very nice work mike22, some constructive criticism though...
i think the biggest thing you could do to help it would be to alter the neck to make it look like the face, it seems like a mask right now. also, dealing with the 'mask' issue could be resolved by blurring the face more or sharpening the body, they seem to be out of focus from each other, last little personal qwuip, i think his hair should be more messed up
that said, i have all these problems in early stage manips myself, so as stated earlier, not complaints, only constructive criticism....great work! keep it up!