Anyways also instead of a motel make them stay at Alicia's place, she gave them the adress or Thing before he went back to Baxter. That makes her role more prominent.
Anyways here we go:
-After crawling inside the Baxter Building from below they end up in a main hall. Where giant machines attack them and Thing yells for the second time "IT'S CLOBBERIN' TIME!"
All kind of anarchy breaks out, and since the action is hard to write, well it is impressive. Oh and this fight is big, and they used their powers a few times when saving people, and in a montage of military training with them. But since only Human Torch and Thing had been really using their powers a lot, here we get to see Mr. Fantastic break loose to save his beloved Sue who he had just rekindled a romance for.
-They defeat them and are given free passage via special elevator to the top floor. It has been reconstructed as a cathedral, but not as in homage to Lon Chaney's Le Fantom de l'Opera. And appearing from the mist comes Dr. Doom.
-"Very theatrical" remarks Reed. Dr. Doom scoffs off the remark reclaiming his name as Dr. Doom. He then sends some giant robot monstrosity trap that the three barley destroy to Doom's shock in a suspensful scene, but he then lets Sue out when ordered. In her red dress she takes Doom's side, and falls into his arms. They kiss and he feels her, as doing so she begins crushing the FF in bubbles. Reed pleads with her to fight this. She slowly but surely does, and the bubbles go off and Doom takes her and says "No you're mine!" And as he embraces with her Reed throws the locket at her feet, she picks it up and then sees Johnny throw his at her. She puts them together, the blankness in her eyes evaporates. She then disappears into invisiblity and the FF charge Doom, but Doom sends out little minions who all, now all four (Sue fighting too) destroy these flying robot minions (too razorbats from SM1?)
-Doom pulls a lever as victory is theirs. A wall opens and before he steps inside he pushes a key code locking the lever and setting a chain reaction. The control case has C4 wired in it. It and the top of the building will blow exclaims Doom, and they have 4 seconds (afterall 5 is just too long
) to live. The panel in the wall shuts as Doom walks in.
-Sue throwing a comforting Reed off takes the bomb and covers it in a perfect bubble and sphere that she lifts in the middle of the room. The whole FF looks worried....can she handle it? Can she handle the power? Then it goes off and the room lights up with fire and the sphere expands so far it is pushing them all to the walls, it looks as if they are about to be engulfed in flames, but in a burst of rage and determination Sue pushes the bubble closer together and contains the blast!
-They all take a breather and Reed and Sue rush to each other. As they embrace Johnny tales Ben to reopen that wall. Ben gladly smashes through. Only to fall down a poopchute if you will is the result. As he falls through the slide in the floor Johnny grits his teeth and jumps after him. Sue and Reed look at each other and nod and jump into the chute too.
-This takes them to an underground personal railway system that runs in the subway. There are two hyped up supercars. Dr. Doom is about to enter the first one. He looks back and sees The Thing land hard on the ground and then Johnny fall on top of him. Dr. Doom shakes his head mockingly and jumps into his train. Ben yells for Johnny to get off of him. They wait and moments later Reed and Sue get down there too. But Doom is seemingly already gone. Reed turns to Johnny and says "Give us some momentum." Reed and Sue begin piloting the other as Johnny gets behind the second train and flames on.
-The added strength and push of a flying Human Torch is enough. They catch up at a mad speed and begin ramming the other train, with Sue's forcefield. Reed and Ben nod, they know what they must do. They climb up the exit hatch on the roof of their car, and Sue lets the bubble or field rather up long enough for the two to make the jump. Doom hears them above him. He then hears on the other side a triumphant Ben Grimm go "Knock. Knock." And he (Dr. Doom) then sees The Thing's hand smash through the roof of his car. It is pulled off then and Reed spin stretches in as Ben jumps in. Doom throws some major gadget of some sort that is just an annoyance for Reed and Ben to destroy.
-At this moment Doom runs over to his "bomb" and pulls the pulling switch. "NOOOO!" Screams Reed as he jumps forward but a gust of powerful air and blast from an explosion force Reed to fly back with The Thing.
-The blast is so great it causes both train cars to derail. They collapse under heavy pressure and spin out of control. Reed and Thing are trapped under wreckage, but Thing pushes it off. They jump down and see Sue standing their, holding her arm...it is broken. They turn and hear a scream as Johnny in "flame on" explodes out of the wreckage screaming and hovering above. Johnny looks beyond them. They see a limping Doom scramble up the stairs of the local subway stop.
-They call chase him up. Doom finds himself in the middle of a street when a huge 8 foot ring of fire flames around him in a 15 foot range. Arg! There is Torch flying above the ring in the direction he is facing. Each direction Doom turns through the flames he sees another member of the Fantastic Four. He is trapped. The last member he sees is Mr. Fantastic. The Thing behind him says "C'mon doc...come out and play." Doom's eyes feel with hatred for Reed. He pulls out a zapper and fires and Reed expands easily dodging it. But in the same moment The Human Torch snaps his fingers and the ring of fire encloses and engulfs Doom. At the exact moment Reed yells "Johnny NOOOO!"
-We cut to the police there. Johnny is in handcuffs. Reed lectures him almost like a father figure about what he did was wrong, but they will be there for him, and no one will arrest him long term for the murder of Dr. Doom. Von Doom is dead. Yet then the detectives come and say "uncuff Storm."
-"What why?!" exclaims a bewildered Reed. "'Cause unless we hold charges for those who kill and murder robots, there won't be no point of him having 'em on 'ya know?" the detective bluntly replies. Reed runs to the dead body and now that the fire is cooled off he is nothing more than a charred metallic robot! The bomb was no dud, but a fake with a robot Doom inside all along! He played the world for fools on his videos!
-Cut to them being given gold chains and emblems by the mayor of New York City and thanked for their service. As we zoom away from Central City Hall we cut to a TV watching this in a dark storming gloomy and dreary castle throne chamber. A figure in a robe comes out washing his hair. The same man who had spoken so adimentally about killing Doom at the UN. The man who ordered the death of Victor Von Doom's parents. It is the dictator of Lavertia.
-The door creaks behind him and a beam of light shines through his dark shadowy throne room. He turns around and sees the sillouhette of none other than Dr. Doom. In this homage to the first Batman our dictator frantakly tries to welcome Mr. Doom. He walks to get a drink at his desk and reaches for a gun. Doom walks closer by the huge plasma TV saying "The news today...depressing....sickening." He then shoots two bullet holes into the TV.
-In fear the dictator turns around and says cut a deal or your military will kill you too! Doom says call them. He does on the intercom for help, they don't respond, they sound indifferent even.
-"Well funny thing is, you were so incompetent at the UN and I embrassed you and Lavertia...they think I can do a better job funny world ain't it?" Doom walks closer into the light holding out his gun. "Well since I've accomplished taking over the motherland of Lavertia, I guess I figure it is only appropriate that I do you in the old fashioned way...."You know the way you did my parents?" The Dictator scrambles towards Doom begging for mercy. Doom scoffs when the dictator said he did what he did for the interest of Lavertia. "Thank you for that explanaton" says Doom after shooting the man in the shoulder then in one leg and then the other with 5 second pauses. Then he stands up and we see the bullet fire at the camera and the screen light up.
-We cut to some cheesy ending of them standing in front of the Baxter building the 4 is revealed and Reed and Sue kiss after Reed shakes hands with a happy Ben with an arm around Alicia. You know, Hollywood ending. Then Johnny flies by.
The End.
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(as long as they don't go with that dialogue)
