Matt Murdock
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So...
much...
bunnying.
much...
bunnying.
Blacklight, just so you know, my Jean doesn't look like Ultimate Jean.
t:Said the man who "made" my Ultimate Kaine banner.Annnnnd if anyone needs a banner (just like in the Ult. Rpg) feel free to drop me a line.
It may take me a while to get your banner done...
as in a day or two...
but they're half decent.

Personally, I think we should take this opportunity to make the history cooler than just the plain old spaceship story. No offense, BL, but we need to spice that up a bit! I'll consider picking up one of them to help you with it if you're accepted. Maybe DoM Reed Richards.
. If you have anything, PM me, and I'm planning on playing Sue edgier and darker, especially after her fathers death.Death?! Whoa...cool. Nice.
BTW, BL, a few tips for posting. These might help anybody really, but things I find make things better:
1. Avoid overly huge pictures. They take away from your post. If you really like the pic, resize it and use photobucket or something to post it.
2. Avoid using things like "he said", "Thor said," etc etc. It is very uncreative. EX:
"That's funny," Wolverine said.
Wolverine chuckled as he pulled a cigar from his pocket. "That's funny."
See the diff? Way better the second time.
3. Try to set the stage and atmosphere. It gives the reader a better idea of whats going on and the situation that's happening.
I walked into the lab and saw Reed at his desk. "Hey, what's wrong?"
When I walked into the lab, Reed was hunched over his desk. The computer screen to his left was blinking with test results. "Hey, what's wrong?"
Again, better the second time.
Just an idea for all that stuff. Constructive stuff that will hopefully make your ideas look better on paper. Personally, I think BL has alot of talent and creative ideas. I say accept him as Susan and I'll get my app up for Reed soon.
Personally, I think we should take this opportunity to make the history cooler than just the plain old spaceship story. No offense, BL, but we need to spice that up a bit! I'll consider picking up one of them to help you with it if you're accepted. Maybe DoM Reed Richards.
im not going to argue, i just wanted to point out that sometimes too much stage setting takes away from the story.Death?! Whoa...cool. Nice.
BTW, BL, a few tips for posting. These might help anybody really, but things I find make things better:
1. Avoid overly huge pictures. They take away from your post. If you really like the pic, resize it and use photobucket or something to post it.
2. Avoid using things like "he said", "Thor said," etc etc. It is very uncreative. EX:
"That's funny," Wolverine said.
Wolverine chuckled as he pulled a cigar from his pocket. "That's funny."
See the diff? Way better the second time.
3. Try to set the stage and atmosphere. It gives the reader a better idea of whats going on and the situation that's happening.
I walked into the lab and saw Reed at his desk. "Hey, what's wrong?"
When I walked into the lab, Reed was hunched over his desk. The computer screen to his left was blinking with test results. "Hey, what's wrong?"
Again, better the second time.
Just an idea for all that stuff. Constructive stuff that will hopefully make your ideas look better on paper. Personally, I think BL has alot of talent and creative ideas. I say accept him as Susan and I'll get my app up for Reed soon.
Also, just so X-Men know, Iceman isn't going to be joining the X-Men for another couple of posts. If absolutely necessary, next post. Are we in a rush to get out to pick up Chamber? Another question, is it essential that we DO pick him up, or can we go straight into a different mission. Just curious.