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I hope the next Halloween movie places Michael back to his roots, stalking completely random people for no discernible reason.

I'd agree with this. I don't even mind a retread of his origins (killing Judith when he was 6, getting committed to a sanitarium, etc). Just no redneck, white trash bulls**t like Rob Zombie's crap movies.
 
I'd agree with this. I don't even mind a retread of his origins (killing Judith when he was 6, getting committed to a sanitarium, etc). Just no redneck, white trash bulls**t like Rob Zombie's crap movies.

I had this reboot idea over at Halloweenmovies.com but this was only as a replacement for Zombie's. A how I would have done it scenario. This is not necessarily what I'd want from a reboot but its how I would have done a remake. Personally though I do still like the idea of Judith surviving the attack. So he kills his parents but she gets away.

- the family be fairly normal, nothing to make Michael evil, I'd just have him be a quiet boy who just wasn't like the other kids at school
- Michael's father buys him the clown costume for a Halloween but he wants the other mask (the classic) but his Dad says no, so his Mum ends up buying him it as a surprise
- later Michael's mother gives him the mask hoping it would make Michael smile but it doesn't he just takes it, to which his father isn't happy he tells Michael to say thank you to his mother but Michael just runs off,
- Michael listens as his father talks to his mother saying that they may need to put him in therapy and his friend Sam Loomis found help
- Michael has a hidden storage compartment under his floor boards where he keeps things he likes, just random things i.e. An old watch plus a few other things and the mask his mother bought for him
- Later Sam comes to the house in which he meets Michael for the first time but Michael will not speak
- Sam talks to the parents saying he's seen distant kids before but something about Michael feels more troubled and they will need them to bring Michael to Smiths Grove, again Michael is listening
- Michael's sister Judith appears in the opening, she seems to adore Michael as Michael is only normal around her, Judith often sits and talks to Michael about her life, it's only hear he ever smiles, Judith says to Michael that she knows he will talk again when he is ready too
- later however she becomes more distant with him and it's because she is pregnant, not Michael's fault but she's so frightened she doesn't talk about stuff anymore with Michael
- later Michael just seems to snap, he wears his clown costume and murders his parents with a butcher knife, Judith discovers Michael who has dragged the bodies outside and piled them up, she talks him down into dropping the knife, she goes inside and calls the police but as she calls Michael stabs her in the arm, she screams and runs away, Michael goes after her and stabs her again this time in the shoulder, as he's about to deliver the final blow he appears to change his mind after Judith begs.
- Judith manages to crawls out the door into the street and Michael walks out after with her now ready to pounce, but the police arrive just in time, flashlights on Michael, he looks up and drops the knife
- Judith says to to the young cop Lee Brackett that Michael killed her parents, Michael is then cuffed by the police and he looks at Judith from the car with dead eyes as if to say not yet but someday I will kill you
Then 20 years later
- its Judith that Michael comes back to get later but now she has a daughter Laurie and is married to a Strode
- Michael escapes Smiths Grove its very suspenseful and during a storm, the power goes out and this unlocks the inmates cells, Michael steps out and walks around, he kills a cleaner and takes his boiler suit, he then escapes using the cleaners keys to get to the main exit, there is one security man there who assumes it's the cleaner, he just lets him out the main door and Michael walks into the night, as the power comes on the security man sees a trail of blood, probably left from the boiler suit and shoes and immediately calls the police
- Michael returns to Haddonfield, to find his Sister Judith but first he returns to the house to get the mask he left, in the house living their is a single woman, crazy looking, oldish but not really old, Michael sneaks in and gets his mask. He then proceeds to kill the old lady
- it's here we first meet Laurie whose at the fancy dress shop picking up something when she bumps into this guy Jimmy who tells her he's a paramedic, he asks Laurie if she's going to the party later, she says she is babysitting for a friend, he looks bummed out, so she says she could try and get there for 11, Jimmy says that's great cause he gets off work at 10.30
- the party the town is having is the annual Halloween party held at the nearby school to commentate Halloween but Judith won't go and she won't let Laurie go either
- Laurie and her friends are at a diner, Laurie wants to be able to go to the party later to meet Jimmy but her Mum won't let her, her friends don't seem as concerned as they want to hook up with their boyfriends, Annie said she got herself grounded on purpose just so she can meet Paul, knowing Daddy will be working and wouldn't stop by to check on her
- we go back to Smiths grove where Loomis is having it out with the people who work there, they say it's not their fault and the power outage malfunctioned their locking systems. The people there don't seems as concerned with Michael as they say several patients got out their cells and hurt not only other inmates but staff aswell. Loomis says he is on his own in searching for Michael then and storms off
- Laurie ends up babysitting for a friend, her other friend Annie (whose father Sheriff Bracket has grounded her) but she plots with her friend Lynda to meet up with their boyfriends
- Loomis comes to town Looking for Myers, he goes to see the Sheriff who along with him goes to see Judith
- Michael kills Judith and discovers he has a niece Laurie, he then sets out to find her
- Loomis and Brackett go to the party thinking Judith may be there but she isn't they then go to the house and find it empty but it looks in disarray so Brackett goes to the party to see if Judith is there. Loomis thinks she's already dead so he sets out to find Laurie when he sees a picture of her.
- Michael kills Annie, Lynda and co, he then sets his sights on Laurie who had gone to check on Annie when she heard her scream as Laurie lives in the house opposite the one where she is babysitting, it's hear she finds her friends dead but not as in the original, the bodies have been piled up in the garden as Michael had done with his parents
- Michael stalks Laurie who is saved by Loomis, Michael keeps on after them to Loomis takes them to the party to get the Sheriff
- With the party been evacuated, Loomis and Laurie meet with Brackett, Michael enters and knocks Brackett out cold, Loomis is also knocked down looking worse for wear but not out cold or dead as Michael would have liked, but he doesn't have time for them he just wants Laurie, so he goes after her
- Laurie escapes through a window and runs off to the cemetery over the road, she hides behind graves and stumbles upon the old Myers crypt that's dilapidated
- in their she discovers the body of her Mother, Michael enters the crypt ready to kill Laurie, he throws her into the wall and it shakes, looking as if the whole structure could collapse any second
- Michael is about to stab Laurie with the knife when Loomis enters and shoots Michael
- Loomis tackles Michael and tells Laurie to get out, she's reluctant in tears but the structure is collapsing
- Michael pushes Loomis to the ground, Laurie exits. Michael turns around ready to follow, Loomis yells "it's time to go home Michael and kicks as hard as he can against the wood support keeping the crypt up, the whole thing collapses onto Loomis and Michael, crushing them seemingly to death.
- we then cut to later and the paramedics are on the scene as Laurie looks on in tears, a young paramedic who Laurie met briefly earlier in the film named Jimmy comforts Laurie by putting his jacket round her and apologising for not making it to the party (we know why he didn't make it with all the dead bodies he's had to cart around), they enter the ambulance as Sheriff Brackett pulls out Michael's mask, which appears to have been taken off. He looks concerned and angry as the screen fades to black.

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Edit: fixed my typos and added spoiler tags
 
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I had this reboot idea over at Halloweenmovies.com but this was only as a replacement for Zombie's. A how I would have done it scenario. This is not necessarily what I'd want from a reboot but its how I would have done a remake. Personally though I do still like the idea of Judith surviving the attack. So he kills his parents but she gets away.

- the family be fairly normal, nothing to make Michael evil, I'd just have him be a quiet boy who just wasn't like the other kids at school
- Michael's father buys him the clown costume for a Halloween but he wants the other mask (the classic) but his Dad says no, so his Mum ends up buying him it as a surprise
- later Michael's mother gives him the mask hoping it would make Michael smile but it doesn't he just takes it to which his father isn't happy he tells Michael to say thank you to his mother but Michael just runs off,
Michael listens as his father to his mother that they may need to put him in therapy and his friend Sam Loomis found help
- Michael has a hidden storage compartment under his floor boards where he keeps things he likes, just random things I.e. An old watch plus a few other things and the mask his mother bought for him
- Later Sam comes to the house in which he meets Michael for the first time but Michael will not speak
- Sam talks to the parents saying he's seen distant kids before but something about Michael feels more troubled and that will need them to bring Michael to Smiths Grove, again Michael is listening
- Michael's sister Judith appears in the opening, she seems to adore Michael as Michael is only normal around her, Judith often sits and talks to Michael about her life, it's only hear he ever smiles, Judith says to Michael that she knows he will talk again when he is ready too
- later however she becomes more distant with him and it's because she is pregnant, not Michael's fault but she's so frightened she doesn't talk about stuff anymore with Michael
- later Michael just seems to snap, he wears his clown costume and kills murders his parents with a butcher knife, Judith discovers Michael who hasp dragged the bodies outside and piled them up, she talks him down into dropping the knife, she gives inside and calls the police but as she calls Michael stabs her in the arm, she screams and runs away, Michael goes after her and stabs her again thus time in the shoulder, as he's about to deliver the final blow he appears to change his mind after Judith begs.
- Judith manages to crawls out the door into the street and Michael walks out after with her now ready to pounce, but the police arrive just in time, flashlights on Michael, he looks up and drops the knife
- Judith says to to the young cop Lee Brackett that Michael killed her parents, Michael is then cuffed by the police and he looks at Judith from the car with dead eyes as if to say not yet but someday I will kill you
Then 20 years later
- its Judith that Michael comes back to get later but now she has a daughter Laurie and is married to a Strode
- Michael escapes Smiths Grove its very suspenseful and during a storm, the power goes out and thus unlocks the inmates cells, Michael steps out bad walks around, he kills a cleaner who was wearing overalls, and takes the boiler suit, he then escapes using the cleaners keys to get to the main exit, there us one security man there who assumes it's the cleaner, he jets him out the main door and Michael walks into the night, as the power comes on the security man sees a trail if blood, probably left from the overalls bad shoes and immediately calls the police
- Michael returns to Haddonfield, to find his Sister Judith but first he returns to the house to get the mask he left
- it's here we first meet Laurie whose at the fancy dress shop picking up something when she bumps into thus guy Jimmy who tells her he's a paramedic, he asks Laurie if she's going to the party later, she says she is babysitting for a friend, he looks bummed out, so she says she could try and get there for 11, Jimmy says that's great cause he gets off work at 10.30
- the party town the town is having is the annual Halloween party held at the nearby school to commentate Halloween but Judith won't go and she won't let Laurie go either
- Laurie and her and are friends are at a diner, Laurie wants to be able to go to the party later to meet Jimmy but her Mum won't let her, her friends don't seem as concerned as they want to hook up with their boyfriends, Annie said she got herself grounded on purpose just so she can need Paul, knowing Daddy will be working and wouldn't stop by the party to check on her
- we go back to Smiths grove where Loomis is having it out with the people who work there, they say it's not their fault and the power outage malfunctioned their locking systems. The people there don't seems as concerned with Michael as they say several patients got out their cells and hurt not only other inmates but staff aswell. Loomis says he ps on his own in searching for Michael then and storms off
- Laurie ends up babysitting for a friend, her other friend Annie whose father Sheriff Bracket has been grounded but she plots with her friend Lynda to meet up with their boyfriends
- Loomis comes to town Looking for Myers, he goes to see the Sheriff who along with him goes to see Judith
- Michael kills Judith and discovers he has a niece Laurie, he then sets out to find Laurie
- Loomis and Brackett go to the party thinking Judith may be there but she isn't they then go to the house a d find it empty but it looks in disarray so they Brackett goes to the party to see if Judith is there. Loomis thinks she's already dead so he sets out to find Laurie when he sees a picture of her.
- Michael kills Annie, Lynda and co, he then sets his sights on Laurie who had gone to check on Annie when she heard her scream as Laurie lives in the house opposite the one where she is babysitting, it's hear she finds her friends dead but not as in the original, the bodies have been piled up in the garden as Michael had done with his parents
- Michael stalks Laurie who is saved by Loomis, Michael keeps on after them to Loomis takes them to the party to get the Sheriff
- With the party been evacuated, Loomis and Laurie meet with Brackett, Michael enters and knocks Brackett out cold, Loomis is also knocked down looking worse for wear but not out cold or dead as Michael would have hooked, but he doesn't have time for them he just wants Laurie, so he goes after her
- Laurie escapes through a window and runs off to the cemetery over the road, she hides behind graves and stumbles upon the old Myers crypt that's dilapidated
- in their she discovers the buddy of her Mother, Michael enters the crypt ready to kill Laurue, he throws her into the wall and it shakes, looking as if the whole structure could collapse any second
- Michael is about to stab Laurie with the knife when Loomis enters and shoots Michael
- Loomis tackles Michael and tells Laurie to get out, she's reluctant in tears but the structure us collapsing
- Michael pushes Loomis to the ground, Laurie exits. Michael turns around ready to follow, Loomis yells "it's time to go home Michael and kicks as hard as he can against the wood support keeping the crypt up, the whole thing collapses onto Loomis and Michael, crushing them seemingly to death.
- we then cut to later and the paramedics are on the scene as Laurie looks on in tears, a young paramedic who Laurie met briefly earlier in the film named Jimmy comforts Laurie by putting his jacket round her bad apologising for not making it to the party (we know why he didn't make it with all the dead bodies he's had to cart around), they enter the ambulance as a Sheriff Brackett pulls out Michael's mask, which appears to have been taken off. He looks concerned and angry as the screen fades to black.

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:applaudI'd pay for this film to be made.
 
I had this reboot idea over at Halloweenmovies.com but this was only as a replacement for Zombie's. A how I would have done it scenario. This is not necessarily what I'd want from a reboot but its how I would have done a remake. Personally though I do still like the idea of Judith surviving the attack. So he kills his parents but she gets away.

- the family be fairly normal, nothing to make Michael evil, I'd just have him be a quiet boy who just wasn't like the other kids at school
- Michael's father buys him the clown costume for a Halloween but he wants the other mask (the classic) but his Dad says no, so his Mum ends up buying him it as a surprise
- later Michael's mother gives him the mask hoping it would make Michael smile but it doesn't he just takes it to which his father isn't happy he tells Michael to say thank you to his mother but Michael just runs off,
Michael listens as his father to his mother that they may need to put him in therapy and his friend Sam Loomis found help
- Michael has a hidden storage compartment under his floor boards where he keeps things he likes, just random things I.e. An old watch plus a few other things and the mask his mother bought for him
- Later Sam comes to the house in which he meets Michael for the first time but Michael will not speak
- Sam talks to the parents saying he's seen distant kids before but something about Michael feels more troubled and that will need them to bring Michael to Smiths Grove, again Michael is listening
- Michael's sister Judith appears in the opening, she seems to adore Michael as Michael is only normal around her, Judith often sits and talks to Michael about her life, it's only hear he ever smiles, Judith says to Michael that she knows he will talk again when he is ready too
- later however she becomes more distant with him and it's because she is pregnant, not Michael's fault but she's so frightened she doesn't talk about stuff anymore with Michael
- later Michael just seems to snap, he wears his clown costume and kills murders his parents with a butcher knife, Judith discovers Michael who hasp dragged the bodies outside and piled them up, she talks him down into dropping the knife, she gives inside and calls the police but as she calls Michael stabs her in the arm, she screams and runs away, Michael goes after her and stabs her again thus time in the shoulder, as he's about to deliver the final blow he appears to change his mind after Judith begs.
- Judith manages to crawls out the door into the street and Michael walks out after with her now ready to pounce, but the police arrive just in time, flashlights on Michael, he looks up and drops the knife
- Judith says to to the young cop Lee Brackett that Michael killed her parents, Michael is then cuffed by the police and he looks at Judith from the car with dead eyes as if to say not yet but someday I will kill you
Then 20 years later
- its Judith that Michael comes back to get later but now she has a daughter Laurie and is married to a Strode
- Michael escapes Smiths Grove its very suspenseful and during a storm, the power goes out and thus unlocks the inmates cells, Michael steps out bad walks around, he kills a cleaner who was wearing overalls, and takes the boiler suit, he then escapes using the cleaners keys to get to the main exit, there us one security man there who assumes it's the cleaner, he jets him out the main door and Michael walks into the night, as the power comes on the security man sees a trail if blood, probably left from the overalls bad shoes and immediately calls the police
- Michael returns to Haddonfield, to find his Sister Judith but first he returns to the house to get the mask he left
- it's here we first meet Laurie whose at the fancy dress shop picking up something when she bumps into thus guy Jimmy who tells her he's a paramedic, he asks Laurie if she's going to the party later, she says she is babysitting for a friend, he looks bummed out, so she says she could try and get there for 11, Jimmy says that's great cause he gets off work at 10.30
- the party town the town is having is the annual Halloween party held at the nearby school to commentate Halloween but Judith won't go and she won't let Laurie go either
- Laurie and her and are friends are at a diner, Laurie wants to be able to go to the party later to meet Jimmy but her Mum won't let her, her friends don't seem as concerned as they want to hook up with their boyfriends, Annie said she got herself grounded on purpose just so she can need Paul, knowing Daddy will be working and wouldn't stop by the party to check on her
- we go back to Smiths grove where Loomis is having it out with the people who work there, they say it's not their fault and the power outage malfunctioned their locking systems. The people there don't seems as concerned with Michael as they say several patients got out their cells and hurt not only other inmates but staff aswell. Loomis says he ps on his own in searching for Michael then and storms off
- Laurie ends up babysitting for a friend, her other friend Annie whose father Sheriff Bracket has been grounded but she plots with her friend Lynda to meet up with their boyfriends
- Loomis comes to town Looking for Myers, he goes to see the Sheriff who along with him goes to see Judith
- Michael kills Judith and discovers he has a niece Laurie, he then sets out to find Laurie
- Loomis and Brackett go to the party thinking Judith may be there but she isn't they then go to the house a d find it empty but it looks in disarray so they Brackett goes to the party to see if Judith is there. Loomis thinks she's already dead so he sets out to find Laurie when he sees a picture of her.
- Michael kills Annie, Lynda and co, he then sets his sights on Laurie who had gone to check on Annie when she heard her scream as Laurie lives in the house opposite the one where she is babysitting, it's hear she finds her friends dead but not as in the original, the bodies have been piled up in the garden as Michael had done with his parents
- Michael stalks Laurie who is saved by Loomis, Michael keeps on after them to Loomis takes them to the party to get the Sheriff
- With the party been evacuated, Loomis and Laurie meet with Brackett, Michael enters and knocks Brackett out cold, Loomis is also knocked down looking worse for wear but not out cold or dead as Michael would have hooked, but he doesn't have time for them he just wants Laurie, so he goes after her
- Laurie escapes through a window and runs off to the cemetery over the road, she hides behind graves and stumbles upon the old Myers crypt that's dilapidated
- in their she discovers the buddy of her Mother, Michael enters the crypt ready to kill Laurue, he throws her into the wall and it shakes, looking as if the whole structure could collapse any second
- Michael is about to stab Laurie with the knife when Loomis enters and shoots Michael
- Loomis tackles Michael and tells Laurie to get out, she's reluctant in tears but the structure us collapsing
- Michael pushes Loomis to the ground, Laurie exits. Michael turns around ready to follow, Loomis yells "it's time to go home Michael and kicks as hard as he can against the wood support keeping the crypt up, the whole thing collapses onto Loomis and Michael, crushing them seemingly to death.
- we then cut to later and the paramedics are on the scene as Laurie looks on in tears, a young paramedic who Laurie met briefly earlier in the film named Jimmy comforts Laurie by putting his jacket round her bad apologising for not making it to the party (we know why he didn't make it with all the dead bodies he's had to cart around), they enter the ambulance as a Sheriff Brackett pulls out Michael's mask, which appears to have been taken off. He looks concerned and angry as the screen fades to black.

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That's not bad. It's not great mind you, and could use some improvements here and there, but it's certainly better than anything Rob Zombie could ever come up with.
 
That's not bad. It's not great mind you, and could use some improvements here and there, but it's certainly better than anything Rob Zombie could ever come up with.

Ha ha thanks I think lol, I came up with it in like an hour so I know it needs improvements :p

:applaudI'd pay for this film to be made.

Thank You :woot: fixed the typos I'd made and added a few minor bits lol
 
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I had this reboot idea over at Halloweenmovies.com but this was only as a replacement for Zombie's. A how I would have done it scenario. This is not necessarily what I'd want from a reboot but its how I would have done a remake. Personally though I do still like the idea of Judith surviving the attack. So he kills his parents but she gets away.

- the family be fairly normal, nothing to make Michael evil, I'd just have him be a quiet boy who just wasn't like the other kids at school
- Michael's father buys him the clown costume for a Halloween but he wants the other mask (the classic) but his Dad says no, so his Mum ends up buying him it as a surprise
- later Michael's mother gives him the mask hoping it would make Michael smile but it doesn't he just takes it, to which his father isn't happy he tells Michael to say thank you to his mother but Michael just runs off,
- Michael listens as his father talks to his mother saying that they may need to put him in therapy and his friend Sam Loomis found help
- Michael has a hidden storage compartment under his floor boards where he keeps things he likes, just random things i.e. An old watch plus a few other things and the mask his mother bought for him
- Later Sam comes to the house in which he meets Michael for the first time but Michael will not speak
- Sam talks to the parents saying he's seen distant kids before but something about Michael feels more troubled and they will need them to bring Michael to Smiths Grove, again Michael is listening
- Michael's sister Judith appears in the opening, she seems to adore Michael as Michael is only normal around her, Judith often sits and talks to Michael about her life, it's only hear he ever smiles, Judith says to Michael that she knows he will talk again when he is ready too
- later however she becomes more distant with him and it's because she is pregnant, not Michael's fault but she's so frightened she doesn't talk about stuff anymore with Michael
- later Michael just seems to snap, he wears his clown costume and murders his parents with a butcher knife, Judith discovers Michael who has dragged the bodies outside and piled them up, she talks him down into dropping the knife, she goes inside and calls the police but as she calls Michael stabs her in the arm, she screams and runs away, Michael goes after her and stabs her again this time in the shoulder, as he's about to deliver the final blow he appears to change his mind after Judith begs.
- Judith manages to crawls out the door into the street and Michael walks out after with her now ready to pounce, but the police arrive just in time, flashlights on Michael, he looks up and drops the knife
- Judith says to to the young cop Lee Brackett that Michael killed her parents, Michael is then cuffed by the police and he looks at Judith from the car with dead eyes as if to say not yet but someday I will kill you
Then 20 years later
- its Judith that Michael comes back to get later but now she has a daughter Laurie and is married to a Strode
- Michael escapes Smiths Grove its very suspenseful and during a storm, the power goes out and this unlocks the inmates cells, Michael steps out and walks around, he kills a cleaner and takes his boiler suit, he then escapes using the cleaners keys to get to the main exit, there is one security man there who assumes it's the cleaner, he just lets him out the main door and Michael walks into the night, as the power comes on the security man sees a trail of blood, probably left from the boiler suit and shoes and immediately calls the police
- Michael returns to Haddonfield, to find his Sister Judith but first he returns to the house to get the mask he left, in the house living their is a single woman, crazy looking, oldish but not really old, Michael sneaks in and gets his mask. He then proceeds to kill the old lady
- it's here we first meet Laurie whose at the fancy dress shop picking up something when she bumps into this guy Jimmy who tells her he's a paramedic, he asks Laurie if she's going to the party later, she says she is babysitting for a friend, he looks bummed out, so she says she could try and get there for 11, Jimmy says that's great cause he gets off work at 10.30
- the party the town is having is the annual Halloween party held at the nearby school to commentate Halloween but Judith won't go and she won't let Laurie go either
- Laurie and her friends are at a diner, Laurie wants to be able to go to the party later to meet Jimmy but her Mum won't let her, her friends don't seem as concerned as they want to hook up with their boyfriends, Annie said she got herself grounded on purpose just so she can meet Paul, knowing Daddy will be working and wouldn't stop by to check on her
- we go back to Smiths grove where Loomis is having it out with the people who work there, they say it's not their fault and the power outage malfunctioned their locking systems. The people there don't seems as concerned with Michael as they say several patients got out their cells and hurt not only other inmates but staff aswell. Loomis says he is on his own in searching for Michael then and storms off
- Laurie ends up babysitting for a friend, her other friend Annie (whose father Sheriff Bracket has grounded her) but she plots with her friend Lynda to meet up with their boyfriends
- Loomis comes to town Looking for Myers, he goes to see the Sheriff who along with him goes to see Judith
- Michael kills Judith and discovers he has a niece Laurie, he then sets out to find her
- Loomis and Brackett go to the party thinking Judith may be there but she isn't they then go to the house and find it empty but it looks in disarray so Brackett goes to the party to see if Judith is there. Loomis thinks she's already dead so he sets out to find Laurie when he sees a picture of her.
- Michael kills Annie, Lynda and co, he then sets his sights on Laurie who had gone to check on Annie when she heard her scream as Laurie lives in the house opposite the one where she is babysitting, it's hear she finds her friends dead but not as in the original, the bodies have been piled up in the garden as Michael had done with his parents
- Michael stalks Laurie who is saved by Loomis, Michael keeps on after them to Loomis takes them to the party to get the Sheriff
- With the party been evacuated, Loomis and Laurie meet with Brackett, Michael enters and knocks Brackett out cold, Loomis is also knocked down looking worse for wear but not out cold or dead as Michael would have liked, but he doesn't have time for them he just wants Laurie, so he goes after her
- Laurie escapes through a window and runs off to the cemetery over the road, she hides behind graves and stumbles upon the old Myers crypt that's dilapidated
- in their she discovers the body of her Mother, Michael enters the crypt ready to kill Laurie, he throws her into the wall and it shakes, looking as if the whole structure could collapse any second
- Michael is about to stab Laurie with the knife when Loomis enters and shoots Michael
- Loomis tackles Michael and tells Laurie to get out, she's reluctant in tears but the structure is collapsing
- Michael pushes Loomis to the ground, Laurie exits. Michael turns around ready to follow, Loomis yells "it's time to go home Michael and kicks as hard as he can against the wood support keeping the crypt up, the whole thing collapses onto Loomis and Michael, crushing them seemingly to death.
- we then cut to later and the paramedics are on the scene as Laurie looks on in tears, a young paramedic who Laurie met briefly earlier in the film named Jimmy comforts Laurie by putting his jacket round her and apologising for not making it to the party (we know why he didn't make it with all the dead bodies he's had to cart around), they enter the ambulance as Sheriff Brackett pulls out Michael's mask, which appears to have been taken off. He looks concerned and angry as the screen fades to black.

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Edit: fixed my typos and added spoiler tags
I like the idea of keeping MM's backstory vague while still getting a back story.

IMO MM should think that he's killed Judith. Then when she visits him years later it sparks his break out. During that visit she could find out... nothing. There was nothing there to spark the attacks and about how he has just shut down. Then Loomis can talk about ".. its like he's waiting for something..".

Maybe the first movie should be more about MM stalking a pregnant Judith more than Laurie. In the end Judith dies but the doctors save the baby. The save Laurie and the baby for the sequel.
 
I like the idea of keeping MM's backstory vague while still getting a back story.

IMO MM should think that he's killed Judith. Then when she visits him years later it sparks his break out. During that visit she could find out... nothing. There was nothing there to spark the attacks and about how he has just shut down. Then Loomis can talk about ".. its like he's waiting for something..".

Maybe the first movie should be more about MM stalking a pregnant Judith more than Laurie. In the end Judith dies but the doctors save the baby. The save Laurie and the baby for the sequel.

Wow dude this is why I need a co-writer, that's a great idea.

The only thing is to have Judith pregnant later would kind of take something away that I'm attached to in my backstory as her getting pregnant is the factor which makes her break away from her little brother and that's what pushes him over the edge cause the one person he cares about isn't so spending time with him anymore.

Like I said though this was just my idea of a remake, if I were to reboot ideas would be different except the ending, I just love the idea of the whole thing ending in a crypt.
 
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Wow dude this is why I need a co-writer, that's a great idea.

The only thing is to have Judith pregnant later would kind of take something away that I'm attached to in my backstory as her getting pregnant is the factor which makes her break away from her little brother and that's what pushes him over the edge cause the one person he cares about isn't so spending time with him anymore.

Like I said though this was just my idea of a remake, if I were to reboot ideas would be different except the ending, I just love the idea of the whole thing ending in a crypt.
Oh I see. Maybe Judiths baby grows up to be the MM hunter OR go in the total opposite direction and make him coming close to becoming MM. Lurie tries to keep him from becoming that but attacks from MM break him.

I like the idea of the crypt too.
 
I like the idea of keeping MM's backstory vague while still getting a back story.

IMO MM should think that he's killed Judith. Then when she visits him years later it sparks his break out. During that visit she could find out... nothing. There was nothing there to spark the attacks and about how he has just shut down. Then Loomis can talk about ".. its like he's waiting for something..".

Maybe the first movie should be more about MM stalking a pregnant Judith more than Laurie. In the end Judith dies but the doctors save the baby. The save Laurie and the baby for the sequel.
You guys need to write this script and pitch it to Dimension, or whoever has the Halloween rights at this moment. I'd for sure take a new series like that over anything further the Rob Zombie universe. Only thing I'd take over that would be a film rounding out the original series, since someone decided H20 didn't do that well enough already.
 
You guys need to write this script and pitch it to Dimension, or whoever has the Halloween rights at this moment. I'd for sure take a new series like that over anything further the Rob Zombie universe. Only thing I'd take over that would be a film rounding out the original series, since someone decided H20 didn't do that well enough already.

Thanks dude :woot: I'd love to do that but they'd never listen lol I do have a vague trilogy idea, where they release each film 4 years apart so the characters can have grown. In the sequel I was gonna have it so Haddonfield celebrates Halloween like a wake type thing, remembering those that died. Laurie is married to Jimmy etc and of course Myers returns, this one would end with Laurie pretty much snapping and ending up in a mental institue. In the final film most of it would take place in the institute with Myers dispatching everything from patients to nurses, doctors etc. Halloween would be banned in Haddonfield and in the end they would somehow end up at the Myers House where we would finally see Myers die. I was gonna have the house get destroyed and have a beam of wood spike straight through him to end him. Then if they wanted a H4 I'd have it be a haunted house movie where the house is haunted by Myers, he would be solid in the house not some ghostly faded aparition type thing and he'd have all the wounds from the previous movie, so blood on the mask, hole in his chest (of course not see through) etc. Halloween would again be allowed in Haddonfield at this point but this is the only way I could see another one after my story is over.

Plus it would kind of be like retreading now. I think when they do eventually reboot Halloween they'll probably make him more like he was in the first one and ditch the sibling stuff. Unfortunately though the Weinstein's have no clue, they'll probably just try to jump on to whatever horror trend that's popular at the time.
 
You guys need to write this script and pitch it to Dimension, or whoever has the Halloween rights at this moment. I'd for sure take a new series like that over anything further the Rob Zombie universe. Only thing I'd take over that would be a film rounding out the original series, since someone decided H20 didn't do that well enough already.
But who'll fix the type-o's... I really hate reading my posts from the phone.

Anyone have any idea's for Loomis? JC's Loomis is a great character but just doing him over again is a little bit boring. Making him a total dick, like Zombie did in the 2nd movie, is just flat out wrong. Maybe something in the middle... more like Jack Crawford from Red Dragon. Kind of a dark character and maybe a little to obsessed with his work but in the end a good guy feeling like he's failed MM.

Are we nixing???
- the trashy family life vibe
- the satanic ritual, man in black thing
- humanizing MM at all
- Samhain
- Meyers size
- Meyers in Smiths Grove

In???
- Most of what BH said
- Judith, Laurie and the baby being set up over two movies
- Suspense over gore (I would want the suspense like JC's movie mixed with the brutal slayings of Zombies)
- The movie closing out at the Meyers family crypt
- The stalking, watching MM
 
Thanks dude :woot: I'd love to do that but they'd never listen lol I do have a vague trilogy idea, where they release each film 4 years apart so the characters can have grown. In the sequel I was gonna have it so Haddonfield celebrates Halloween like a wake type thing, remembering those that died. Laurie is married to Jimmy etc and of course Myers returns, this one would end with Laurie pretty much snapping and ending up in a mental institue. In the final film most of it would take place in the institute with Myers dispatching everything from patients to nurses, doctors etc. Halloween would be banned in Haddonfield and in the end they would somehow end up at the Myers House where we would finally see Myers die. I was gonna have the house get destroyed and have a beam of wood spike straight through him to end him. Then if they wanted a H4 I'd have it be a haunted house movie where the house is haunted by Myers, he would be solid in the house not some ghostly faded aparition type thing and he'd have all the wounds from the previous movie, so blood on the mask, hole in his chest (of course not see through) etc. Halloween would again be allowed in Haddonfield at this point but this is the only way I could see another one after my story is over.

Plus it would kind of be like retreading now. I think when they do eventually reboot Halloween they'll probably make him more like he was in the first one and ditch the sibling stuff. Unfortunately though the Weinstein's have no clue, they'll probably just try to jump on to whatever horror trend that's popular at the time.
Its still fun to talk about without doing the work.

I like the ghost idea as a movie down the line. I was always hoping Jason X was more of a ghost in the woods idea and closer to the Evil Dead than that Alien crap we got.
 
Maybe Laurie could be the one whose pregnant in the sequel? That way aswell if her husband is murdered its even more tragic and it adds to the danger to Laurie?

As for Smiths Grove I thought it best to keep it to a minimum especially as I would never have Myers speak.

Also I killed Loomis at the end of mine cause I feel his purpose is done at the end. Also I was thinking (if I got to make it cause I'm sad like that) I'd cast someone like Rutger Hauer as Loomis, he doesn't need to be English.

I also though in the sequels Bracket would be more prominent and I'd love C Thomas Howell to play that part.

As for Myers, I wouldn't want to humanize him. Zombie already did that and it took a lot away from the character imo.

Suspense and stalking are a must in my eyes. I also kind of agree on the brutal killings but not showing everything and I wouldn't want it like Zombie's H2 (which went too far for me). There was a scene in his first film too where I thought he missed an oppurtunity to make something more terrifying. When Myers kills the Strodes, we should have just seen him bust in and slam the door and then the scene later where we see the bloody house. I think that would have been more effective.
 
Its still fun to talk about without doing the work.

I like the ghost idea as a movie down the line. I was always hoping Jason X was more of a ghost in the woods idea and closer to the Evil Dead than that Alien crap we got.

You're right it is fun.

Yep totally agree Jason X was like a polished Turd. In other words it looked pretty but its still a lump of poo.
 
So, is Pontypool worth a watch? I'm looking for something good and Netflix seems to review it pretty highly.
 
You're right it is fun.

Yep totally agree Jason X was like a polished Turd. In other words it looked pretty but its still a lump of poo.

Just try and forget that it's a Friday The 13th movie. Then it's quite enjoyable.
 
But who'll fix the type-o's... I really hate reading my posts from the phone.

Anyone have any idea's for Loomis? JC's Loomis is a great character but just doing him over again is a little bit boring. Making him a total dick, like Zombie did in the 2nd movie, is just flat out wrong. Maybe something in the middle... more like Jack Crawford from Red Dragon. Kind of a dark character and maybe a little to obsessed with his work but in the end a good guy feeling like he's failed MM.

Are we nixing???
- the trashy family life vibe
- the satanic ritual, man in black thing
- humanizing MM at all
- Samhain
- Meyers size
- Meyers in Smiths Grove

In???
- Most of what BH said
- Judith, Laurie and the baby being set up over two movies
- Suspense over gore (I would want the suspense like JC's movie mixed with the brutal slayings of Zombies)
- The movie closing out at the Meyers family crypt
- The stalking, watching MM
Personally, i'd keep Smith's Grove, but don't do any of the talking scenes like Zombie did, and do a few of Loomis trying to reach a stoic Michael, who hasn't spoken since that night.

If you really want to throw people for a loop, it doesn't have to have any significance whatsoever, but throw in a line about Michael's father working for the Silver Shamrock costume company.
 
So, is Pontypool worth a watch? I'm looking for something good and Netflix seems to review it pretty highly.
It's a good movie. Bizarre and different from the normal horror movie in an interesting way.
 
Personally, i'd keep Smith's Grove, but don't do any of the talking scenes like Zombie did, and do a few of Loomis trying to reach a stoic Michael, who hasn't spoken since that night.

If you really want to throw people for a loop, it doesn't have to have any significance whatsoever, but throw in a line about Michael's father working for the Silver Shamrock costume company.

I don't think you can spend too much time at Smiths Grove tbh, then I think you run into the remakes problem. It was hard to buy into the characters in the second half cause they were introduced so late. I guess you could do it if you told it in a non linear sort of way.

Love the Silver Shamrock idea.
 
I don't think you can spend too much time at Smiths Grove tbh, then I think you run into the remakes problem. It was hard to buy into the characters in the second half cause they were introduced so late. I guess you could do it if you told it in a non linear sort of way.

Love the Silver Shamrock idea.
That Silver Shamrock idea could open so many doors. Like a Happy Happy Halloween spin off. I actually think that would make a great TV series.

If you kill off Loomis after one movie would you bring in a MM hunter? Maybe a character like Zombie's Loomis but without being Loomis... A writer chasing the legend. Ben Tramer? A former school mate of both the Meyers and Strode families is obsessed with MM.

I think coming up with something for Smiths Grove is a cool idea. Maybe not for the movie but it would be an insane extra for the BluRay. Not Meyers talking but Loomis talking to former teachers, family friends and obsessing over the case and comparing him to Manson, Bundy, Dahmer...
 
That Silver Shamrock idea could open so many doors. Like a Happy Happy Halloween spin off. I actually think that would make a great TV series.

If you kill off Loomis after one movie would you bring in a MM hunter? Maybe a character like Zombie's Loomis but without being Loomis... A writer chasing the legend. Ben Tramer? A former school mate of both the Meyers and Strode families is obsessed with MM.

I think coming up with something for Smiths Grove is a cool idea. Maybe not for the movie but it would be an insane extra for the BluRay. Not Meyers talking but Loomis talking to former teachers, family friends and obsessing over the case and comparing him to Manson, Bundy, Dahmer...

Yeah or even a shirt film like those Marvel one shots :D

Well my idea for a sequel is Brackett hunts him, I leave it open at the bed when he finds the mask.

Yeah that would be cool
 
I have an idea for a new Friday The 13th movie, using the original (admittedly somewhat screwed up) timeline. I actually started this as an idea for a Friday The 13th based Horror RPG for my Pathfinder group to play around Halloween, but I got to thinking that it might make for a pretty good F13 sequel.

A group of Paranormal Investigators go out to Crystal Lake in order to determine if this alleged "death curse" is truly supernatural or if it's all just an urban legend. Joining them is a group of college kids attending film school, shooting a documentary for class. The subject of their documentary is "Paranormal Investigations: Real Or Hoax". When they get to the ruins of Camp Crystal Lake, the paranormal investigators set up cameras all over the camp, as well as their "ghost detecting equipment". Then Jason shows up and all Hell breaks loose.

My cast of characters:

RJ: Ralph Junior, the son of "Crazy Ralph" from the two original films. He's been obsessed with Crystal Lake and Jason Voorhees ever since Jason murdered his father back in 1984. He has researched the history of the lake, the town, and the Voorhees family extensively, and is considered by many to be the closest thing to an expert on all things Camp Blood related (though many more consider him to be as crazy as his old man).

Rachelle: The leader of the group of Paranormal Investigators. She's a practicing witch, clairvoyant, and has a strong connection to the spirit world. It was her idea to come out here and see if the tales are true.

David: He is the Paranormal Investigators' "tech guy". He handles all the equipment they use to track ghosts, spirits, and demons. He's also a firm believer in the afterlife. He was a marine in Iraq when he was near fatally wounded. His heart stopped while he was on the operating table, and he claims to have had an out of body experience. He met Rachelle after returning to the States, and the two immediately hit it off. She helped him come to terms with his experience, and they have since become an item.

Andrew: He is the driver for the Paranormal Investigators. He's also a skeptic. A former MMA fighter, he once accidentally killed a man in the octagon. Ever since then he has quit fighting and tries to find answers elsewhere. He and David are best friends, and he has agreed to help because of that friendship. Part of him wants to believe in an afterlife, but in all honesty he just doesn't know what he believes.

June: The producer, director, and star of the student documentary. She has high hopes that this project will be her big ticket to Hollywood, where she's sure she'll make it big one day as a film maker.

Max: Max is June's boyfriend. He's also the groups cameraman. He too has aspirations to make it in Hollywood. A horror film aficionado, he hopes to one day make a movie based on the Legend of Camp Blood. Until then he helps his girlfriend with her documentary project.

Candy: Candy is June's best friend, and the group's boom operator, editor, PA, and pretty much everything else. Like her friends, Candy is determined to make it in Hollywood, and she doesn't care whose casting couch she has to ride to get there. She has an obsession for videotaping herself having sex, and she doesn't care much who's sharing the screen time with her. She'll even f**k Max if it'll help her career.

That's about all I have figured out so far. If it were to be made into a movie, it would be a mix of found footage and regular movie shots (kinda like Halloween Resurrection, but hopefully without sucking donkey d**k).
 
I have an idea for a new Friday The 13th movie, using the original (admittedly somewhat screwed up) timeline. I actually started this as an idea for a Friday The 13th based Horror RPG for my Pathfinder group to play around Halloween, but I got to thinking that it might make for a pretty good F13 sequel.

A group of Paranormal Investigators go out to Crystal Lake in order to determine if this alleged "death curse" is truly supernatural or if it's all just an urban legend. Joining them is a group of college kids attending film school, shooting a documentary for class. The subject of their documentary is "Paranormal Investigations: Real Or Hoax". When they get to the ruins of Camp Crystal Lake, the paranormal investigators set up cameras all over the camp, as well as their "ghost detecting equipment". Then Jason shows up and all Hell breaks loose.

My cast of characters:

RJ: Ralph Junior, the son of "Crazy Ralph" from the two original films. He's been obsessed with Crystal Lake and Jason Voorhees ever since Jason murdered his father back in 1984. He has researched the history of the lake, the town, and the Voorhees family extensively, and is considered by many to be the closest thing to an expert on all things Camp Blood related (though many more consider him to be as crazy as his old man).

Rachelle: The leader of the group of Paranormal Investigators. She's a practicing witch, clairvoyant, and has a strong connection to the spirit world. It was her idea to come out here and see if the tales are true.

David: He is the Paranormal Investigators' "tech guy". He handles all the equipment they use to track ghosts, spirits, and demons. He's also a firm believer in the afterlife. He was a marine in Iraq when he was near fatally wounded. His heart stopped while he was on the operating table, and he claims to have had an out of body experience. He met Rachelle after returning to the States, and the two immediately hit it off. She helped him come to terms with his experience, and they have since become an item.

Andrew: He is the driver for the Paranormal Investigators. He's also a skeptic. A former MMA fighter, he once accidentally killed a man in the octagon. Ever since then he has quit fighting and tries to find answers elsewhere. He and David are best friends, and he has agreed to help because of that friendship. Part of him wants to believe in an afterlife, but in all honesty he just doesn't know what he believes.

June: The producer, director, and star of the student documentary. She has high hopes that this project will be her big ticket to Hollywood, where she's sure she'll make it big one day as a film maker.

Max: Max is June's boyfriend. He's also the groups cameraman. He too has aspirations to make it in Hollywood. A horror film aficionado, he hopes to one day make a movie based on the Legend of Camp Blood. Until then he helps his girlfriend with her documentary project.

Candy: Candy is June's best friend, and the group's boom operator, editor, PA, and pretty much everything else. Like her friends, Candy is determined to make it in Hollywood, and she doesn't care whose casting couch she has to ride to get there. She has an obsession for videotaping herself having sex, and she doesn't care much who's sharing the screen time with her. She'll even f**k Max if it'll help her career.

That's about all I have figured out so far. If it were to be made into a movie, it would be a mix of found footage and regular movie shots (kinda like Halloween Resurrection, but hopefully without sucking donkey d**k).
I kind of like that idea. Not overly a found footage movie but a hybrid. I've always like how the young people always talked about Jasons back story... like in parts 2 and 4.

What Jason are you using? Human, zombie or ghost? IMO something like this would work after part 7. I think right after that the series really went balls up and got really wacky.

At the same time the first 15 mins of the new Friday had me so geeked that I would just love to see a reboot done the right way. Maybe that's a new and fresh way to start fresh. The film makers go out to research the killings of Mrs. V and find out that Jason isn't dead. We get the origin story without doing it over and we get human Jason again.
 
I kind of like that idea. Not overly a found footage movie but a hybrid. I've always like how the young people always talked about Jasons back story... like in parts 2 and 4.

What Jason are you using? Human, zombie or ghost? IMO something like this would work after part 7. I think right after that the series really went balls up and got really wacky.

At the same time the first 15 mins of the new Friday had me so geeked that I would just love to see a reboot done the right way. Maybe that's a new and fresh way to start fresh. The film makers go out to research the killings of Mrs. V and find out that Jason isn't dead. We get the origin story without doing it over and we get human Jason again.

My original idea was a sequel to The New Blood, ignoring the crapfest that was Jason Takes A Cruise. However, I do kinda like your idea of making it a new reboot, with human Jason showing up to continue the carnage. I guess it could work either way.
 
I have an idea for a new Friday The 13th movie, using the original (admittedly somewhat screwed up) timeline. I actually started this as an idea for a Friday The 13th based Horror RPG for my Pathfinder group to play around Halloween, but I got to thinking that it might make for a pretty good F13 sequel.

A group of Paranormal Investigators go out to Crystal Lake in order to determine if this alleged "death curse" is truly supernatural or if it's all just an urban legend. Joining them is a group of college kids attending film school, shooting a documentary for class. The subject of their documentary is "Paranormal Investigations: Real Or Hoax". When they get to the ruins of Camp Crystal Lake, the paranormal investigators set up cameras all over the camp, as well as their "ghost detecting equipment". Then Jason shows up and all Hell breaks loose.

My cast of characters:

RJ: Ralph Junior, the son of "Crazy Ralph" from the two original films. He's been obsessed with Crystal Lake and Jason Voorhees ever since Jason murdered his father back in 1984. He has researched the history of the lake, the town, and the Voorhees family extensively, and is considered by many to be the closest thing to an expert on all things Camp Blood related (though many more consider him to be as crazy as his old man).

Rachelle: The leader of the group of Paranormal Investigators. She's a practicing witch, clairvoyant, and has a strong connection to the spirit world. It was her idea to come out here and see if the tales are true.

David: He is the Paranormal Investigators' "tech guy". He handles all the equipment they use to track ghosts, spirits, and demons. He's also a firm believer in the afterlife. He was a marine in Iraq when he was near fatally wounded. His heart stopped while he was on the operating table, and he claims to have had an out of body experience. He met Rachelle after returning to the States, and the two immediately hit it off. She helped him come to terms with his experience, and they have since become an item.

Andrew: He is the driver for the Paranormal Investigators. He's also a skeptic. A former MMA fighter, he once accidentally killed a man in the octagon. Ever since then he has quit fighting and tries to find answers elsewhere. He and David are best friends, and he has agreed to help because of that friendship. Part of him wants to believe in an afterlife, but in all honesty he just doesn't know what he believes.

June: The producer, director, and star of the student documentary. She has high hopes that this project will be her big ticket to Hollywood, where she's sure she'll make it big one day as a film maker.

Max: Max is June's boyfriend. He's also the groups cameraman. He too has aspirations to make it in Hollywood. A horror film aficionado, he hopes to one day make a movie based on the Legend of Camp Blood. Until then he helps his girlfriend with her documentary project.

Candy: Candy is June's best friend, and the group's boom operator, editor, PA, and pretty much everything else. Like her friends, Candy is determined to make it in Hollywood, and she doesn't care whose casting couch she has to ride to get there. She has an obsession for videotaping herself having sex, and she doesn't care much who's sharing the screen time with her. She'll even f**k Max if it'll help her career.

That's about all I have figured out so far. If it were to be made into a movie, it would be a mix of found footage and regular movie shots (kinda like Halloween Resurrection, but hopefully without sucking donkey d**k).

Nice, and with Paramount reportedly wanting to go the found footage route, this could certainly work.
 
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