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A God Named Sparkles?
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I'm dropping out all together, can't think of noone else to be.
Look at what you did. I'm going through with it now. App up in a few minutes.Syn, I say go for Montoya. She was probably my second choice behind Red Hood.
Good to know man, thanks. I gotta catch up on the IC thread.Cool. She's being NPC'ed at the mo' though in the Rachel Dawes arc. I'm sure you can work something out.
Wait what do you mean open to move?I take it from the last Rachel post she's open to move, but I'm not sure what Apprentice has planned.
Oh. Now I feel stupid.That you can use her.
Screen name: Syn (Mercenary)
Gothamite you would like to portray: Renee Montoya
Class of society: (Choose one) Law Enforcer
Resume: (Brief character biography) Renee Montoya grew up in Gotham with her parents. Her parents moved from the Dominican Republic, and came to America searching for a better life. A few months after their citizenship in the US, Renees mother was pregnant with her, and the couple knew they would soon be a family.
Years later, times got difficult for Renees family. At age five, her dad was struggling to keep a job and get enough money to provide for their family. They moved to Gotham City and bought a cheap apartment. There, her father worked at a large factory doing manually labor. Despite their bad luck, the Montoyas continued to keep their eyes on God, and kept their religious beliefs.
As the years progressed, Renee watched the crime around her grow. She knew drug addicts, watched drug deals take place. She witnessed various thefts and robberies, and she even came across many a murder scenes. All the violence made a need grow inside of her. She felt that she wanted to help her fellow man, and punish those who would hurt them. She acted on this desire, and began working and training to be a police officer. She is now an officer of the Gotham City Police Department.
Factoids of interest: (Special attributes - IE: Weapons, attire... anything needed to be known): Renee Montoya is a lesbian. She has kept her sexual preference a secret since she discovered that she was one. Now she struggles as an adult to keep her life as a lesbian a secret from her life as a Police officer, fearing it would affect the way she is seen by her peers, and inhibiting her skills as a law enforcer. She is also afraid of what her parents would think or say.
Known associates: (NPC's needed to be attached to your character): Any of her future significant others whenever she gets one.![]()
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Three integral reasons behind choosing the character: 1. 2. 3.
- We need law enforcers here. Batman cant do it all. (Or can he?)
- Renee Montoya has always been an interesting character to me. A female officer often more competent than some of the males is pretty appealing.
Please provide a brief explanation behind your character's motivations (ex: What does he/she believe in? How does he/she connect with Gotham City? What grinds your character's gears?): Renee is motivated by her desire to see the lawbreakers punished. She is tired of watching others get hurt because of the careless and insensitive actions of others. She also fights for equality and tolerance, whatever it may be about.
- Renee has a secret that she tries to keep secret. I hope to make her life a parallel to Batmans, in that they both keep their other lives private.
File Headshot: (A picture if your character, if applicable):
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Please provide a small sample post, in the format you plan to portray this identity, with three paragraphs at minimum:
Renee Montoya walks through the Police Department, and toward the office of Police Commissioner James Gordon briskly, her jacket flowing behind her from the wind. As she makes her way to Gordons office, one of the police officers stops her. She grabs Renees arm tightly, and pulls back on her arm.
Renee, whats wrong? She asks compassionately.
Dont get in my way right now, Sharon. She responds coldly.
Hey, dont vent on me. Sharon says in an aggravated tone. She looks into Renees eyes, and notices the strange tone in her voice. Sharon calms herself down, and releases Renees arm from her grip. Somethings bothering you, Renee. I can just tell. She begins patting her arm compassionately, a look of concern on her face. Tell me whats bothering you.
Its St. Alexanders Church. She says with a sigh.
What about it?
Thats the church my parents and I always went to when I was growing up. Renee sighs, and stares blankly at nothing, her mind going wild with her thoughts. Some lunatic with a sick pyromania obsession burnt it to the ground. Three dead, eighteen injured.
My God. Sharon says as she takes a deep breath. Im so sorry.
Dont be sorry for me. She says in a hostile tone, her hand balled in a fist. Feel sorry for the guy who did it. Cause when I find him, Ill be sure that he pays.
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Yes I sold myself out here, but I dont really plan on using this in IC at all. It merely serves its purpose as a sample.
Gordon, you say?Approved.
Roster update coming soon, per Harlekin's list, and Syn's approval as Montoya.
Also, I'm dropping Gordon. I haven't posted more than once, and it's really going to bog the RPG down if there's not an active Gordon. I'll decide on a new character soon.
Master Bruce said:Enrolling in the Gotham City Police Department nearly 20 years ago, Officer Jim Gordon was subjected to one of the city's most haneous crimes, when a little boy by the name of Bruce Wayne was brought in after watching his parents murdered infront of him. Trying to console the young man the best that he could, the incident left him scarred, seeing the hatred for criminals in the boy's eyes. Tranferring to Chicago, his hometown, Gordon and his wife resided there until Jim realized that most of that city's crime originated from Gotham. Transferring back to his old position, this time as Sargeant, it soon became evident that Gotham's police force had become maliciously corrupt. Without hope and without an ally, Gordon kept mum on this until finally, he was given the most unlikely of allies: A dark, and grim figure of the night to which Gothamites called The Batman. Seeing new hope in this vigilante, Gordon has maintained a secret allieance with him in order to rid the force, and the city, of it's evil.
Go for it. It'd be a cool character switch....Goddamn, that was fast.
Approved.
I may be tempted to take up the character you dropped, actually...
Pic up a villian. Unleash your anger!...Goddamn, that was fast.
Approved.
I may be tempted to take up the character you dropped, actually...
You rang?Wooo! Gordon!
I can edit out my first Jason post if you want to start fresh.![]()
Wow...you like my work? THE END IS NIGH!No need. I think it works as a nice little prologue.
Gordon would not have lasted long on the Free Agents' list - hence my frenzy to make an application.I'm just happy we havent lost Gordont: