bluejake01
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I came up with Rachel Barbossa guess who her father is. She hates her father for he did nota sk he rmothers consent or so she thinks.
I came up with Wesley Swann brother to Elizabeth swann Captain of the Intersepter 2. He is like Elizabeth and quite good with a sword. H eis plotting the death of my 3rd new Character Governor Bekkett he is teh twin brother od Cutler Beckkett. Wesley knows his brother killed Governor Swann and wants any Bekketts heart in a box.
Here is a little constructive criticism. Stay away from long lost family members of established characters, especially one's that serve the purpose of replacing a dead character, or filling in as it were. The Swann family for instance...there is no indication that Elizabeth has a brother. The films established Governor Swann as a single father who is raising is only daughter. And Cutler Beckett having a twin? It's a bit contrived and soap opera-ish.
I do like the idea of Barbossa having an illegitimate daughter that thinks he raped her mother. She shouldn't have his last name though, due to several logistical issues.
