I really want the transformation scene to look painful. Like the audience is cringing up while watching!
Let me think...I'm gonna go a more mixed (Ult. and 616) route.
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The scene starts out with Peter in the church tearing off the suit, screaming in pain as he feels the claws of the suit painfully pulls off of him. He hits the bell a few more times and suddenly the suit peels off of him and slithers away. Peter falls to his knees, ready to pass out. Peter climbs out of the tower.
Cuts to Eddie walking into the church slowly with a gun in his right hand. As he walks up to the alter, tear flow down his cheeks. He stares at the crafted cross with Jesus on it.
Eddie: You know why I'm here...I just...I just can't take it anymore.
He continues to stare at the cross.
Eddie: Peter took everything from me.
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Eddie: HE TOOK EVERYTHING!! My job, my home, my life!!!
Eddie puts the gun to his head. He cocks it.
Eddie: It's over.
Suddenly, something gooey drips in front of him from the ceiling. He slowly lowers the gun and kneels down to observe it. It's moving!
Eddie: What the...?
He slowly goes to touch, but suddenly it latches onto him! He freaks out. He tries desperately to pull it off, but more of it starts to drip onto him. He starts to crawl all over him, ripping off his clothes. He falls to his knees.
Eddie: AAAHH!!!
The tentacles from the goo starts to slither into his nose, mouth, and ears. He begins to choke up on it. The goo begins to make almost a cocoon around his body.
The camera zooms in on his right eye.
Cuts to the inside of Eddie's mind. We see him starring up at what will soon be Venom's face.
Symbiote: Eddie Brock. We can feel your hatred and anger for Parker and Spider-Man, and it is sweet! Perhaps you would like to see that the two are one in the same.
Images of Peter suiting up as Spider-Man flash through his head.
Symbiote: Join us, Brock, and together we will destroy Parker!
Goes back out to the cocoon on the church alter. Eddie bursts out of it and climbs out slowly. His arms begin to become bigger and muscular. His body begins to become bigger. The sound effect would be the sound of bones crunching (would be pretty gruesome.)
Eddie begins to like the pain.
Eddie: Haha! Yes. Yes!
Eddie raises his head up, looking straight at the camera. He closes his eyes for a brief second. He opens them and they are now red! He smiles sinisterly. The symbiote crawls onto his face and forms Venom's face.
He jumps at the screen. It goes black.