Anubis' "How would you do it?" Thread.

This is my "Ultimizing" of the true origins of the Marvel universe, REALLY restarting with the original charactes in the modern era.

and by the way **GLOMPS DEEMAR** I don't care how unmanly it is, it's nice to get attention.
 
All good Z, it's like I've found my role on this Thread. I'm the black Roger Ebert!!!!!!!


I can't write, I can't draw so this is my role to play.
 
hey, you don't have as many ideas as I do, but when you do they are DAMN good.

I was thinking of also moderinizing the Golden Age Black Widow... although there isn't much I would want to do to her origin... empowered by Satan to ream evil souls with her death touch...brough back from the dead by the same evil being... how much does she rock already?
 
Claire Voiyant hated her name, however it had lead to a rather lucrative career as a celebrity clair voyant. She catered to only the most posh and rich. one night she was in the home of the Waglers, rich philanthropists known for donating unbelievable amounts of money (Millions of dollars at a time) to no profit organizations that dealt directly with those in need. as she sat there she felt a strange tingling, suddenly odd thought wormed their way into her head... she believed things she had no basis for. The Waglers were evil. they had secrets they deserved to be punished for. If she put a curse on them no one would be able to tell it was her... no one... she had never done a curse before, just read on them... but she could do it...

She did put a curse on the family, but one member survived, and he pulled a gun and shot the corrupted woman where she stood.

she woke to find herself in a neutral space. gray tones all around. a handome man in a white suit was arguing with an old woman.

"SHE'S MINE!" He yelled.

"You corrupted her, you interfered, that is against the rules and you know it," the woman said quietly.

"Her actions lead to their deaths, All I did was whisper," the man in the white suit growled.

"Whats going on?" Claire asked.

suddenly the old woman smiled a crooked, but warm smile. "I have a comprimise," she proposed. "You may have her, but she may not remain with you."

The dark man in white thought on this for a moment. "I must send her back to earth?" he asked.

"She will remain yours thought... so long as she remains yours."

"What's going on?!" Shouted Claire once more.

"Hush my child," the old woman said gently. "You're having a nightmare."

"She will go back... and she will fill my gates!" the man roared. Claire felt strange. all of a sudden she was consumed in fire. she screamed, though she wasn't being burned. her green dress, her favorite green dress, was burned away. "You will be my servant... MY reaper of souls. Your touch will mean death or life... heal the good, give them time to prove what monsters lie with in them, reap the evil, send their souls to me and let me feed upon their flesh... You will bear power on earth unlike anything you've ever known before. Hellfire shall spout at your command." a black covering wrapped her body with a distinctive red mark at her abdomen and on the backs of her hands. from her back spouted a green cape with matching boots.

Claire rose, backing away from both figures.

"She still bears her free will," the old woman said sternly to the handsome man.

"Of course, of course," the man replied. "She will do as she should thought..."
 
Immigrants

The Cube has reasserted it's control over Noh Varr. Not enough to control him, but enough to contain him. They've also stepped up the abductions. Now contained is Lyja, Hannah Connover, Ord of the Breakworld, and Marrina Queen of Atlantis, who while they have ended her coma, they are still conducting experiments on. all of them are being cut on continuously.
 
Day and Night

I created a suit I wanted to use to end the power crisis, end world hunger, end war, end poverty... God help me I intended the concepts behind the suit to lead to the betterment of all man kind... instead I created Daystar.

Her real name was Joan Carraway. I was her tutor and head over heels in love with her. she was my goddess... and so when I realized the potential of the "suit" I let her test drive it. She called herself Daystar.

The suit was a film of nano-machines that did three things, bond to her DNA structure, open sub-atomic apertures to an alternate dimension and convert the energy recieved from said dimension into power for her... how would tapping into that dimension power her? the dimension I discovered is filled with stars, from what I can tell there is no space between them. There are stars being born, stars going nova, stars just being stars. they convert the power into unlimited strength, light, fire, radiation, gravity, magnetism... she has the powers of a star in every cell of her body. my suit keeps her stable... it isn't even a suit anymore, It's a part of her.

I thought it was good. she was my goddess before, now she was a goddess for the whole world to adore. She began to ignore me and avoid me, but that didn't shock me. sadly, I almost expected it. I watched for news coverage of her every meta-conflict. It was subtle at first, but I could see it. she was breaking down... changing. She was becoming more violent and more impulsive. she let out a solar flare that could have roasted an entire school. She was changing for the worse...

I knew that no hero had what it took to stand against her. I even ran calculations and simulations on her going up against the Sentry... even he would have been no match. there was no choice. It took me three months to complete it. The complement to her suit. most of that time was spent sifting through dimensions finding what I needed. I found it: a universe filled with black holes. I the new suit would channel their power and allow it's wearer to manipulate gravity on a greater scale than Daystar, absorb any form of energy instantly, grant them unlimited strength and the abilty to teleport. I knew only I could be trusted with the second suit. so I put it on and I dubbed myself "Nightshade" as her compliment. I couldn't defeat her or kill her, not so long as she had the power of my first suit, but I could stop her if she tried to go too far. our powers would be compliments Yin and Yang... day and night... female and male... God forgive me for what I unleashed in this world.
 
Zoken cranks out so much interesting stuff that getting any other idea to get some spotlight is a task. Well done, man.

As my own well of ideas has run dry, the last idea I had is for another superhero team, or rather, one that has already been created but revamping them. Like every team in the 90's, they had a shortlived series that tanked (in 1998 I believe). Much like Alpha Flight, Winter Guard, and Excaliber, they represent a specific nation. Yes, I am talking about the official superhero team of Japan, BIG HERO 6. They already have a roster but I'm going to try to be creative and essentially create most of my own team, save for two members.

Background: The last incarnation of Big Hero 6 came under strife when they were brainwashed for a time and battled Alpha Flight. In Marvel time that was about 2 years ago and in a way, thinks have changed for a nation that not only supplies vast amounts of technology, but is also a key U.S. ally. Much like any MU 616 nation, they have mutants and metahumans. They have drugs such as MGH, Snap and Kick coming onto their shores, and there is a thriving black market for technology that allows one to become a one-person army, especially from Latvernia (what? The concept behind SECRET WAR wasn't all bad). As a nation smaller than the U.S. and yet with a larger population, Japan'd be nuts not to have some sort of superhero squad ready. Many of the original Big Hero 6 members were traumatized upon being brainwashed, especially when finding out that it was a mutant boy who simply had become a fan, and not a real villian (this mind-controller was never revealed in the comics). Before a new incarnation of BIG HERO 6 could be reassembled, Japan devised the Ultra Sentai.

The Ultra Sentai are essentially a squad of "Power Ranger" esque police officers. Founded by a heavilly decorated police commander whose last name actually was "Sentai" for some bizarre reason (in Japanese "sentai" is literally translated into "fighting squadron") who stumbled upon a crashed alien spaceship that had landed there during the 40's-50's when 616 Earth seemed to see no end of alien invasions and monsters. Stripping the strange costume from the dead alien pilots, Captain Sentai was able to wear it, and it combined with his human DNA to enhance his strength, speed, agility, and could channel "the positive energy of virtues" into devistating strikes. Rather than become a solo hero, he was a loyal collectivist as many in Japan are and shared it with the force, who found a way to duplicate the suits and mass produce them. The suits take approximately 1 full year to create and have to be designed specifically for a person's height & weight. Japanese scientists were able to improve on the technology a bit, allowing the suits to be summoned forth by devices no larger than a wrist watch. As the suits take a year to create, the ULTRA SENTAI are chosen by spies who moniter people from all walks of life, from police officers, soldiers, businessmen, pro fighters, athletes, even seemingly "average" people like video game fans or gifted students who seem to display a certain "spark" that makes them seem worthy. If they accept a proposal to join the squad (which is essentially a well paid gig), they spend the year it takes learning courses in order to aid them in duties; a Sentai Acadamy as it were. As producing a suit for someone who seems to fail is very expensive, the recruiters have to be experts at weeding out potential "flunkers" and their selections are rare; perhaps 1 person a month is officially taken as a cadet by any one recruiter. However, by employing dozens of recruiters, they could build up their Sentai squad quickly.

At the start of our tale there are approximately 1,000 ULTRA SENTAI that are divided into color coded squads and each given an individual number, usually denoting their order of placement. Should any of them be killed or injured permanently during duty, their number is retired. The suits allow them enhanced strength, speed, durability, and agility, although not to incredibly fantastic degrees; about peak human. Naturally, as some are more competive or skilled than others, some Sentai are better fighters, or more intelligent, or empathic, etc. In a way they are like ninjas for justice; their attack in numbers and employ team tactics. The suits also allow them to harness their virtueous energy into a single blow that has crushing force of several tons (dependant on the wearer's strength, spirit, etc). Many of them have one signature strike and train to use this one-shot manuver in tandum with each other, i.e. a good 7 of them using it at once against a massive foe. The original "Capt. Sentai" had long since died in duty but somehow as the original, his "spirit" embodies their transmission technology and serves as a built-in mentor, sort of like WORLDMIND for the Nova Corps. If up to 100 Sentai sacrifice their suit's energy not for a blow but to call for his might, his spectre can be summoned as an energy being for up to 100 seconds. They can also harness their energies together in "formation attacks" for projectile manuvers.

However, despite all this, the ULTRA SENTAI alone are no match for professional supervillians, although they greatly reduce "normal" crime so that BIG HERO 6 are only used for supervillian threats or natural disasters. This is also where any supporting cast members will come from. They also act as cavalry for the BH6.

BIG HERO 6:

Silver Samurai:
An original member of the team, he turns to the government after his NA francas and after losing a hand in battle with Wolverine. They use cloning technology to regrow his hand and Kenuichio Harada decides to stay to attempt to make a positive effect in Japan to make up for his past. However, much like a katanna, he is a double edged sword. He uses his underworld connections to infiltrate mobs from within and trick the criminals into believing he is a spy in BH6, who will use his connections to aid them. He then tells BH6 that he is spying on the mobsters and offers them information. He plays both sides so well that sometimes one cannot tell where his true affiliations lie. Not even himself. His placement on Japan's national team actually adds to his underworld rep in much the same way Kingpin might become scarier had he been an Avenger; it shows his influence is deeply engrained. With his armor and teleportation ring, Harada naturally can use his mutant energy to slice through most substances; he also uses this energy to make his throwing stars and even karate strikes deadly; so much as one blow can be a foe's last.

Sunpyre: The sister of Sunfire from an alternate reality, this version has had to spend some time getting used to this dimension's version of Japan. At first worshipping her "summoner" Honey Lemon, Sunpyre has learned to evolve into her own warrior, especially to honor the 616 counterparts of herself and Shiro. As a "legacy hero", she finds herself uncomfortable with popularity, especially with her flame powers.

Terry Domino & Red Ronin: Red Ronin was a 100 ft. tall, 23 ton Stark-built robot made to deal with giant monsters, especially Godzilla. Considering the fact that Stark & Co. have made entire fleets of giant robots with their reactivated Sentinal waves, the Red Ronin robot was considered "outdated", having been built "six years ago"; hey, if a video game system is considered obsolete after maybe 4 years, imagine a giant robot! Still a useful tool, it was sold to Japan as they are a U.S. ally and the motif fit their nation best. It was being shipped and looked over by expert "hi tech mechanic" and vehicle operator Terry Domino. Terry is an expert in martial arts and a decently large man ( 6' 3'', over 200 lbs) who dresses like a biker, the total opposite of the type you'd expect to be capable of reparing even hi-tech machines and vehicles. He has a knack for operating vehicles, at least land based ones, and for a time operated illegally as a "driver for hire" before being caught and offering his skills for a reduced sentence (as his crimes were never violent). However, despite being tall, athletic, and smart, his social skills lack so he has often been an outcast. While doing a check-up on Red Ronin, a power-surge caused by criminals hoping a blackout would slow the ULTRA SENTAI causes a short circut in the robot's controls. Rather than killing Terry, it allows him to mentally control the robot. Immediately enrolled in a tutorial class on how to operate Red Ronin, Terry acts as a support member of the team; he is the guy who operates and repairs their aircrafts and sometimes uses his martial arts skills to aid them in battle. However, when the threat is sufficient enough and there is enough room, he summons Red Ronin and smashes stuff. Naturally, this is an homage to GIANT ROBO, although I imagined Terry as a bit like Bean Bandit, from GUNSMITH CATS (and his own one-shot anime OAV, RIDING BEAN). Without Red Ronin, he is an expert combatant who can take an almost incredible amount of damage due to "heart". The government is currently in the works to give him a ULTRA SENTAI suit just to ensure he isn't killed, although he is insisting on wearing a jacket over it once he gets one.

Zeni: Modelled after the centuries old police officer Zenigata who used throwing coins as weapons, Zeni is a woman who can manipulate coins to extreme degrees. Naturally she can throw them with inhuman speed, skill and strength, but can also cause them to levitate and can increase their sizes to car-sized levels. She stands on a large coin in order to fly and can employ them as giant discs or shields. Her coins, once infused with her "chi", are virtually unbreakable. She is very serious and also the most suspicious of Silver Samurai. Aside for adamantium, her coins are also the only thing that his sword cannot cut (although if he had to, he could bat them aside).

Pop Cowgirl: Despite the name, she dresses in black leather and is not only a BH6 member, but a professional singer with a successful band. Her father was an eccentric genius/rocker who created hi-tech sound equipment that can double as both functional instruments and weapons. Her guitar is capable of emitting powerful sonic waves that can shatter objects, although they can be faint enough to just provide good tunes or render an enemy temporarialy deaf (and effect their equalibrium). Her bulky boots can deliver magnetically-charged "super kicks" and allow her to walk on walls or ceilings, and jump a good 30 feet up (although she had to take some stunt classes to work on her landings). Her guitar is also durabile enough to be used as a blunt weapon. Naturally, Terry has the hots for her, but she finds him a bit weird and is secretly a bisexual, having affections for Sunpyre and Silver Samurai.

Shinto: Coming from a family whose mutant gene allows them to be at "one" with their environment and the spiritual world (although this is seen as a family gift and not a curse), Duragon Maximura is a well groomed man who wears a domino mask and is able to feel the "elements" in his environment and manipulate them to his will. This includes summoning elements of natural things such as air, water, fire, earth, etc. but also being able to sense "energy" inside of any object, causing them to sometimes perform simple acts of his bidding. I.e. with enough concentration he could unlock a door or short out a power grid or engine simply by asking the spirits nicely enough. It is unknown whether all these objects and nature REALLY have spirits inside them or he simply has another power and a set "rationale" behind it (maybe he is an energy manipulator whose family heritage mistakes it something else). A capable hand-to-hand combatant, he can turn any environment to his advantage, able to "read" the area and know where people are hiding, when they were there las and what they said and where they stood or sat, etc. Quiet and shy by nature, his modesty keeps him from becoming a true demigod, but he has a violent temper when riled. Zeni has a crush on him despite her brash exterior, but he's too busy having flings with ULTRA SENTAI ladies.

THE VILLIANS:

Dr. Oni: Much like Arnim Zola, Dr. Demonicus or even Mr. Sinister, Dr. Oni is a master of the genetic codes of animals, mutants, and even otherworldly creatures from his former days as a performer of "alien autopsies" for whatever aliens or demons were slain by the military. Feeling his pay was too low for his genius, he mastered the ability to manipulate the genetic code to create monstrous creatures for the highest bidder. He can create their DNA from scratch to fit almost any buyer's specifications; the bigger, the pricier. There are rumors he even experimented on himself, but they are unproven.

Phantom Shogun: One of many crimelords in Japan's shadier districts, he is in a way like Silver Samurai; by day he is a CEO of a major corporation, and by night he is the masked underworld boss who has the power to make anyone obey his commands so long as he intimidates or inspires them. Thus, in both realms he builds himself up, has an imposing presence and so on. His plan is to rule Japan both legally and illegally to control both sides of it. Suspecting Samurai's ruse, he sees him as a true hypocrite. Naturally, he believes a Japan ruled by him would be more orderly and the "old customs" would not be lost.

Machizma: A young woman who was incredibly traditional to the "old ways" of being a Japanese woman, being a doting daughter and fiance, she snaps when her fiance's car loses control and is about to strike a tanker full of strange chemicals (actually a shipment ordered to Dr. Oni), and despite her devotion, her fiance leaps from the car and only saves himself. Instead of being killed in the chemical blast, the woman emerges in a body twice her normal size with the ability to have her strength & durability rise with her anger. Hiding facial scars behind a mask, she hates all remnants of men and Traditional Japanese culture (like museums), believing it seeks to hold people down.

Power Gamer: An unidentified master of video games as well as holographic technology, he has created hard-light holograms that look and feel solid. He offers his VR machines to the highest bidder to allow people to live out violent fantasies and play out action-paced games, little realizing or caring that their "skins" are real and creating havoc in the real world. Hooking up that technology into his mind, the PG can summon any warrior of his own design should he be attacked. He targets isolated youths and delinquients especially.

Well, that is a bout of insomnia well spent. What do you think?
 
Dude... that... ROCKS! sounds very believable for the 616, I especially like the Ultra Sentai. a good touch that really fits in with the japanese culture. I'd pick this up in a heart beat. The dual nature of the team (Those with psuedo mystical powers and those with tech powers) really jives with the nature of Japanese spirit (a country that still has it's polythiestic roots as part of society, yet constantly adapts to be on the vanguard of technology). very sweet.
 
Dude... that... ROCKS! sounds very believable for the 616, I especially like the Ultra Sentai. a good touch that really fits in with the japanese culture. I'd pick this up in a heart beat. The dual nature of the team (Those with psuedo mystical powers and those with tech powers) really jives with the nature of Japanese spirit (a country that still has it's polythiestic roots as part of society, yet constantly adapts to be on the vanguard of technology). very sweet.

That's what I tried to do. Many times you see cliche karate people or whatnot so while there are themes I revisit because I watch anime and stuff I tried to be creative and respectful. Glad you liked it.
 
many thumbs up. and like you said, it avoids cliche completely. they embody the spirit without being Symbols of Japan. I mean, sure, we have captain America and U.S. Agent, but since the sixties hit we have had no other uber-patriotic heroes. so why wouldn't everyone else have them too. You're heroes rock dude.

and becasue I'm an attention ****e, what did you think of Day and Night?
 
many thumbs up. and like you said, it avoids cliche completely. they embody the spirit without being Symbols of Japan. I mean, sure, we have captain America and U.S. Agent, but since the sixties hit we have had no other uber-patriotic heroes. so why wouldn't everyone else have them too. You're heroes rock dude.

and becasue I'm an attention ****e, what did you think of Day and Night?

Thanks.

Day and Night sounded interesting and poetic. Kind of tragic, though. ;) It works.
 
you know I've tried all kinds of other stuff here, so i'm going with NON-Hero stuff since you guys are my best critics.

"Just Friends"

Tyler is a romantic geek looking for friends and his "the One"

Cassandra is a Punk-Rock Power house who bends to no man.

when they meet it's love at first sight... for Tyler only. While he's head over heels, only pity keeps her from threatening him. She lets him hang out with her and her roommate on the condition that he knows they are only friends and nothing more. he quickly agrees, but every time he looks at her everyone can see he's smitten. that's right, he's in deep smitt and he'll admit it.

The Friends Meet

they meet in an electronics store where Cassandra is looking for a specific type of memory. the sales-slag gives her static about installing memory being a "tough" process for a "little lady" and suggests she take a look at the pre-assembled packages. she does the only thing she can think of... deck him.

she looks up to see Tyler staring at the scene of sudden violence with his eyes full of both fear and awe. "What?" she challenges him. his hand pops up with the exact memory she was looking for. when questioned about it he explains "I was standing by it right here and was going to say something when he said... that stupid, stupid thing..."

his eyes begin to glow with infatuation and he starts to ask her out. when she shoots him down without hesitation she can see the shattered look. when she suggests he go back to his friends and rag on her, even going so far as to suggest certain euphamisims, she seems him crumble more and realizes that he might not have friends. he explains that he wasn't popular in highschool and he's just moved up her for college, same as her.

This is proven a few days later when she sits down in her new creative writing class and looks to her left to find Tyler. the first thing he says is "I swear I'm not stalking you." she gives him a deadpan look and asks if he found anyone to hang around with. he explains that his roommate isn't really into the same kind of things as he is. His roommate is on the Freshman football team, and here on a football scholarship (he intones that he thinks an athletic Scholarship is an oxymoron derisively).

as class goes on the teacher assigns them a ten page narrative due next class. Cassandra sits with her note book open trying to think of what she wants to write, blocking out both the teacher's intro speech and a "Tic-tack" sound. five minutes later she hears Tyler announce "DONE!' as he holds a floppy aloft. she glares at him, though he is for once oblivious to her.

a week later they are in class together again and she smirks that while he might have finished faster, at least hers was quality since she took her time and put serious effort into it. she is again struck down as he is handed an "A" and she a "C+" "I really loathe you," she comments.

in any case he agrees to tutor her, because atrocious grammar was one of the things that caused her paper to look like someone tried to clean up a crime scene with it.

during this process he meets her roommate, Crystal, who is a gorgeous goth goddess. She's also surprisingly friendly (in Tyler's opinion anyway). after a couple of weeks, Tyler's in his room studying when his roommate comes in from a date sucking face with a girl. Tyler, obviously used to this already grabs his laptop and heads out, only to lock eyes with the girl: Cassandra. after he's cleared out the room, Cassandra stops the snog-fest and talks to Tyler's roommate, Duke, about how much Tyler has a crush on her. Duke, a simple but all-around good guy, agrees that it would be mildly cruel to Tyler to date. luckily neither was particularly invested... of course it helps that Duke discovers, moments later, that he didn't have protection anyway.

The Question of Faith

a week or so later, as the four are studying together in the student union, Cassandra, refered to as Cassie by everyone but Tyler, pulls a book from Tyler's bag titled "Chatechism for Dummies". when questioned, Tyler admits he'd been looking into faith for a while now and had settled on Catholicism. When Cassie questions this on the thought of the mournful, boring, hypocritical catholics, he responds with the italian, irish, and latino catholics who seem to have a good time. he also cites mardi gras, and for Crystal, he cites that they drink blood on a weekly basis. When Cassie corrects him "Wine" as Crystal perks up, Tyler responds, "Transubstantiation". for the next few weeks, in addition to his regular classes Tyler also has sessions with a priest named Father Aquinas. he learns lessons about a number of things including the catholic belief on abstenince (to which Tyler replieds "Not really a problem at this point in my life") and catholic traditions such as Mardi Gras and Lent (Tyler: "Eat drink and be merry, for tomorrow we diet?") and Tyler also has to endure the constant criticism from Cassie. when he finally sits down with Father Aquinas to discuss his doubts because of Cassandra, the priest tells him that if he has doubts because of something as deep as his friendship, the perhaps he should put off his catechism for now. Tyler thanks him and promises to send by someone who is thinking of converting. He goes to do his tutoring with Cassie, who is making her usual waspish remarks about catholicism, when he finally snaps and points out how closedminded she's being, and then just relents telling her that he isn't even doing it anymore. he explains what happened with the priest and leaves. Cassie wishes Crystal were here to discuss things with. across town there is a knock on father Aquinas door and he opens it to find Crystal in her most gothic attire. The beligured priest can't help but think "Tyler really needs to explain Transubstantiation better".
 
The First Kiss

A weekend finally rolls around where Cassandra REFUSES to study, insisting on taking just one weekend to act their age and have some fun. she's asked around and found a club she think's all four will enjoy. they dress in their finest, which still leaves Tyler looking like's late fore a tax-adjustment, and head out to a club called "Subdefectives" there they have some fun, even Duke who is out of his element. Surprisingly a smoking hottie asks Tyler to dance. he awkwardly complies and Crystal and Cassie watch in astonishment as this girl dances seductively with Tyler. she concludes "You know I've always liked you," before the song ends and she dissapears in the crowd. puzzled by this, cassie writes it off as one weird chick from the club. That monday in Creative Writing, Tyler is running over Cassie's latest submission with his red pen when a familiar voice says "Could you check mine too?" he looks up to see a girl with glasses and hair in tight bun. she's sat behind him all semester and barely said two words. she introduces herself as Felicia, but commenting that everyone calls her "Giggles". When he says that she looks slightly familiar she removes the clip that holds up her hair and removes her glasses to reveal that she is the girl he danced with... minus the make up and the style and the confidence she ahd that night.

When he asks about the 180 in appearance she explains that when she's out to have fun she likes to get her freak on, but when she's in school she has to focus beyond anal-retentive levels or else her work goes in the crapper. Tyler asks what she means, then corrects her paper. there are mistakes that aren't just blatant and obvious, but seemingly idiotic. She blushingly explains that she has a sever form of dyslexia. spelling and grammar are hard for her, despite the fact that she can learn all the rules and recite them. whe he wades through the red sea of ink he leaves on her paper he is surprised by how smart she is. when he compliments her he learns why she's named "Giggles" she has a loud, incesant giggle of a laugh that she just can't seem to control. the next weekend Felicia asks him out again and he agrees. they dance, not noticing that Cassie has tagged along (with Crystal asking why she and Duke had to come as well0. Felicia kisses Tyler and his mind feels like it is going to explode, it is a passionate kiss, it's also his first. She smiles sadly as they go to sit down. a week goes by, and Tyler and Felicia are obviously dating. he notices, but never comments that whenever they kiss, she has a sadsmile afterwards. some time later, as Felicia and Cassie are headed to a World History class, Felicia reveals why: Tyler doesn't have as strong feelings for her as she has for him. Felicia knows that Tyler's heart isn't in their relationship. when she asks Cassie why she doesn't give it a shot with Tyler, she responds as she always does: "he isn't my type". she doesn't like geeks. Felicia turns to face Cassie as they step into the classroom and simply calls her a fool.

Tyler shows up the next morning at the student union to study with a sad look on his face, Cassie asks the problem and he explains that Felicia broke up with him. Cassie asks if she explained why, but he doesn't respond.

The Wedding, the Fill-In, and the Tuxedo

from conversations with Cassie, everyone from Crystal to Duke knew Cassie had family issues, but they are shocked when Cassie stomps into her dorm, where the four of them are studying, and announces that she has to go to her youger older-sister's wedding, and the three of them are coming too. Tyler's little glimmer is quashed as she informs them, and particularly him, that they are there as buffers between herself and her mother and oldest sister.

They get to the wedding, and things should be going a lot better, the bridesmade dress that Cassie has to wear is not fugly, the sister getting married is actually the one she likes, and everyone has dress clothes... well, Duke has a nice suit and Crystal has one of her dressier Gothic dresses (that includes corset) but Tyler has a wrinkled, frumpy, tweed suit. with a tie that doesn't seem to want to lie flat. but then it turns out one of the groom's cousins is taken out with a bad stomache virus. a search goes out for someone to fill in for the missing groomsman and only one person can fit into the tux: Tyler. he is swept into a side room by the best man and groom to get changed as Cassie gets to have a wonderful moment with her sister to talk about love and family. Cassie can't even blink when Tyler emerges in the tuxedo. it seems to broaden his shoulders, his hair is fixed, somehow it makes his glasses blend in, he just seems... impressive. Cassie's sister smirks "yep, a good tux can make any guy look good." she taps her sister's chin to indicate her mouth is open. the rest of the wedding goes off with out a hitch, though Tyler can't help but stare at Cassie through the whole proceeding. at the reception Tyler dances with the bride, as all men do, and he asks her about Cassie, she replies that Cassie has issues with relationships and romance. She advises him that if he's really in love, to be patient, that there are a lot of issues. Duke does his duty as a buffer and quickly snags Cassie into a dance as he notices her mother and oldest sister gunning for her. Crystal stomps over to the group meeting their curious expressions. "Cassie's dad grabbed my ass," she informs them. Cassie does a face-palm while Duke and Tyler look distinctly uncomfortable.
 
CIVIL WAR: THE CREW, PART I

There's a group of people we've sorely missed out on when it comes to Civil War, and its effects. Namely, the ragtag group, informally known as the Crew. Justice, Junta, White Tiger and James Rhodes, the superhero formerly known as War Machine. After the Crew series, which was cancelled after only 7 issues, we didn't see any of these characters again except Rhodey, who returned to his armor-wearing days and became head of a Sentinel squad. Thankfully, Marvel seems to have figured that this isn't the way to go with him and he's returned to the suit post-CW. How did he go from the Crew to that though? Civil War: The Crew would answers that question and more.

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First off,
Kevin "Kasper" Cole aka the White Tiger
Always the most interesting character in the Crew to me, Civil War would have a profound effect on this man. Outside of his superhero alter ego, he's a police officer and he has a wife and a recently born kid. Naturally, Kasper Cole must decide whether to register or to retire (joining the resistance is too dangerous). Kasper decides to retire, but as we all know, that hardly ever works for a hero and in no time, the White Tiger is back on the streets. Why isn't he being arrested though? Black Panther protection. In hopes of negotiating with T'Challa, Tony Stark has decided not to pursue the White Tiger's capture. Of course, T'Challa recently joined the group of anti-registrants, and now, Kasper Cole is screwed. Then again, maybe Kasper can strike another deal with Hunter, the Panther's foster brother, and the villain known as the White Wolf.

Josiah “X” al hajj Saddiq/Josiah Bradley aka Justice
The man born was Josiah Bradley seems like a man of contradictions, but between the rest of the members of the Crew, he's the one that's got it all together the best. Since the end of the Crew series, he's been revelling in his role as a superhero, and of course, that's when Civil War comes up. Iron Man, of course, learns of the fact that Josiah is the son of Isaiah Bradley, the so-called black Captain America. Having a guy like this on his side would dramatically increase his standing and reputation, and might even be able to convince a few heroes into joining the pro-registration side. The fact that Josiah's wearing a Captain America uniform and is a muslim to boot make things all the sweeter for Stark. Naturally, Josiah is anti-registration, but he refuses to join up with Cap's team until he comes face to face with Patriot aka Elijah Bradley, his nephew. Y'see, Elijah took up the Patriot role after Iron Lad came to find Josiah but found him missing, and Josiah now feels responsible for keeping Patriot safe. Of course, this odd reunion is broken up when the pro-registration forces appear and are able to capture Justice.

Manuel Diego Armand Vicente/Danny Vincent aka Junta
The least likable character in the Crew, but who has quite a bit of potential is Junta. This former superpowered spy for the LCL (the secret police for the fictional country of Vulcan Domuyo), the CIA and everything between has some neat powers (involving gravity) and some handy tech (a machine called a servo-tech, that can, among other things, disarm weaponry, programmed with the personality of his mother). He's also the spy that nobody wants to have anymore. Civil War is the excellent way back into the spy game. The day registration hits, Junta registers, because, hey, the government already knows him, and this gives him the chance to do the job he loves again. At least, that's what he thinks. The last thing the gov't wants to do is put him on a black ops operation, so what's a completely amoral superpowered spy to do when he gets put on a team with bonafide superheroes? Long for the days of little Mogadishu.

Part II will delve into among others, Rhodey.
 
It's not bad for him to wear armor, just the Sentinel Squad armor. If you give him armor, at least let him wear a real War Machine one.
 
Day and Night

I created a suit I wanted to use to end the power crisis, end world hunger, end war, end poverty... God help me I intended the concepts behind the suit to lead to the betterment of all man kind... instead I created Daystar.

Her real name was Joan Carraway. I was her tutor and head over heels in love with her. she was my goddess... and so when I realized the potential of the "suit" I let her test drive it. She called herself Daystar.

The suit was a film of nano-machines that did three things, bond to her DNA structure, open sub-atomic apertures to an alternate dimension and convert the energy recieved from said dimension into power for her... how would tapping into that dimension power her? the dimension I discovered is filled with stars, from what I can tell there is no space between them. There are stars being born, stars going nova, stars just being stars. they convert the power into unlimited strength, light, fire, radiation, gravity, magnetism... she has the powers of a star in every cell of her body. my suit keeps her stable... it isn't even a suit anymore, It's a part of her.

I thought it was good. she was my goddess before, now she was a goddess for the whole world to adore. She began to ignore me and avoid me, but that didn't shock me. sadly, I almost expected it. I watched for news coverage of her every meta-conflict. It was subtle at first, but I could see it. she was breaking down... changing. She was becoming more violent and more impulsive. she let out a solar flare that could have roasted an entire school. She was changing for the worse...

I knew that no hero had what it took to stand against her. I even ran calculations and simulations on her going up against the Sentry... even he would have been no match. there was no choice. It took me three months to complete it. The complement to her suit. most of that time was spent sifting through dimensions finding what I needed. I found it: a universe filled with black holes. I the new suit would channel their power and allow it's wearer to manipulate gravity on a greater scale than Daystar, absorb any form of energy instantly, grant them unlimited strength and the abilty to teleport. I knew only I could be trusted with the second suit. so I put it on and I dubbed myself "Nightshade" as her compliment. I couldn't defeat her or kill her, not so long as she had the power of my first suit, but I could stop her if she tried to go too far. our powers would be compliments Yin and Yang... day and night... female and male... God forgive me for what I unleashed in this world.


Hmm..not bad. It's not so much that it's original, but more that I was really with the character as you described him. I like the whole 'kirbyesque science' of it.

Trippy like Cloak and Dagger dialed to 11.
 
Claire Voiyant ..."

I actually lilke the original Claire Voiyant story. The angel of death, mistress of hell working for the Devil.

For a modern story... Mephisto is called the Devil so he could be Claires master. Mephisto is an agent of Death, upon Death's request he sends agents of his own to aid Death and her siblings in battle.

SS is the herald of Galactus, Quasar for Infinity, Spitfire for Eternity, Doorman for Oblivion and Claire for Death. Spitfire has the Uni Power, Claire and Doorman both get a cosmic upgrade. Claire is given the gift of Death. Doorman is given monsterous control of the Darkforce.

They are fighting the children of Eternity: Empathy, Eulogy, Expediency, Entropy, Epiphany, Enmity and Epoch who wish to remove their elders and release their brother Abraxas and together rule the Universe.

SS, Captain U and Quasar battle it out with the E's and Abraxas. The battle is turning infavor of the E's. Claire is teleported away by Doorman. Then thousands of Doorman doors open everywhere and Claire returns, having reincarnated every Space Knight in history. Abraxas is imprsoned again and the other children comsumed by their father.

Depowered to their pre-cosmic levels Claire, Doorman and Spitfire are given a chance to drink from Death's Well of Eternity. Doorman gains the knowledge of the Darkforce and becomes its most powerful manipulator. Claire is freed from Hell and becomes White Widow with the power of life instead of death and Spitfire is merged with the essence of her one true love Jim Hammond and gives birth to a new Human Torch.
 
A breif history of the Anti-Matter Earth:



This would be a series based mainly upon the world of the Crime Syndicate, and envisioned by Grant Morrison and Frank Quietly. It would be my way of writing an entire alternate history for the DCU, which I always find fun. I'd better define the inner workings of the CSA, their history, and their relationship with the world at large. I'd also flesh out several characters who were only mentioned in passing or only seen briefly, such as Quizmaster and the Justice Underground. The stories I plan on doing are:


War:

Set during the height of WWIII, the story centers around soldiers and special forces operatives on both sides of the conflict. The war started when Atlantis led a surprise atack against several U.S. Naval bases and Florida. King Orin "The Barracuda" Atlanna made his campaign in response to what h veiwed as the opression of the surface dwellers. He was soon joined in his campaign by Kandhaq, Themyscira, Gorilla City, and Zandia, all of whome felt that they had been routinely abused by the Western world. The arc is told from the POV of Sergent Slade Wilson, a speical forces operative for the United States military and leader of the Suicide Squad, Artemis, head of Themyscira's elite gaurd, Grodd, a freedom fighter in Gorilla City aiding the Western nations in hopes of overthrowing the tyranical King Solivar, and Garth, head of Atlantian special forces. The leaders of the espective countries are either only seen briefly or only mentioned, and the Crime Syndicate are mentioned in passing as selling arms to both sides of the conflict and making a killing in the process.


Overman:

The story of the Ultra-Humanite, a German biologist and inventor who moved to the United States after WWII (in which the then xenophobic, right wing regime of the United States were the agressors) to help the country rebuild. He started in a small, insignicant town in Illinois called Metropolis. Over the next 50 years, he helped to make the United States into a prosperous world super power, and built Metropolis into a shining beacon of hope for the rest of the country. He was responsible for several technological leaps, including the computer, the internet, a majority of medical advances, advanced transportation technology, and a revival of interest in classical, awe inspiring archetecture, starting with the Tower of Humanity in Metropolis (standing in place of Lexcorp headquarters), and his own Floating Fortress, prepetually hovering over the city of Metropolis. He also set himself up as a bit of an adventurer, investigating strange and unusual occourances, sometimes paranormal in nature, and often serving as an advisor to local law enforcement and the government in times of crisis. It was a bit of a golden age in the U.S. in those days. Roughly ten years ago, he was the first to find the missing astronaut Clark Kentm who was believed to be dead after his space shuttle lost contact with NASA. He studies Kent for several days, and it soon became aparant that Kent had gained vast superhuman abilities. Seeing the potential of such a discovery, Ultra-Humanite began making plans to use Kent's powers for the bettering of the world. Realizing a very different potential, Kent murdered the scientist and took his Fortress as his own.


Gotham Knights:

Edward Nashton, the genius, billionare CEO of a company specializing on computer equipment, vidoe games, and other such merchandise, feels that Gotham, the city that raised him, is dying. Using his genius and familiarity with combat, he becomes an urban vigilante/do-gooder known nicknamed The Quizmaster. On his first night out, he gets the crap beat out of him by a group of teenagers, only to be saved by a psychotic homeless man wearing clown make up calling himself The Jester. The two spend the rest of the night walking through the streets of Gotham and talking, sharing their stories. At the end of the night, Edward decides that he needs to perfect his skills and make another atempt.


The Big One:

Chronicles the events leading up to and during this world's WWII. In this version of things, as I said, the political regime that helped America out of the Great Depression was highly xenophobic and imperialistic, and soon afterwords launched a war against th rest of the world. To aid the war effort, a group of superhumans was brought together to serve as the front line forces of the military. They were simply called The Society. Several American metahumans who refused to join Th Society fled to Europe and joined forces with the European allies, making their base of operations in German. Joining with several German super soldiers, they began refering to themselves simply as "The Gang" as a way of mocking their counterparts. The European allies won the war shortly after President Roosavelt died, and the Canasian and Japanese forces surrendered. The largest loss of life in the war was when Roosavelt's vice president, in one last desperate atempt, detonated a nuclear bomb over Hong Kong.


Origin:

Finally, a story about the Crime Syndicate. Dealing with, as you may have guessed, how they came together. They start out, as their name suggests, simply as a crime syndicate. Owlman, after running into Ultraman and Superwoman on a few occassions, suggests that they form a new gang, soon recruiting Power Ring and Johnny Quick. This story shows how they made a name for themselves in the criminal underworld and set up an orginization that would eventually lead to them becoming the unofficial rulers of most of the planet.


Ancient History:

A mostly silent issue, this story is a tale of an ancient nomadic tribe of caucasoids, traveling to find a new place to live. They are led by a young Vandal Savage, who, using his superhuman intelect, regenerative abilities, and above average strength, helps defend them from major threats. During their travel, they run into and briefly fight a tribe of mongoloids aparantly headed in the opposite direction. They make their way across an icy landscape, and eventually make their way southward to what we see is in fact North America, showing the truely reversed history of the anti-matter Earth by having the European societies popping up in North America, and the Native American societies originating in Europe.


Revolution:

At the height of the Syndicate's influence, a much wiser and more skilled Quizmaster brings together the Justice Underground to do what all branches of law enforcement were either too scarred or too corrupt to do: Bring down the Syndicate. Of course, since no court on the planet would have the balls to try them, the Underground finds that the only course of action is to kill the bastards. For months, they build manpower and resources, occassionally hurting the Syndicates operations to cripple them enough for the final blow. They get very close to their goal, but in the end one of their own, Selina Kyle, betrays them. Most of the members are either killed or kept to occassionally torture for the Syndicate's ammusement. Only Quizmaster escapes either fate, and goes into hiding.


A is A:

This is a character study of the Anti-Matter Lex Luthor, and his atempts to save the world. In short, it illustraits a level of moral ambiguity and ruthlessness that suggests that the difference between the two Luthors is not as big as we think.


Suicidal:

After serving as their puppet for years, President Perry White readies one last atempt to nail the Syndicate. His plan? Send the Suicide Squad to the Floating Fortress and the Panopticon to destroy the two structures, crippling the organization enough for an atempted arrest and/or kill. Like I said, suicidal.
 
There are many worlds, many realities that could be. so imagine if you will, a world where the cold war didn't end so conveniently in the late nineties, but was only gathering more steam. imagine a world in which Super-Humans, including mutants, were not feared for their gifts, but recruited and rewarded for them.

"JOHNNY!" Cried Sgt. Parker as he stumbled through the battle feild. all his ammo was expended. he crawled over the bodies of those he didn't know, probably mutants recruited by Gen. Summers, to the one he did. Johnny Storm... Peter's best friend, and partner through this hell called war. Johnny was even going to be Peter's best man... when he managed to ask Allison. but there on the ground was Johnny's body. Even Peter, a dedicated athiest could tell there was no soul left in that body.

he looked around the battle field. there had been a massive attack. this was a choke point. if the forces of Apocalypse took Stone Henge, Admiral Strange said it was over for the peaceful forces of the world. that maniac Apocalypse had even gotten the U.S. to work together with Russia's Red Brigade, and China's People's Protectorate. that one monster had torn the world apart, and sewn it back together upside down. and now, all that stood between a vast army of infinites and total domination was Sergent Peter Parker... Sgt. Spider.

earlier that day...
"HOW CAN YOU SAY THEY DON"T THREATEN US!" Medusea roared across the table. "ARE YOU SO NAIVE as to think that he will leave us be because we make our home on the Moon?"

"We are no longer even a part of that world. he is not a threat to Inhumans," said the old council member. "We do not give aide to the humans, they must deal with their own problems."

"And what happens when he becomes more powerful," Argued one of Medusea's brothers. "WHat happens when he becomes strong enough to attack Attilan and leave it in smoldering ruins? Must we wait for him to attack? We know he cannot abide anyforce stronger than himself. he will strike at us!"

"Then let the ant swat at the lion!" dismissed another council member. "He is totally impot..." but he fell silent.

Blackbolt had raised his hand to "speak". he looked over the table with solemn eyes. it was not easy being ruler of a nation, especially when a war is going on.

"What is your will my love?" Medusea asked. "The decision is yours."

all eyes looked to Black Bolt who gave the decision...

Back in the here an now...

"Pathetic!" crowed Sunfire, who was a loyal Japanese citizen, but now reigned over Japan as one of the Horsemen of Apocalypse. "You are all that is left of the Super-Human Brigade?" he laughed. "With the highly lauded Gen. America, Lt. Cage, and the infamous Sgt. Storm?" he let out a high long laugh. "And you are to be swept aside in one fell swoop."

"I won't go down... I won't let you pass." Peter stood defiant, and proud. he raised his hands, ready to breath his last.

"Let? LET?!" Sunfire laughed long and hard. "The Arrogance of you Americans. YOu actually think you can stop me. how pitiful!"

Three Infinites charged at Peter, who leapt up, webbed two together, and crashed down on the third. sadly a fourth managed to hit him with a laser rifle through the stomach.

"Ah, and now it ends," Sunfire crowed arrogantly. "You are going to die here, and the Lord Apocalypse will have the world on a silver platter." he looked beyond Peter. "Ahh, look. here comes our reinforcements now... Wait... those aren't ours..."

from the mists and smoke of the battle field twenty shapes emerged. they walked quickly in a line. most of them were humanoid. the one major exception was a large doglike beast. Sgt. Parker shied from them at first, until Black Bolt put an arm on his shoulder.

"Do not fear," Medusea said. "We will finish what you started." she looked to Lockjaw, who bent down, taking Peter gently in his massive jaws, and with a soft "blink" Peter and Lockjaw were gone.

"Inhuman scum!" Growled Sunfire. "You choose to stand against Lord Apocalypse?"

"Surrender," Medusuae commanded, "Or you will recieve no mercy."

"I thought he was the king," SUnfire continued to taunt. "Hasn't he anything to say?"

Black Bolt looked at his wife, who, along with the rest of the inhumans, took a few steps back. Black Bolt nodded his head. he did have something to say...
 
Peter awoke in a hospital bed, his eyes were blurred at first, but slowly cleared. most definitely a hospital. all white everywhere.

"I've done everything I can for him," a young man with gold skin sighed. "He should be fine in a day or two... he just needs time to heal."

"I'm going to live?" asked Peter.

the men that the golden young man had been talking to turned to Peter. he recognized them all. President Stark, Col. Rodgers, Admiral Strange, and Commander Richards and King Black Bolt of the Inhumans.

"Well," Strange said, flipping through Peter's charts. "It looks like you'll be making a full recovery. You are one most amazing fighter, Mr. Parker. and these stats show you as a low level fighter... Amazing."

"Did... did anyone else make it?" Peter begged. "What happened?"

they men assembled around Peter fell silent. Col. Rodgers put his hand on Peter's shoulder. "I'm sorry Sgt. Parker, you are the last human or mutant survivor of that battle."

"The inhumans arrived," President Stark picked up. "Just in time. His Royal Highness, Lord Black Bolt, annihilated most of Apocolypse forces, and the other Inhumans took care of the rest."

Peter felt crushed. The only survivor. The only survivor. The words continued to ring in his head over and over. he felt a strong hand on his shoulder. he looked up and saw Black Bolt looking at him, or more accurately into him. Black Bolt placed and small trinket on the bed in front of Parker and walked away.

"You are recieving the congressional medal of honor," Stark continued after the Inhuman king left.

Peter picked up the item that Black Bolt left behind. there was an inscription. "Pain is life, life is pain. Joy is life, life is Joy ~ Inhuman Proverb". Peter looked up, trying to force some semblence of hope into his face.

A week later Peter was let out of bed and allowed to return to his old quarters, where he was immediately tackled by a weeping Allison Blair, his girlfriend. they held each other for a few hours, and Peter called his Aunt and Uncle, who commiserated with him.

a young man stopped by the next day, handing Peter a letter then speeding off.

"What is it Peter?" Allison asked.

"I'm being reassigned," he explained, reading his new orders. "Training position."

"Well thats good," she replied. She always feared for her boyfriend. she looked down at her ring and corrected her though "Fiance"

A week later Peter showed up in full uniform looking at his class. their ages were varied. the youngest was twelve, the oldest 18.

"Alleyne, Altman, Bradley, Dean, Hayes, Kaplan, Keller, Lang, Mancha, Mantega, Minoru, Shepard, Stein, Wilder, Yorkes." he looked up. "is that everyone?"

"You forgot the loser, Bohusk," Jullien Keller jeered, pointing at the bird like member of their class.

"Ah, Bohusk," Peter said, marking the sheet. "that's right. Sorry." he turned to the class. "You are the next generation," he started. "You are going to lead the world's superhuman teams. you were chosen as the next generation of Super-Soldiers. this isn't a term given to just anyone. This isn't a term given to all super-powered soldiers, sailors, marines, and pilots. Select few attain this title."

Gertrude Yorkes let out a wide yawn, as did the dienonychus resting on the floor beside her. "Am i boring you Ms. Yorkes?"

She quirked an eyebrow, but didn't respond. the chance was taken by Jullien. "No, but you're boring me. Why do we have to take classes with Low Genes?" he asked. "I mean mutants are the future of the world, we out number metas, and we are more powerful than any flat scan, why aren't we leading this fight?"

"Shut your mouth, Keller," David Alleyen and Alex Wilder said at the same time. they traded a look and laughed lightly.

"Mr. Keller, being a mutant doesn't mean you are of sufficent Character to be a super-soldier, just that you might have sufficient power. I'm starting to question whether or not you have the character it takes."

he walked back to the front. "Ordinarily this would be the point where I tell you, not all of you will be come super-soldiers." he paused, looking at Chase Stein. "however, we don't have that luxury as most of the Super-Soldier battalion was wiped out at stonehenge. You will graduate to Super-Soldier, I will make sure you are ready for that, which means you, all of you will have to wake up and pay attention." this sufficiently captured the attention of most of his class.
 

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