Nightwing said:
i just had him say a few lines.thats all.it helps with the flow.
You had Alfred tell Dick who Batman was. Doesn't sound to me like something Alfred would do.
Nightwing said:
no i couldnt.if i hadnt bunnied at all then i wouldve been at a stand still as would everyone cos this RPG doesnt have enough commitment to it. there isnt enough happening.
You could have had Social Services ship him back to Gotham, you could have had him mourning, reflecting on times him and his family had.
I agree you, personally, couldn't have moved forward but you could have cut back on it. As it is, the way you wrote it you took out Batmans side of things.
JRK probably doesn't care, he's easy going but I was looking forward to Batman's introspective look at how he felt about taking Dick in...whether he should tell Dick his secret, should he help him get revenge? Or should he steer him away? When and where did he tell Dick about his parents?
I'm
huge on character development, I almost hate the fights I'd rather see what's going on with the character. The fights are frosting, the person is the cake.
But you left no room for any of that to happen in another character.
Nightwing said:
but you cant have a proper RPG without people being bunnied along.so long as it doesnt conflict with the current arc which in this case it actually helps it along.......
There have been 3 seasons of the DC RPG, and the Marvel RPG. Not to mention the Multiverse RPG.
Those have had minimal bunnying....and when there were 'mutual' bunnies people talked before it happened.
*I just realized how mean I sound*
I honestly mean no offense.