The Fight Sequences in Spider-Man 3!

[thejon7]

In this thread u can post ur thoughts about some of the fight scenes in Spider-Man 3: how will they begin/end, who will win, what happens in between, will someone die in the fight and you could even post your own fight sequences for the film in this thread! Here is mine:
Harry vs. Peter in the Osborn Mansion:
Peter kicks down the door and walks into the Osborn Mansion were his former friend Harry Osborn sat on an armchair with the original Green Goblin mask on it(the one that Norman Osborn wore in Spider-Man).
"You said you want me dead... now's your chance to try again Harry," yelled Peter across to Harry.
"This wouldn't have happened if you hadn't killed my FATHER," yelled back Harry as he stood up from the armchair and started walking towards Peter.
Peter clenched his fists together as Harry picked up a dagger from the table he was beside and started to run towards Peter. Peter had done the same. They both stuck they're arms out and both closelined one another at the same time and by the impact... they both flipped over and landed lying beside each other. Harry and Peter exchanged looks and leaped back to they're feet and started to throw punches and kicks at each other. Harry kicked Peter down to the floor, pulled out the dagger from its holder and aimed for Peter, but Peter's spider-sence warned him and he slid out of the way by shooting his web-line at a wall and dragged himself away. Once again Peter leaped to his feet. His spider-sence warned him again and Peter turned around, Harry was swinging the dagger towards Peter after the third swing Peter kicked the dagger out of Harry's hand and speared him right threw a mirror which was lead to the Goblin-Lair!
Both Peter and Harry were stunned by the attack, Harry had recieved a cut along the side of his eye from the attack as Peter was just dizzy after what he had done.
They both got up from the attack, but slower than the time it had took before! Peter and Harry once again exchanged punches at each other until Harry grabbed his sword that he used as the Green Goblin(II) and swong it at Peter, but Peter had done a backflip away from Harry, spun a webline to the celling and kicked Harry will swinging. Harry flew towards a shelf which had his pumpkin bombs at, grabbed a pumpkin bomb and threw it at Peter, but Peter leaped away from the bomb, catched it with his web and threw it back at Harry. Harry was blown away by the pumpkin bomb and was knocked out by its blast! There had also been terrible burn marks and blood pooring down Harry's face, but it only appeared from one side of his face.
Peter smurked as he walked away from the site at which his former friend Harry Osborn lied motion-less and defence-less.

 

[Secret_Riddle]

How..shockingly choreographed...i like.

 

[Spider-ManHero12]

In this thread u can post ur thoughts about some of the fight scenes in Spider-Man 3: how will they begin/end, who will win, what happens in between, will someone die in the fight and you could even post your own fight sequences for the film in this thread! Here is mine:
Harry vs. Peter in the Osborn Mansion:
Peter kicks down the door and walks into the Osborn Mansion were his former friend Harry Osborn sat on an armchair with the original Green Goblin mask on it(the one that Norman Osborn wore in Spider-Man).
"You said you want me dead... now's your chance to try again Harry," yelled Peter across to Harry.
"This wouldn't have happened if you hadn't killed my FATHER," yelled back Harry as he stood up from the armchair and started walking towards Peter.
Peter clenched his fists together as Harry picked up a dagger from the table he was beside and started to run towards Peter. Peter had done the same. They both stuck they're arms out and both closelined one another at the same time and by the impact... they both flipped over and landed lying beside each other. Harry and Peter exchanged looks and leaped back to they're feet and started to throw punches and kicks at each other. Harry kicked Peter down to the floor, pulled out the dagger from its holder and aimed for Peter, but Peter's spider-sence warned him and he slid out of the way by shooting his web-line at a wall and dragged himself away. Once again Peter leaped to his feet. His spider-sence warned him again and Peter turned around, Harry was swinging the dagger towards Peter after the third swing Peter kicked the dagger out of Harry's hand and speared him right threw a mirror which was lead to the Goblin-Lair!
Both Peter and Harry were stunned by the attack, Harry had recieved a cut along the side of his eye from the attack as Peter was just dizzy after what he had done.
They both got up from the attack, but slower than the time it had took before! Peter and Harry once again exchanged punches at each other until Harry grabbed his sword that he used as the Green Goblin(II) and swong it at Peter, but Peter had done a backflip away from Harry, spun a webline to the celling and kicked Harry will swinging. Harry flew towards a shelf which had his pumpkin bombs at, grabbed a pumpkin bomb and threw it at Peter, but Peter leaped away from the bomb, catched it with his web and threw it back at Harry. Harry was blown away by the pumpkin bomb and was knocked out by its blast! There had also been terrible burn marks and blood pooring down Harry's face, but it only appeared from one side of his face.
Peter smurked as he walked away from the site at which his former friend Harry Osborn lied motion-less and defence-less.

this is cool. i like this.

 

[thejon7]

How..shockingly choreographed...i like.

thanx Secret_Riddle
and thanx again spidermanhero12

 

[thejon7]

heres a new 1:
Spider-Man vs. Sandman(armoured truck):
Flint Marko was chased into a large building by the police, he was a wanted man who wore a stripped shirt with brown jeans. He ran up the staircase to try and escape the poilice but it was only a few more levels until he would reach the roof so he ran threw the door at the thirteenth level and ran towards the building and started to change into a sandlike figure and jumped out threw the window and started growing bigger! He was a giant covered with sand or made of sand! The police started shooting at the sand-giant as he started to scream... Peter Parker came out of the MoonDance restaurant as the sandfigure made a huge fist and whacked the police officers with it(police men, women and cars were flying away from the sand-giant). A police car was flying towards Peter as he looked and seen a young girl about to get hit with the car also, Peter leaped towards her and saved her from getting crushed.
"Thank you Spider-M... HAY! Your not Spider-Man," said the little girl as Peter rolled his eyes and ran away from the girl so that he could see where the sandgiant had gone, it was on the road and was headed towards an armoured truck! Peter ran into the alleyway and quickly changed into his Spidey-suit and web-swinged towards the sandperson, as the little girl said: "...whoa, I was wrong about that guy... he is Spider-Man!", Eddie Brock Jr. overheard the girl while carrying a Spider-Man balloon.
"Hey... little girl-" Eddie was interuped.
"My name's not "little girl" it's Julie," interuped the girl who had claimed her name was Julie.
"Okay whatever... I heard you knew who Spider-Man was? Is that true," asked Eddie.
"...yes!"
'...well how about I give you this nice Spider-Man balloon and you tell me who or what this person looks like," offered Eddie.
"No thank you! I would never tell anyone who Spider-Man is... not for the world," replied Julie.
"...it's a nice balloon," explained Eddie as Julie rolled her eyes at him.

Spider-Man chased after the armoured truck which the sandgiant had already entered and kicked open the doors to see that the sandperson had been the person that he'd had been hunting down! The man of actually killed his uncle(Ben Parker): Flint Marko, he was the sandgiant which was known as in the newspapers: Sandman! Flint Marko turned his head to face Spidey and walked over by him, Spidey threw a punch at the man's face but all that happened was that sand flew off his face and there was a fist mark at where Spidey had hit him. Spidey threw another punch at him but this time aimed for his stoamach but this time his fist had went right threw the Sandman! Spidey looked up at him as the Sandman made a huge fist that looked to be made from sand and threw it at Spidey, Spidey flew out of the truck doorbut spun his webline towards a nearby building, ran alongside the door and grabbed it with his web and threw it towards Sandman. Flint was cut in half by it but where blood was supost to poor instead it was replaced by sand! Spidey stared in awe until finally the Sandman started to join back together, Spidey walked towards him once again but this time Sandman made a sandmade-hammer from his hand and shot it at Spidey, the wall-crawler was once again blown from out the backdoors but this time was shot inside the windshield of a car! The car pulled over and Spidey fell off of the hood, there were cuts and scrapes all around Spidey's suit(especially the back of it).
Eddie Brock came running towards Spidey's body and started taking pictures of him, until he had an idea!
"...lets see who the web-swinger really is..."
Eddie stook his hand out towards Spidey's mask, aiming to pull it off but Spidey quickly leaped to his feet and asked: "What are you doing?"
"...ahh, nothing... nothing at all! Just looking for a good story," answered Eddie as he took a picture of Spidey right in his face.
"...well maybe you should find a better story, rather than 'Who is Spider-Man?'," replied Spidey as he shot his webline towards a building and web-swinged away.

 

[Spider-ManHero12]

heres a new 1:
Spider-Man vs. Sandman(armoured truck):
Flint Marko was chased into a large building by the police, he was a wanted man who wore a stripped shirt with brown jeans. He ran up the staircase to try and escape the poilice but it was only a few more levels until he would reach the roof so he ran threw the door at the thirteenth level and ran towards the building and started to change into a sandlike figure and jumped out threw the window and started growing bigger! He was a giant covered with sand or made of sand! The police started shooting at the sand-giant as he started to scream... Peter Parker came out of the MoonDance restaurant as the sandfigure made a huge fist and whacked the police officers with it(police men, women and cars were flying away from the sand-giant). A police car was flying towards Peter as he looked and seen a young girl about to get hit with the car also, Peter leaped towards her and saved her from getting crushed.
"Thank you Spider-M... HAY! Your not Spider-Man," said the little girl as Peter rolled his eyes and ran away from the girl so that he could see where the sandgiant had gone, it was on the road and was headed towards an armoured truck! Peter ran into the alleyway and quickly changed into his Spidey-suit and web-swinged towards the sandperson, as the little girl said: "...whoa, I was wrong about that guy... he is Spider-Man!", Eddie Brock Jr. overheard the girl while carrying a Spider-Man balloon.
"Hey... little girl-" Eddie was interuped.
"My name's not "little girl" it's Julie," interuped the girl who had claimed her name was Julie.
"Okay whatever... I heard you knew who Spider-Man was? Is that true," asked Eddie.
"...yes!"
'...well how about I give you this nice Spider-Man balloon and you tell me who or what this person looks like," offered Eddie.
"No thank you! I would never tell anyone who Spider-Man is... not for the world," replied Julie.
"...it's a nice balloon," explained Eddie as Julie rolled her eyes at him.

Spider-Man chased after the armoured truck which the sandgiant had already entered and kicked open the doors to see that the sandperson had been the person that he'd had been hunting down! The man of actually killed his uncle(Ben Parker): Flint Marko, he was the sandgiant which was known as in the newspapers: Sandman! Flint Marko turned his head to face Spidey and walked over by him, Spidey threw a punch at the man's face but all that happened was that sand flew off his face and there was a fist mark at where Spidey had hit him. Spidey threw another punch at him but this time aimed for his stoamach but this time his fist had went right threw the Sandman! Spidey looked up at him as the Sandman made a huge fist that looked to be made from sand and threw it at Spidey, Spidey flew out of the truck doorbut spun his webline towards a nearby building, ran alongside the door and grabbed it with his web and threw it towards Sandman. Flint was cut in half by it but where blood was supost to poor instead it was replaced by sand! Spidey stared in awe until finally the Sandman started to join back together, Spidey walked towards him once again but this time Sandman made a sandmade-hammer from his hand and shot it at Spidey, the wall-crawler was once again blown from out the backdoors but this time was shot inside the windshield of a car! The car pulled over and Spidey fell off of the hood, there were cuts and scrapes all around Spidey's suit(especially the back of it).
Eddie Brock came running towards Spidey's body and started taking pictures of him, until he had an idea!
"...lets see who the web-swinger really is..."
Eddie stook his hand out towards Spidey's mask, aiming to pull it off but Spidey quickly leaped to his feet and asked: "What are you doing?"
"...ahh, nothing... nothing at all! Just looking for a good story," answered Eddie as he took a picture of Spidey right in his face.
"...well maybe you should find a better story, rather than 'Who is Spider-Man?'," replied Spidey as he shot his webline towards a building and web-swinged away.

that was fantastic!.

 

[Secret_Riddle]

Jon can write...write a battle royale one man, that would be sick.

 

[thejon7]

that was fantastic!.

thanx again spidermanhero12, maybe if they make a 4th film i could write it

 

[thejon7]

Jon can write...write a battle royale one man, that would be sick.

sure, which villains should i use?

 

[Spider-ManHero12]

heres mine for the spiderman vs. sandman in train subway.

sandman has bags of money in his hand walking and spidey comes upside down in symbiote black costume saying, "remember ben parker.". then sandman says, "what does it matter to you anyway?", spidey climbs up the wall and says, "everything!". spidey shoots two web at the train and swings at sindman kicking him and they are both moving fast across the subway. spidey then jumps off his web onto sandman. sandman then falls into grains of sand then form back up. this time spidey lands a kick in at sandman. sandman falls to the ground and gives spidey a kick.

spidey goes up in the air and lands on his back. he gets back up and punches sandman across the face and sand goes everywhere. sandman makes a huge fist and goes to punch spidey. they are both batteling between two trains. spidey grabs sandman and holds his face against the train with sand going everywhere. spidey then pulls him away and sandman gives an uppercut to spidey with a huge fist and spidey goes up in the air and hits the brick cieling and comes back down.

spidey tries to shoot a web at sandman but it goes right through him. sandman picks up spidey with his big fist and throws him across the subway. spidey shoots two webs, one at one train and one at the other. the trains pull spidey at full speed and spidey is head ing right wards sandman. spidey jumps off the two webs and is diving at full speed right at sandman grappling him as they go really fast. right befor they hit a wall sandman turns into grains of sand so he will not get hurt. spidey shoots a web at a train and swings really fast onto the wall

sandman runs into the sewer and spidey runs in after him. they come into this big smelly room with a big water tank. they battle again and this time sandman punches spidey in the chest knocking him 20 feet across the room.

spidey jumps ontop if the water tank. sandman says, "please....don't do it!.". then spidey says sarcastically, "you mean this?". spidey hoots two webs at the knob tat is holding the door to the water in and pulss it. water bursts out and hits sandman. sandman is reaching out at spidey and spidey just stares. sandman turns soggy an gets washed away.

spidey leaves the sewer. sandman is then washed away to a beach and reforms.

 

[thejon7]

heres mine for the spiderman vs. sandman in train subway.

sandman has bags of miney in his hand walkind and spidey comes upside down in symbiote black costume saying, "remember ben parker.". then sandman says, "what does it matter to you anyway?", spidey climbs up the wall and says, "everything!". spidey shoots two web at the train and swings at sindman kicking him and they are both moving fast across the subway. spidey then jumps off his web onto sandman. sandman then falls into grains of sand then form back up. this time spidey lands a kick in at sandman. sandman falls to the ground and gives spidey a kick.

spidey goes up in the air and lands on his back. he gets back up and punches sandman across the face and sand goes everywhere. sandman makes a huge fist and goes to punch spidey. they are both batteling between two trains. spidey grabs sandman and holds his face against the train with sand going everywhere. spidey then pulls him away and sandman gives an uppercut to spidey with a huge fist and spidey goes up in the air and hits the brick cieling and comes back down.

sandman runs into the sewer and spidey runs in after him. they come into this big smelly room with a big water tank. they battle again and this time sandman punches spidey in the chest knocking him 20 feet across the room.

spidey jumps ontop if the water tank. sandman says, "please....don't do it!.". then spidey says sarcastically, "you mean this?". water bursts out and hits sandman. sandman is reaching out at spidey and spidey just stares. sandman turns soggy an gets washed away.

spidey leaves the sewer. sandman is then washed away to a beach and reforms.

i like it, good job

 

[Spider-ManHero12]

i like it, good job

thanks. i just edited part of it to add little more action.

 

[venomscurse2]

Harry vs Peter in the air
Peter stops clapping after MJs play is over.He looks up and Harry is there and Harry is smiling until he looks down.Harry gets up and leaves.Peter does the same.Peter meets MJ in backstage and they hug and kiss and etc.Pete is in the hallway trying to get out to visit Aunt May as hes about to leave Harry with his back turned trying to get out as well Pete tries to talk to him Harry turns around and says.

HARRY
You killed my father I have nothing to say to you!
PETER
Harry wait!

Too late Harry leaves.Peter gets out aswell and is exposed in sight from backview Harry in NightSurfer from picks him up.Pete looks shocked Night Surfer throws him through a office building window and when hes flying through the air the engagement ring slips from his jacket pocket and he reaches for it he grabs it.Night Surfer throws some razor bats at him he tries to swing away but they cut him up he lands on the side of a wall.Night Surfer
throws a bomb at him the bomb explodes right by him and he falls through the sky and lands on a unacupied car Night Surfer throws another bomb at him Pete gets up and swings away the bomb explodes and and sends the car flipping through the air and barely misses Pete. Pete continues swinging away Night Surfer chases him. Night Surfer knocks him onto a roof and Night Sufer darts out his arm claws and darts toward Pete breaking everything in half along the way Peter jumps to dodge yelling:

Peter
Who are you!?

Pete jumps off of the roof and again tries to swing away but Night Surfer hits Pete in the middle of a swing and smashes him innto a wall leaving a hole in the wall also.Night Surfer slowly glides down so Peter can see him. And his face gear lifts up.

Pete
It cant be!......Harry

Harry
You should've known this was going to happen Pete!

Pete
No!

Harry smashes into the spot where Pete was Pete dodges it.

 

[venomscurse2]

sure, which villains should i use?

Venom and Sandman
Harry as a hero though.....................................................................

 

[webhead731]

I did this in like June for my ""Tell How You Think The Final Battle Will Go Down" Thread".

Now, some of this probably won't happen. The start of it kinda' sucks.
Tell me what you think.

Green Goblin II and Sandman have both been defeated in the past and

decided to team up and take down Spider-Man. Harry has seen Peter and

Gwen hanging out lately and knew she was important to him. He knew

kidnapping her would make him come. He didn’t want to kidnap Mary Jane

because he still liked her.

Peter has just gotten rid of the Symbiote in the church where Eddie

Brock was and the Symbiote went to Eddie. Happy of getting rid of the alien

substance, Peter returns to his Apartment taking off his Spider-Man mask and

notices 2 messages on his machine. He checks the earliest one and it’s Gwen

asking if they could go on a date sometime that week. (Peter had broken up

with Mary Jane) Peter smiles and checks the next one before calling her back

with a “yes“. The next message we hear Gwen in the back round screaming

and yelling “Help!” as Green Goblin II says “You’ve taken my father’s life and

it’s time you’ve realized the pain! His voice gets deeper and more sinister.

“Meet me here at her apartment by 7:29 because her life ends a minute

after…” Goblin chuckles and then the phone clicks. Peter’s smile died when he

had heard the message. He wasn’t going to let somebody else die. The clock

read 7:22. He quickly puts his mask back on. We see the outside sky. Dark,

the sun is setting and there’s a pinkish purple color in the sky along with some

red. Spider-Man swings out the window and swings very fast to her

apartment.

Inside Gwen’s apartment there’s a balcony with two open doors. The

wind is blowing the curtains. We see a close up of Green Goblin’s face looking

down at Gwen who we can see reflecting in his eyes. Gwen is tied up in a

chair with a few bruises and scratch marks on her from trying to get away

from the Goblin. She had fallen into a few things while running earlier. Gwen

asks with a scared deep voice, “Why are you doing this to me?” “Revenge.

It‘s all revenge.” Harry replied. The clock read 7:28 and then Harry slowly

pulled out a sword from his belt. Gwen looks terrified.

Spider-Man came through the open balcony windows and landed on the

floor. “Let her go! You don‘t understand what happened!” (About his father)

he yelled. As Spider-Man said that there was sand pouring through a vent

onto the floor. Spider-Man’s Spider Sense went off but he didn’t move in time

to dodge Sandman’s enlarged arm smacking him out the window through a

skylight of another building. Spider-Man lands on top of a desk crushing it. It

looks like an office building. Sandman pours through the broken sky light and

piles up on the floor making himself. Spider-Man gets up and hits him. His fist

went through Sandman not doing any harm. Sandman fell on top of him as

sand and then his face formed in it. (Like the cover when he first appeared in

a comic) He was weighing Spider-Man down, then Spider-Man rolled out of it

and rolled into a water dispenser. The big jug on top of it hit the floor hard

and exploded. Water went everywhere. Sandman screamed and shielded his

eyes as if he was afraid of it. Spider-Man saw that he didn’t like water.

Before he could do anything else Sandman made his hand into a hammer and

hit Spider-Man out a window and into a construction site.

Spider-Man got up struggling as if something was pushing on his back.

He was just knocked out of a tall building. The ground was dirt and there was

some construction equipment around along with a metal frame building.

Sandman came down from building in sand and blended in with the dirt there.

Green Goblin also arrived on his glider with a cackle. He threw a bomb and it

exploded weakening the steel building frame on the building that was being

built. Spider-Man stood up and shot a web at the frame building taking himself

to it. Then got to the very top by using jumps and webs. He perched at the

top as Green Goblin pulled out a small sword from his belt heading towards

Spider-Man. Spider-Man lunged himself at him in the air and landed with him

on top of his glider. Spider-Man punched Goblin in the face once then Goblin

cut his leg stunning Spider-Man for a second then pushed him off. Spider-Man

shot a web and prevented a very painful fall while hitting the ground. Goblin,

meanwhile, didn’t notice the frame building ahead of him. He tried moving out

of the way but the left end of his glider hit it showering sparks everywhere.

The glider landed hardly on the ground making Goblin fall off onto the ground.

Spider-Man got up and sand started swirling around him. In a annoyed voice

Spider-Man said “Oh crap.” then Sandman hit him to the floor. Sandman was

towering above Spider-Man who was leaning against a pile of dirt. Spider-Man

remembered the water dispenser inside the building and how the water

frightened Sandman. Spider-Man saw a wheel against a wall in the

construction site and looked behind Sandman where he saw a pipe dripping

with water. He knew this was perfect. He shot a web at the wheel then

pulled. Water shot out from the pipe hitting Sandman. Spider-Man got up,

punched Sandman a few times and noticed it was harming him because

Sandman’s expressions looked like he was being hurt. The water shut off

because it was out and needed to be pumped again. Spider-Man’s vision was

a little blurry from the water spraying on his lenses. He did see Sandman

looking almost normal again though, but not enough to fight. Spider-Man was

hit by an unknown figure into a pile of bricks. A black blur lands on the ground

in front of Sandman making a little dust come around it’s feet. We see a close

up of sharp teeth with a tongue come at the screen very fast. Then we see

Venom’s mouth take a big chunk out of Sandman. Sandman looks frightened

at its looks and what it did. He melts to the floor in sand and goes down a

drain. We see who it was. Venom. He looks like the comic version and is

about the same size as Spider-Man but his arms are a little bigger. He has the

evil white eyes and sharp teeth with a long tongue. He looks scary. He saw

Harry over there lying on the floor but didn’t think he would get up. Venom looks

ticked and excited as we hear some bricks hitting the ground. He turns

around to the big pile of bricks where he hit Spider-Man and smiles.

Spider-Man comes up in a hurry making dust fly everywhere. His mask is

ripped off and his head is visible, his costume has some tears in it. He couldn’t

see two feet ahead of him. All of a sudden Venom lunges through the dust

towards the camera with his arms reached out and his teeth and tongue

showing. He tackles Spider-Man and they slide in the ground. Venom is on top

of Spider-Man showing his teeth smiling. He says “Remember us?!” then uses

his claws to dig in to Spider-Man’s stomach. Spider-Man gives a terrifying

scream and we see a painful look on his face. Saliva is dripping on Spider-Man

from Venom’s mouth. Venom is still smiling as he pulls his hand out of his

stomach with blood on it. Spider-Man looks at the face in horror. Venom’s

face pulls back to show Eddie’s. “Eddie?!” Spider-Man asked in surprise. “NO!”

Venom yelled while making the Symbiote come back over his face. He throws

Spider-Man to the ground near the frame building. Venom screamed at him as

he walked towards him. “You ruined my life, took my girlfriend, (Gwen) got me

fired from my job, and took my home away from me!” Venom picks up

Spider-Man with both hands around his neck as he says “But now you’re

gonna’ pay! From now on we are poison to you!” He throws Spider-Man

against the frame building as he says “We are VENOM!”

Venom comes up to Spider-Man who is getting up. He grabs him by the

neck with his left hand and pins him against the wall. He leans his head in six

inches away from Spider-Man’s face. His tongue is close to his face too.

Venom puts his tongue in and snarls. In a really low menacing voice he says

“I wanna’ eat your brains…” Venom punches Spider-Man twice in the face

with his right hand really hard. The blows sound painful. He then shoves his

knee into Spider-Man’s stomach. Venom throws Spider-Man to one of the

lower frames and jumps up on it next to Spider-Man. He kicks Spider-Man’s

face knocking it into the air and punches it while it‘s in the air. A long thin

tentacle comes out of his hand. Venom swings his arm smacking Spider-Man

with it. We see Harry look at the fight and sees that Venom is doing this to

his best friend. Harry realizes that he himself has been wrong doing this the

whole time. Harry decides to help his friend. Spider-Man tries to hit Venom

but Venom catches his fist then twists it making a cracking noise. Spider-Man

screams. His wrist is hurt, not broken. Venom holds his fist in the air about

to do the finishing blow, he snarls then says, “Burn in Hell.” Venom’s fist flies

towards Spider-Man’s gut but Harry comes between Spider-Man and Venom

taking the blow. Venom’s arm goes through Harry’s chest and we see a spray

of blood. Spider-Man is shocked. Harry falls to the frame and lies there barely

alive. Venom smiles. Spider-Man is ticked and remembers the bell at the

church. He jumps to the floor and Venom follows him. Spider-Man grabs a

metal bar as Venom is coming towards him and hits the frame making a

clanging sound. Venom holds his ears and screams. “What’s happening?!” he

yells. Spider-Man does it three more times and sees the Symbiote going wild

on Venom then it slides off revealing Brock. Spider-Man catches him as he

falls. He puts him on the floor and webs him there. The Symbiote slides

through a crack in a building escaping.

Spider-Man quickly jumps to where Harry is and sees that he’s barely

alive. He asks Harry, “Can you hear me?!” and tears are coming to Peter’s

eyes. Harry makes a smile and says, “Pete, I’m so sorry. Please forgive me. I

was wrong *coughs up a little blood* to blame my father’s death on you. I’m

so sorry” “Harry?!” Peter cries out. “No! Somebody help!” Harry smiles “Bye

Pete.” and closes his eyes leaving nothing but a empty body. Peter holds

Harry close to him and cries.

The End.
Then we just see the end of the movie, what happens with Gwen, some other stuff and after that the credits.

 

[thejon7]

Venom and Sandman
Harry as a hero though.....................................................................

ok... here ya go:
Venom and Sandman vs. Spider-Man vs. Green Goblin(II)(construction site/final battle):
Spider-Man web-swings onto the roof of the Osborn Mansion and opens the door into the mansion.
"Norman! Norman... I know your there, Norman I know your responsible for what Harry is doing... you convinced him that I killed, when really you only killed yourself... and now... you've taken your own son and turned him into a monster," yelled Spider-Man.
"...like you?"
Spider-Man turned around to see Norman Osborn appear from a mirror.
"...why Norman? Why are you doing this to your own son?! You've convinced him that I killed you, but I didn't kill Norman Osborn... if you want to call what I did "killing" than fine, I didn't kill you but I thought I had killed the Goblin which took over soul just like what you've done to Harry," replied Spider-Man. "Norman please... your in there I know it, help your son... tell him the truth!"
"We're not the only ones that have had our souls took from them... you, Peter Parker let yourself turn into Spider-Man... which has only begun the origins of the many villains... if this world never had a Spider-Man there would be no one like the Green Goblin, my son would be free! But you... you let him discover... who I really am, your responsible... for the Osborn legacy," told Norman. "And this house... is where it will begin... again and again and again!"
Spider-Man looked up at Norman and then ran towards the kitchen and started doing dangerous stuff that could cause fires, he turned on the ovens and started throwing chairs, tables, books and anything around him on the oven!
"What are you doing...? What are you DOING?!" asked Norman.
"The Goblin legacy is over... and I'm taking you with it and then... I'm gonna save Harry from the madness that you put him threw! ...and I'm not killing you... I'm ending this," answered Spider-Man.
"Peter," cried Norman. "...tell Harry I love him... and tell him thats from his real father: Norman Osborn..."
"...thank you Norman, I'll tell him..."
Spider-Man ran towards the window, jumped out of it and started to web-swing away.

Mary Jane Watson crawling into the taxi and then it started to drive off.
"Where you going Miss," asked the taxi driver.
"... take me to-"
CRASH!
Something had landed on the front bumper of the taxi, the driver had been knocked out and Mary Jane was knocked out in the back but had opened her eyes in a matter of seconds and crawled back up off the floor of the taxi and try to get back up onto her seat but as soon as she looked up to the windshield... she had seen Venom and then the car-window beside her crashed open by Sandman's fist as he pulled out the door. Then Venom ripped off the roof of the car and Mary Jane started to scream.

Spider-Man web-swinging threw the city but then heard the voices of the people on the news sounding woried about something, Spidey swong towards the window and viewed the television screen from where the voices had come from...
"-it is very intense down here Steven, there is a lot of destruction and police forces are on their way but the question that the people are asking is that: "Are the police able to stop these forces of mayhem?"
Spider-Man heard kids screaming in the background and crying for: "Spider-Man... help us!"
"Ladies and gentlemen... I don't know what to say, if Spider-Man dares risk his life to save this people... this could be the end of Spider-Man...," replied the television reporter.
Spider-Man looked down as in the background you hear Uncle Ben saying: "Peter... remember, with great power comes great responiblity" and with that heard Spidey took a quick breath and dropped from the building and started to run along the wall until he had finally spun his web towards another building and started the hunt to save the people that needed him the most.

Venom threw the wrecked taxi away as Sandman carried MJ.
"Spider-Man should be here soon," said Venom to Sandman. Venom spun black webbing all around two building.
"Here he come," said Sandman.
Spider-Man saw MJ's body on the black webbing and he web-swinged even faster towards her but Venom grabbed Spidey by the neck before he could reach her and started whacking Spidey up against the wall multiple times and then finally threw him down to the ground. Sandman stiffened up his leg as it started to spread with sand and then kicked Spider-Man, Spidey flew right towards the wall. Sandamn grabbed him again and turned Spidey's head towards the window of the building and smashed his head threw it then found another window but this time he turned Spidey towards himself, made a huge sandfist and aimed to punch Spidey threw the window but Spidey countered and kicked Sandman threw the window instead but while Spidey was in the air Venom grabbed his foot and pulled Spidey down to the ground, then held his foot with both hands, lifted Spidey up into the air and swong him back down to the ground. Spidey was bleeding a little from his mask as his mask suffered some cuts and scrapes. Spidey(tumbling) stood back up as Venom went to scratch Spidey's face but Spidey moved out of the way and Spidey spun two weblines beside Venom and launched himself towards Venom knocking Venom over the roofless taxi. Sandamn grabbed Spidey from behind with a large sandhand and swong a huge hammer-like sandfist towards Spidey's back and had hit Spidey with the attack. Venom stood back up and leaped over towards Spidey.
"Your ours Peter, no more Spider-Man, no more HERO," laughed Venom as the symbiote grabbed hold of Spidey and sucked him inside of Venom. Spidey was completly inside Venom and Venom started to grow a large white spider-symbol in the front of him and back, but Spidey punched his hand out and clenched his fist tightly together as he shot out another hand and clenched his fist together with that one to Spidey's masked face and spider-symbol appeared too, Sandman made a huge sandfist and tried to punch Spidey back in but Spidey finally rolled out of Venom as Venom flew right over to the taxi again, the taxi flipped over by the impact of Venom and landed back on it's tires! Spidey started to punch Sandman all around his face until Spidey used both feet to kick Sandman towards the building wall, Spidey shot a web at Sandman, pulled Sandman towards himself and again kicked Sandman with both feet but this time Sandman was shot threw the building wall! Spidey turned around and Venom was there, Venom kicked Spidey to the side of the head, pushed him towards the building wall, stuck out his arm in front of Spidey and ran as fast as he could to clothesline Spidey but missed as Spidey ducked out of the way and gave Venom a taste of his own medicine by clotheslining him, catching him with two weblines before falling down and shot him threw the air and then finally threw him down.
"HAHA! Eat that," sarcasticly said Spidey as Sandman punched Spidey in the back sending him right though the construction site area until Spidey's head had hit a steel bar(used for constructing buildings) and he flipped over onto the workplace of the construction site.
Venom jumped towards Spidey and Sandman followed behind, Venom rapped both hands around Spidey's neck, lifted him up and slammed him down threw the wood of the construction site area, Venom caught Spidey with a webline, sent him back up and kicked him towards another wall which Spidey flew right threw! Spidey, rolling all over the place was nearly defenceless as he somehow got up to his feet.
"I got an idea... let's take this maggot back to were his little girlfriend is so that she could witness the death of Spider-Man!"
"Great idea," complmented Sandman as he and Venom headed back towards where Mary Jane had been(Venom carried Spidey).

Venom dropped Spidey to the ground and yelled: "Hey! Red head? I got your boyfriend, me and Flint were wondering if you wanted to see the end of the show," yelled Venom as he whispered to Sandman: "I guess she dosn't like Spider-Man betdowns!"
Spider-Man was ripped up all over his suit and recieved more cuts and scrapes around his face and body, but somehow stood up to his feet once again to face Sandman and Venom! Spidey kicked Venom out of the way and started to punch and kick Sandman with everything he had until he finally spun two weblines at Sandman and catupulted him into the air. Spidey again kicked Venom from behind as Spidey gives another kick to Sandman while still in the air! Spidey was about to jump towards MJ but was caught by Venom's web around the neck, Venom jumped towards a steel building bar and strangled Spidey with the web he had spun around his neck! Spidey wounded and brusied stuck his hand towards Venom in mercy!

Mary Jane had finally awoken and looked to where Spidey was being strangled by Venom's webbing as she screamed: "LET HIM GO!!!"
"...why would I do that?" asked Venom as out of nowhere Harry dressed in the Goblin suit kick Venom off of the steel bar and blasted Venom with missiles from his glider and then aimed for Sandman but Harry was stopped by Spider-Man.
"...Harry... don't... d-do it...," mumbled Spidey.
"Why? This man is the man that you said killed your father," Harry replied.
"I know, b...but he's better off in jail... I've learned that revenge is not how to deal with your problems..."
"O... okay... P-Peter..." mumbled Harry as he fainted and his heart stop beating.
"H... H-Harry?"
Peter cried as Mary Jane cried as well for the loss of their best friend: Harry Osborn.

 

[chaseter]

I like this...I love to write.

Spider-Man vs. Sandman [Armored Car Scene]

*Scene 1
An armored car parks in front of the prestigious Manhattan National Bank. Two armed guards exit the vehicle, scanning the area for potential suspects. The last guard remains in the driver's seat replying to instructions and fills out paperwork on a clip board. One guard responds into the walkie talkie saying "Heading into the bank for pickup," as they both enter the bank through two large glass doors. A man, Flint Marko, stands across the street watching the armed guards. Marko hears sirens and averts his attention as a cop car passes by, lights and sirens blaring. He begins to cross the street toward the armored car.

The armed guards load up their bags with money in the bank's elaborate vault. They sign paper work and show their badges once again to leave the vault. They walk through the lobby and out the large doors. They open the rear door and begin loading the money into the rear. "I got it," said one guard as the other walks around and gets into the passenger side of the truck. The remaining guard closes the metal door, revealing Marko on the sidewalk right by the guard. The guard reacts, grabbing his gun and yelling "Freeze!" Marko walks forward and opens the still unlocked door. The guard once again yells "I said freeze!" Marko turns and looks as he opens the other door. The other guards begin to wonder what their partner is doing. He hears a shot and looks in the sideview mirror, seeing his partner thrown into a parked car near by. The engine running, the driver punches the gas, grabbing his walkie talkie to frantically say "Truck 39 code red at Manhattan National. Guard down."

*Scene 2
Peter Parker eats lunch outside with his love Mary Jane at a local diner. "I need you just as much as everyone else needs you Peter," Mary Jane says to Peter smiling. "You are my hero too you know." "I know we can make this work MJ," Peter replies as he hears a police scanner report from a nearby cop. "Armored bank robbery at downtown Manhattan National bank. All police in the area advised to pursue." Mary Jane turns her head, her ears tuned into the same thing. "Go get them Spider-Man," she says as she leans over the table and gives Peter a kiss on the cheek. He smiles and hops over the small, metal fence. Mary Jane turns her head to see Spider-Man swing out of the alley. She takes a deep breath and looks at the expensive check the waiter left and smiles sarcastically at the Spider-Man screaming "WHOOHOOO!" as he speeds forward.

*Scene 3
The armored truck is now speeding down a Manhattan street. Cop cars enter the chase from each intersecting street, sirens blaring. The passenger side guard rolls down his window and sticks his head out, his gun pointed at the rear of the vehicle. A loud bang thuds from the rear of the vehicle as sand envelopes the guard hanging out the window as he is ripped out and thrown towards an oncoming traffic, Marko materializes in his place. A web grabs the man and latches him safely to a light pole. Marko punches the driver, knocking him out cold as his foot slams down on the gas pedal. Spider-Man swings over the the cop cars, Marko sees him in the side mirror and opens the sliding window to the vault of the vehicle. Spider-Man lands on the top of the truck, looking at his surroundings. A huge sand fist blows out through the top of the vehicle at Spider-Man. He quickly dodges and flips into the truck's vault, Marko stands ready to face Spider-Man. "Stay out of this," Marko demands as Spider-Man replies "Who do you think you are? That green stripped shirt is pretty scary." Marko swings at Spider-Man as he ducks and punches Marko's stomach. His hand emerges through the back with only a fistful of sand. Spidey looks up in shock as Marko looks down. His fist quickly grows and Marko says "See if you can dodge this." He smacks Spider-Man as he hits one of the rear doors, knocking it from its hinges. The door sparks as it hits the ground as Spidey tumbles, a cop car swirves and hits a cab. Spider-Man webs the metal door with one hand and shoots his web to the truck with another. He jumps on the door and surfs the sparking metal as he sways in and around passing traffic. The driverless truck scraps against a 18 wheeler and stays on course, running through red lights. Spider-Man looks up as Marko materializes on the top of the truck. Spider-Man jumps forwards and lands a hit on Marko shoulder, knocking a chunk of sand out. "That's a neat trick, can I build a castle on you," Spidey jokes. "Stay out of my business spider," Marko replies. Spider-Man's spider sense activates and he sees road work ahead. He jumps on the hood and punches out the window, grabbing the driver and swinging to safety as the truck hits road blocks. The truck smashes into the barrier and Marko flings into a nearby container labeled 'Manhattan Sand and Stone'. The cops flood around the container and jump out of their car, guns pointed. "Get out with your hands up." The sand and stone begin to form into a giant sand monster 5 stories high. People scream in fear as the cops open fire. Sandman opens his mouth and bellows a roar as he smashes into the cop cars, sending them tumbling down the street. Spider-Man once again swings in gasping "Whoah!?" He doesn't know what to do to the giant sand monster as a huge sand fist swarms around him and punches him into the concrete outside of a building. Spider-Man yells in pain as he falls to the side walk in pain. Sand flies around and Marko forms once again. He grabs two money bags from the crashed truck and runs into the subway.

 

[thejon7]

I like this...I love to write.

Spider-Man vs. Sandman [Armored Car Scene]

*Scene 1
An armored car parks in front of the prestigious Manhattan National Bank. Two armed guards exit the vehicle, scanning the area for potential suspects. The last guard remains in the driver's seat replying to instructions and fills out paperwork on a clip board. One guard responds into the walkie talkie saying "Heading into the bank for pickup," as they both enter the bank through two large glass doors. A man, Flint Marko, stands across the street watching the armed guards. Marko hears sirens and averts his attention as a cop car passes by, lights and sirens blaring. He begins to cross the street toward the armored car.

The armed guards load up their bags with money in the bank's elaborate vault. They sign paper work and show their badges once again to leave the vault. They walk through the lobby and out the large doors. They open the rear door and begin loading the money into the rear. "I got it," said one guard as the other walks around and gets into the passenger side of the truck. The remaining guard closes the metal door, revealing Marko on the sidewalk right by the guard. The guard reacts, grabbing his gun and yelling "Freeze!" Marko walks forward and opens the still unlocked door. The guard once again yells "I said freeze!" Marko turns and looks as he opens the other door. The other guards begin to wonder what their partner is doing. He hears a shot and looks in the sideview mirror, seeing his partner thrown into a parked car near by. The engine running, the driver punches the gas, grabbing his walkie talkie to frantically say "Truck 39 code red at Manhattan National. Guard down."

*Scene 2
Peter Parker eats lunch outside with his love Mary Jane at a local diner. "I need you just as much as everyone else needs you Peter," Mary Jane says to Peter smiling. "You are my hero too you know." "I know we can make this work MJ," Peter replies as he hears a police scanner report from a nearby cop. "Armored bank robbery at downtown Manhattan National bank. All police in the area advised to pursue." Mary Jane turns her head, her ears tuned into the same thing. "Go get them Spider-Man," she says as she leans over the table and gives Peter a kiss on the cheek. He smiles and hops over the small, metal fence. Mary Jane turns her head to see Spider-Man swing out of the alley. She takes a deep breath and looks at the expensive check the waiter left and smiles sarcastically at the Spider-Man screaming "WHOOHOOO!" as he speeds forward.

*Scene 3
The armored truck is now speeding down a Manhattan street. Cop cars enter the chase from each intersecting street, sirens blaring. The passenger side guard rolls down his window and sticks his head out, his gun pointed at the rear of the vehicle. A loud bang thuds from the rear of the vehicle as sand envelopes the guard hanging out the window as he is ripped out and thrown towards an oncoming traffic, Marko materializes in his place. A web grabs the man and latches him safely to a light pole. Marko punches the driver, knocking him out cold as his foot slams down on the gas pedal. Spider-Man swings over the the cop cars, Marko sees him in the side mirror and opens the sliding window to the vault of the vehicle. Spider-Man lands on the top of the truck, looking at his surroundings. A huge sand fist blows out through the top of the vehicle at Spider-Man. He quickly dodges and flips into the truck's vault, Marko stands ready to face Spider-Man. "Stay out of this," Marko demands as Spider-Man replies "Who do you think you are? That green stripped shirt is pretty scary." Marko swings at Spider-Man as he ducks and punches Marko's stomach. His hand emerges through the back with only a fistful of sand. Spidey looks up in shock as Marko looks down. His fist quickly grows and Marko says "See if you can dodge this." He smacks Spider-Man as he hits one of the rear doors, knocking it from its hinges. The door sparks as it hits the ground as Spidey tumbles, a cop car swirves and hits a cab. Spider-Man webs the metal door with one hand and shoots his web to the truck with another. He jumps on the door and surfs the sparking metal as he sways in and around passing traffic. The driverless truck scraps against a 18 wheeler and stays on course, running through red lights. Spider-Man looks up as Marko materializes on the top of the truck. Spider-Man jumps forwards and lands a hit on Marko shoulder, knocking a chunk of sand out. "That's a neat trick, can I build a castle on you," Spidey jokes. "Stay out of my business spider," Marko replies. Spider-Man's spider sense activates and he sees road work ahead. He jumps on the hood and punches out the window, grabbing the driver and swinging to safety as the truck hits road blocks. The truck smashes into the barrier and Marko flings into a nearby container labeled 'Manhattan Sand and Stone'. The cops flood around the container and jump out of their car, guns pointed. "Get out with your hands up." The sand and stone begin to form into a giant sand monster 5 stories high. People scream in fear as the cops open fire. Sandman opens his mouth and bellows a roar as he smashes into the cop cars, sending them tumbling down the street. Spider-Man once again swings in gasping "Whoah!?" He doesn't know what to do to the giant sand monster as a huge sand fist swarms around him and punches him into the concrete outside of a building. Spider-Man yells in pain as he falls to the side walk in pain. Sand flies around and Marko forms once again. He grabs two money bags from the crashed truck and runs into the subway.

great job

 

[Spider-ManHero12]

heres mine for armored car spider-man vs. sandman.

an armored car is parked in front of a bank. sandman comes and punches the security gaurds out with his huge fist. the cops come and sandman turns into a giant sand monster and roars and punches the cops blowing them away. peter is walking on the sidewalk and senses the danger. peter runs into an alley as fast as he can to change into spider-man.

sandman gets in the armored car and sufficates the two gaurds in the armored car with sand. spider-man comes web-swinging and lands ontop of the armored car punching a hole through the top of the armored car. spider-man jumps down inside the armored car and tries to punch sandman. spider-mans fist goes right through him. spider-man looks up at marko and stares.

sandman makes a huge fist punching spidey through the back door. spider-man shoots a web and is sliding across the ground with a peice of the door. a peice of a car comes heading right twards spidey. spidey dodges it and jumps over a car still holding on. spider-man jumps ontop of the armored car with sandman. sandman makes a hammer and tries hitting spider-man with a hammer but spidey dodges it. sandman says, "stay out of my way!.". spider-man says, "your going to jail.", sandman hits spidey with a huge hammer knocking spidey out and knocking him off the top of the armored car which is moving. marko just stares at spidey and turns into little grains of sand and crawls back into the armored car and into the drivers seat.

sandman gets away.

 

[Spider-Ranger]

Great stories guys
We'll see how true they turn out to be on May 4th

 

[thejon7]

Spider-Man(symbiote) vs. Sandman(subway fight sequence):
Daily Bugle...
"Hey Peter!"
Peter gave an angery stare to the man that had just called him.
"...what do you want Edd-"
"-ahh nothing... I just want to tell you that... JJJ gave me your job," interupted Eddie as he started to giggle he looked like he was about to say something else. "...oh! And that little girl who said her name was Julie was captured by that "Sand-Thing" too as he robbed another bank... look at this," laughed Eddie as he handed Peter a picture of the bank, the Manhatten Bank didn't even look like a bank anymore... it looked like an old warehouse(all windows were broken, doors were smashed threw, some bricks and stone were chipped off and all over the ground and inside was completly deserted!
Eddie started laughing a little louder as Peter clenched his fist tightly together(crompling the photo into a ball) and then pushed Eddie right up against a frame article and even broke the glass from the frame(the article read: Spider-Man Shows his True Colours! with a picture of him in his black Spidey costume), Peter was holding Eddie slitely into the air with on arm and was about to speak.
"Where is she?"
"'Where is...' who?!"
"THE GIRL!"
"OKAY, ...the Sandman took her to the subway station, that's all I know now put me dow-," Eddie was interuped when Peter pushed him down to the floor.
Peter ran out of the Daily Bugle, found an alleyway to change into his Spidey-suit(black) and then Spider-Man came out from the corner web-swinging towards the subway station as quick as he could!

"...where are we going," asked Julie.
"Somewhere where nobody can hurt you or me," answered Flint Marko as he caried money bags in his two hands.
"...why are you caring those bags," asked Julie.
But before he could say anything Spider-Man appeared upside-down right in front of him.
"...remember Ben Parker?"
"What?! How did you know about him?"
Spidey swong over to the wall right across from the train which was running right down the tunnel.
"He was my father, he ment everything to me... EVERYTHING!"
Spidey spun two weblines at the train, Sandman quickly turned his head to see but then again turned it back to Spidey and then Spidey was about to kick Sandman and took him along with the train as they were both moving very fast until Spidey pushed Sandman to the ground and then dropped from the weblines.
Spidey leaped for Sandman but had gone right threw him, Sandman walked towards Spidey and made a huge sandfist that was aimed to hit Spider-Man! Sandman's attack hit Spidey and he was sent across the subway and his back land right up against the train! Sandman was about to grab him but Spidey moved out of the way and Sandman's hands touched the train instead(sand was flying everywhere), but then Spidey grabbed Sandman's head and drove Sandman's face right into the train(sand flew everywhere)! Spidey finally stopped the attack and threw Sandman over away from the train, both Sandman and Spidey were headed down a tunnel which had led them to the water pipes.
Both Sandman and Spidey had grabbed metal pipes and started swinging them at each other, they both stopped when they hit each other in the head. They both were down to the ground from the attack that they pulled on each other. Sandman and Spidey slowly(trying to get up before the other) rose to their feet and then started to throw punches at each other. The fist fight was over when Sandman had hit Spidey with a huge sandhammer from his very own fist, which sent Spider-Man across the room, but Spidey rolled quickly to his feet and then jumped onto the water pipe and released the water, Sandman was in the air as the sandgiant turned back to normal when he reached the water pipe which Spidey was on. Spidey kicked Sandman but his leg had gone right threw Sandman and Sandman swong a huge fist a Spidey which knocked him off the pipes but Spidey hung on with his wall-crawling ability, sneeked up behind Sandman, Sandman turned around and then Spidey finally dropkicked Sandman which had knocked him off the water pipe and into the water. Spider-Man was looking as Sandman turned to mud then finally the little girl named Julie came and yelled: "THAT'S MY DADDY!"
"S... Spider-.......ahh, Spider-...Man.... HELP ME!" yelled Sandman as Spidey whispered to himself: "...what have I done?"
Spidey jumped along over to where Sandman was drowning threw the drain(he started to turn to mud) used his wall-crawling ability and stook to the wall and reached his hand out to Sandman.
"Give me your hand!"
Sandman swong his hand towards Spidey but his hand had been to muddy, Spidey couldn't get a grip, Sandman tried again but again Spidey couldn't get a grip!
"...never mind about me, go and save my daughter... please," cried Sandman.
"I'm sorry," replied Spidey as he spun his webline to the celling and web-swinged over to Julie.
"WHAT ABOUT MY DADDY?!"
"...he'd rather see you alive then see himself alive to see you die," answered Spidey as he grabbed Julie in one arm and started to web-swing in the other away from the water pipes and out to the city threw the porthole which led outside of the subway station, Spidey let the girl down and then jumped back in and stopped the water pipes from flooding the subway. Spider-Man took a huge breath and jumped back up into the streets.

 

[venomscurse2]

the Battle Royale one was nice but how and why did Harry die so fast?

 

[thejon7]

heres mine for armored car spider-man vs. sandman.

an armored car is parked in front of a bank. sandman comes and punches the security gaurds out with his huge fist. the cops come and sandman turns into a giant sand monster and roars and punches the cops blowing them away. peter is walking on the sidewalk and senses the danger. peter runs into an alley as fast as he to change into spider-man.

sandman gets in the armored car and sufficates the two gaurds in the armored car with sand. spider-man comes web-swinging and lands ontop of the rmored car punching a hole through the top of the armored car. spider-man jumps down inside the armored car and tries to punch sandman. spider-mans fist goes right through him. spider-man looks up at marko and stares.

sandman makes a huge fist punching spidey through the back door. spider-man shoots a web and is sliding across the ground with a peice of the door. a peice of a car comes heading right twards spidey. spidey dodges it and jumps over a car still holding on. spider-man jumps ontop of the armored car with sandman. sandman makes a hammer and tries hitting spider-man with a hammer but spidey dodges it. sandman says, "stay out of my way!.". spider-man says, "your going to jail.", sandman hits spidey with a huge hammer knocking spidey out and knocking him off the top of the armored car which is moving. marko just stares at spidey and turns into little grains offf sandman and crawls back into the armored car and into the drivers seat.

sandman gets away.

great fight sequence spidermanhero12 but i wonder how the truck is moving in the scene because remember when Spidey was punched out of the truck and the truck is still moving? He must have a goon working for him on that one because that would be weird if the original driver was still driving it like nothings happening... know what i mean?

 

[thejon7]

the Battle Royale one was nice but how and why did Harry die so fast?

u know how in the comics he died after a while when he injected that stuff into himself? well thats why. i would have liked to keep him alive but it seems that Gwen Stacy has a lesser chance of dying(read the IGN interview with Sam Raimi about Spider-Man 3 and 4) i just wanted to make the story as real as i could so that it would be simular to what will happen in the film.

 

[Spider-ManHero12]

spider-man, harry vs. venom, sandman final battle.

eddie brock has kidnapped mj and brought her to the construction site. she is on venoms web with the taxi. spider-man comes and venom talks to spider-man and taunts him. they start fighting but venom is punching spidey more. venom punches spidey up in the air and spidey lands on his stomach. spidey goes to jump up in the air but venom shoots a web at his legs and swings him around and throws him into a beam. spidey lands a punch in venoms face but then venom kicks spidey in the chest sending spidey 15 feet away from venom.

venom looking at spidey with an evil grin and spidey is just staring at venom. they start fighting again. sandman is walking by and sees them fighting. sandman joins in on venoms side and sandman makes a huge hand and goes to punch spidey but spidey dodges it. mj is just staring down at the fight. spiderman kicks venom in the chest but venom counters the second kick and throws spidey. venom picks up spidey by the throat and says, "what is it like to be the one getting beat up now PARKER!.

venom slams spidey to the ground. harry comes and starts throwing pumpkin bombs at venom but sandman grows huge and sprays a rush of sand out of his hand. harry doedges it but the sand hits a truck and the truck goes up in te air twards mj. mj sees it and dodges it knocking the taxi off of the web. mj is still on the web though. spider-man and venom fight ontop of a beam and grapple. they both fall of the beam punching eachother while falling. spider-man shoots a web and venom shoots a web. venom jumps off his web and tries to punch spidey but spidey counters it with another punch to the face.

sandmans daughter arrives and sandman has a tear coming down his face. harry throws a pumpkin bomb at a water pipe and a rush of water comes out and turns sandman into little grains. venom is choking spidey with his web. spidey is reaching out for mj then venom impales spidey once then tries it for the second time but harry jumps in the way of spidey and gets impaled. spidey is furious and starts punching and kicking venom. venom gets weak and falls to his knees then gets back up. spidey talks to the symbiote and the symbiote is starting to flow over peter but peter hits the beam and the symbiote comes off. the pumpkin bomb caused the oil cans to leak.

a trail of fire is heading twards the car. the car explodes and knocks brock 20 feet across the construction site. the impact of the explosion and the impact of hitting the ground killed brock. mj is holding harrys hand and hes dead and crying peter is crying to.the symbiote crawls into the sewer.