Mathion is the first book in the Mavonduri Trilogy, and the debut novel by author Jeff Shanley. Its a traditional fantasy novel, but instead of elves, dwarves and trolls, the land is inhabited by
werewolves. Actually there are four distinct species inhabiting the land pure-blood werewolves, halfbreeds, Wolven and humans. The Wolven have a similar heritage to the werewolves, but they dont transform from their human-like appearance and are the good guys. Mathion is a Wolven prince, and the story largely concerns the Wolvens conflict with the werewolves and half-breeds, although humans do come into it nearer the end too.
Without going into too much detail about the plot and characters, its full of the plot elements youd expect from a fantasy novel an epic quest, a small group of heroes, a really evil villain, battles, the group splitting up, rejoining later, and battles to win. The basic storyline is well developed, and the world the characters live feels alive and has plenty of history behind it. The battle sequences are handled pretty well, although a couple did, I felt, go on a little longer than perhaps necessary. The authors love of Lord of the Rings is evident, though not in mimicking Tolkeins work, rather in a similar meticulous imaginary world being built up with its own unique history, languages, mythology etc. The dialogue felt a bit dry at times, but mostly it was believable enough, and occasionally quite poignant.
By far the best element of the story was the way Elekan, the white wolf who is always at Mathions side, and the Wolfstone, given to Mathion by Elekans mother, is developed. While at first the Wolfstone appeared to be a bit of a gimmicky one-trick pony (and I wondered why, considering its immense power, it wasnt used sooner and more frequently with hordes of werewolves attacking!), as the story progresses, its role becomes more important and more diverse. Elkekan is no ordinary wolf, either, and to me he was really the star of this book. The writing is a tad formal at times, for instance re-listing everyones name in a group of people perhaps more often than necessary, but it usually flows well.
Often the biggest criticism of self-published books is that their grammar and spelling are poor, and to some extent Mathion is a little guilty of this. The problem almost always occurs in the form of a word missing from a sentence though at least the missing word is easy to work out in each occasion. This is a bit of a strange problem that Ive rarely encountered before, and may to some extent be due to the ePub conversion process. However Jeff is aware of this problem and is currently working on a revised and expanded edition, both to sort this out and add full appendices. My advice would be to get the book when this edition comes out (and of course Ill let you know on this blog when that happens).
I was slightly disappointed that some themes started to be developed and were left a bit unfinished for instance it was hinted at that the werewolves actually lived pretty normal lives rather like the Wolvens and humans at one point but then the portrayal of starkly divided good and evil continued. There also seemed to be a betrayer among the Wolven themselves, and this pointed to an awareness by the werewolves that a great army was coming up against them which later seemed to be ignored, but Im assuming that both these points are probably going to be developed in the next book(s).
The ending is quite an effective little cliff-hanger, and Im certainly interested in finding out just what happens next.
Mathion is a solid bit of fantasy fiction, the focus on werewolves makes it seem a little different from most fantasy, and the eBook edition (I read it in ePub format on the Nook, but are large number of different formats are available) it only costs 99 cents from Smashwords. On this evidence Jeff Shanley is a promising new author.