he never acted this way before, and his reaction on Rogue was creepy" said Colossus. "Well Rogue was to I have never seen her like this" said Storm. "She really changed since I met her, she was a frightened girl then and now she is a strong independable women" said Logan. Xavier came towards them and said: "What is the problem"? "Rogue left with Anna and Shawn" said Storm. "Oh really" said Xavier not interessted. "Yeah really and it is your fault, she even doesn't wanna be an X-Men" said Bobby angry. Xavier looked a bit shocked first but turned arround and rolled away in his wheelchair.
 
Meanwhile at the Hellfire Club:
"Sinister how far is that machine"? asked Emma. "Not done yet it broke down" said Sinister. "Don't worry Emma, Trevor got enough life energy for our plan you know what his powers can do" said Sebastian. "Aaaah yes good plan" said Emma. "Casandra what can your telepacy feel at the Mansion of Xavier"? asked Sebastian. "A fight one of the X-Men left" said Casandra. "Who is it"? asked Sebastian. "Rogue the girl with all those powers" said Casandra. "Aah her, that is great cause now she isn't a thread for us anymore" said Sebastian. "Exactly what was the fight about"? asked Emma. "She attacked the humans who attacked them against Xavier's wishes" said Casandra smiling. "Hahaha I knew it, Charles can't hurt a human being hahahaha" said Emma laughing. "Trevor you have enough life energy for the plan right"? asked Sebastain. "Yes I have" said Trevor. " Okay than the plan can begin this night when they are asleep hahaha" said Sebastain laughing. "Aaaah finnaly" said Emma smiling. "Are you sure you can put everyone in a telepathic sleep"? asked Sebastian. "Yes I can, I just heard of it and used it on some of the humans who come here, and I can do it for sure" said Emma. "Okay then you will put everyone is a telepathic sleep and Donals and Sage take Xavier from the Mansion and leave a bloodied clone of Xavier behind that is dead" said Sebastian. "Dead clone"? asked Ellie. "Yes Sinister made a machine that makes clones, he had some DNA of Charles so he made a dead Xavier for us" said Sebastian laughing. "They don't know what will hit them" said Sage laughing. "No they wont and while Xavier is pressumed dead they X-Men will fall appart and the humans keep attacking them so they will go their own ways like Rogue did" said Sebastian. "Aaaah that is great" said Casandra. "And in the mean time we torture Xavier hahaha" said Emma laughing. "Yes we will, the X-Men will be history" said Sinister. They all stood up and made preperations for their attack.

Meanwhile on the streets:
Rogue was walking towards a hotel and saw a child laying on the street. She ran towards the child and putted Anna in her carriage walk and took the child of the ground. It was a girl arround the 10 years old and Rogue said: "Heey what is the matter"? "I am a mutant, so you better go" said the girl. "Why would I go"? asked Rogue. "Didn't you hear me I am a mutant" said the girl. "Well I am a mutant to" said Rogue. "Oh oke, so you won't leave me now"? asked the girl. "No of course not sweety, where are your parents"? asked Rogue. "They are dead, I life on the streets now" said the girl. "Well that isn't good for you, come with me and sleep in a warm bed, I am going to a hotel now" said Rogue. "Yes I would like that, I am Z'Cann by the way" said Z'Cann. "I am Rogue and these are my children Anna and Shawn" said Rogue. "Hi" said Z'Cann. "I will bring you to a place tomorrow where people like us life together, it is a very special place" said Rogue. "Cool, more kids like me"? asked Z'Cann. "Yes more kids like you, it is a school for gifted children like yourself" said Rogue smiling. "Yay" said Z'Cann. "Okay come on it is getting dark and you all should be sleeping" said Rogue. They walked to the hotel and when they arrived she took a room for 2 persons with 2 cribs for Anna and Shawn. When they got there she tuck in Anna and Shawn and she putted Z'Cann under the shower, then Z'Cann went to her bed and said: "You are the sweetest person I have ever met". "Thank you sweety" said Rogue with a smile. After a couple of minutes all kids were sleeping. Rogue sat on the balcony thinking of the others and the X-Men, she missed Bobby already. Then a voice in her head said: "Well done Rogue I am proud of you". "What who is this... professor"? asked Rogue. "Yes, I wanted to appologies for my behaviour and you were gone already so I did it this way". "Oh okay, well thanks for the appologie, I understood you but the kids come first not the humans" said Rogue. "I know Rogue, I am just worried now, I hope you will be back tomorrow" said Xavier. "Sorry professor, but I am not coming back I will life here for some time I will come tomorrow to bring the girl, but I am through with being an X-Men" said Rogue. "I am sorry you feel that way" said Xavier. "It isn't you, but I realised that my children need me and I am of no use when I am dead, like I said the children come first in my life" said Rogue. "I understand Rogue, I am going to bed now I will see you tomorrow" said Xavier. "Okay night professor" said Rogue. "Night Rogue" said Xavier a bit sad, and then the telepathic conection was away. Rogue looked up into the skye and said: "Please, tell me I made the right choice".

Meanwhile outside the Mansion:
"Okay is everybody ready"? asked Sebastian. Everyone nodded and Emma said: "I will begin now". Emma concentrated herself and used her telepathy and made everyone fall asleep, some students who were walking fell on the ground all the X-Men fell asleep on the couch, in their bed or in a chair or they fell on the ground to. "It's done" said Emma. "Well done, okay Trevor you go in and take some life energy just to be sure and Donals and Sage go in and grab Charles and leave the clone behind" said Sebastian. Sage and Donals climbed into a tree into Xavier's room and Trevor opened the front door and walked into all the rooms to take a little bit of life energy of everyone. Sage and Donals arrived at Xavier's window and the opened it. "Look he is sound asleep" said Sage smiling. "What a coincedence" said Donals smiling at his turn. "Okay put the clone in the bed and burn these sheets" said Donals. "Well the body is already burned, we can't have to much fire here" said Sage. "Can you tell me again why we lay a burned body in a bed" said Donals. "So the X-Men think that Rogue killed him tonight it is a perfect plan to create a fight here" said Sage. "Aah right now I remember" said Donals. "Yeah grab Xavier and go already" said Sage. "Yeah yeah" said Donals, he took Xavier from the bed and jumped out the window with him. Sage grabbed the burned clone of Xavier and laid him in the bed and made some burning marks arround the body and then also jumped out the window and walked up to the others. After a couple of minutes Trevor came out the front door and said: "Well I have more than enough now hahaha". "Okay let's go then and transport him to an alternate dimension, a dimension that will kill him emotionally and physically" said Sebastian laughing.

The next morning at the Mansion:
Everyone woke up on the place they fell asleep. "Wow what happened"? asked Scott when he woke up and saw that he was laying on the ground. Jean woke up on the couch with Storm besides her and they looked at each other and screamed because they were frightnent of each other. "What happened"? asked Jean while she was catching her breath. "Don't know but this never happened to me before" said Storm shocked. All the others woke up to and everyone was looking and talking to each other it looked like a circus and Bobby yelled: "Stop talking". Everyone was quite and Logan said: "Thank god some rest". "I don't know what happened but we need to talk to the professor about what happened last night" said Bobby. "I'll get him" said Kitty and she phased through the door. "Okay well I also checked on the kids and they are fine" said Bobby. All of a sudden they heard Kitty scream in fear. "Kitty" yelled Colossus. Everyone ran towards Xavier's room and when they opened the door Jubilee screamed to. "He is dead" said Kitty in tears. "He is burned to death" said Logan. "Rogue" said Scott. "What no, Rogue couldn't do this" said Bobby angry. "You heard what she said dammit and now Xavier is dead" said Scott in tears. "This can't be Rogue" said Jean with a shakey voice. "Jean you heard her and Xavier yesterday he said her heart was full with hate, she killed him he is burned to death and that are Rogue's powers" said Scott angry. "Listen bub I know Rogue better than you and I tell you she didn't do this" said Logan with his claws coming out. "Oh really, maybe she looks like you an animal" said Scott. Logan walked up to Scott and grabbed him by the throat and threw him through the room. "Stop it" yelled Storm. But Scott and Logan kept fighting. "Rogue didn't do this Jean" said Bobby. "I know Bobby, but we need to find out who did" said Jean with tears in her eyes.
 
Next in Chapter 4:

Title:
Another Time Another Place

What will happen
Another main villain will be introduced

What more:
Xavier will wake up in another dimension where everything is what he ever feared

So that is next in X-Men Mutant Chaos
 
Great chapter, again. I really liked it when Xavier revealed his late son, David. And the X-Men's reaction to this, and how you conveyed his grief and torment, and also a hint of jealously towards Moira/Banshee's child.

Good stuff, keep it coming. :)
 
Very interesting chapter!! Lots of emotion with
Rogue leaving with Anna and Shawn and then meeting Z'Cann and sitting on the hotel balcony. Moira revealing the story about her and Charles' child. Rogue's reaction when the humans attacked.

Interesting twist with
the dead clone plot.
I wonder what will happen in
the alternate dimension.
And what will happen with
Rogue
...and what role will
Z'Cann
play?
 
Thanks TKing and PhoenixRisen :D
Next chapter well could take a while but I always say that LOL
The problem is I have a lot of school work,
And I want school to go first but I can't stop writing.
I didn't begin yet but maybe I will tonight before I go out clubbing :D
 

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