I read the first page, and already saw a crapload of mistakes
Earth's been around for hundrends of millions of years.
"The Earth used to be double oxygen"
THE OPPOSITE. The Earth used to be mostly Nitrogen and Co2. Over years and years and years, those levels dropped, and the Oxygen levels lifted to a point life (animals) could begin.
His starting "EVOLOTIN IZ A LIE" is also incorrect. By millions of years, we really mean, millions of years. SKIN COLOUR. Do you think The Lord suddenly went "OMG LOL JEZUZ U NO WOT WULD BE FUNI LUL?" People closer to the equtator have more melion in their skin. I'll dumb it down. The closer to the middle line of the Earth (where the sun's rays hit the most) the darker you're skin is, (melion in your skin absorbs the sun - fair people don't have alot - hence them burning in the sun) so you don't get Sun cancer from extreme exposure. If you want to know why Australian's and American's are white instead of black, just think logically. They've all emigrated from England, when the lands were discovered. England is very Northern, so the human body doesn't bother wasting energy producing it where it doesn't need it. If we're still around in 10,000 years, it's likely the American norm will be black.
Another thing I read him state incorrectly, was actual evolution. One of the most obvious examples is the Giraffe. A couple'of million years ago, modern day Giraffes looked alot like Horses, small necks. However, all of the other animals who ate plants, we're the same size as them and could reach the same leaves, and because Giraffes were quite slow, they struggled for food, and began to die out. Then, by a freak accident, (Mutation/EVOLUTION) one Giraffe just happened to be born with a slightly longer neck. He could reach the higher branches, and survived on what the other animals couldn't reach. So, all of the regular Giraffes died out, and he lived. Now let's say, by chance, a female was born of the same nature. (It wouldn't just be 2, it'd be a few hundred, but I'm keeping it simple) So they mated, and passed on their genes. Now all Giraffe's have evoled one stage, they all have slightly longer necks. Right? Now, repeatx100, and you get the modern day Giraffe.
If you're going for the "Oh well, that's rather convient that a male and female just happened to evole at the same time" think about modern day "mistakes." Some people can have alternating eye colours, I'm not sure about the PC phrasing, but think about midgets. It's seen today as a "fault" however, in say, a 100 years, when we blow up the universe and have to move underground, being a midget will probably be an advantage, being lower. Normal humans would find it difficult to survive, and would be more prone to die over the midgets, who would contiune on their genes, until eventually, the "normal" human would have evoled to all being midgets.
Get it?