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EternalMaster said:VERY light? You're VERY wrong.
Oh, right, thanks for reminding me.
First off, if the dialogue were like FF, this film would've never made this much money. FF had a horrible story and horrible dialogue... hence, it made a mediocre return at the box office and was generally trashed by viewers and critics. Iron Man is succeeding because it's a vastly more serious film. Not "serious" as in "it's a dark drama". More serious in that characters act like human beings, responding to situation in ways that audiences can identify with. A solid story helps to move the plot along, and because it's an action flick, there's also *gasp* action!
Like Die Hard and Lethal Weapon and Batman Begins, humor is interspersed (sp?) to show the audiences: Yes, the characters themselves realize these situations are out of the ordinary. Just like you would, they're making light of strange situations to cope with them.
First of all, don't use money as a certificate for quality. Second, I never said the dialogue was as bad as FF, I said it was as light-hearted. No scene was deemed inappropriate for a joke or one-liner. Yinsen dies, Tony remarks "My turn". Tony and Pepper supposedly have a heart-to-heart at the operation scene, it's played for laughs with buzzing sounds and heart-attacks. And why wasn't a doctor present again? Humor aside, there never was any real danger, any loss, any relief, any gravity. Tony supposedly has a change of heart, all we get is "yeah, I'll stop making weapons".
But let's focus on your idea that "every scene was a joke set up" and few scenes had any emotion or gravity to them.
Again, I never said that every scene was a joke set up, I said there was a joke in almost every scene, even inappropriate ones.
Every single minute of Stark's imprisonment had gravity to it. No one was talking about their dead parents and how grim the world is (batman, batman, batman), but Stark's fellow captive dies while talking about how he'll finally meet his family... Stark and the man discuss how Stark my have riches but that he is "poor" in friends and meaningful relationships. The lead terrorist even threatens to shove a hot coal down the co-captive's mouth. NOTHING about any of these scenes was played in a "light hearted" or "family friendly" way.
The only laugh-worthy moment in ant of the captivity scenes was during the break-out when one terrorist kills himself while trying to shoot the armor.
That whole chunk of the film ALONE disproves your ridiculous assertion, but let's continue.
The Yinsen scenes are the most unbelievable of all. Oh, the wise stranger with the accent tells us Stark has personality problems. That's not how these scenes should be written. We should have a discussion, have Tony realize what he's missing. We should see Tony longing for connection at some point, not suddenly decide it's time to hit on Pepper. Why Pepper anyway? What does she have that makes him see her differently? We never see anything other than she's available. And what does she see in him, when every other character considers him a shallow, spoiled kid? None of that there, either.
As for Yinsen's death, again, the stranger died and we get a cheesy line about how he's going to meet his family. People die here and there, why should we care about this one? There's absolutely no connection to him.
I'm sorry, but if you really do think this "disproves my ridiculous assertion", then I guess this conversation has no point. Simplistic writing like this, as much as it tries (not much, as is the case here), doesn't help making a film serious.
Stark's interaction with Potts at the party where she's wearing the dress. Stark's longing for a real relationship was played up in the scene... no humor. The awkwardness evident in Potts mannerisms might get a chuckle, but it was genuine (not comedic) awkwardness. The resolution of the scene has Potts barely knowing what to do, and Tony (now feeling awkward himself) goes to get drinks for them.
Again, this is no longing, it's simple flirting. We never see any reason why this should be different than any other of Tony's "relationships". Except that Pepper is a protagonist.
Another scene: Stark hears news of the Ten Rings terrorists storming throygh the middle east. We see his frustration build as he watches the news. Eventually he suits up and flies off. In the middle east, Ten Rings members are slaying families in the streets. Jericho missiles are destroying towns. Women and children, screaming in fear, are shoved into trucks. One son tries to run back to his father. A terrorist leader throws the boy aside and begins stomping on the father. The father is to be shot in the head... the Ten Rings member ordered to do so is clearly reluctant to shoot a defenseless man in the face. Trembling with fear, the terrorist shouts at the man to look away.
Iron Man arrives on the scene, coldly eying the events around him. Battering and blasting several Ten Rings members, he kills or critically injures them all in a violent display. Other terrorists use women and children as human shields. Iron Man lowers his arms, uses his targetting systems, and shoulder-mounted guns shoot all of the terrorists square in the foreheads.
Iron Man then gives the terrorist leader to the people of the village and flies off.
Yet again... another chunk of the movie without humor. After that, Iron Man dispatches a tank easily... so easily that audience members could get a laugh out of how awesome the scene was, but it was not light-hearted at all.
The hero acts bad-ass, nothing more, nothing less. Having violence in a film doesn't make it serious. Rambo 3 is pretty violent, is it serious too?
Oh, remind me, why were the terrorists attacking the people? I'm seriously asking, I don't remember the reason.
Stane's talk with Potts when she's trying to spy for Tony: tense moments. No humor. Stane yelling at his engineers about miniaturizing an arc light reactor: no humor. Stane's battle with Tony (minus the "how did you solve the freezing problem?"): no humor.
Stane with Pepper, a little tension, I'll give you that. Although what would Stane do? Kill her? For being in his office?
Stane yelling. Standard villain vs employee.
Final battle. A car dragging Iron Man around? That wasn't humorous? Casually asking about the freezing problem? Stane's ultra-cheesy lines? Him standing 5 feet away in front of Tony and unable to kill him? What damaged targeting system? Move your arm a little to the left, it's not like you can't do it. And a generic ray to the sky killing the bad guy? Again, no feeling of danger or urgency.
Stark's talk with the press following his return home: showed character development. Showed him questioning the morals he'd built his life around. Questioning the work of his own father. No humor.
Said it before. All we see of this big change in character is him stating he's going to stop making weapons. End of story. He could just say "I'm a moral guy now". One of the film's biggest shortcomings.
Stark himself is a playboy billionaire. He's smart, and he's arrogant. He also likes to lighten up any situation he's in. This is displayed best in the humvee scene. He can't stand the silence. He HAS to get people's attention focused on himself. But as anyone whose watched the film can see, when it's time to get serious... Tony gets serious.
Now this film may be more family friendly than Batman Begins, but that doesn't mean it IS a family friendly, light-hearted flick.
Because really, Batman Begins is more family friendly than Predator or Schindler's List. That doesn't mean BB is family friendly or light-hearted entertainment.
The problem is Tony's a playboy billionaire full-time. Almost every scene is him in his "I'm too cool for this" attitude. And this is what makes the film light-hearted. The jokes are just a part of this. No vulnerability, no feeling, no realistic characters. Just cool attitude.
Still, I enjoyed the film, it was entertaining and quite faithful. And I'm glad it's doing good, it's always nice to see a comic book film go well. But I'm not going to try and make it something it's not. It was good, but not great.