oh my, i'm becoming a songwriter

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  1. Babs Gordon

    Babs Gordon lives

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    i've recorded a draft of my first original song and it's posted at
    www.myspace.com/larissapowers
    i'd love feedback if you want to give it. i've got some other songs in the mix and i'll hopefully record them with my dad. this particular song marshmallow catapult was recorded with my friend eli.

    :up:
     
  2. Equint77

    Equint77 MY NAME IS HOV

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    you've got a great voice babs....

    really impressive... keep going and let us know when you post more songs on the site.

    really really cool... congrats.
     
  3. Erzengel

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    I'd have to take a listen when I'm not at work and I have decent speakers. But that's really great Babs. :up:
     
  4. Tuki James Luka

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    When you guys end your compliments with her name it sounds like you're trying to give support to a ******ed eprson who tries so hard.
     
  5. Wilhelm-Scream

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    My brutal honesty and diamond-hard opinion will descend upon you after I get home from work to a computer that actually has speakers.
     
  6. Wilhelm-Scream

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    LOL.

    "Veeery GOOD BABS :eek: You DID it!!! *applause*, now let's do two times FIVE! Can you do that?"

    I know, you're right, my little brother was mildly ******ed so I've heard the tone offten, hahaha
     
  7. Equint77

    Equint77 MY NAME IS HOV

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    I'm Clive Davis b!tch!! :mad:
     
  8. The Lizard

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    Larissa Explains It All!


    I'll bet that's the first time you heard that one........today. :(
     
  9. Equint77

    Equint77 MY NAME IS HOV

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    good one Liz..I missed that one. :D

    I'm truely ******ed. :(
     
  10. hey yo its sean

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    Equint..

    Sincerity...

    Oh my, indeed.
     
  11. Erzengel

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    It's weird learning a poster's real name. It's amost doesn't fit them because you are so use to calling them by their username.
     
  12. The Amazing Lee

    The Amazing Lee Don't call me chicken!

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    black_dust FrEaK-A-ZoId!!!

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    Woah thats really good :) i like it alot
     
  14. The Amazing Lee

    The Amazing Lee Don't call me chicken!

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    Beautiful voice by the way Babs. :)
     
  15. Equint77

    Equint77 MY NAME IS HOV

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    Your real name is Erzengel? :( :confused: :eek:
     
  16. The Amazing Lee

    The Amazing Lee Don't call me chicken!

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    My real name is Mustafa erka derka dinkalong the 23rd :(
     
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    I legally changed it. And it's just Erzengel. No last name.
     
  18. Equint77

    Equint77 MY NAME IS HOV

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    lies... all lies... and here I trusted you for so long. :(
     
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    nice song, the second voice gets a little bit out of tune when coming into the song, the structure is nice and catchy... you have a very soothing voice, which I like, although I'm not that much into the whole folkish kind of stuff, it sounds like it can become a promising song with a full band arrengement

    who's the guy with the third voice that comes later? he should have been a little bit away from the mic, he sounds ok, but that was just supposed to be a back up voice

    overall, great song, honest sounding and with a very well established structure. of course, if you have a chance, record it with a full band
     
  20. Babs Gordon

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    it's really not meant to be folkish. it's just all i got what with my friend and i only having two acoustic guitars and two voices between us. i was thinking of redoing it with my dad who is a professional guitarist and really good with digital instrumentation.

    it was pretty much a draft though. i wrote that song sunday and recorded it mainly so i wouldn't forget what i wrote. i have a habit of forgetting melodies and stuff. bad!
     
  21. Babs Gordon

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    thanks for the comments and constructive criticism though guys. it will help me a lot in the long run :)
     
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    SILENCE N00B! :mad:
     
  23. PLAS

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    it's good to always have means to record your ideas, specially if you plan on doing the whole songwriting thingie, and don't worry about the folksy thing, I use the acoustic guitar a lot for songwritting purposes

    keep on going girl
     
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    You have a very good voice Babs :up:
     

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