ok, i was writing this really long verison of thiss, then my power died and i lost all that i wrote, so im going to try this again, and make it less story like.
ill fix it later, i just wanna get this down
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I'm going to combine yours.
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Peter hears on the news about this Sandman robbing a bank.
He goes to stop him, fails, and gets his suit destroyed in the process.
Harry, watching the news, asks his scientists to combine the Nano-Tech with the Performance Enhancers.
Pete goes to the Bugle after his beating, and sees Eddie trying to sell pics of the sandman fight.
Pete manages to convince Jonah to buy his pics and not Eddie's.
Betty then flirts with Pete. Pete declines, talkin about MJ.
Pete goes home, MJ is out rehearsing for her play.
Chocolate cake girl comes over and tells him that his friend was here, but left a package for him.
She leaves.
Peter opens it up.
Its a Red and Blue spidey suit, only a bit darker.
He tries it on, and goes out swingin.
He feels stronger in the new suit.
He test it out, and finds he is much stronger.
He hears comotion not too far away, and finds sandman robbing something else.
Pete while fighting sandman, gets real angry and beats sandman to a pulp, and kinda enjoys it. all the while the suit is getting darker. by the end of the fight it is black. Eddie happens to be near this, and takes pictures of it all.
Eddie rushes to the Bugle to sell the pics to Jameson.
Pete is already there. and has sold them.
Jameson fires Eddie, because a freelancer keeps scooping him.
Eddie gets pissed at Pete again.
Pete leaves and winds up late for the play, and MJ scolds him for it, he yells at her and takes off.
The next day, he goes to class, but Curt is missing, and his lab is destroyed.
He decides to try and find out what happened, but hears of a Spider-Man day in his honour, and attends it instead of finding out where Curt is.
At the ceremony, the lizard attacks some people and rushes back into the sewer, Pete doesnt follow.
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more to come, i'm tired, it's after 7am, im goin to bed, ill finish it later. and expand it.