^^ Better, I like what you've done with the ear pieces, both in where they're positioned and the way they look, they should not look like wings, Cap wears wings, The Flash does not. The Flash's are closer to "door handles" (as Mark Millar affectionately refers to them. Lol).
I always use this pic as the example of EXACTLY how the ear pieces should look, this is a perfect basis:
^^ See how they look shiny and even "sharp", they're streamlined, but they're not "feathered" or "wing" like. That's how they should look, like a "modernized" Carmine Infantino drawing, they're sharp and almost finny looking, very sleek and cool.
Anyway, the pic itself is still a good manip. I would just, again, get rid of some of the "armor" areas where it looks like the suit clearly separates; I'd either omit all that completely or smooth it out (within what you can do as far as manips go, I totally understand that - not expecting Weta workshop looking manips haha

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But I think as far as the colors go and how the mask looks, you have the right idea. I don't think The Flash needs a "molded" mask a la Batman with a frown or scowl or whatever carved in.
I'd draw more influence from how the red area looks on the Alex Ross' cowl as far as inspiration for the cowl goes:
...But at the same time not have it exactly be just spandex or "tights", perhaps a clash of that and what the materials the cowl the manip is made out of there would be ideal.
