oh my, i'm becoming a songwriter

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  1. Babs Gordon

    Babs Gordon lives

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    i've recorded a draft of my first original song and it's posted at
    www.myspace.com/larissapowers
    i'd love feedback if you want to give it. i've got some other songs in the mix and i'll hopefully record them with my dad. this particular song marshmallow catapult was recorded with my friend eli.

    :up:
     
    #1 Babs Gordon, Dec 13, 2005
  2. Equint77

    Equint77 MY NAME IS HOV

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    you've got a great voice babs....

    really impressive... keep going and let us know when you post more songs on the site.

    really really cool... congrats.
     
    #2 Equint77, Dec 13, 2005
  3. Erzengel

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    I'd have to take a listen when I'm not at work and I have decent speakers. But that's really great Babs. :up:
     
    #3 Erzengel, Dec 13, 2005
  4. Tuki James Luka

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    When you guys end your compliments with her name it sounds like you're trying to give support to a ******ed eprson who tries so hard.
     
    #4 Tuki James Luka, Dec 13, 2005
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    My brutal honesty and diamond-hard opinion will descend upon you after I get home from work to a computer that actually has speakers.
     
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  6. Wilhelm-Scream

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    LOL.

    "Veeery GOOD BABS :eek: You DID it!!! *applause*, now let's do two times FIVE! Can you do that?"

    I know, you're right, my little brother was mildly ******ed so I've heard the tone offten, hahaha
     
    #6 Wilhelm-Scream, Dec 13, 2005
  7. Equint77

    Equint77 MY NAME IS HOV

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    I'm Clive Davis b!tch!! :mad:
     
    #7 Equint77, Dec 13, 2005
  8. The Lizard

    The Lizard Didn't eat Billy

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    Larissa Explains It All!


    I'll bet that's the first time you heard that one........today. :(
     
    #8 The Lizard, Dec 13, 2005
  9. Equint77

    Equint77 MY NAME IS HOV

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    good one Liz..I missed that one. :D

    I'm truely ******ed. :(
     
    #9 Equint77, Dec 13, 2005
  10. hey yo its sean

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    Equint..

    Sincerity...

    Oh my, indeed.
     
    #10 hey yo its sean, Dec 13, 2005
  11. Erzengel

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    It's weird learning a poster's real name. It's amost doesn't fit them because you are so use to calling them by their username.
     
    #11 Erzengel, Dec 13, 2005
  12. The Amazing Lee

    The Amazing Lee Don't call me chicken!

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    #12 The Amazing Lee, Dec 13, 2005
  13. black_dust

    black_dust FrEaK-A-ZoId!!!

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    Woah thats really good :) i like it alot
     
    #13 black_dust, Dec 13, 2005
  14. The Amazing Lee

    The Amazing Lee Don't call me chicken!

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    Beautiful voice by the way Babs. :)
     
    #14 The Amazing Lee, Dec 13, 2005
  15. Equint77

    Equint77 MY NAME IS HOV

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    Your real name is Erzengel? :( :confused: :eek:
     
    #15 Equint77, Dec 13, 2005
  16. The Amazing Lee

    The Amazing Lee Don't call me chicken!

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    My real name is Mustafa erka derka dinkalong the 23rd :(
     
    #16 The Amazing Lee, Dec 13, 2005
  17. Erzengel

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    I legally changed it. And it's just Erzengel. No last name.
     
    #17 Erzengel, Dec 13, 2005
  18. Equint77

    Equint77 MY NAME IS HOV

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    lies... all lies... and here I trusted you for so long. :(
     
    #18 Equint77, Dec 13, 2005
  19. PLAS

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    nice song, the second voice gets a little bit out of tune when coming into the song, the structure is nice and catchy... you have a very soothing voice, which I like, although I'm not that much into the whole folkish kind of stuff, it sounds like it can become a promising song with a full band arrengement

    who's the guy with the third voice that comes later? he should have been a little bit away from the mic, he sounds ok, but that was just supposed to be a back up voice

    overall, great song, honest sounding and with a very well established structure. of course, if you have a chance, record it with a full band
     
    #19 PLAS, Dec 13, 2005
  20. Babs Gordon

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    it's really not meant to be folkish. it's just all i got what with my friend and i only having two acoustic guitars and two voices between us. i was thinking of redoing it with my dad who is a professional guitarist and really good with digital instrumentation.

    it was pretty much a draft though. i wrote that song sunday and recorded it mainly so i wouldn't forget what i wrote. i have a habit of forgetting melodies and stuff. bad!
     
    #20 Babs Gordon, Dec 13, 2005
  21. Babs Gordon

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    thanks for the comments and constructive criticism though guys. it will help me a lot in the long run :)
     
    #21 Babs Gordon, Dec 13, 2005
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    SILENCE N00B! :mad:
     
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  23. PLAS

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    it's good to always have means to record your ideas, specially if you plan on doing the whole songwriting thingie, and don't worry about the folksy thing, I use the acoustic guitar a lot for songwritting purposes

    keep on going girl
     
    #23 PLAS, Dec 13, 2005
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    #24 Babs Gordon, Dec 13, 2005
  25. unknownuser

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    You have a very good voice Babs :up:
     
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