sabetoonth
Where You Get Those Eyes?
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and so it is clear, Norah isnt dead...yet


I personally hate the character of Martian Manhunter, so I'll admit to not reading those posts very closely (which is in no way a slight against your writing, I'm just not a MM fan and never have been). But that's why I ask, so I avoid stepping on toes because of a detail I missed.Cadmus is in use at the moment! It's the organisation thats been capturing metahumans using the Martian Manhunter, but only Waller and Sivana have been properly introduced.

Okay, your application's okay but I just have a few minor problems with your writing style. New setences, even dialogue, should begin with capital letters (sorry, it's a petpeeve). Also, when you have dialogue, it helps to start the speech of a new person on a new line so as not to confuse the reader. Also, spacing paragraphs or large packs of dialogue makes it easier on the eyes to read. As before, I'd suggest you see how the other RPGers write their stuff so you can make your posts the best they can be.. THE NEW ULTIMATE DC RPG .
Character Application
.Screen name: Nimibro
.Character you wish to portray: Lonnie Machin/Anarky
.Hero, villain, or walking the line?: villain
.Powers and physical attributes:
As Lonnie:
Genius intellect, around 5'8, brown hair and extremely thin.
As Anarky:
Various weapons such as smoke bombs, tear gas, homemade explosives and a cane for hand-to-hand combat. Unnaturally tall, around 6'8 wears a golden mask and is draped in red robes and sheets.
.Origin and backstory (as you see it): Lonnie Machin was born in 1993 to a regular family. He was a child prodigy and a very talkative child. When he was 15, he tried obsessively tom publish his theories about how the police, army and other forces are just a conspiracy for the government to gain profit, and was even pushed to the brink of insanity by himself. He was percripted to Ritalin and is now living a normal life-but for how long?
.The burning question - Why this character?: well, the character is an intriguing character, and possibly the deepest batman villain. He sees himself as an ironic case: he says that the police are man or anarchy, yet under the name of the law, while he sees himself as a man of order and law, yet calls himself Anarky. He doesn't believe in the police, the government or even the American law, simply because he thinks there's a conspiracy behind them that makes him personally and the lesser men such as homeless and poor people suffer.
.How will this version of your character differ from others? How will it be Ultimate?: well, the character itself wouldn't be very different from the old self, but he would be older (he was 12 when he first appeared, but he would be 17 in this version) and he would go fanatic with the misleading belief of his that anarchy IS law , rather than believing he establishes law with it. He would also be based more on proving and "exposing" his theories about government conspiracies and crimes against the country for profit, more than believing he could solve third-world economy problems.
.What do you believe you can bring to the RPG?: I have some experience and a deep and philosophical villain and character.
.Provide a sample post as the character you wish to portray, in three paragraphs or more (not my actual first post, maybe I'll use it later):
I walk in the street, my black boots going through the dirt and filth that is this city. I stand in front of maybe the biggest, fattest lie in America, this figure of anarchy and chaos calling itself the police.
As my men, the homeless, the poor, the real victims of the government's secret crimes, all to get poor men poorer, step into the building with the tools I gave them, brass canes and homemade smoke bombs, they exact their revenge on the people who got them to this place.
As chaos ensues, my best friend and ally, "legs", comes right to me, uptading me. "mr. A, we got everyone busted, or a hostage". "What do you mean in "busted"?" "well, y'know, unconscious " "okay, bring me the camera and I'll do the rest. Take one of the hostages and tell them to get me commissioner gordon to a little talk."
As I get the camera, I start filming. "hello commissioner Gordon. I may look like a villain, but I am actually no worse than you, and even better. i took to mind your'e special technique, calling yourself, men of chaos and destruction, men of law, a shielding force, a "police", so me, a man who gives REAL power to the people, REAL protection, call myself-anarky, a misleading name, just. Like. Yours. I am the real protector, a messiah to the poor and homeless, the victims of your "police" and atrocious government's conspiracies and crimes. I want you to call me, so we'll have a small "talk"... and do it fast, please "
.Do you know how to post pictures on the Hype?:
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