Alexia Dark
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C.F. Kane said:Not bad, but proper sonnet form has stanzas of alternating rhyming lines. The final thing you put in was two couplets.
I didn't really have a choice, as the second line of the stanza rhymed with the first. So I opted for two more lines that kind've rhymed as well.