DarkHellRider: Just to let you know, you shouldn't be posting as Ghost Rider until you get approved to play the character by a GM. It's against the rules.
Also, I'm not one-hundred percent sure since I was not here in the beginning of this season, but I don't think Blaze or Ghost Rider have any history with Spider-Man or the Punisher in this RPG.
This RPG basically started from scratch with the heroes origins from the beginning, so there is no comic continuity outside of what's happened in the RPG.
Also, I'm not trying to be a dick and I mean no offense, but you should use a spell check feature before posting to fix any mis-spellings and/or punctuation errors you might have.
For instance...
Johnny rides into the city sensing evil everywhere if it had been a couple years ago Zarathos would have taken over easily but Johnny has learned to control him. so he just keeps riding hoping to run into an old friend or someone anyone who could give him a place to stay since it seems like forever since he had a good nights rest
Would look and read better with better structure, such as...
Johnny rides into the city sensing evil everywhere. If it had been a couple years ago Zarathos would have taken over easily, but Johnny has learned to control him.
So, he just keeps riding hoping to run into an old friend or someone, anyone, who could give him a place to stay since it seems like forever since he had a good nights rest.
A little spacing and punctuation makes it easier for people to read your stories.
Also, you should wrap your speech text in quotes.
For example, this...
Ahh the fresh air of new york "cough" gotta love it I wonder if spider-man or the punisher are here. It has been awhile since ghost rider or me has seen either one of them I doubt they will be happy to see me. although with alll this evil going around i bet they could use a helping hand from ghost rider.
Would look much better with like...
"Ahh, the fresh air of New York..."cough" gotta love it. I wonder if spider-man or the punisher are here? It has been a while since Ghost Rider or me has seen either one of them."
"I doubt they will be happy to see me, although with all this evil going around I bet they could use a helping hand from Ghost Rider."
It may take a few extra minutes, but making your post look more professional goes a long way in improving the quality of the stories you tell. Other than that, I'm looking forward to reading your take on old Flamehead.
