flavio_lebeau
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My idea isn't to make a movie full of sci-fi and action ssequnces, but rather a drama about her life, with her power being influenced by her emotions. So far i have only the beginning ready, so critics, commentaries are appreciated.
1- EXT. GARDEN OF CAIROS HOUSE - NIGHT
A little GIRL, black, straight white hair and about 6 years old, plays in the garden of a mansion, running with a dog. It runs away, and she stays following it with her eyes.
NDARE and DAVID, PARENTS of the little girl, are in the dining room. The mother looks at the girl through the window.
ORORO, a bit disappointed, turns to go inside. While shes walking, a strange noise gradually gets louder. She looks at the sky. She sees a huge airplane, flying towards her house, now with a deafening sound. Close on OROROs face. She is in AWE, paralyzed, but manages to slowly put her hands on her ears. Her mouth is open. In slow motion, we see her face, tears filling her eyes but not coming down, the camera approaches her eye, until it reaches her pupil. CG intro with electricity and dna with waves until we see the TITLE.
Fade out.
3- EXT. HOUSE NIGHT
The house is on fire. The airplane debris are all over. True CHAOS. Two more houses are destroyed and on fire. The firefighters arrive, and start working. We now see a little hand inside all the debris. Its moving. OROROS hand. Shot of everything dark, we only partially see her face surrounded by stones. Shes whelmed, nervous, immobilized. Until she sees a leg in front of her. Her MOMS leg. ORORO starts to scream desperately, calling her mom.
We now see the face of NDARE surrounded by debris. She stares at the girl, she cannot move, but she has a placid expression. One of the firefighters, who heard Ororos screaming, gets to the place.
More men arrive, and start helping, pulling out debris, until they reach the girl, and manage to take her out.
Another man, who is holding her in his arms, takes her to an ambulance car. She sits, and apprehensively watches the men trying to save her mom. Tears come down her face. In slow-motion, we see the dawn, as the firefighters still work. Day comes in, and they slowly give up. ORORO, shocked, hears a conversation between two men.
1- EXT. GARDEN OF CAIROS HOUSE - NIGHT
A little GIRL, black, straight white hair and about 6 years old, plays in the garden of a mansion, running with a dog. It runs away, and she stays following it with her eyes.
GIRL
Hey, doggie! Come back!
2-INT. SAME PLACEHey, doggie! Come back!
NDARE and DAVID, PARENTS of the little girl, are in the dining room. The mother looks at the girl through the window.
NDARE
So, David, when do you think we will go back to New York?
DAVID
I have no idea arent you enjoying our time in Cairo?
NDARE
Its not that, Im closer to my home country, I feel good in here. But I wonder if Ororo feels the same she doesnt have many friends.
DAVID
She is just a kid, dear, she will find some soon. Is the dinner ready?
NDARE
Yep.
(she looks at the window and shouts)
ORORO!! Dinner!!!!
So, David, when do you think we will go back to New York?
DAVID
I have no idea arent you enjoying our time in Cairo?
NDARE
Its not that, Im closer to my home country, I feel good in here. But I wonder if Ororo feels the same she doesnt have many friends.
DAVID
She is just a kid, dear, she will find some soon. Is the dinner ready?
NDARE
Yep.
(she looks at the window and shouts)
ORORO!! Dinner!!!!
ORORO, a bit disappointed, turns to go inside. While shes walking, a strange noise gradually gets louder. She looks at the sky. She sees a huge airplane, flying towards her house, now with a deafening sound. Close on OROROs face. She is in AWE, paralyzed, but manages to slowly put her hands on her ears. Her mouth is open. In slow motion, we see her face, tears filling her eyes but not coming down, the camera approaches her eye, until it reaches her pupil. CG intro with electricity and dna with waves until we see the TITLE.
Fade out.
3- EXT. HOUSE NIGHT
The house is on fire. The airplane debris are all over. True CHAOS. Two more houses are destroyed and on fire. The firefighters arrive, and start working. We now see a little hand inside all the debris. Its moving. OROROS hand. Shot of everything dark, we only partially see her face surrounded by stones. Shes whelmed, nervous, immobilized. Until she sees a leg in front of her. Her MOMS leg. ORORO starts to scream desperately, calling her mom.
ORORO
MOM!!!! MOMMY!
MOM!!!! MOMMY!
We now see the face of NDARE surrounded by debris. She stares at the girl, she cannot move, but she has a placid expression. One of the firefighters, who heard Ororos screaming, gets to the place.
FIREFIGHTER
Hey!! I need help! I found two alive!
Hey!! I need help! I found two alive!
More men arrive, and start helping, pulling out debris, until they reach the girl, and manage to take her out.
ORORO
MOM!!!!!
FIREFIGHTER
Well save her, girl, now go the car.
MOM!!!!!
FIREFIGHTER
Well save her, girl, now go the car.
Another man, who is holding her in his arms, takes her to an ambulance car. She sits, and apprehensively watches the men trying to save her mom. Tears come down her face. In slow-motion, we see the dawn, as the firefighters still work. Day comes in, and they slowly give up. ORORO, shocked, hears a conversation between two men.
MAN 1
Well have to take her to an orphanage
MAN 2
No family?
MAN 1
No that we know of shes from United States.
MAN 2
Government knows what to do
ORORO reflects for a while. She suddenly RUNS AWAY, and the two men who try to catch her, arent able to do so. Various shots of her running through different places. She gets to an alley. She breathes hard and cry, sitting on the floor. She has bare feet and a shredded dress.Well have to take her to an orphanage
MAN 2
No family?
MAN 1
No that we know of shes from United States.
MAN 2
Government knows what to do