Sequels My X5; X-Men Mutant Chaos.

Okay I will put my "talents" as you call them on the site soon.
I first wanna finish this one and my X1 and X2 rewrite so I can post everything :D
 
Okay I made a little mistake in the spoilers this will probably happen in the next chapter:

Another villain will be introduced and all in the next chapter, maybe he will be introduced at the end of this one but I have to see
 
Chapter Four: Another Time Another Place​
​
At the Hellfire Club:
The door opened and Donals carried Xavier into the room and laid him on the couch. "So what now"? asked Casandra. "We need to erease a bit of his memory, Trevor you know what the alternate dimension could be what do you think"? asked Sebastian. "The time after Jean was presumed dead I think" said Trevor. "That could be a very good idea, well Casandra could you take some parts out of his memory"? asked Sebastian. "Of course, I will do it right away" said Casandra. She took a seat behind Xavier's head and earesed a bit of his memory. "Okay Trevor open the portal" said Sebastian. "Okay but where is his wheelchair"? asked Trevor. "No we forgot it" said Sage angry. "No worries people he will be found in the alternate reallity they can help him in the wheelchair" said Sebastian. "Okay then I will open a portal now" said Trevor. Trevor closed his eyes and putted his arms forward and light came out his hands, it was all the life energy he took from the humans and the X-Men and a little portal appearred and grew bigger and bigger. "Okay throw him in" said Sebastian. "With pleasure" said Emma with a grin. She took Xavier and threw him in the portal well he fell and fell deeper and the portal closed behind him. "And you have enough for later"? asked Sebastian. "Yes I have enough energy to open it 5 more times" said Trevor. "That is excellent" said Sebastian laughing. "Hahaha eat that X-Men" said Emma.

Meanwhile at the Mansion:
Rogue stood in the courtyard with Anna, Shawn and Z'Cann and she said: "Isn't it beautiful Z'Cann? would you like to life here"? "It looks great, maybe this is my new home" said Z'Cann. "This is your new home sweety, and you will make lots of friends here, you already have 3 more friends and it could be more" said Rogue with a wink. "That would be great" said Z'Cann coughing. "Are you okay Z'Cann, are you getting sick"? asked Rogue. "I am okay I think I got the flue" said Z'Cann with a smile. "Ah okay, then we get you a nice bed so you feel better soon" said Rogue with a smile. "Thank you" said Z'Cann. They walked towards the door but Scott came out the door and said: "You". "You? what you"? said Rogue. Scott grabbed to his glasses and Rogue yelled: "What are you doing"? "You will pay" said Scott angry and he unleashed a optic blast. Rogue grabbed the kids and flew into the air and got them in safety and flew to Scott. "What are you doing, have you gone crazy"? asked Rogue. Scott unleashed another optic blast and Rogue grabbed him and punched him through the wall. The other X-Men came running at them while they were fighting. "Rogue what are you doing"? asked Logan. "Ask him he attacked me is something wrong with him"? asked Rogue. "Something is wrong with you" said Scott and he punched Rogue on the ground. She got up and said: "What I am crazy you attack me" and she grabbed him and kicked him into the stomach and then smashed him into a wall where he collapsed on the floor. "Scott" said Jean. Rogue fell on the ground and said: "Bobby could you pick up Anna, Shawn and Z'Cann? they are in the garden". "Sure" said Bobby. "What the hell happened"? asked Rogue furious. "You killed the professor" said Jubilee with tears in her eyes. "Excuse me, is the professor dead"? asked Rogue shocked. Scott woke up and said: "Please stop acting you killed him". "No I would never do that, I could never do that" said Rogue. "Oh no, did you listen to yourself yesterday"? asked Scott. "I was angry, but I could never kill him" said Rogue. Scott wanted to say something but Jean said: "We know dear, I believe you". "Well I don't" yelled Scott and he stood up. Rogue stood up to and said: "And if I wanted him dead I didn't have the chance I was taking care of a little girl and the professor and I talked last night he appologised and so did I" said Rogue. "How"? asked Storm. "He was telepathicly conected to me and we talked he said he was proud of me for what I stand for and that I helped this girl get a home" said Rogue with tears in her eyes. "Jeez Scott you still think she did it"? asked Logan. "Yes I do, the professor was burned to death and the only ones with that power are Rogue and John and seen that John was on the ground sleeping" said Scott. "What are you talking about? someone could have put gassaline on him and burned him" said Rogue. "Yes and the marks aren't correct to" said John. "What do you mean"? asked Scott. "Those marks arround Xavier are to good, he is killed earlier and has been thrown into bed and they made some burning marks arround him" said John. "Are you sure"? asked Bobby walking in with the kids. "Yes I am, and it couldn't be Rogue he was this was caused by something else but not Rogue" said John. "Well Scott I think you owe someone an appologie" said Jean. "Yeah I know, I am sorry Rogue" said Scott. He walked up to her and gave her a hug and Rogue said: "Don't worry I am sorry to I hit ya" said Rogue. Scott smiled and said: "And I am sorry I started the fight". Rogue's eyes were filled with tears and said: "How could this happen? why the professor we had such a good talk last night and now he is gone" said Rogue. "We were all sleeping we all laid on the ground or somewhere else but not in our bed" said Storm. "What? this can't be happening" said Rogue. "Well it did" said Kitty with tears in her eyes. "What were you two talking about"? asked Jean whiping away a tear. "He asked me why I left and we spoke about Z'Cann here and her place in the school, and he asked me to come back and I said I didn't wanna come back that I am through being an X-Men and he respected that and said I was in my right" said Rogue. "So you will leave again"? asked Bobby sad. "No I am an X-Men and I will find the ones who are responsible for his death, I will fight what he standed for like I always did and I always will" said Rogue. "Welcome home Rogue" said Logan with a smile. "Any idea what could have happened"? asked Rogue. "No we don't have a clue, we can not remember a thing about last night" said Angel. "Could it be the Hellfire Club, they are telepaths isn't their something about a telepathic sleep"? asked Rogue. It was quite for a while till Jean said: "Oh my god yes that is it Rogue, a telepath can bring someone in a telepathic sleep for a while, those ones fall asleep immediatly at the place they are". "Good thinking Rogue" said Psylocke. "We will go their immediatly and hear them out" said Scott. "Okay let's change X-Men" said Hank.
 
Meanwhile in an alternate dimension:
Xavier laid on the ground and Cyclops walked up to him and said: "Professor are you okay"? "Xavier woke up and said: "Scott? where am I"? "Since when do you call me Scott? but you are in the courtyard and we better get out of here, could you help me out a bit"? asked Cyclops. Xavier looked arround him and saw that Cyclops didn't wear his glasses and said: "What happened here"? "Well I am blind professor did you forget"? asked Cyclops. "Blind how"? asked Xavier shocked. "Oh I think you have amnesia, you don't remember a thing" said Cyclops. Polaris came out and said: "Professor are you okay? Cyclops what are you doing here without someone to guide you"? "Polaris what happened"? asked Xavier. "What is wrong with him"? asked Polaris. "I think he has amnesia" said Cyclops. "Well let Jean examine me" said Xavier. Cyclops was shocked and said: "Professor Jean doesn't excist anymore, she is Dark Phoenix and we have to go inside before she sees and kills us, and the brotherhood could be near to" said Cyclops. "No what is happening to me" said Xavier. "Don't worry professor Beast will look at you" said Polaris. "Who are left? How is Anna"? asked Xavier. "Professor Anna is dead, Ororo is in Africa with Gambit and Jubilee to look for her daughter Kendall" said Polaris. "No Anna dead? no that can't be" said Xavier. "Please calm down professor" said Polaris. "I wanna know what is going on here" said Xavier. "Okay we will tell in a minute, but we have to get you inside" said Polaris and she lifted Xavier up and grabbed Cyclops his arm and walked inside. Xavier was putted in his wheelchair and said: "Okay now I wanna know everything what happened". Bobby came walking in and kissed Polaris and said: "Heey hon where did you go"? "Hon? you are married with Rogue" said Xavier. "What is his problem"? asked Bobby. "He has amnesia, you better get Beast while we explain him everything" said Polaris. "Okay I will go right away" said Bobby and he walked of. "Okay what happened"? asked Xavier. "Well it all started after the Alkalai Lake incident, we all thought Jean was dead but after a while she rose out the water as Phoenix, she helped us fight a lot but became Dark Phoenix and blinded Cyclops with his own powers, he now lost his powers and is completly blind" said Polaris. "Okay and what about Anna"? asked Xavier. "Well Rogue and Bobby were walking in the park and when they didn't look Anna was kidnapped, she was nowhere to be found till we found her clothes in the water with her blood on it, the clothes were ripped appart that is how we lost baby Anna" said Polaris. "And Rogue"? asked Xavier. All of a sudden the Mansion started shaking and there was a loud bang. Rogue came in with curly hair and a green suit and said: "Hi sugah's did ya miss me". "Rogue" said Polaris. "Aah isn't it the **** who secuided my husband" said Rogue laughing. "You dumped him, you blamed him for Anna's death" said Polaris angry. "Don't you bring in her" said Rogue angry and she attacked Polaris. She grabbed Polaris by the throat and threw her through some walls, Polaris took on a forcefield but Rogue kept smashing in it till it faded, Polaris threw a pulse bolt on Rogue and she fell backwards, Wolverine came in and jumped onto Rogue and said: "I am sorry kid" and threw her through the air. She stopped in the air and flew towards Logan and Polaris and smashed then through the wall, she turned to Xavier and said: "Hello Xavier good to see you again". "What is this Rogue what are you doing"? asked Xavier. "Aaah payback time for you all, because you all I lost my daughter ya'll coud 've helped but ya'll didn't" said Rogue angry and she grabbed Xavier's wheelchair and threw it through the air. Beast and Bobby arrived and Beast catched Xavier in time. Bobby ran towards Rogue and smashed her on the ground then he made a big ice ball and threw it on her she fell on the ground and said: "I will be back, and then with the whole brotherhood" and she stood up and flew into the air. "I wanna know what happened now" said Xavier worried. Everyone sat down again and Polaris said: "Well as you see Rogue turned evil and joined her mother with the brotherhood to kill us all". "But how and why"? asked Xavier. "After Anna's death she lost total controle of her powers and started blaming everyone for her condition and Anna's death, she is unable to touch people again, after a big fight with me she said she wanted to divorce I tried to stop her from it but she turned evil and she changed she started to attack me and other X-Men she crossed over to Magneto and became a member of the brotherhood and now Polaris and I are engaged for 3 months now" said Bobby. "No Rogue, this isn't the Rogue I knew, and not the Jean I knew who would become Dark Phoenix" said Xavier sad. "Well they are evil" said Logan. "And what about all the others"? asked Xavier. "Well like I said Ororo, Gambit and Jubilee are in Africa for Kendall, Ororo's daughter because she is in trouble with a demon there" said Beast. "How do you know, and I never knew she had children" said Xavier confused. "Well we wrote the note and she confessed she has a child who is raised by her sister and she left immediatly with Gambit and Jubilee" said Beast. "And who else are here or were here"? asked Xavier. "Magma and Angel are on vacation on an island that has a vulcano, that vulcano is about to erupt and Magma and Angel wanna protect the people there" said Beast. "Hmf weird kids" said Wolverine. "And as you see Wolverine is as grumpy as always" said Beast. "Watch it bub" said Wolverine. "Well I have a feeling he was nice or is nice" said Xavier. "Well I aint bub" said Wolverine. "Kurt returned to the curch and he is a priest now" said Cyclops. "Aaah yes Kurt our believer" said Xavier. "And Betsy left us to join the ISA as a spy she is a undercover model" said Bobby. "Betsy"? asked Xavier. "Yes Psylocke the one with purple hair" said Polaris. "Aaah Psylocke, I forgot her real name" said Xavier. "And Emma lives here a telepath to and I am dating her for a while now" said Cyclops. "Emma? Emma Frost she can't be trusted" said Xavier. "Why not"? asked Cyclops. "I don't now that is what my gut says now" said Xavier confused. "Will he be okay"? asked Polaris. "Yes he will he has some amnesia but he knows everything now so I expect he will be feeling better soon" said Beast. Meanwhile in the woods: Rogue flew towards the base and when she arrived Mystique stood there waiting and said: "Rogue how did it go"? "Good till Bobby came again" said Rogue. "You need to learn to forget him and just kill him" said Mystique. "Don't worry momma I will" said Rogue with an evil smile. "Okay Magneto is waiting for you" said Mystique. "Okay where is he"? asked Rogue. "He is waiting at the camp" said Mystique. "Thanks momma" said Rogue and she flew of to the camp. She landed in front of Magneto and he said: "Well how did it go"? "Well something was going on there, Xavier was confused about something and was in shock when I attacked" said Rogue. "Hmmmm and my new found daughter"? asked Magneto. "Well that **** is fine as usual she is enjoying my ex husband so she has her fun" said Rogue. "I would like it if you didn't call my daughter a ****" said Magneto. "Sorry Magneto, your daughter Polaris is fine, but when will you tell her she is your daughter"? asked Rogue. "Soon very soon, Pietro and Wanda are making plans to get their sister back" said Magneto. "Okay, what will be my next mission"? asked Rogue. "You know Xavier and Moira's son right called David well I found out he isn't dead, the babies were switched after birth and his son is living in Scotland I want you to get him and follow him and look what his powers are" said Magneto. "Okay, that is great maybe we can capture him and use him as bate" said Rogue. "Exactly Rogue" said Magneto. "And will I go alone"? asked Rogue. "Yes I need Mystique, Blob, Avalance and Pyro here and I know you can manige yourself very well" said Magneto. "Okay I will go right away" said Rogue and she flew up into the air heading Scotland. Meanwhile in Spain: Psylocke was backstage changing for the runway, this time she was walking in clothes of Klein and had to show a beautiful night dress, but no one knew she was their to get a killer model, who killed three top models who were called Eva, Naima and Joanna and this time Nicole was the ultimate topmodel so Pylocke knew she was the next target. The music of Pyclocke started and she walked up to the runway and walked into the audience and was showing her night dress, she stopped at the and of the runway and made a pose and turned arround walking to the backstage. Nicole was the next one who had to go up and she said: "Well done Betsy". "Thanks" said Psylocke. Nicole walked up and Psylocke started looking arround she didn't see someone act suspicious, but that was just a matter of time, or Nicole would get killed at the afterparty this time. Psylocke quickly changed herself into a bathing suit and walked up to the runway again and made a pose and walked to the backstage again. After that she kept looking but nothing happened and she did all the walks on the runway so the place would be the afterparty that would be the place where Nicole could have been murdered. At the afterpart she felt that something was about to happen and all of a sudden Nicole went to the bathroom and Psylocke followed her and then she heard a scream and she ran into the bathroom and a new model stood in front of her with a knife. Psylocke jumped into the air and grabbed the girl by the shoulders and jumped over her and threw her in the air and said: "Nicole run and get help". "Okay thanks" said Nicole in tears. Psylocke then punched the girl knock out and left her on the floor and took her from the ground and walked her out to the ISA who thanked her for saving Nicole, without saying that she is a spy. Meanwhile in Africa: Ororo, Gambit and Jubilee were at the village of Ororo's daughter Kendall and Ororo yelled: "Marajia are you here"? Marajia came out and said: "Ororo you are here thank god". "Where is Kendall"? asked Ororo. "She is in, the demon got to her I think" said Marajia. "What demon is it"? asked Ororo. "An inner demon, her powers are out of controle the weather here becomes freezing cold not some rain but freeze and then very hot, I tell you Ororo your daughter isn't well" said Marajia. "Well let's go to her" said Ororo. They walked into the cottage of Marajia and Kendall laid there all sweaty. "Kendall" said Ororo. "Don't worry Ororo it will be okay" said Jubilee. "Yes we will help her" said Gambit. "Kendall mom is here, you will be fine" said Ororo. "How old is she"? asked Jubilee. "Almost 17 now I was 19 when I got her and she wasn't well as a baby and my sister Marajia was a lot older so I asked her if she could take care of her" said Ororo. "Oh that is a sad story" said Gambit. Kendall woke up and her eyes were red and said with a deep voice: "Hello Ororo finally you are here". "No not you" said Ororo. "What is it"? asked Jubilee. "That is my inner demon he took controle over Kendall" said Ororo. "Clever" said Kendall and Kendall stood up and her eyes turned normal and her voice to and said: "Mom please help me I can not take this much longer". "Don't worry I will help you" said Ororo. "And so will we" said Gambit. "Yes wel will" said Jubilee. Meanwhile at Vulcano Island: Angel and Magma were laying on the beach and no one looked at them because they were mutants they knew they were here to protect them and they believed in them. "Hey Amara you feel the vulcano"? asked Angel. "No Warren I don't, when I will I will let you know" said Magma. "Aaah okay, how are you feeling" asked Angel. "Not to good, I am very hot it looks like I have a fever or something and I am dizzy, almost like something is wrong that vulcano" said Magma. "Well I think you have a fever Amara cause the vulcano is fine like you just said" said Angel. "I know, but I don't know what this is but something is wrong here I feel it" said Magma. "Don't worry we will be alright" said Angel with a smile. "I know, we will make this all work" said Magma. "Exactly, well shall we go to the hotel and eat someting"? asked Angel. "Yeah good idea I am hungry" said Magma. Meanwhile above Alkalai Lake: Jean was floating there and destroyed the whole lake and said: "My own friend let me die, you all will pay for this mark my words X-Men, and the brotherhood will be killed to and then the whole universe hahaha" said Dark Phoenix laughing. Then Phoenix appearred and she destroyed the whole area and after she did that she vanished into thin air. Meanwhile at the Mansion: "Well I think I got everything back X-Men I can remember bits and pieces we have to stop Jean and Rogue both before we all end up dead".

Meanwhile in the normal reallity:
At the Hellfire Club: All the X-Men walked in and Sebastian said: "Aaah welcome back again, I think you found your dead professor". "So you did it"? asked Rogue. "Yes and we made it look like that you did it Rogue" said Emma. "You little tramp" said Jean angry and she grabbed Emma's hair and gave her a slap in the face. Emma laid on the ground and Jean jumped on her and kept smashing her in the face. Rogue attacked Donals and they were a match for each other cause of their super strength. One by one they started to fight then a door opened and someone came in it was a human with brown reddish hair green brown eyes and arround the 1.80 he said: "So here are you filthy mutants". "And who the hell are you"? asked Logan. "I am Graydon Creed" said Graydon. "What"? said Kurt. "That can't be" said Rogue. "He is our brother"? asked Kurt. Rogue looked at Graydon and said: "Yes, yes he is our brother Kurt". "I am not your brother" said Graydon. "Yes you are, we all have the same mother and we know your father is Victor Creed we know him as Sabertooth" said Kurt. "What"? said Graydon. "Yes both your parents are mutants, we all share the same mother we know as Mystique" said Rogue. "That may be in science, but you both aren't my brother and sister, I will make you all pay for your excistence" said Graydon. "You would kill your own family"? asked Kurt. "Yes with pleasure, I will exterminate the filthy human rase" said Graydon and he turned arround and said: "Count your day mutants". "Now we have even more trouble" said Scott. "This is bad" said Sebastian. "Yeah and it is your fault if you didn't set us up this wouldn't have happened" said Storm. "May be but we will find our way out of it hahahah" laughed Sebastian. "We better go" said Logan. "I agree" said Bobby. And they all quickly ran out and find out what Graydon was up to.

Meanwhile in a lab:
Graydon sat in his lab and said: "Aaah at the conferench I will unleash the power of this diseas hahaha and the X-Men will be the first ones who will get it". He grabbed a bottle with green chemical stuff and putted it in his pocket and he thought: "Family hmph the only family I have are these humans and to those filthy humans". and then he said: "Prepare for your death mutants hahahaha".
 
Another great chapter I don't know how you do them so fast!!! Things are looking pretty
bleak with the Professor in the alternate dimension, the Hellfire Club and now Graydon Creed obviously up to no good
It will be interesting to see how everything comes together
from Z'Cann to Rogue to Betsy to Anna and EVERYTHING!
I wonder what will happen next?!?!? :D
 
Ok MR, take what I'm going to say as contructive critisism.

First, you have alot going on, which is good. You have a nack for essemble writting, another good thing.

Now here are some of the things I think you may want to work on. This is just my opinion, so do with it as you will. Let me say that with all you have going on, you have got to slow down the pacing. Slow it down. A good way to do that is to work on transistions.

That's a key word because that's where most of my qualms lie. With the fast pacing alot of the scenes that are soposed to be emotional aren't. It's forced. It needs to flow. Ususally a way to combat that is to get descriptive, but even some of your descriptive scenes (well done of course) are still a little forced.

Work on chracterizations. Tell us what they do in thier downtime, how it effects them. Give them personality quirks. Make sure they screw up or feel insecure or cocky.

Don't make it so much like a grocery list. Your writting from start to finish. It the destination that your trying to get to. Write the journey and focus on that.

I really appreciate that you took my suggestion, but it seemed forced. Like Logan randomly called her Ororo out of left field for no logical reason. O_o. It also detracted from where that scene was going. I believe the next line was, "Now back to what I was talking about..." That's what I mean. It was random and forced.

Slow it down and work on transistions. Make sure instead of just jumping from on scene to another, make it flow or connect them.

I know that you can do it. So good luck!
 
Hmmm maybe you are right.
My feeling says it is flowing into each other but don't know.
Yeah that line was forced and random but I needed that a little bit I guess, the alternate dimension she always is called Ororo maybe I will make the line different but it was like I needed it, it was planned that Storm would have been called Ororo in the alternate dimension so I need something in the normal one, and I wanted to make you happy I guess but everyone knows her as Storm there not as Ororo I will change it now not because you don't like it but it doesn't fit with me sorry.
I take your critisim and I will see if I use it, but I guess I don't really understand???
If you it because it is all done so fast well I can say everything is in my head and words come to me and I type them down.
 
Its cool. Your doing a good job. In fact my suggestion isn't that you need to take anything out, just add more in and move stuff around. So to me your on the right track.

Btw, my suggestions don't just apply to Ororo/Storm, it really for everyobody. Another case in point would be the last scene you posted with Graydon/Wolverine/Kurt/Rogue.

That was soposed to be emotional, but there was no time for me, a reader to be impacted by it cause it went by so fast. Like other scenes the characters just kinda stood there and accepted what was happening and didn't ask questions.

Here's something that can slow down the pace just a bit

Creed: "I'm Graydon Creed"

Kurt: "Neit! You--you can't be. My blood..."

Creed: "Stupid ugly mutie. I'm human. Your just a mistake. An horrible mishap."

Rogue: No...god please. Ah cain't believe this. LIAR! Kurt, he can't be our brother. [tears slip from her eyes]

Wolverine: He aint the mistaken one around here, bub. I ripped your pa a new one, and I can do it to ya, too.

See. Always make sure show them as people, more than superpeople.

Like I said, you've got a great thing going, I can't wait for more.
 
Hahaha thanks :D

Aaah that last scene will be more in the next chapter problem was if I added more it would be to much for one chapter. I could have left in for the next one but I added a spoiler that nother villain would come well and if I didn;t it would look weird that is why this little short scene.
Their will be more Graydon, Kurt and Rogue in the next one :)
I changed the Ororo line from Logan i really did not like that line so I cutted it out :D
But thanks for the comment and your honesty I like that and now I rewrote that chapter I saw it and didn't like it....
The pacing part I didn't see cause I don't really know what you mean. And if I have goosebumps I am sure I did a good job and I had it with some emotinal scene's appart from the last one with Kurt Graydon and Rogue but next chapter will begin with those three when Kurt and Rogue pay a visit to him
I will call it a writers cut ;)
 
Still, great posting. Can't wait for more. :up: :)
 
Chapter Five: A New Thread.​
​
Normal reallity:
At the Mansion:
Everyone stood arround Xavier's burned body, tears were running over everyone's cheeks till John said: "I don't wanna be disrepectfull, but are we sure this is our professor this body is burned so much that we can not even tell this is him". "Please John, this is him don't give anyone false hope" said Storm. "Wait Storm, he is quite right we all saw that the burning marks aren't right compared with the body" said Jean. "And he also said we weren't in danger, he promised us no one would get killed" said Scott. "He could never no that Scott, he is a telepath but he can not predict the future" said Rogue. "I know, but I think everyone would feel better if we checked him, like an atopsy or something" said Scott. "Yes and we could check his DNA" said Hank. "I think that will give us some clear vision" said Bobby. "I agree" said Polaris. "Exactly we don't know what the Hellfire Club did to him" said Rogue. "If they have them we are in a lot of trouble" said Scott. "Yeah he is the heart of the X-Men and without the heart a body dies and the X-Men will die without him" said Hank. "No, we are X-Men in good and bad times, we fight for the professor's idea's" said Rogue. "Yes even when he is gone" said Jean. "Okay Jean and Hank I want you both examening this body" said Scott. "Okay we will get right ahead" said Hank. They both putted on their doctors clothes and took the body with them to the lab.
Everyone looked at each other and Psylocke said: "And what about the rest"? "We all stay here except for two other people" said Scott. "Who"? asked Magma. "I want Rogue and Kurt to go to their brother Graydon and find out what he plans" said Scott. "No I am sorry but I can't do that, he may be my brother but he doesn't show any emotion" said Kurt shocked. "He is planning something Scott, what if something happens"? asked Rogue with a tear in her eye. "That is it Rogue, I want to know what he is up to something told me last night that something was wrong that is why I want you and Kurt in Washington" said Scott like a real leader. "Okay we will do it, come on Kurt you always wanted to know your brother now is the chance to really get to know him" said Rogue. "But only the two of us"? asked Kurt still uncertain about the whole thing. "Yes, you three are family and everyone knows that is important" said Scott. "Okay and when do we gotta go"? asked Rogue. "Best is now, we will update you with the body situation" said Scott. "Okay Kurt let's get our uniforms" said Rogue, and she kissed Bobby and her kids and walked of with Kurt.
Jean and Hank came into the lab with Hank following her with the body and Hank said: "Okay I will take some skin of him and some blood so I can fully look through his DNA". "Yes and I will cut him open and see what the real cause of dead is, after that I will examin the skin so I can say how it really is burned" said Jean. "That is a great idea" said Hank. Hank picked up a scapel and cutted of a little piece of skin and putted it under a microscope, and after that he took some blood out of him and putted some under another microscope. Jean took another scapel and cutted the cest open and looked at the heart and said: "Well his heart is in perfect condition for his age". "Aaaah well I cant say I am suprised about that" said Hank with a soft smile. "Well neither can I" said Jean smiling. Jean looked at his longs and they were in good state to, she opened up the lower body and opened the stomach and looked shocked and said: "Their should be food in the stomach, this one is empty and I mean really empty, like he never ate a thing". "That is impossible, he ate the evening of his death check his bowels" said Hank. "I am going to do that immediatly, did you find something already"? asked Jean. "Hmmmm not yet, although the skin looks weird, it isn't burned by someone's powers that is for sure" said Hank. "Okay keep looking while I open his bowels" said Jean. "Yes I will test his blood for DNA first" said Hank and he stood up and putted some blood in a machine while the machine checked the blood he continued with the skin. Jean opened up the bowels and she couldn't believe what she was seeing it was empty, clean empty what wasn't possible. "And what did you find"? asked Hank. "Nothing, the bowels are clean empty" said Jean shocked while she looked at Hank. "Okay well we know now that something is wrong with this body maybe it is better you check the skin to" said Hank. "You are right I will close him and look at the skin then" said Jean. Jean closed him up and the machine started beeping and Hank said: "Well we will get some confermation now about his DNA". "Data came out the printer and Hank studied it and said: "It is Xavier's DNA, but it is manipulated this isn't his right DNA". "What could it be"? asked Jean. "Well I have only one solution and that is that he is cloned by Sinister after he was made a Horsemen" said Hank. "Hank that could be the answer to all of our questions, John was right isn't he this isn't the real Charles Xavier" said Jean with a lot of hope. "Yes Jean I am almost a 100% sure this is a clone but we have to do some extra tests" said Hank. "Okay lets get going then" said Jean happy.

Meanwhile at Washington DC:
Rogue landed the X-Jet at the the top of a management building they walked out and Kurt holded Rogue and they bamfed onto the streets. "And are you ready"? asked Rogue with a soft smile. "No not really, I am affraid Rogue" said Kurt. "What for Kurt"? asked Rogue. "He looks evil, his eyes are full of hate against us, did you not feel it, I was afraid to say anything to him and I have that feeling again" said Kurt really scared. "Hey look at me, don't worry we have each other and that is something that really counts he doesn't have real relatives, not like we are siblings" said Rogue with a smile. "I know" said Kurt. "We will see what happens, we need to do this, he may be evil but if he is we have to stop him" said Rogue. "But can we kill our own brother"? asked Kurt. "Course we can't, he is our brother no matter what, but the others can and we wont blame them cause we all are family" said Rogue with a smile. "Yes you are right" said Kurt with a smile. "Okay then lets get in to his office" said Rogue and they walked of to Graydons office inside a lab where he was currently working on a project.
They walked into the lab and Rogue said: "Graydon are you here? Kurt and I want to talk to you". Graydon came walking out of a little door and said: "Aaah hello brother and sister, what is it that you want"? asked Graydon. "We just want to talk to you" said Kurt. "Yes and what you said about yesterday" said Rogue. "Aaaah my plan to destroy all the mutants" said Graydon with a smile. "Please don't, you are our brother and we love and respect you, why this hate for mutants while your whole family are mutants"? asked Kurt with tears in his eyes. "Don't you understand, I am not a mutant for a reason, I had to be a mutant cause of my bloodline but I am not cause I need to exterminate you all" said Graydon sounding a bit sad but also determent. "Maybe it just happened because you are the voice of the people to say that mutants are the same as normal human beings" said Rogue. "But you aren't the same, please don't you understand you all are humans but human filth, you all have a disseas" said Graydon. "No we aren't my brother, we are simpel humans with an X-Gene" said Kurt looking at Graydon. "You keep telling that to yourself but I know better" said Graydon. "You mother and father are mutants, don't you love them"? asked Rogue. "Love? hahaha that is the best one I ever heard, no I don't love them" said Graydon. "Your father is dead, he died cause he is the same like you but he wanted to exterminate the humans and so does our mother she is dead now but she is just like your father, and that makes you the same as them Graydon" said Rogue. "Shut up, SHUT UP, I am not the same as them I am different I will succeed, you all will be history mark my words" said Graydon angry. "Could you kill your brother and sister? and you 2 year old niece and your baby nephew"? asked Rogue. "Well it may be hard to do but I will succeed, I will succeed where my parents failed" said Graydon. "They are dead, you could be a role model, you really want to be a killer of thousands of innocent people"? asked Kurt with a tear running over his cheeck. "They are not innocent they became mutants and choose for it embrassed it, that was their mistake" said Graydon. "No they just accepted the people they are, normal people with gifts, we are not all evil" said Rogue. "Oh you mean like mom and my dad, well I respect them for what they did and now it is up to me to finish it, but my target group will be mutants and not humans" said Graydon with an evil smile. "Please don't" said Kurt. "Yes I will" said Graydon. "What are you up to then"? asked Rogue aah you will see soon" said Graydon. "You are making a mistake" said Kurt. "Well I know one thing, if you did this to humans she would be very proud" said Rogue looking at Graydon like he wasn't worth looking at. "Aaah speaking of mom" said Graydon. He walked to a closet and opened it and grabbed a big piece of stone. "Mother" said Kurt. "Yes, I tested her and she is alive in this thing" said Graydon. "How did you get her"? asked Rogue angry. "Aaah I found the brotherhood and stole this from them she isn't of use for them" said Graydon. "And she is to you"? asked Kurt confused. "Yes I am going to use her as a guinea-pig and run some tests on her, altough she isn't the first one I already poisened a mutant kid on the streets she should be dead now" said Graydon. "You are an animal, what kind of tests do you mean"? asked Kurt. Graydon pulled a bottle with fluid out of his pocket and said: "Well this is a disseas made by me, and I have to test it and who else is better than my own mother hahaha". "No" yelled Rogue and Kurt. They both grabbed the stone and Graydon grabbed it to, then something happened that they couldn't believe. There was a big bolt of light arround them all and the stone started screaming and all of stone dissapearred and Mystique appearred as her normal self and fell on the ground.
"Mother are you okay"? asked Kurt concerned. "Kurt"? asked Mystique confused. "Yes mother I am here, so are Rogue and Graydon" said Kurt. "What all my children"? asked Mystique with joy in her voice. "Don't be to happy mother cause I will destroy you all" said Graydon. "What Graydon, what happened, you all touched me that is why I am normal again" said Mystique. "Could be, but it wasn't really planned" said Rogue. "I guessed not seen that you all hate my guts" said Mystique sad. "We don't hate you mother we hate your choices" said Kurt. "Speak for yourself" said Rogue. "Aaah a sibling who agrees, maybe I will spare you" said Graydon with a grin. "Please, I will kick your butt if you try to hurt me or some of my relatives" said Rogue. "Well it isn't your time yet, first it is mom" said Gradon and he threw the bottle towards Mystique. "Mom" said Kurt and he pushed her away but the bottle broke in front of him and the fluid hitted him, he fell on the floor and laid there uncounsious. "Kurt no" said Mystique. "Kurt"? said Rogue, but Kurt didn't make a move and Rogue kneeled besides him and checked his pulse and said: "He is alive". "But not for long the disseas that hitted him will kill him slowly" said Graydon. "No, why did you do this"? asked Rogue in tears. "You gotta do what you gotta do, see ya" said Graydon and he ran of. "Graydon come back please" said Mystique. "Woman stop yelling and help me get Kurt out of here" said Rogue angry. Mystique grabbed his legs and said: "Thank you for giving my life back". "Well don't thank me cause if I was concerned you would stay the same as you were" said Rogue.
When they came out Mystique said: "Where is the X-Jet"? "On the roof I will fly him their" said Rogue. "And what about me"? asked Mystique. "What about you"? asked Rogue confused. "Can I come"? asked Mystique. "Well I can give you a ride, but you are not coming with me to the mansion, join Magneto again if you want, but leave us alone" said Rogue. "Okay, I will go and you can drop me in the woods" said Mystique. "Okay get in then, and if you pull any stunt I will throw you out of the Jet" said Rogue. Mystique turned into a raven and flew to the roof and Rogue flew to the roof with Kurt in her arms.
Rogue took a seat and started the X-Jet. "Okay we are of to go" said Rogue. "Okay drop me in the woods near the Mansion where we had a camp when we were about to fight Stryker" said Mystique. "Okay I will, just keep your eye on Kurt while I keep an eye on the sky and you" said Rogue. Then the X-Phone rang and Rogue putted it on intercom and said: "Rogue here". "Rogue this is Scott, how did it go"? asked Scott. "Not good, Kurt in injured with a lethal disseas, Mystique is back because of the touch of her kids she is here now but I will drop her of in the woods" said Rogue. "No, this is really bad, drop her and bring Kurt here as soon as possible" said Scott. "I will what did Jean and Hank say"? asked Rogue. "That is good news, it isn't Xavier, it is a clone we will go after the Hellfire Club as soon as we find them" said Scott. "Okay that is great news Scott, I will be there soon" said Rogue and she shutted of the intercom. "Well you can drop me here" said Mystique. Rogue landed the Jet and Mystique got out and said: "Thank you Rogue we will see each other soon". "Well lets hope not" said Rogue and she closed the door and flew towards the Mansion.
 
At the Hellfire club:
Everyone sat in the lounge and Sage said: "So can we check them out their some time"? "No we can't cause we will take the place of ourselves there, that is risky so we just have to wait till Casandra can make contact with the alternate reallity" said Sebastian. "To bad, I wanna see Xavier go insane" said Emma. "Well we all want to see that but it is imposible" said Sebastian. "Nothing is imposible" said Donals. "Well it is, we all could be dead there, if we are we will be dead to" said Casandra on a warning tone. "Aaah that is not something I want" said Ellie. "Neither do we, but Casandra is a well developed telepath she will find a way to see how he feels there" said Sebastian grinning. "Exactly hahaha" laughed Casandra.
Sinister looked like he felt something and said: "I have the feeling something is about to happen". "Yes so do I, I have the feeling the X-Men know that it wasn't Xavier's real body" said Emma concentrating. "If they do we are in trouble" said Sebastian. "Can you locate them"? asked Trevor. "Yes please shut up so I can concentrate" said Emma. Emma concentrated and she felt that the X-Men knew and that Graydon wants to kill the whole mutant population, she opened her eyes and everyone looked at her. "And what did you feel"? asked Sebastian. "That Graydon Creed is spreading a lethal disseas he already infected one of the X-Men, and Jean and Hank found out that it isn't the real body of Xavier but a clone" said Emma shocked.
Sebastian looked at all the others and said: "So Graydon Creed is planning to kill us all isn't he well I wish him good luck with that, he isn't a mutant we can kill him in a heartbeat". "But what about the X-Men they found out it isn't Xavier, they will come after us" said Ellie. "Hmmm I think we better find ourselves another place to stay" said Sebastian. "We can go to Muir Island, they don't know about the where abouts of it and it is a good place to stay" said Sinister. "Yes I like the idea, it's a lab and a place to stay isn't it"? asked Sebastian. "Yes that is correct" said Sinister. "Aaah that is good, Graydon can't poisen us and the X-Men don't know where to find us, we leave now" said Sebastian. "I agree, let's pack our stuff and go" said Emma.
After a couple of minutes everyone was all set to go and Sebastian said: "I will miss this place, but I think it is better we leave". "Of course it is, the whole place could be destroyed in the fights" said Trevor. "I agree, well we will be back soon though victory will be ours soon" said Sebastian. "How do we go"? asked Ellie. "With the limo of course" said Sebastian. They all walked to the exit and the doors already opened before they were there. It were the X-Men and Scott said: "Are we going somewhere"?

Meanwhile in the alternate reality:
In Scotland:
Rogue was walking in the city and looked arround for and looked at the picture of David. "Hello Sir did you see this young man"? asked Rogue to someone on the streets. "No Mam I don't recocknize him" said the man. "Okay thank you" said Rogue and she walked further asking people about David till she asked a woman who said: "That is my son David, what did he do?"what do you want from him"? "Oh he didn't do anything wrong but I need to talk to him" said Rogue. "Well he is in the house you can come with me, but I need to say he is an agressive kid" said the woman. "Thank you, well that isn't a problem I can handle him, my name is Rogue by the way" said Rogue. "I am Molly" said Molly and they shook hands. "Pleased to meet you" said Rogue. "Same here" said Molly, and they both walked of to Molly's and David's house.
Rogue came to a beautiful villa and said: "Wow what a nice house". "Thank you, David doesn't love it he wants to be normal" said Molly. "Normal huh" said Rogue thinking he was talking about his mutant abbilities. "Yeah I don't know what he means about it" said Molly. They walked into the house and Molly yelled: "David some company for you". "Send him up" yelled David back. "Well it is the second room on the right" said Molly. "Okay and thank you for the hospitality" said Rogue. "That is okay" said Molly, and Rogue walked upstairs.
Rogue came to the second room on the right and walked in the door. David sat on the couch, he looked like Moira with thick brown hair, brown eyes and a slim figur. "Hi" said David. "Hi, I am Rogue" said Rogue. "Yeah hi, David's the name". "I talked to ya mom, she said you wanna be normal, were you talking about this great villa or about that you are a mutant"? asked Rogue. "What how do you know"? asked David. "I am a mutant to, so what are your powers"? asked Rogue. "I can shapeshift into other humans who excist and I am a telepath that can make my thoughts come true till a certain extend" said David proud. "Aaah telepathic like your father" said Rogue. "My parents aren't mutants" said David. "Yes your biological father is" said Rogue. "What you know my real parents"? asked David. "Yes, I was a student of your father until he betrayed me, he lied so I crossed over to the other side" said Rogue. "Aaaah like that, well he left me so he is no good to me" said David. "Exactly and I am here to ask you if you wanna join me and the Brotherhood Of Evil Mutants" said Rogue. "Aaah I understand you wanna use me to trick my father" said David. "Clever boy" said Rogue with an evil smile. "Well however I am in" said David smiling evil to. "Ke then so ready to leave with me"? "Yes let me pack some stuff" said David. "And I will go downstairs and tell your mom that you will leave with me because you wanted my help" said Rogue. "Sure" said David and he started packing. Rogue walked downstairs.
She came in the living Room where Molly sat and she said: "Molly, David will leave with me, I was here cause he wanted my help to be nicer and less agressive". "What really? Right this way"? asked Molly with a tear in her eye. "Yes" said Rogue. "No I won't let him leave" said Molly with a tear. "Shut up with the crying" yelled Rogue. "What"? said Molly shocked. "Shut up or I will make this more painful for you" said Rogue with an evil look. "What are you"? asked Molly. "If you don't watch it I am your worst nightmare" said Rogue. "What do you want of David"? asked Molly. "He knows what to do" said Rogue. "No please leave him alone" said Molly desperate. "You will say goodbye to him and won't make a sound or else you will never see him again" said Rogue. "Okay, I will do what you ask but don't hurt him" said Molly crying. "Don't worry I won't" said Rogue. David came downstrairs and said: "Well goodbye mom and don't worry I will be alright, I know what I am doing". "Be careful my son" said Molly. "I will mom thanks for everything" said David and he gave his mom a big hug. David walked out the door and when he left the courtyard Molly wanted to run after him but Rogue touched her and Molly fell on the floor and was uncounsious, and Rogue followed David to the plane and they left to go seek revenge against his father and her old mentor.

Meanwhile at the Mansion:
Xavier sat at his desk with an blind Cyclops and Xavier said: "Okay I made a plan Cyclops, I want the kids to go home, this isn't a safe place anymore with Dark Phoenix and Rogue". "I think you are right professor" said Cyclops. "And I also think it will be better that you leave to, you are to fragile at the moment, we all know you will get your eyesight back, but you are in danger if you don't" said Xavier. "I don't wanna leave you professor, we all are in danger" said Cyclops. "Yes true, but we are in greater danger if you stay we have you blind so that will be dangerous for all of us" said Xavier. "I guess that is true but where do I have to go? my powers can come back I will danger people if it does" said Cyclops. "I thought about that and I will send you to Scotland with Moira and she will take care of you and your eyes, your plane will leave soon" said Xavier. "So I guess it is time I pack and leave" said Cyclops. "Yes the children are packing to, I already sended them a telepathic message we will say goodbye in an hour" said Xavier. Cyclops left and Xavier looked out the window thinking about what happened to his precious X-Men.
An hour later everyone stood in the courtyard and said goodbye to everyone else. "Don't worry children we all will be back soon, but this is nesecary at the momet" said Xavier. Everyone hugged the professor and left one by one till there was no one left accept for Cyclops Hank, Polaris and Bobby. Cyclops stood in front of Xavier and hugged him with some help of Moira. "I will see you soon" said Cyclops. "I hope so Cyclops" said Xavier. "I know I will, and if I do I will be back for some fighting to" said Cyclops. "Moira take good care of him please" said Xavier. "Course I will Charles, don't worry about that he will be save with me" said Moira. "I know you will take good care" said Xavier and he hugged Moira to. Then Moira and Cyclops left to catch their plane.Bobby, Hank and Polaris walked in again and left Xavier alone in the yard. Xavier had a tear in his eye and said: "Ooh where does this lead us I have lost almost every loved one I lost my X-Men".
 
Wow so
sad!!! I feel like the end of "The Empire Strikes Back" where everything feels so bleak....Xavier stuck in the alternate dimension with alternate blind Cyclops with alternate evil Rogue and Dark Phoenix out there, and everyone gone except a few....AE (alt. evil) Rogue and David plotting revenge....Nightcrawler infected with Graydon Creed's disease.........and possibly poor Z'Cann is infected as well? My only hopeful feeling is about the real X-Men confronting the Hellfire Club as they are about to leave to Muir Island, but how will they be able to overcome so many obstacles??? What will happen with AE Rogue? Now that Bobby is dating Polaris does their love transcend alternate dimensions? Will there ever be happiness in Rogue's family with her siblings and mother? So many questions again..........
Can't wait for next one!! :D
 
:eek: So much suspense... Cyclops blind, Dark Phoenix.. I love it! More. :)
 
Thank you TKing and PhoenixRisen :D
There will be more soon I hope,
I am just caught up by homework Iew :(
But I will do my best to post one more chapter this week
Hope you like it to GoddesReicho
One spoiler for you all

Someone from the previous books returns again ;)
 
Chapter Six: Who Will Survive​
​
At the normal reality:
At the Hellfire Club:
"Well are you going somewhere"? asked Rogue angry. "Well yes, gotta problem with that"? asked Sebastian. "Well as a matter of fact I do" said Scott. "Yeah you all have some explaining to do" said Logan. "Aaah do we"? asked Emma. "Yes we found out that the body wasn't the professor, and the only explanation is that you have him" said Jean. "Well do you see him here? please how do we have to get him here"? asked Casandra. "We don't know but we do know that you have him" said Jubilee. "We don't and now go out of our way or else someone will get hurt" said Donals. "Yeah and that will be you" said Rogue and she attacked Donals who grabbed her but the arm and threw her through a wall.

Scott looked at the other X-Men and said: "Attack". Jean immediatly attacked Emma who diamond up and smashed Jean to the ground and said: "Please you can not handle me". "You sure about that"? asked Jean and she looked up to Emma and her eyes turned red and a Phoenix surrounded her. "Aaaah you call in the Phoenix" said Emma. Jean flew up into the air and used her her telekinetic flames to surround Emma. Emma walked through the flames and said: "I am of diamond little girl, I can handle your powers". Jean got really angry and said: "Handle this" and created a telekinetic storm who punched Emma of her feet, then got smashed in the air, smashed onto the ground and then through a wall.

Jubilee and Angel looked at Ellie and Jubilee said: "It was you who sended those people at us". "Clever little girl bravo" said Ellie grinning and she sended a telepatic wave at Angel and Jubilee. Angel grabbed Jubilee and threw his wings in front of them, the telepathic wave hitted the wings but no harm was done. Jubilee jumped in front of the wings and threw some energy balls at Ellie who dodged them all and threw another telepatic wave at Jubilee. Jubilee jumped behind Angels wings. "What now she dodged all of my energy balls" said Jubilee. "I have an idea if you are not affraid of flying" said Angel. "I am not affraid so what is the plan"? asked Jubilee. "Well we fly into the air and you will throw some energy balls at her, she will dodge them probably but then I will fly above the ground and you will jump on the floor while I chase her, and then you will suprise her with your energy balls" said Angel. "Good thinking lets do it" said Jubilee. Angel threw his wings back and grabbed Jubilee and flew into the air. "What are you planning"? asked Ellie. Jubilee threw some energy balls at Ellie and as Angel predicted she dodged them all. Angel flew low to the ground and released Jubilee and chased Ellie who threw a telekinetic wave that hitted Angel who fell on the ground. But in the mean time Jubilee created a high volt enegery ball with all her power and chased Ellie and threw it in her face. Ellie was blown backwards through the wall beside Emma.

Hank and Gambit faced Sinister who said: "You foolish X-Men, the end is near for you all". Hank jumped threw the air and kicked Sinister on the chest who flew backwards by it. He got up and threw some force bolts at Gambit who jumped on the ground and threw some kintetic cards to Sinister that exploded in front of him and threw him on the ground again. He got up again and created a force shield and then threw some force bolts at Gambit again he dodged the first two but he didn't see the third one and that hitted him in the back and blew him into a wall. Hank jumped in front of Sinister and smashed an kicked on the force shield but it dind't help and he didn't see a little opening to destroy the force shield. "Your powers are in vein, you can not deffeat me Hank you can always try but why waste the time" said Sinister smiling. "Well I will try, I am doing everything I can for my friends" said Hank angry. Then Hank used all of his strength and smashed onto the force shield, the force schield exploded and Hank and Sinister were blown away and landed on the floor both uncounsious.

Pslylocke, Polaris and Magma faced Sage who looked at them and said: "Aaaah well I analysed you all and I know your every move and abbility so you can try to fight me but I will win". "Keep dreaming" said Amara and then Amara became fire, Polaris surrounded herself with her force field and Psylocke's psi blades appeared. "Please you all will attack at the same time, Amara will create fire, Polaris will throw some magnetic bolts and then Psylocke will attack me with her psi blades" said Sage. Psylocke looked at Polaris and Amara and said: "Okay how does she know our plan"? "I told you, I analysed you all and your moves and techniques" said Sage. "Okay everyone for itself now, we will see what happens but she knows our teamwork so we all will fight for ourselves now" said Amara. Psylocke and Polaris nodded and Amara made the first move by flying into the air and creating a rain of lava. Then Psylocke dissappeared into the shadows and Polaris threw some magnetic bolts at Sage. Sage made a jumpstart and dodged every move, but she didn't see Psylocke and looked everywhere for her. Psylocke reappearred again behind her and cutted Sage her legs with her psi blades. Sage fell on the ground and Polaris threw a big magnetic bolt at her what threw her on the ground also uncounsious. "Well this was teamwork to so she should analyse better next time" said Amara.

Rogue and Bobby where fighting Donals and he said: "I am part machanic you can not hurt me I am super powerful". "Guess again, I have super strength and fire power" said Rogue. "And I can freeze your ass of" said Bobby. "You always can try" said Donals. "We will" said Bobby and he looked at Rogue who nodded with the meaning I know what to do. Rogue flew in the air and her eyes looked like they were on fire and she created a fire whirlwind and rushed towards Donals and sucked him in. Rogue quicly flew out of the fire whirlwind and Bobby iced up and forze the whole whirlwind. Rogue shatered the ice but Donals was still alive. "How can this be"? asked Rogue. "Don't know but this is really bad" said Bobby. Donals ran towards Rogue and punched her through the wall. Then he rushed to Bobby who jumped into the air and gave Donals a spinning kick in the stomach and Donals fell on the ground. Bobby quickly froze him in and looked at the frozen body and walked up to Rogue who just got up. "Good job tiger" said Rogue. "Thanks" said Bobby. All of a sudden the frozen body started shaking and the ice was shatered, Donals got up and rushed to Bobby and gave him a smash and sended him through the air. Rogue quickly flew into the air and catched Bobby. They landed on the ground and Rogue whispered: "Okay we need to do something, if you only freeze his legs on the ground I can punch him with all my strength". "Good idea, okay lets go" said Bobby. Donals came running at them and Bobby made a road of ice and Donals fell on the ground against the wall, he stood up and that was Bobby's cue and he froze Donals his feet to the floor and Rogue came flying at him at top speed and punched him as hard as she could. One leg broke off and the other came free he fell through the wall and laid on the ground uncounsious.

Kitty and Colossus stood in front of Trevor and he said: "Come close and I will drain all your life energy". "Good luck I will phase right through it" said Kitty. "And I will smash you down" said Colossus. "Aaah brute strength ey, I can handle that" said Trevor. Colossus mettaled up and ran towards him and punched him in the air. Trevor landed on his feet and grabbed Colossus his neck. Light came out of Colossus and he screamed in pain. "Pete NO" yelled Kitty in tears. Colossus kept screaming and screaming and he fell on the floor and the metal dissappeared. Kitty ran to Colossus and checked his pulse, she first didn't feel anything and she cried, but then she felt a soft pulse. Kitty stood up and let out a big scream and light appeared arround her. She could feel her phasing power growing and she phased herself invisable and she reappeared in front of Trevor. The bright light blinded him completely and she phased into the body of Trevor. Trevor started screaming and screaming, he was suffecated by Kitty and she phased out of the body again and Trevor fell on the ground. "Say goodbye" said Kitty and she phased her hands through Trevors chest and grabbed his heart and held it tight till it stopped beating. Trevors scream was still in the room like an echo. The light dissappeared arround Kitty and she fell on the ground feeling very exhausted.

Storm, Logan and Scott were fighting Casandra and Sebastian. "Chaos is near except it, embrase it" said Casandra smiling. "Embrase this" said Storm and lightning came out of her hands and surrounded Casandra and then hitted her. Casandra let out a scream but used a telepathic wave and lightning was blown away. Logan ran towards Sebastian and they started fighting. Logan putted his claws into Sebastians back and Sebastian screamed in pain. Logan jumped backwards and Scott used his optic blasts to blow Sebastian away and he landed next to Emma, Ellie and the other who all just came by. Storm struck Casandra with lightning and sended her flying and also landed next to the others.

They all stood up and Casandra looked at Trevor and said: "He is dead Sebastian we can not win now". "I think you are right Casandra" said Sebastian. The X-Men all stood in front of them excpet Colossus cause he was in critical condition. "Now where is the professor"? asked Scott. "Somewhere where you will never find him" said Sebastian smiling. "Tell us where he is" said Rogue. Sebastian looked back and whispered: "Okay every telepath cause a telepathic wave and send it to them". The telepaths nodded and Emma, Ellie and Casandra let out a scream of power and a telepathic wave was send at the X-Men. It was to big to dodge it and they were all send backwards through the walls. The building started to shake and Sebastian yelled: "Get out of here the building is about to fall appart. The Hellfire Club all ran out at high speed and left the X-Men there. The came outside and the building fell appart on the X-Men. "Well we won after all hahaha" said Casandra laughing. "Yes the X-Men are gone now hahaha" said Sebastian. "Finally" said Emma smiling. "Okay lets go to Muir Island and we will work on the transporter machine now Trevor is dead" said Sebastian. Everyone nodded and they took a car and left to Muir Island.

Meanwhile in the alternate reallity:
At the Mansion:
Xavier and Polaris sat in Xaviers office and Xavier said: "You never told me where Kitty and Colossus are, are they on vacation or something"? There was an awfull long silence and Xavier looked at Polaris having the feeling that something was wrong. "Professor, I don't know how to tell you this, but Kitty and Colossus are dead" said Polaris with a tear in her eye. "What"? asked Xavier shocked. "They died a week ago we just had their funeral, the Hellfire Club killed them when they were together on a mission" said Polaris. "No, the Hellfire Club, I heard of them but I can not remember" said Xavier. "Yeah the plan was to kill you that is how you know them, they are a group of people who want Chaos in our world, and in the mutant world they have Chaos we lost Rogue, Kitty, Colossus and Kurt being a priest and all" said Polaris. A tear ran down om Xaviers cheeck and he said: "I am losing everyone I love". Polaris hugged Xavier and said: "Don't worry professor we will make it all right". "I wanna go to their grave and say goodbye" said Xavier. "But professor you did that" said Polaris sad. "No I didn't at least not that I remember, please bring me there" said Xavier. "Okay then, lets go professor" said Polaris. And she grabbed their coats and left the office.
 
At Magneto's hide out:
Rogue and David came to the hide out and Magneto, Mystique, Blob, Avalance and Pyro were all waiting on them. "David this is our leader Magneto also known as Eric" said Rogue. "Hello my boy, welcome to the brotherhood I guess Rogue told you all about our plan" said Magneto. "Yes and I am know as Legion, that is my mutant name I can create fire and I am a telepath who can shapeshift into other humans, kind of reallity warping is something of me but I need to extend that" said David. "Very interesting powers, we can use that all" said Magneto. "And who are those"? asked David. "I am Mystique I can shapeshift into humans and animals" said Mystique. "I am Blob and I am invulnerable and I am super strong" said Blob. "I am Avalance and I controle the earth, I can make earthquakes and all" said Avalance. "And I am Pyro I can manipulate fire" said Pyro. "Hmmmm I will like it here, so when we gonna attack Xavier"? asked David. "Soon my child very soon" said Magneto smiling. Then they heard someone in the woods. "Show yourself" said Pyro.

The Hellfire Club came out of the woods it were Sebastian, Ellie, Casandra, Donals, Sage, Emma, Sinister and another unknown woman. "What are you doing here"? asked Magneto. "We come to claim someone" said Sebastian. "Who is that woman"? asked Rogue all of a sudden. "This is our leader her name is Lady Deck" said Sebastian. "Hahaha Lady Deck? what kind of name is that"? asked Pyro laughing. "We all are known as the Black or White King or Queen and that means cards, and a deck is every card that is her leader name" said Sebastian angry. "Ow" said Blob. "What do you want you wont get this boy" said Magneto. "He is not the one we want to claim" said Sebastian. "Who is it then"? asked Mystique. "We want Rogue" said Lady Deck. "What I wont join you all no matter what you do or have" said Rogue angry standing ready to fight. "Even not for your daughter"? asked Sinister. Rogue looked shocked and said with tears in her eyes: "Anna is dead, you can't bring her back". "Ooh she isn't dead" said Lady Deck. "What how"? asked Rogue crying. "I kidnapped her, and brought a dead clone to you all and I putted her in a machine that would age her" said Sinister. "What where is she"? asked Rogue. "I am here mother" said Anna. "Anna....."? said Rogue shocked. "Yes mother I want you to join me and become The Black Queen, you will be my right hand so we can destroy the brotherhood and the X-Men" said Anna. "No this can't be I held you in my arms you were dead" said Rogue crying. "That was a dead clone" said Sinister again. "You took away my child" said Rogue angry. "No mother I am here, I will always be with you if you just join me" said Anna. "And your father? you really want to kill him"? asked Rogue. "Yes he left you when you needed him the most" said Anna. "Anna.... I don't know" said Rogue. "No Rogue don't" said Mystique. "Shut up grams" said Anna. "I am..... in" said Rogue and she walked over to Anna and hugged her. "Good choice mom" said Anna. "No" said Magneto and the brotherhood wanted to attack but Anna started glowing and a Dark Phoenix appeared and she used a telekinetic wave and sended them all flying. "Lets go mom" said Anna. And Rogue walked away with all of them now a member of the Hellfire Club. "Who will survive this"? asked Magneto before he collapsed.

Meanwhile at the normal reallity:
At the Hellfire Club:
All the X-Men laid under the building and all of a sudden a hand came up and got out of all the stones and looked arround. It was Rogue she was all scratched, dirty and her suit was ripped appart. "Bobby where are you"? yelled Rogue in tears. She heard a voice that was in pain she immediatly flew to the voice and pulled of all the stones it was Hank. "Oh my god Hank are you okay"? asked Rogue. Hank nodded a bit and closed his eyes. "Don't worry I will take you out and put you somewhere save and then I have to look for the others" said Rogue. "Okay Rogue, thank you" said Hank. Rogue got Hank out and laid him on the streets. Rogue flew back to the building and saw a hand under all the stones and the roof. Rogue grabbed the roof and pulled it of and then took all the stones of. It were Scott and Jean they were both uncounsious and scratched. Rogue grabbed them and laid them next to Hank. "How are they"? asked Hank. "They are alive" said Rogue and immediatly flew back. She started digging amd digging she saw to other people and got them out it were Angel and Jubilee. Jubilee was in bad shape and Angel woke up. "Thank you Rogue where are the others"? asked Angel. "I found some and Hank is okay, Jean and Scott are uncounsious and as you see Jubilee is in bad shape she is bleeding" said Rogue crying. She took them in her arms and flew to Hank who was up his feet. "Hank Jubilee is in bad shape she is bleeding a lot" said Rogue crying. "Okay lay her down here" said Hank. Jubilee was laid on the ground and Hank said: "I have to stop the bleeding". Angel sat next to him and held Jubilee's hand. "Shall I help"? asked Angel. "No you are in bad shape to I have super strength so I can do it quicker" said Rogue and she flew back again.

Kitty phased through the ground with tears in her eyes. "Kitty you are okay" yelled Rogue happy. "Rogue, help me please Colossus isn't well" yelled Kitty. "Where is he"? asked Rogue. "Right here, under all the stones" said Kitty in tears. Rogue got all the stones of of him and quickly grabbed him and flew to Hank. "His pulse is weak" said Rogue. "Okay we have to leave now, Colossus and Jubilee need medical help that I only can provide at the Mansion" said Hank. "Okay Kitty I need you here if you can stay, and Angel you have to ride the X-Jet and take Hank and the others to the Mansion and then I need you here immediatly" said Rogue. "Okay I will" said Angel. "And I will stay and help" said Kitty still in tears. "We will see each other soon, may god bless us all" said Hank. And they quickly took of to the X-Jet.

Rogue and Kitty looked at each other and Kitty said: "I will phase through this all and you can start digging". "I agree and if you find someone call me and I will help get the stones off of them" said Rogue. "Yes I will" said Kitty and she started phasing through the ground. Rogue flew to the pile of stones and started digging. After a couple of minutes Kitty phased above the ground and said: "I have found Polaris, Logan, Storm and Psylocke". "And Bobby"? asked Rogue. "No sorry not yet" said Kitty. Rogue flew to her and started throwing of all the stones and yes Storm and Logan laid next to each other and Psylocke and Polaris to. They both grabbed two and laid them on the street. Logan came arround and said: "What happened"? We all are hurt pretty bad and you better start healing" said Rogue. "I already did but I still have pain" said Logan. "Okay sorry Logan watch them we still are missing a few" said Rogue in tears. "Who"? asked Logan. "Bobby, Magma and Gambit" said Rogue in tears. "Go kid I will watch them" said Logan. Kitty and Rogue got back immediatly. Kitty phased through the ground again and Rogue started digging again. "Rogue I found some" yelled Kitty. "Let this be Bobby to" said Rogue to herself. "Who"? asked Rogue. "Gambit and Magma they are in bad shape" said Kitty. "Bobby where are you"? yelled Rogue in tears. "Calm Rogue I will look for him now if you get these two out now" said Kitty. Rogue immediatly flew to the place and started digging them up and Kitty immediatly phased through the ground to look for Bobby. Rogue got Gambit and Magma out and laid them on the streets next to Storm and Logan and the others. Then she heared the X-Jet that meant that Angel was back and that she had to find Bobby now. "Kitty any sign of Bobby"? yelled Rogue. Kitty came through the ground and said: "No sorry". "Bobby give me a sign where you are" yelled Rogue in tears and fell on the ground. Kitty hugged her and said: "I am so sorry Rogue" said Kitty. Rogue saw a some ice in front of her and said: "Bobby...."? and she got up and followed the ice it stopped under a pile of stones and she smashed everything away and she could hear Bobby scream: "Rogue I am here". After a couple of minutes she found Bobby and he smiled at her and said: "Hi there you found me". Rogue bursted out into tears and said: "I thought you were dead". "Course not, I could't leave you and the kids" said Bobby smiling. His face was scratched to and his clothes were also ripped appart. Rogue took him in her arms and saw that everyone was already in the X-Jet and they also went to the X-Jet going back home.

Rogue laid Bobby with the rest of the injured ones and Angel said: "Well I am glad everyone is back again". "Yeah excpet for the professor but we will find him soon" said Rogue. "Rogue, could you fly cause I did hurt my shoulder and I am affraid that it could get out of hand" said Angel. "Don't worry Angel, thanks for your help and I will fly us home" said Rogue. "Thanks" said Angel. Logan and Kitty hugged Rogue to and thanked her for everything. "No thank you Kitty you helped me I couldn't have done this without you" said Rogue. "Well you could, but I am glad I could help" said Kitty smiling. "Okay everyone hold on cause we are going home" said Rogue. Everyone fated their seatbelts on the floor and in the seats and they all took of back to the Mansion.

At the Mansion:
The X-Jet landed and everyone was brought to the lab. When they got in Jean was back on her feet helping Hank. Scott was still uncounsious and all the others were also still uncounsious. "Rogue are you okay"? asked Jean. "Yeah just a bit dizzy" said Rogue. "Okay I will examin you soon, I will do this ones first cause some are critical" said Jean. "Okay if I need to help just say it" said Rogue. "Okay I want you to lay down a bit and rest now" said Jean. Rogue didn't want to first but decided it was better to lay down cause she was pretty exhausted.

All of a sudden John came running in the lab with Z'Cann in his arms. "Z'Cann what is the matter"? asked Rogue shocked. "She collapsed in the living room, she as all green stuff on her face like a kind of disseas" said John. "Lay her here" said Jean. "Her pulse is weak, she is dying and I can't help her with this disseas" said Jean concerned. "No what now"? asked Rogue in tears again. "I have to know what kind of disseas she has" said Jean. "I don't know she never told me anything about that, she was a healthy happy kid when I met her" said Rogue. Z'Cann woke up and said: "I am dying aren't I"? "No we will help you what happened"? asked Jean. Suddenly Rogue heard Graydons voice in her head saying: "I already poisened a little kid on the streets she should be dead by now". "I can't remember" said Z'Cann. "Z'Cann were you attacked by a man on the streets and did he threw something at you"? asked Rogue. "Yes" said Z'Cann. "It is the same what Kurt has, it is meant to kill mutants" said Rogue. "We have to find a cure now" said Hank. "Hank begin with it I can handle it here" said Jean. "Okay" said Hank and he took some blood of Z'Cann and Kurt. "I am dying Rogue, I feel it there is nothing you can do for me, but I will think of something I can do for you" said Z'Cann. "Don't worry sweety we will help and save you" said Rogue with a tear in her eye.
 
Great job on your latest chapter!! The pacing and emotions are great. Honestly, I really feel for the Professor...you have given him some of the most emotional and "human" moments I have read, including the comics. The battles are exciting and the plots are interesting!!! Too much good stuff to do a list of my favorite parts, I love it all!! :D :D
 
Heeey ya'll
Well sorry for lack of update,
But I am feeling very sick.
To tell you a bit: I have a high bloodpressure and it really is bad, I was in the hospital the day before yesterday I am lucky with my laptop so I can sit downstairs and play with my laptop :).
I am home now but I need to slow everything down in my life.
This isn't the end you heard from me I will update soon.
I also have lots of homework and that is important to for me cause I don't wanna be a high school drop out.
And I have a writersblock at the moment.


Ps I hope more people read this story cause I hardley see people comment.
I would appriciate it what you think of my story so please leave a comment for me.
 
Hey ya'll
I am back and feel great :D
I wrote 4 pages today so I can say I started writing again yay :D
Next update will be somewhere next week or next weekend ;)
I am doing my best but it is getting complicated now with the storie haha so I need time to write.
AND PLEASE PEOPLE GIVE ME SOME COMMENTS IF YOU READ IT CAUSE I WANNA KNOW HOW I AM DOING
 
​
.Chapter Seven: Forever Yours​
​
Normal reallity:
At the Mansion:
Everyone was still in the lab. Everyone was awake now. Altough some were still in critical condition. Rogue still sat beside Z'Cann's bed. "How are you feeling now sweety"? asked Rogue. "Pretty good, I know I am dying but it feels good now" said Z'Cann sad. "You wont die sweety, we will prevent it" said Rogue with a smile. "You know I can't be saved, your brother can be saved it is to late for me and you have to except that" said Z'Cann with a tear in her eye. "No Z'Cann come on you have the will to win this, don't leave us" said Rogue reaching the point of crying. "I have the will to life, but I am also realistic, I can not beat this disseas and we all know that" said Z'Cann crying. "But we hardly now each other, we met for a reason" said Rogue. "Maybe the reason was that you have to deal with the fact that children can die" said Z'Cann. "I know that I just find it hard" said Rogue. "There could be tons of reasons, I am just happy I died while I know that you took such good care of me, you are the closest thing I have to a mother" said Z'Cann feeling emotinal again. "Oh sweety I know, just hold on till Dr. Grey comes back with the tests" said Rogue with a smile.

Jean came walking towards them and said: "I have the results". Rogue looked at Z'Cann who nodded. "And what is it, is there a cure for it"? asked Rogue. "Well we found out it is a disseas that is cureable" said Jean. "But not for me it is to late for me" said Z'Cann. "Don't say that you heared Dr Grey" said Rogue. "No Rogue she is right, she can not be cured the disseas is to advanced" said Jean sad. "No, no Z'Cann" said Rogue. Z'Cann smiled and said: "Don't worry Rogue, I am okay with it and you need to be okay with it to, then I can go in peace" said Z'Cann. "I can't have peace with it Z'Cann you are going to die, how can I have peace with that"? said Rogue. "I know it is hard, and I would love to stay here with you and all the others, but I am also happy that I am going to see my mom and dad again, and you should be happy your brother will be okay" said Z'Cann. Rogue looked to Jean and asked: "What did you find out about it"? "Well Z'Cann's body is resisting it for a very long time, we checked and double checked and accoring to all the tests with the disseas she should be dead already, Z'Cann did her best to fight it but the disseas won Rogue" said Jean. "Are there some stages or something"? asked Rogue. "Yes we counted like 4 stages after we spoke to Z'Cann" said Jean. "And what stage is she"? asked Rogue. "Sorry Rogue but she is stage 4" said Jean. "And Kurt"? asked Rogue in tears. "Don't worry he will be fine, Hank is making the antidote right now he is only a stage 1" said Jean. "You see some good news" said Z'Cann hugging Rogue. Rogue released Z'Cann and said: "Excuse me but I need some time alone" and she walked of. "Is she going to be okay"? asked Z'Cann. "Course she will sweety she is just upset" said Jean looking worried.

At the alternate reality:
At Muir Island:
The Hellfire Club and their newest member Rogue walked into the lab. "Mother I want you to come and kneel before me" said Anna. Rogue walked up to her en kneeled before her and said: "What is it Anna"? "I want you to become my right hand mother, and your new status is The Black Queen the highest rank next to me" said Anna. "Thank you Anna I am honered" said Rogue. "You will do what I ask you to do, do you except that term"? asked Anna. "Of course I do" said Rogue. "Good choice mother and are you also prepared to kill Bobby"? asked Anna. "What your father"? asked Rogue shocked. "Yes I mean him" said Anna. "I don't know Anna he is your father, it could work if you ask him to join us" said Rogue. "NO, he left you for Polaris and you think that is okay? I want him dead" yelled Anna. "Calm down sweety, ah know what ya mean, but he is ya father" said Rogue. "No mom he is dead to me, now are you willingly to kill him"? asked Anna angry. "No Anna I am not, I don't mind if someone else kills him, but I can't do it I tried thousands of times" said Rogue. "Okay then I will think of something else for you" said Anna. "Thank you" said Rogue. Anna and Rogue stood up and hugged each other. "Welcome back mother" said Anna and her eyes turned into fire.

In Africa Ororo's village:
Kendall was flying in the air and screamed in agony. "Kendall just relax fight the demon" yelled Ororo. "Hahaha Storm, my dear Storm.... can I call you Storm"? asked Kendall. "My name is Ororo I am no longer Storm and I command you to release my daughter NOW" yelled Ororo. "Hahaha no, however I am up for some trading" said Kendall. "What is that"? asked Marajia. "I will trade Kendall's body for Ororo's body" said Kendall. "Never, Ororo is much more powerfull than Kendall and we know what you want, you want to destroy us all but with Ororo's powers" said Marajia angry. "Aaaah very clever, but I also can do some damage with these powers" said Kendall and her eyes turned red again and looked evil. A storm came at them and all the cottage's were blown away by the storm, lightning struck the ground and it created a fire. "NO" yelled Ororo. "Our home" said Marajia desperate. Ororo turned arround and her eyes turned white and yelled: "God of wind, throw this fire out of the world and save our village" and a storm came out the air and the fire dissapearred. "Thank you Ororo" said Marajia. Ororo looked at Kendall and said: "I am sorry for this my dear" and lightning came out of her hands and struck Kendall. Kendall's eyes turned to normal and Ororo stopped using the lightning. Kendall fell on the ground and the other ran towards her.

Four cottage's remained and everyone was already building up some new ones and Gambit and Jubilee helped them with that. Marajia's cottage was still standing and she and Ororo putted Kendall in bed. "What should we do Ororo? I don't know what else we can do" said Marajia. "I know I have to stop the inner demon, but it will take time" said Ororo. "Not unless you know a way of stopping the demon in yourself, you are powerfull Ororo" said Marajia. "I could do it with the help of a telepath but we don't have one here" said Ororo. "No we haven't but you are smart Ororo I know you are and you can and must find a way to stop this" said Marajia. "I will Marajia, but I need to contact the professor is there some kind of phone nearby"? asked Ororo. "Yes we have one her, a satelite phone a hundred miles from here, that is the next village" said Marajia. "Okay watch Kendall, I will go there now so we can sort this out soon" said Ororo and she kissed Kendall and Marajia and flew out the door towards the next village.

Meanwhile at Vulcano Island:
Warren and Magma laid on the beach and Magma said: "Warren I think I have a fever, my temperature is very high". "You don't look so well to, maybe you should lay in bed" said Warren. "Maybe so, but I have a weird feeling and I feel my powers, the flames wanna expose themself" said Magma. "Well not a great idea now cause this beach is full with humans" said Warren. "Yes with humans we try to save Warren, they cant complain" said Magma. "No, but we don't wanna scare them, maybe they think a fire demon comes getting them" said Warren. "True and you look like an angel and then they think you are gonna stop me" said Magma laughing. "Maybe you will never know" said Warren. "I know that is enough" said Magma and they smiled at each other.

Warren looked at the vulcano and asked: What is the status of the vulcano here? is it about to errupt? can you feel it"?. "One question at a time, yes I can feel the vulcano as always, and the vulcano is close it will errupt within two days" said Magma worried. "Why are you worried"? asked Warren. "Cause it takes to long, and it just doesn't feel good I know vulcano's and this one wants to make a big entrance" said Magma. "Can we stop it"? asked Warren. "I doubt it, that is why I am so worried Warren, something is about to happen but I don't know what" said Magma. "We will stop it, we are X-Men, the team may fall appart but we always be X-Men and we can stop this" said Warren. "I hope you are right Warren, cause I have a feeling we can not save everyone" said Magma and looked at the vulcano.

Normal reallity:
At the Mansion:
Everyone sat arround Z'Cann her condition was getting worse by the minute. "What can we do Jean"? asked Rogue. "We can not do much this is the end of Z'Cann the Legacy Virus is getting to her" said Jean. "The Legacy Virus? is that how it is called"? asked Bobby. "Yes that is the name of the virus, it has the same disseases as the Legacy Virus but this one is more lethal" said Hank. Z'Cann started coughing up blood and Rogue helped her and cleaned it all up. "Thank you Rogue, you are so great for me I don't know what I can do for you" said Z'Cann. "Just be happy, that is all I want, I want you to be happy" said Rogue with a tear in her eye. "I will die happy thanks to you, I am here only like 2 days and I already made so much friends" said Z'Cann. Rogue hugged Z'Cann and a tear appearred in Z'Cann's eye.

Jean walked over to Kurt. "How is he doin"? asked Logan. "He responds good to the medicine so I think he will be up on his feet in a few days" said Jean. "Great news" said Logan. "Hank how are the others"? asked Jean. "Everyone is good now, we had it close this time we all could have died" said Hank. "Well all almost did" said Logan. "Yes exactly, great that Kitty and Rogue found us all" said Hank. "Yes indeed, we owe them our lives" said Jean. Kitty walked towards them and said: "You all don't owe us anything". "We feel like we do, our children could grow up without their parents and now they will grow up with us, thanks to you both" said Logan. "We are near the end, the Hellfire Club escaped and Xavier is still gone" said Hank. "We will get them all back" said Storm joining the group. "Yes we will and we will make the Hellfire Club pay" said Logan. "But first we have to be here for Rogue, she will be heartbroken when Z'Cann dies" said Jean. "She will but we will be here for her and everyone looked at Rogue, Bobby and Z'Cann.

Bobby took Rogue's hand and said: "Don't worry Rogue, she will be happy". Rogue started to cry again and said: "I know but I will miss her" said Rogue. All of a sudden Hank yelled: "Rogue let Bobby go now". Rogue looked at Bobby and veins covered his face Rogue letted his hand go and Bobby fell on the ground and sighed. "Oh my god Bobby I am so sorry" said Rogue in tears. "What happened"? asked Z'Cann shocked. Hank and Jean ran to Bobby and Rogue and Hank said: "Bobby are you okay"? "Yes Hank I am fine, what happened"? "Rogue's powers were uncontroleable, she is stressed because of Z'Cann and stress triggers her powers, so they reappearred" said Jean. "Forever"? asked Rogue shocked. "No this was just a moment, you have to relax Rogue" said Jean. Rogue nodded and said: "I am so sorry Bobby this wasn't what I wanted". "I know" said Bobby smiling and Rogue gave him a quick kiss and the powers of Bobby appearred everything she touched turned into ice after that. "Well I wish I could controle this to, but it will fade away soon" said Rogue. Z'Cann smiled and looked excited. "What is it"? asked Rogue. "I know what I can do for you" said Z'Cann with a smile.

Meanwhile at the alternate reallity:
At the Mansion:
Xavier sat in his office then the phone rang. Xavier answered it and it was Ororo. "Hello Ororo, how are things there"? "Not to good professor, Kendall is possesed by my former inner demon" said Ororo through the phone. "And you want to know how to stop it, well it can take a while unless you get the inner demon in yourself" said Xavier. "And how should I do that"? asked Ororo through the phone. "It is your inner demon you know best, you should now is weakness and take that into you advantage" said Xavier. "I will think about that I forgot most of that time but I will meditate and search my soul for it" said Ororo through the phone. "Do that and keep us up to date" said Xavier. "I will prfessor goodbye" said Ororo through the phone. "Good luck with this journey, goodbye" said Xavier and he hang up. He looked out his window and said: "We are in trouble I feel it".

At the Church in Boston:
Kurt sat in his office praying to god. He had a feeling something was wrong at the Mansion and said: "Meine lord what should I do"?. He looked at the skye and said: "Yes I will go there and help out meine freunds". "Not so fast brother" said a voice. "Graydon" said Kurt shocked. "Yes Kurt, I am here to take you away from here" said Graydon. "To what place"? asked Kurt. "You will soon know" said Graydon. Kurt wanted to bamf out of there but was shot from behind with a dart what made him fell asleep immediatly. "You will go to my own personal Slave Island.... brother" said Graydon.
 
At Magneto's base:
Magneto and David were talking about Davids entrance into the Brotherhood of Evil Mutants. "But is my father really that bad"? asked David sounding like he had some doubts. "Yes he thinks only about himself he wants to be the most powerfull mutant and gets rid of the ones who can pass him, like Phoenix and Rogue" said Magneto. "Why don't they destroy him"? asked David. "Because he is their old mentor and friend, they can not kill him" said Magneto. "And now you want me to kill him" said David. "Yes" said Magneto with an evil smile. "I will think about it, I wanna meet him first" said David. "Do what pleasses you" said Magneto hessitant. "Thank you" said David. "Mystique, can you get over here"? yelled Magneto.

They waited a while and David said: "Is something wrong"? "I don't know David, but I think we should check it out" said Magneto. "Okay I will cover your back" said David. "Good and keep your powers at the ready" said Magneto. "Okay I will" said David. And they both walked of to the tent. When they came to the tent Mystique, Blob, Pyro and Avalance laid all on the ground fast asleep. "They are sleeping"? asked David. "Yes, but not willingly" said Magneto looking arround. Then Magneto heard something fell and he looked back. It was David he was asleep to, Magneto saw a dart in his neck and said: "Plastique, hmmmm the humans learn and he turned arround and jumped to the ground when he heard more people. "Some people came in the tent and Magneto used his powers on them, but the had no metal so he used everything that was in the tent. Knives flew through the air and hitted some of the men who fell dead on the ground. Then Magneto felt something in his neck, some people snook behind him and shotted him and Magneto fell fast asleep.

A man grabbed his phone and typed in a number after a minute he said: "Mr. Creed we have everyone of the brotherhood". "Good work I have Kurt Wagner, now we have to get the X-Men" said Graydon through the phone. "Where are they"? asked the man. "Some at Vulcano Island, we will get them last, some are in the Mansion I will go there and some are in Africa you will go there with some people and some have to go to the ISA and take away Betsy Aka Psylocke" said Graydon through the phone. "Yes Mr. Creed" said the man. And everyone grabbed a body and got out of there to bring them all to Slave Island.

Meanwhile at Muir Island:
"Mother" said Anna. "Yes Anna"? said Rogue. "I have a new mission for you" said Anna. "What is the mission"? asked Rogue. "We traced a mutant called Z'Cann she is very powerfull and still a kid, we want you to kill her with your powers and drain all of her powers" said Anna with an evil smile. "What?? Kill a kid, what are her powers"? asked Rogue shocked. "She can recall powers, but that is her only power, if you drain her powers you can use every power you ever absorbed in your whole life" said Anna laughing. "So I will have ultimate power"? asked Rogue. "Yes, and I will make it a bit easy for you, take my hand mother" said Anna. Rogue grabbed Anna's hand and a black aura surrounded them both, Rogue's eyes turned black and then became normal. "You are now truely evil mother, you are the one and only Black Queen" said Anna. Rogue's eyes turned black again and said: "Aaaah this feels good". "I know and now get the girl Z'Cann and draw her powers away till they are yours" said Anna. "I will" said Rogue and she flew into the skye and flew towards her home town to look for a girl called Z'Cann.

Meanwhile in the normal reallity:
At the Mansion:
Rogue looked at Z'Cann and said: "What did you just say"? "I said I know what I can do for you, for us both" said Z'Cann. "What do you mean"? asked Rogue. "I want you to use your powers and kill me, so you can drain my powers, you can have ultimate powers cause you would be able to recall every power you ever absorb" said Z'Cann coughing again. Rogue looked shocked and said: "No, no I cant and wont do that". "Please do this for me, you will controle every power you ever have absorbed and you can get rid of them and then recall them again, you would be able to do so much good in your life, all powers will be yours forever" said Z'Cann with a tear in her eye. "That may be but Z'Cann I can not kill you" said Rogue in tears. "Please that is my last wish, I can not feel pain in this stage all I feel is my love for you, please grant my last wish" said Z'Cann. Rogue hugged Z'Cann and said: "Sorry I can't" and she walked away in tears and Jean followed her.

Bobby looked at Z'Cann and said: "She can't do this, unless she is certain you don't feel a thing, it hurts you when she uses her powers on you, you feel that you are dying are you sure that is something you want"? "Yes I am sure of that, I was honest when I said I don't feel pain and all, really I don't feel pain or anything" said Z'Cann crying. "I know you are honest honey, and Rogue knows that to but she can not kill a child she is a mother you need to realise that, you are asking a impossible thing from her" said Bobby. "Please talk to her, I want this, this is a way for me that I can leave this world knowing I did something good" said Z'Cann. "I wont talk to her, she must make this decision on her own, I can not help her with this" said Bobby and he hugged Z'Cann. "I hope she will think about it" said Z'Cann. "I know Rogue, she does think about it and will do the thing what is right and best" said Bobby.

Rogue stood in the hall and cried again. Jean walked up to her and said: "Rogue please, think about what she said, she has a point this is her wish and you will have her memories about the two of you forever, you will never forget her and you could be one of the most powerfull mutants ever". "What? How can you say this Jean, this is a child who wants me to kill her, screw the powers and the rest" said Rogue angry. "You are being selfish Rogue, this is her wish this isn't about the powers this is a beautifull thing she asked you, she will never be okay she will die between now and one hour, she is right she has no pain this will be painless for her, this will be the most beautifull thing she can have" said Jean getting angry at Rogue. "You are a hundred percent sure she has no pain? how do you know, she only does this so I can get those powers, and be the most powerfull mutant like you said" said Rogue. "Yes I am sure she doesn't feel pain all she feels in our love and maybe she knows that this should happen maybe her death was planned and she wants to make sure her dead wont be in vein, this isn't a coincedence this is fate and you know it" said Jean. "I know Jean, but I am asked to kill a child" said Rogue. "No that is where you are wrong, you aren't killing her, you are helping her find her way and are helping her dying in peace" said Jean. "I wanna talk to her to make up my mind" said Rogue and she and Jean walked of to the lab.

Rogue and Jean walked into the lab and Rogue said: "Can I talk to Z'Cann alone"? "Sure" said Bobby and he and the others walked of to the other patients there. "Hi, you're back" said Z'Cann. "Course I am I just very emotinal now" said Rogue with a smile. "Don't be, I am happy we met, and we can stay together if you just accept my deal you take away my powers and kill me in the process" said Z'Cann. "I will do it on one condition" said Rogue. "What is that"? asked Z'Cann. "I want that you are under narcosis" said Rogue. "Why"? asked Z'Cann. "Because I will be sure you will be asleep when I do it, be sure you wont feel pain" said Rogue. "Can I lie in your arms"? asked Z'Cann. "I want it no other way" said Rogue with a tear in her eye. "This is how we do it, I feel that I am slipping away so this is the best way" said Z'Cann. "Okay I agree with these terms" said Rogue with a teary smile. "Dr. Grey we want to do this now, I will be under narcosis" said Z'Cann. "What now"? asked Rogue shocked. "Yes of course, this is my time to say my goodbyes" said Z'Cann.

Everyone gathered arround Z'Cann and Z'Cann said: "Thank you all for all of this, you all are very special for me, I never loved people so soon like I loved you, you are a second family for me and I know this is my fate and Rogue her fate this has to be done, thank you all for everything and I will watch over all of you God blesh you all" said Z'Cann with some tears in her eyes. "Thank you for brighten up our lives with your special apprearence and your faith you opened up my eyes from the moment I met you thank you for all of this" said Rogue and she hugged Z'Cann. Everyone said goodbye to Z'Cann and almost everyone was in tears, because such a young special girl had to die. "Are you ready"? asked Jean in tears. "Yes, goodbye everyone I will watch over you all" said Z'Cann. Rogue took her in her arms and Z'Cann started counting to ten and at 7 and the last thing she said was: "Forever Yours" and after that she was sound asleep. "Are you ready Rogue"? asked Bobby. "Yes" said Rogue in tears.

Rogue and laid Z'Cann on the bed and said: "Farewell I will see you again in my mind". Rogue took place in front of her and Scott said: "You have to take my glasses cause you will have my powers to". "Oh yeah" said Rogue and she putted on some glasses. She took Z'Cann's hands and a light came out of her hands and she started draining Z'Cann's powers. After a couple of minutes Rogue started crying because the loss of Z'Cann and Jean said: "It's okay Rogue hold on just a little bit". "I will" said Rogue. "Okay Rogue you can let go she is gone" said Hank.

Rogue letted go and all of a sudden wings and a tail began growing out of her, everything started to float in the air, she started shapeshifting, and lightning came from all kinds of places of her body, an optic blast was shown behind the glasses, her arms became diamond and a Beast arm with a psi blade and metal claws, her legs became metal and ice, she phased through the ground and she surrounded herself with a Phoenix aura. She yelled and screamed in agony. First she mettaled up, then she started shapeshifting into other people, then she used the beast powers, the she iced up completley, and she started bamfing arround, then she turned into diamond, she used her psi blades, used her new wings, used her optic blasts and flew into the skye and Phoenix appearred with a fire telekinetic wave. She landed on the ground and turned into her normal self. She made her wings and tail appear and reappear. Everyone looked shocked and Logan said: "Oh jezus that was powerfull". "You used full extend of Phoenix power" said Jean. "You already metal up" said Colossus. "And ice up" said Bobby. "You phased" said Kitty. "You did everything we can" said Storm with her mouth wide open. "This is what Z'Cann meant, I feel her in me she showed me how to use all of your powers this is just special" said Rogue. "We already prepared Z'Cann's funeral, she will be burried here at the Mansion where she belongs" said Scott. "Thank you Scott that means a lot to me" said Rogue. "She belongs here with the X-Men" said Jean with a smile. Rogue looked at Z'Cann and kissed her and said: "Thank you for everything, you are very special".







 
So this is my new update yay :D
I hope you all like the update and please leave a small comment :)
Like:
I like it or I don't like it.
Good or Not good :p
Pick one but please leave one so I know what you all think
 
WOW I think this is your best one yet. Your writing style has really come a long way. Good pacing, and lots going on--but you tied it all together. Plenty of good but not overdone description too for a very visual read. The part
with Z'Cann
was very touching and also thought-provoking of the ethical dilemma. And
the final scene where all the powers are being recalled
was shocking and dramatic. Can't wait for next one!!
 
You must log in or register to reply here.

Similar threads

S
Sequels The Official X-Men 4 Thread
8 9 10
Replies
248
Views
34K
Angamb
Angamb
Angamb
Sequels PSYLOCKE: Who will she stand with? / Ideas for her future
2 3
Replies
69
Views
7K
Psylocke8
P
H
Sequels Lauren Donner said that she hopes for more sequels
Replies
6
Views
2K
javi1024
javi1024
psylockolussus
World Faavorite X-Men videogame?
Replies
9
Views
2K
MakeMinesMarvel
MakeMinesMarvel
H
Sequels For all you who think/hope there will be up to like 5 or 6 X Men Movies
Replies
6
Views
2K
Drago
D

Users who are viewing this thread

Total: 1 (members: 0, guests: 1)

Staff online

Members online

Total: 2,524 (members: 27, guests: 2,497)

Latest posts

Forum statistics

Threads
202,266
Messages
22,075,338
Members
45,874
Latest member
kedenlewis

Share this page

Back
Top
monitoring_string = "afb8e5d7348ab9e99f73cba908f10802"