I enjoyed season 5 overall and thought it was a strong season for the most part. But off the top of my head heres a few complaints that I have about it.
Tyreese becoming more of a liability than valued member to the group.
He didnt kill Martin after he threatened to take Judiths life and even Tyreeses own. I know the death of Micah, Lizzie, and his girlfriend Karen traumatized him, but it was asinine how he refused to kill a walker that was a couple of feet away from him, Carol, and Judith at the beginning of No Sanctuary. Again I know he has morals and hes trying not to let this post apocalyptic world change him the way its changed Rick and Carol, but anyone/thing thats a threat to him and his group should be dealt with immediately.
Then Tyreese telling Sasha to forgive the termites/hunters, who cut off and ate half of Bobs leg and were scheming to kill them and the group. Seriously?
His plan B overriding Ricks plan A to rescue Beth from the Grady Hospital backfired.
So in season 4 Tyreese with just his hammer survived a horde of walkers surrounding him outside of a car without a scratch but for some reason cant detect a snarling walker (in a mostly vacant house )coming up from behind him and eventually taking a bite out of his arm. BS!
There really wasnt any hope for this character to improve in Season 5. And though I thought the episode where Tyreese bit the dust was well made and acted. I just wasnt emotionally invested in it b/c I found the character poorly written.
This season had a difficult time balancing characters.
Season 5 was probably the largest group Ricks had. And b/c of that some characters suffered screen time e.g. Rosita. Certain characters were either in the background with little to no lines. And even being absent for certain episodes e.g. Gabriel (during the first couple of Alexandria episodes). With the show adding more characters the writers resort to tactics like putting Tara into a coma.
It was strange that the episode of Ricks meltdown, which followed after Maggie eavesdrop on Gabriels deceitful conversation with Deanna, that both characters were surprisingly absent. Its very questionable why that is b/c I think Gabriel and Maggie shouldve been in that scene, where Rick had his meltdown. It wouldve definitely added even more weight to that great moment. I hope Gimple and co. figure this out in season 6 b/c from the looks of it theyre introducing quite a bit of new characters this upcoming season.
Carol being temporarily written out for most first half of the season.
Something else Ive notice in the first half of each season (since season 3) the writers been finding ways to take Carol temporarily out of the plot/story.
In season 3 after T-Dog sacrificed himself to save her she was presumed dead by the group, but was later discovered by Daryl and was trapped behind a closed door with a walker blocking the front of it. So she was absent for about 2 or 3 episodes.
In season 4 Rick banished Carol for the murders of Karen and David and hadnt showed up again until the second episode of mid season 4. But that actually worked from a story stand point.
Then in season 5 she and Daryl went to Atlanta to find and rescue Beth but was then injured and abducted by the Grady Memorial deputies. During that point she was unconscious for most of that period until Beths demise.
The point Im trying to make is that its getting repetitive and even predictable how Carol is always being used to write out of the story for a short amount of time just b/c theyre having a hard time shuffling the large cast screen time. Hopefully thatll be the last they attempt this with Carol.
Maggie being oblivious to Beths absence.
Daryl told her in No Sanctuary (season 5 premiere) that Beth was abducted and was last seen alive by him. He even gave a description of the vehicle that took her. Maggie is reminded again that she has a missing little sister when Michonne mentions theyve found her ("Coda" Mid-season 5 finale).
Now I know at that point finding Beth is like trying to find a needle in a haystack. And for all she knew the people who abducted Beth mightve killed her already. My problem is the writers never gave us a moment that reflects this. She was quick to travel to DC with Glenn and some strangers, but never thought about Beth.
Im also surprised nobody in Ricks or Abes group knew about the vehicles with the crosses on the back came from Grady Memorial. B/c based on her conversations with Daryl (in Consumed) Carol seemed to have visited that area in Atlanta (pre-zombie apocalypse) quite often.
They shouldve added a moment where Maggie makes a difficult decision to go to DC and mentions to the group that she believes Beth is either dead or isnt (as Rick did about Andreas absence from the group during the Season 2 finale). Maggie wont search for her b/c it would be an impossible task and shed be better off not knowing the truth about Beths whereabouts. Its callous but would give the viewer an explanation as to why Maggie seemed to neglect her own sister being alive and missing. Heck adding a simple conversation with Glenn (during Self Help) where she mentions to him that she misses Beth and wonders if shed like DC or if shes alive and safe, etc wouldve given us an idea that she thought about or even remembers Beth.
That really seemed out of character for Maggie to forget her own sister, who I thought she had a strong bond with three seasons prior. I wish Them couldve explored more of Maggies guilt b/c I honestly think the writers gave us an inadequate excuse. Though I'm a Maggie fan, I wasnt a fan of how they handled Maggie in season 5 and hope they make up for it this upcoming season.
DC subplot was unfocused.
It was made a big deal out of in mid season 4, but not so much this season. The trip to DC never seemed that important to Rick or even Carol. I wish we had a moment where the group was divided about going or not. It wouldve added more weight. And wouldve been interesting seeing some of them question Ricks decision to stay or go. I guess we kind of got that in The Distance when Rick was conflicted about going to Alexandria.
Also Eugenes lie got swept under the rug and didnt leave that big of an impact as it shouldve. We never got to see Ricks reaction to the lie. Michonne didnt seemed surprised when Glenn told her, but that wasnt enough, imo. I wouldve liked a moment where the group mentioning it and giving their opinions about it. And Eugene having to earn everybodys trust again.
Plus the 17 day time jump after Beth died undermined it. They only made it to DC by default. If they hadnt somewhat fulfilled Beths promise to get Noah to his family at a safe zone in Virginia and crossed paths with Aaron they wouldnt be in DC right now.
Pete being a "gifted" doctor
The writers did a poor job of proving to me that Petes a doctor. Sure the show has scenes of characters telling us he is, but never actually showing us.
On the way to Alexandria Aaron pointed out to Noah that he knew a gifted surgeon who could fix his limp. Ive seen him do some amazing things or something or other. But the writers never gave us evidence that Petes a doctor or even a gifted one for that matter. Not once in the show did we as a viewer see him helping and healing people. All weve seen of the character is that he drinks 24-7, smokes, talks to Rick but pretty much does nothing of any importance in Alexandria.
We never see him helping Tara with her head injury. Carol had to request him to help Tara before threatening to kill him. I never believe for a second that he was doctor. Town drunk, but not a gifted doctor. Thats again b/c of poor writing.
They couldve easily solved the problem by writing a scene where the group first enters the gates and hes giving each check ups and relieving Erics ankle injury. During Spend in the aftermath with the construction crew being temporarily overran by walkers they couldve showed him attending to Francines injury. They couldve done a better job of writing the character. He came off one dimensional. Hes basically Ed Peletier 2.0.
Jessie being a victim of domestic abuse.
The writers also couldve done a better job of showing the viewer that Jessie was being beaten by Pete. For someone whos constantly getting beaten she has no visible scars or bruises. And b/c of that I had a hard time believing she was a victim of domestic abuse.
Again they decided not to show but only tell. We get this information that Jessies being beaten off camera. Jessies youngest son Sam tells Carol (off camera) who then tells Rick. I guess they were trying to avoid the clichés but it came off kind of dull and uninteresting, imo.
Im not someone who enjoys watching women (let alone Alexandra Breckenridge) being abused, but I wish they couldve hinted at it better that Jessie was a victim of spousal abuse.
And what really ticked me off about that whole situation was that Deanna knew about it and didnt do anything to prevent it b/c Petes occupation. And b/c of that I lost what little respect I had for her character. It disgusted me b/c shes a woman/leader (who I thought had morals) that was okay with another woman being abused by her husband. She sets a real good example for Alexandria.
Unnecessary drama caused by Gabriel in Alexandria.
I also didnt care for the subplot with Gabriel twisting the truth about Ricks group to Deanna b/c the writers didnt take it anywhere. They made a big deal about Maggie eavesdropping the conversation to not go anywhere with it. The entire following episode both characters were suspiciously absent.
And Maggie seemed to keep what she heard to herself. She couldve told Glenn and gave an explanation why she didnt tell Rick or the others. For example b/c she feared for Gabriels life.
In Conquer Deanna mentioned about that conversation at the meeting and nobody in Ricks group bat an eye. We saw Maggie react? But she already knew about it. I guess the writers decided to give Maggie a short term memory this season.
The point Im making is that if the writers didnt want to make a big deal about Gabriel twisting the truth about Rick to Deanna then they couldve omitted Maggie eavesdropping on it. It didnt really add much to the story, imo.
Now dont get me wrong I enjoyed this season and still think its a great season overall. Carol officially became a valued member of the group, the fall of Terminus, Tainted Meat!, the demise of the termites/hunters at the church, Beth/ Dawn hospital plotline (I know Im in the minority on that one), Abes back story, Carol/Daryl centric episode in Atlanta, Them (which is an underrated episode that captured the essence of TWD, imo), Alexandria, Morgans return. This season had a lot of pros that outweigh the cons I had with it. Bring on Season 6.
Oh and I apologize for the long post. Had to get this off my chest.