Another_Fool
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- Like what a number of posters said in this thread, I didn't care for the high-tech suit. In fact, I didn't like that they undercut Peter's agency in creating his own gadgets by having everything done by Stark Industries first. Given that in this continuity, Peter looks up to Tony Stark, it would've been better that the Iron Man armor inspired Peter to update his suit on his own rather than just hack features that were already there. Like why couldn't Peter create the web bullets, the spider tracers or the spider-wings? As much as I got a kick out of the dialogue Peter had with his AI in the underground warehouse, I would've been happy to lose that in favor of Peter creating his own tech.
- Speaking of Stark, I'm a bit tired of how much of the MCU revolves around Stark. And in this movie it's all about Peter trying to please Stark and almost looking at Tony like his own Uncle Ben. For the most part, the narrative choices didn't bother me, and it does work, but I suppose in my fan fiction I thought it would've been nice and more faithful to the comics that Parker gets disillusioned with Tony after losing the suit, only to get inspired by a Captain America PSA video where its Rogers who says something like "Remember kids, if I'm nothing without the suit, then I wouldn't deserve it" line. It would be a good way of not making Spider-Man revolve completely around Tony, while also making a nod to Spider-Man's immense admiration for Steve Rogers in the comics while paying off the PSA videos with something more than comic relief.
Other than that, movie's pretty great.
- Speaking of Stark, I'm a bit tired of how much of the MCU revolves around Stark. And in this movie it's all about Peter trying to please Stark and almost looking at Tony like his own Uncle Ben. For the most part, the narrative choices didn't bother me, and it does work, but I suppose in my fan fiction I thought it would've been nice and more faithful to the comics that Parker gets disillusioned with Tony after losing the suit, only to get inspired by a Captain America PSA video where its Rogers who says something like "Remember kids, if I'm nothing without the suit, then I wouldn't deserve it" line. It would be a good way of not making Spider-Man revolve completely around Tony, while also making a nod to Spider-Man's immense admiration for Steve Rogers in the comics while paying off the PSA videos with something more than comic relief.
Other than that, movie's pretty great.