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Sequels The Official "How YOU would do Spider-Man 4" thread

3 things:

1) There shouldn't be a "#4". There should be a new number one with the atrocity that they made of the last one.

2) Many of the suggestions on here are so busy and bulging with excess characters that they'd be likely as bad as 3 was

3) I would lay money down that the Venom movie idea will never get made. And if it did I would never watch it with the kid from that 70's show playing him. That kid isn't Brock. He didn't play the character AT ALL right and he's so thin in comparison that he could be Brock's skeleton.
 
How I’d do Spider-Man 4:

Dr. Connors becomes Lizard. Kraven arrives in New York and is hunting Lizard. Kraven shoots Spider-Man with a dart and buries him, thinking he’s dead. Spider-Man’s fist bursts out of the ground, cue music. He leaves the cemetery and enters the sewers. Spider-sense. Too late, he’s hit. He falls flat on his face, and you see Lizard from Spider-Man’s perspective. All you hear is growling. Lizard makes his move and swipes Spider-Man. The fight ensues, despite Kraven’s insistence that Spider-Man stay away; Lizard is his to hunt. This turns into a three way fight, with Spider-Man fighting Kraven and Lizard while trying to save Lizard.
 
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Hmmm. How I would do Spider-Man 4. Well I wouldn't have Peter crying all the time. Less loser and more comfortable in his own skin. (I've always thought that was one of John Romita's great contributions to the character when he took over). I wouldn't have Tobey making one more ugly face just to earn that big paycheck. And I'd have a lot more SPIDER-MAN in a Spider-Man movie.
 
I would have the movie begin with the typical SPIDER-MAN style credits. The credits flip and zoom around a large sphere with webs flying to and fro. Then as the camera moves back you see that the spere is really more like a giant egg. and SPIDER-MAN 4 comes on the screen just before the egg breaks up and hatches, and The Lizard flies onto the screen and sticks.
 
I would have the movie begin with the typical SPIDER-MAN style credits. The credits flip and zoom around a large sphere with webs flying to and fro. Then as the camera moves back you see that the spere is really more like a giant egg. and SPIDER-MAN 4 comes on the screen just before the egg breaks up and hatches, and The Lizard flies onto the screen and sticks.

lol :waa:
 
Charlie Weirderman as a combination of deranged villain and misunderstood monster.
 
Spider-Man 4

By Mr. Wooden Alligator

Treatment:

Adrian Toomes would be a business man who hired a master assassin, the Chameleon, to take out big business rivals. Since Spider-Man saved Gwen from being killed by that crane in Spider-Man 3, Captain Stacy has started working in conjunction with the web-slinger to apprehend these gangs being supplied by Toomes. Toomes is prepared for Spider-Man. The businessman has designed a flight suit with a number of features, such as wing-mounted homing missiles (the “Feathers” of the wings are the missiles/pin missiles). Spider-Man manages to apprehend Toomes and swings away before the NYPD can take him in. At this point they don’t know Spider-Man is working with Captain Stacy. It’s a secret. Confessions from various thugs, inventories of missing gear from Toomes’s company, and leaks about illicit human experimentation ends up putting Toomes behind bars.

Mary Jane has been having nightmares of Peter losing control of himself, combined with flashes of that time at the jazz club where he hit her. She decides to go to her mother for advice. She tells Mary Jane about how she had fallen in love with her father much like Mary Jane did with Peter. After this, Mary Jane begins to think about whether or not she wants to stay with Peter.

Peter’s grades have seen such an improvement that Dr. Connors has asked him, Gwen, and a select few other students to assist him in a research project. They are studying the regenerative effects of reptiles in relation to human physiology and biology. That night at the Connors household, the doctor’s wife asks him how much longer he’ll be doing late work in the lab. She reminds him about how he’s missed important events for their son by working late in the lab. He tries to apologize to her, but she tells him to apologize to his son. So Connors goes to his son’s bedroom and apologizes. Though the boy doesn’t really accept the apology, but gives Connors more a “that’s okay” and crawls into bed to sleep. In the hallway Mrs. Connors tells Curt that their son needs a father who’ll be there for him. Then she tells him flat out that she’ll leave him if there’s any more late night research.

The next day Peter goes to kiss Mary Jane goodbye and she accepts the kiss but flinches at the touch of his hand to her shoulder. Peter pretends he didn’t notice and heads on to school. Mary Jane gets up from the table and digs out that play Harry had written and begins reading through it. At college, Connors has cancelled the day’s lectures to finish up his research in one long session. Many tests on guinea pigs yield fascinating results, such as hairless, slightly scaly re-grown limbs. It becomes evident that more research will be needed to finalize the product. Regardless, Connors actually heads home early, slightly disappointed that his research is still unfinished but the reception he receives from his wife eases the disappointment. She’s happy, smiling, and just glad that he made it home early. Just in time for their son’s elementary team basketball game.

Peter returns to his and Mary Jane’s apartment to find her reciting lines in front of a mirror. She tells him that a production company bought Harry’s play and offered her a part. Peter tells her that’s great when there is a crackle of static from the police scanner. Peter suits up and swings out into the New York night. Following the call he finds that there was a break out at the prison. A crazy man with shockwave blasters uses them against the cops and busts down the northwest wall of the prison. Spider-Man and Stacy manage to apprehend him before setting out after the thugs set loose by the Shocker.

Peter returns early the next morning tired from the long night to find a note from Mary Jane stuck to the fridge saying she got a part in the play. After breakfast and several cups of coffee, Peter leaves for classes. More tests are run and what Connors believes to be a finalized product is developed. He congratulates the students who aided and dismisses them for the day. Gwen asks Peter what he’s doing later; he tells her he’s going to the new production at the theatre.
After the play, they go for a walk in the park where Mary Jane tells Peter about the play hitting the road, and how they want her to go with them on the country-wide production. Peter nods and tells her he’s notice she’s been acting differently lately. He asks if it had anything to do with “that thing” (meaning the symbiote). She reluctantly tells him that yes, its had her worrying and wondering what would happen if something else happened to Peter…would he accidently use his powers in the wrong way…would he accidentally hurt someone he loves…Peter nods and tells her he’s had similar thoughts. He then tells her that he loves her, and if she would feel safer away from him, then he wouldn’t hold it against her. They share a hug under the moonlight and she thanks him. He wishes her luck in life. They kiss.

Suddenly something bursts from the foliage nearby. Peter pushes Mary Jane out of its way and tells her to run. He rips off his clothes, revealing his Spider-Suit beneath it. He pulls on the mask and leaps into a tree to search for whatever had followed them. His Spider-Sense goes off and he sees a rustling in the bushes nearby, following the progress of another couple. Peter nods at the rustling and tells Mary Jane she might want to get out there. He pulls off his shirt and pants to reveal his Spider-Suit, dons the mask, and stealthily approaches the thing following the couple. His Spider-Sense alerts him that it’s preparing to pounce. At the exact moment that the watcher makes its move, Spider-Man makes his. He collides with a large, reptilian monster. The Lizard. The couple runs off screaming as Spider-Man tussles with the Lizard. The fight ends with Spider-Man getting hurled into a tree and the Lizard fleeing. Spider-Man pursues the beast to a manhole and decides against tailing it. Instead he swings by the NYPD and waits.

When Captain Stacy leaves for the night, Spider-Man confronts him and asks him about any reports of animal attacks. Stacy shakes his head no. They’re still searching for the Shocker. Spider-Man swings back to the apartment to find Mary Jane’s bags packed and her asleep.

The next day, Connors isn’t in class. Gwen mentions that her father got some interesting reports early that morning about partially devoured sewage plant workers and a couple of joggers. Peter stops by the Connors house hold. Mrs. Connors asks Peter if he’s heard anything, anything at all about Curt. He tells her no. He was wondering why the doctor didn’t show up for the day’s lecture. The Connors child, Billy, tells Peter that he saw daddy outside that past night. Peter asks about that. Mrs. Connors tells him that Billy woke her up saying daddy was outside. She checked and saw no one. Figure Billy was dreaming.

That night Mary Jane leaves. After Peter sees her off, he swings by the Connors house and perches in a tree in the backyard. Soon the Lizard ambles into the yard. Spider-Man watches in silence as the Lizard sits before Billy’s window, watching his son with what appears to be some measure of intelligence. Afterward the Lizard leaves and Spider-Man follows him into the sewers. Suddenly the darkness is flooded with lights: the police lead by Captain Stacy has set up a trap to catch the Lizard. Lizard panics and begins tearing into the ranks of officers. Spider-Man must protect the Lizard from the officers, and the officer from the Lizard. Lizard manages to escape; Spider-Man follows him. Eventually they lose the police. Spider-Man follows the beast to a lair of sorts. The Lizard then turns and takes another way out of the sewers, leading back to the Connors house. There he smashes into the house and abducts Billy. The NYPD arrive, but by that time Billy is gone and Martha Connors is seriously wounded. Spider-Man returns to his apartment.

Peter makes plans to collect a sample of Connors’s skin and blood. He then suits up and heads back into the sewers, where he finds Billy left alone and sleeping. He hears a splashing down the tunnels and hides. Lizard returns with a dead fish and lays it beside Billy. Then Spider-Man makes his move. He gets his sample and flees. Later that day in the lab he manages to concoct an antidote to the serum Connors took. He returns to the sewers and fights Lizard a final time, administering the serum. The Lizard becomes Connors who doesn’t seem to remember a thing. He tells Connors about the transformation, about attacking his wife, about abducting his son.

MOAR TO COME!
 
Spider-Man 4

By Mr. Wooden Alligator

Treatment:

Adrian Toomes would be a business man who hired a master assassin, the Chameleon, to take out big business rivals. Since Spider-Man saved Gwen from being killed by that crane in Spider-Man 3, Captain Stacy has started working in conjunction with the web-slinger to apprehend these gangs being supplied by Toomes. Toomes is prepared for Spider-Man. The businessman has designed a flight suit with a number of features, such as wing-mounted homing missiles (the “Feathers” of the wings are the missiles/pin missiles). Spider-Man manages to apprehend Toomes and swings away before the NYPD can take him in. At this point they don’t know Spider-Man is working with Captain Stacy. It’s a secret. Confessions from various thugs, inventories of missing gear from Toomes’s company, and leaks about illicit human experimentation ends up putting Toomes behind bars.

Mary Jane has been having nightmares of Peter losing control of himself, combined with flashes of that time at the jazz club where he hit her. She decides to go to her mother for advice. She tells Mary Jane about how she had fallen in love with her father much like Mary Jane did with Peter. After this, Mary Jane begins to think about whether or not she wants to stay with Peter.

Peter’s grades have seen such an improvement that Dr. Connors has asked him, Gwen, and a select few other students to assist him in a research project. They are studying the regenerative effects of reptiles in relation to human physiology and biology. That night at the Connors household, the doctor’s wife asks him how much longer he’ll be doing late work in the lab. She reminds him about how he’s missed important events for their son by working late in the lab. He tries to apologize to her, but she tells him to apologize to his son. So Connors goes to his son’s bedroom and apologizes. Though the boy doesn’t really accept the apology, but gives Connors more a “that’s okay” and crawls into bed to sleep. In the hallway Mrs. Connors tells Curt that their son needs a father who’ll be there for him. Then she tells him flat out that she’ll leave him if there’s any more late night research.

The next day Peter goes to kiss Mary Jane goodbye and she accepts the kiss but flinches at the touch of his hand to her shoulder. Peter pretends he didn’t notice and heads on to school. Mary Jane gets up from the table and digs out that play Harry had written and begins reading through it. At college, Connors has cancelled the day’s lectures to finish up his research in one long session. Many tests on guinea pigs yield fascinating results, such as hairless, slightly scaly re-grown limbs. It becomes evident that more research will be needed to finalize the product. Regardless, Connors actually heads home early, slightly disappointed that his research is still unfinished but the reception he receives from his wife eases the disappointment. She’s happy, smiling, and just glad that he made it home early. Just in time for their son’s elementary team basketball game.

Peter returns to his and Mary Jane’s apartment to find her reciting lines in front of a mirror. She tells him that a production company bought Harry’s play and offered her a part. Peter tells her that’s great when there is a crackle of static from the police scanner. Peter suits up and swings out into the New York night. Following the call he finds that there was a break out at the prison. A crazy man with shockwave blasters uses them against the cops and busts down the northwest wall of the prison. Spider-Man and Stacy manage to apprehend him before setting out after the thugs set loose by the Shocker.

Peter returns early the next morning tired from the long night to find a note from Mary Jane stuck to the fridge saying she got a part in the play. After breakfast and several cups of coffee, Peter leaves for classes. More tests are run and what Connors believes to be a finalized product is developed. He congratulates the students who aided and dismisses them for the day. Gwen asks Peter what he’s doing later; he tells her he’s going to the new production at the theatre.
After the play, they go for a walk in the park where Mary Jane tells Peter about the play hitting the road, and how they want her to go with them on the country-wide production. Peter nods and tells her he’s notice she’s been acting differently lately. He asks if it had anything to do with “that thing” (meaning the symbiote). She reluctantly tells him that yes, its had her worrying and wondering what would happen if something else happened to Peter…would he accidently use his powers in the wrong way…would he accidentally hurt someone he loves…Peter nods and tells her he’s had similar thoughts. He then tells her that he loves her, and if she would feel safer away from him, then he wouldn’t hold it against her. They share a hug under the moonlight and she thanks him. He wishes her luck in life. They kiss.

Suddenly something bursts from the foliage nearby. Peter pushes Mary Jane out of its way and tells her to run. He rips off his clothes, revealing his Spider-Suit beneath it. He pulls on the mask and leaps into a tree to search for whatever had followed them. His Spider-Sense goes off and he sees a rustling in the bushes nearby, following the progress of another couple. Peter nods at the rustling and tells Mary Jane she might want to get out there. He pulls off his shirt and pants to reveal his Spider-Suit, dons the mask, and stealthily approaches the thing following the couple. His Spider-Sense alerts him that it’s preparing to pounce. At the exact moment that the watcher makes its move, Spider-Man makes his. He collides with a large, reptilian monster. The Lizard. The couple runs off screaming as Spider-Man tussles with the Lizard. The fight ends with Spider-Man getting hurled into a tree and the Lizard fleeing. Spider-Man pursues the beast to a manhole and decides against tailing it. Instead he swings by the NYPD and waits.

When Captain Stacy leaves for the night, Spider-Man confronts him and asks him about any reports of animal attacks. Stacy shakes his head no. They’re still searching for the Shocker. Spider-Man swings back to the apartment to find Mary Jane’s bags packed and her asleep.

The next day, Connors isn’t in class. Gwen mentions that her father got some interesting reports early that morning about partially devoured sewage plant workers and a couple of joggers. Peter stops by the Connors house hold. Mrs. Connors asks Peter if he’s heard anything, anything at all about Curt. He tells her no. He was wondering why the doctor didn’t show up for the day’s lecture. The Connors child, Billy, tells Peter that he saw daddy outside that past night. Peter asks about that. Mrs. Connors tells him that Billy woke her up saying daddy was outside. She checked and saw no one. Figure Billy was dreaming.

That night Mary Jane leaves. After Peter sees her off, he swings by the Connors house and perches in a tree in the backyard. Soon the Lizard ambles into the yard. Spider-Man watches in silence as the Lizard sits before Billy’s window, watching his son with what appears to be some measure of intelligence. Afterward the Lizard leaves and Spider-Man follows him into the sewers. Suddenly the darkness is flooded with lights: the police lead by Captain Stacy has set up a trap to catch the Lizard. Lizard panics and begins tearing into the ranks of officers. Spider-Man must protect the Lizard from the officers, and the officer from the Lizard. Lizard manages to escape; Spider-Man follows him. Eventually they lose the police. Spider-Man follows the beast to a lair of sorts. The Lizard then turns and takes another way out of the sewers, leading back to the Connors house. There he smashes into the house and abducts Billy. The NYPD arrive, but by that time Billy is gone and Martha Connors is seriously wounded. Spider-Man returns to his apartment.

Peter makes plans to collect a sample of Connors’s skin and blood. He then suits up and heads back into the sewers, where he finds Billy left alone and sleeping. He hears a splashing down the tunnels and hides. Lizard returns with a dead fish and lays it beside Billy. Then Spider-Man makes his move. He gets his sample and flees. Later that day in the lab he manages to concoct an antidote to the serum Connors took. He returns to the sewers and fights Lizard a final time, administering the serum. The Lizard becomes Connors who doesn’t seem to remember a thing. He tells Connors about the transformation, about attacking his wife, about abducting his son.

MOAR TO COME!


That is absolutley the most amazing idea. keep it up
 
My idea for a teaser trailer? If Kraven was involved.

I would start off with a black night. Only clouds are seen. Some flashes of light. A rumble of thunder.

We pan down through the sky and we drift in fron of us, blackness still around, with rumbles of thunder still. We soon come out of the darkness to a night setting. It is also raining. Then we see shapes.

As we get closer to the objects we are in a cemetary, scouting through the graves.
And we soon reach to one. We watch it for about five seconds. Then movement. The dirt begins to move, the gravestone starts to move too. Then finally, after stuggling, the gloved hand of Spider-Man emgerges out of the ground. Not like a zombie, more like a determined look. Like a "I still need to do this." Kinda thing.

We can end here, or show shots of various footage.

This is an obvious nod to Kraven's Last Hunt. But I can really see Raimi do this.
 
I dunno why Raimi turned Curt into a particle physicist or whatever instead of a biologist but that pretty much alters the Lizard origin. So here's my take on a new one.

Connors tells Pete his symbiote sample starved to death but he in fact bonded it permanently to one of the lizards in his home lab. A sPecies skink of skink which reproduces asexually. He notes it's amazing regenerative abilities. The skink lays a bizarre egg.

Curt comes home one night to find his house has been broken into. Cletus Cassidy, a crackhead desPerate for money loots expensive looking equipment in his lab. A fight breaks out between the two and in the struggle, they crash into symbiote lizard's tank. The lizard, crushed under Curt's body, bites him as it's killed. Cletus smashes the eggs under his arm, and the mysterious embryonic symbiote burns itself into his skin.

Cletus escapes and the two begin their resPective mutations.
 
I dunno why Raimi turned Curt into a particle physicist or whatever instead of a biologist but that pretty much alters the Lizard origin. So here's my take on a new one.

Connors tells Pete his symbiote sample starved to death but he in fact bonded it permanently to one of the lizards in his home lab. A sPecies skink of skink which reproduces asexually. He notes it's amazing regenerative abilities. The skink lays a bizarre egg.

Curt comes home one night to find his house has been broken into. Cletus Cassidy, a crackhead desPerate for money loots expensive looking equipment in his lab. A fight breaks out between the two and in the struggle, they crash into symbiote lizard's tank. The lizard, crushed under Curt's body, bites him as it's killed. Cletus smashes the eggs under his arm, and the mysterious embryonic symbiote burns itself into his skin.

Cletus escapes and the two begin their resPective mutations.
No, lets just have it not be a bunch of accidental bitings this tim.e How about the Lizard isn't Curt Connors (since, as you explained it no longer can be) and have the new Lizard just come from an egg.
 
Spider-Man 4

By Mr. Wooden Alligator

Treatment:

Adrian Toomes would be a business man who hired a master assassin, the Chameleon, to take out big business rivals. Since Spider-Man saved Gwen from being killed by that crane in Spider-Man 3, Captain Stacy has started working in conjunction with the web-slinger to apprehend these gangs being supplied by Toomes. Toomes is prepared for Spider-Man. The businessman has designed a flight suit with a number of features, such as wing-mounted homing missiles (the “Feathers” of the wings are the missiles/pin missiles). Spider-Man manages to apprehend Toomes and swings away before the NYPD can take him in. At this point they don’t know Spider-Man is working with Captain Stacy. It’s a secret. Confessions from various thugs, inventories of missing gear from Toomes’s company, and leaks about illicit human experimentation ends up putting Toomes behind bars.

Mary Jane has been having nightmares of Peter losing control of himself, combined with flashes of that time at the jazz club where he hit her. She decides to go to her mother for advice. She tells Mary Jane about how she had fallen in love with her father much like Mary Jane did with Peter. After this, Mary Jane begins to think about whether or not she wants to stay with Peter.

Peter’s grades have seen such an improvement that Dr. Connors has asked him, Gwen, and a select few other students to assist him in a research project. They are studying the regenerative effects of reptiles in relation to human physiology and biology. That night at the Connors household, the doctor’s wife asks him how much longer he’ll be doing late work in the lab. She reminds him about how he’s missed important events for their son by working late in the lab. He tries to apologize to her, but she tells him to apologize to his son. So Connors goes to his son’s bedroom and apologizes. Though the boy doesn’t really accept the apology, but gives Connors more a “that’s okay” and crawls into bed to sleep. In the hallway Mrs. Connors tells Curt that their son needs a father who’ll be there for him. Then she tells him flat out that she’ll leave him if there’s any more late night research.

The next day Peter goes to kiss Mary Jane goodbye and she accepts the kiss but flinches at the touch of his hand to her shoulder. Peter pretends he didn’t notice and heads on to school. Mary Jane gets up from the table and digs out that play Harry had written and begins reading through it. At college, Connors has cancelled the day’s lectures to finish up his research in one long session. Many tests on guinea pigs yield fascinating results, such as hairless, slightly scaly re-grown limbs. It becomes evident that more research will be needed to finalize the product. Regardless, Connors actually heads home early, slightly disappointed that his research is still unfinished but the reception he receives from his wife eases the disappointment. She’s happy, smiling, and just glad that he made it home early. Just in time for their son’s elementary team basketball game.

Peter returns to his and Mary Jane’s apartment to find her reciting lines in front of a mirror. She tells him that a production company bought Harry’s play and offered her a part. Peter tells her that’s great when there is a crackle of static from the police scanner. Peter suits up and swings out into the New York night. Following the call he finds that there was a break out at the prison. A crazy man with shockwave blasters uses them against the cops and busts down the northwest wall of the prison. Spider-Man and Stacy manage to apprehend him before setting out after the thugs set loose by the Shocker.

Peter returns early the next morning tired from the long night to find a note from Mary Jane stuck to the fridge saying she got a part in the play. After breakfast and several cups of coffee, Peter leaves for classes. More tests are run and what Connors believes to be a finalized product is developed. He congratulates the students who aided and dismisses them for the day. Gwen asks Peter what he’s doing later; he tells her he’s going to the new production at the theatre.
After the play, they go for a walk in the park where Mary Jane tells Peter about the play hitting the road, and how they want her to go with them on the country-wide production. Peter nods and tells her he’s notice she’s been acting differently lately. He asks if it had anything to do with “that thing” (meaning the symbiote). She reluctantly tells him that yes, its had her worrying and wondering what would happen if something else happened to Peter…would he accidently use his powers in the wrong way…would he accidentally hurt someone he loves…Peter nods and tells her he’s had similar thoughts. He then tells her that he loves her, and if she would feel safer away from him, then he wouldn’t hold it against her. They share a hug under the moonlight and she thanks him. He wishes her luck in life. They kiss.

Suddenly something bursts from the foliage nearby. Peter pushes Mary Jane out of its way and tells her to run. He rips off his clothes, revealing his Spider-Suit beneath it. He pulls on the mask and leaps into a tree to search for whatever had followed them. His Spider-Sense goes off and he sees a rustling in the bushes nearby, following the progress of another couple. Peter nods at the rustling and tells Mary Jane she might want to get out there. He pulls off his shirt and pants to reveal his Spider-Suit, dons the mask, and stealthily approaches the thing following the couple. His Spider-Sense alerts him that it’s preparing to pounce. At the exact moment that the watcher makes its move, Spider-Man makes his. He collides with a large, reptilian monster. The Lizard. The couple runs off screaming as Spider-Man tussles with the Lizard. The fight ends with Spider-Man getting hurled into a tree and the Lizard fleeing. Spider-Man pursues the beast to a manhole and decides against tailing it. Instead he swings by the NYPD and waits.

When Captain Stacy leaves for the night, Spider-Man confronts him and asks him about any reports of animal attacks. Stacy shakes his head no. They’re still searching for the Shocker. Spider-Man swings back to the apartment to find Mary Jane’s bags packed and her asleep.

The next day, Connors isn’t in class. Gwen mentions that her father got some interesting reports early that morning about partially devoured sewage plant workers and a couple of joggers. Peter stops by the Connors house hold. Mrs. Connors asks Peter if he’s heard anything, anything at all about Curt. He tells her no. He was wondering why the doctor didn’t show up for the day’s lecture. The Connors child, Billy, tells Peter that he saw daddy outside that past night. Peter asks about that. Mrs. Connors tells him that Billy woke her up saying daddy was outside. She checked and saw no one. Figure Billy was dreaming.

That night Mary Jane leaves. After Peter sees her off, he swings by the Connors house and perches in a tree in the backyard. Soon the Lizard ambles into the yard. Spider-Man watches in silence as the Lizard sits before Billy’s window, watching his son with what appears to be some measure of intelligence. Afterward the Lizard leaves and Spider-Man follows him into the sewers. Suddenly the darkness is flooded with lights: the police lead by Captain Stacy has set up a trap to catch the Lizard. Lizard panics and begins tearing into the ranks of officers. Spider-Man must protect the Lizard from the officers, and the officer from the Lizard. Lizard manages to escape; Spider-Man follows him. Eventually they lose the police. Spider-Man follows the beast to a lair of sorts. The Lizard then turns and takes another way out of the sewers, leading back to the Connors house. There he smashes into the house and abducts Billy. The NYPD arrive, but by that time Billy is gone and Martha Connors is seriously wounded. Spider-Man returns to his apartment.

Peter makes plans to collect a sample of Connors’s skin and blood. He then suits up and heads back into the sewers, where he finds Billy left alone and sleeping. He hears a splashing down the tunnels and hides. Lizard returns with a dead fish and lays it beside Billy. Then Spider-Man makes his move. He gets his sample and flees. Later that day in the lab he manages to concoct an antidote to the serum Connors took. He returns to the sewers and fights Lizard a final time, administering the serum. The Lizard becomes Connors who doesn’t seem to remember a thing. He tells Connors about the transformation, about attacking his wife, about abducting his son.

MOAR TO COME!

Not bad. Shocker doesn't really need to be there. But it's interesting about Toomes. Him being featured in the beginning and showing up layer while dealing with the Lizard in the middle is a nice idea. But I hope you keep Connors's story the soul of this film.
 
Spider-Man 4

By Mr. Wooden Alligator

Treatment:

Adrian Toomes would be a business man who hired a master assassin, the Chameleon, to take out big business rivals. Since Spider-Man saved Gwen from being killed by that crane in Spider-Man 3, Captain Stacy has started working in conjunction with the web-slinger to apprehend these gangs being supplied by Toomes. Toomes is prepared for Spider-Man. The businessman has designed a flight suit with a number of features, such as wing-mounted homing missiles (the “Feathers” of the wings are the missiles/pin missiles). Spider-Man manages to apprehend Toomes and swings away before the NYPD can take him in. At this point they don’t know Spider-Man is working with Captain Stacy. It’s a secret. Confessions from various thugs, inventories of missing gear from Toomes’s company, and leaks about illicit human experimentation ends up putting Toomes behind bars.

Mary Jane has been having nightmares of Peter losing control of himself, combined with flashes of that time at the jazz club where he hit her. She decides to go to her mother for advice. She tells Mary Jane about how she had fallen in love with her father much like Mary Jane did with Peter. After this, Mary Jane begins to think about whether or not she wants to stay with Peter.

Peter’s grades have seen such an improvement that Dr. Connors has asked him, Gwen, and a select few other students to assist him in a research project. They are studying the regenerative effects of reptiles in relation to human physiology and biology. That night at the Connors household, the doctor’s wife asks him how much longer he’ll be doing late work in the lab. She reminds him about how he’s missed important events for their son by working late in the lab. He tries to apologize to her, but she tells him to apologize to his son. So Connors goes to his son’s bedroom and apologizes. Though the boy doesn’t really accept the apology, but gives Connors more a “that’s okay” and crawls into bed to sleep. In the hallway Mrs. Connors tells Curt that their son needs a father who’ll be there for him. Then she tells him flat out that she’ll leave him if there’s any more late night research.

The next day Peter goes to kiss Mary Jane goodbye and she accepts the kiss but flinches at the touch of his hand to her shoulder. Peter pretends he didn’t notice and heads on to school. Mary Jane gets up from the table and digs out that play Harry had written and begins reading through it. At college, Connors has cancelled the day’s lectures to finish up his research in one long session. Many tests on guinea pigs yield fascinating results, such as hairless, slightly scaly re-grown limbs. It becomes evident that more research will be needed to finalize the product. Regardless, Connors actually heads home early, slightly disappointed that his research is still unfinished but the reception he receives from his wife eases the disappointment. She’s happy, smiling, and just glad that he made it home early. Just in time for their son’s elementary team basketball game.

Peter returns to his and Mary Jane’s apartment to find her reciting lines in front of a mirror. She tells him that a production company bought Harry’s play and offered her a part. Peter tells her that’s great when there is a crackle of static from the police scanner. Peter suits up and swings out into the New York night. Following the call he finds that there was a break out at the prison. A crazy man with shockwave blasters uses them against the cops and busts down the northwest wall of the prison. Spider-Man and Stacy manage to apprehend him before setting out after the thugs set loose by the Shocker.

Peter returns early the next morning tired from the long night to find a note from Mary Jane stuck to the fridge saying she got a part in the play. After breakfast and several cups of coffee, Peter leaves for classes. More tests are run and what Connors believes to be a finalized product is developed. He congratulates the students who aided and dismisses them for the day. Gwen asks Peter what he’s doing later; he tells her he’s going to the new production at the theatre.
After the play, they go for a walk in the park where Mary Jane tells Peter about the play hitting the road, and how they want her to go with them on the country-wide production. Peter nods and tells her he’s notice she’s been acting differently lately. He asks if it had anything to do with “that thing” (meaning the symbiote). She reluctantly tells him that yes, its had her worrying and wondering what would happen if something else happened to Peter…would he accidently use his powers in the wrong way…would he accidentally hurt someone he loves…Peter nods and tells her he’s had similar thoughts. He then tells her that he loves her, and if she would feel safer away from him, then he wouldn’t hold it against her. They share a hug under the moonlight and she thanks him. He wishes her luck in life. They kiss.

Suddenly something bursts from the foliage nearby. Peter pushes Mary Jane out of its way and tells her to run. He rips off his clothes, revealing his Spider-Suit beneath it. He pulls on the mask and leaps into a tree to search for whatever had followed them. His Spider-Sense goes off and he sees a rustling in the bushes nearby, following the progress of another couple. Peter nods at the rustling and tells Mary Jane she might want to get out there. He pulls off his shirt and pants to reveal his Spider-Suit, dons the mask, and stealthily approaches the thing following the couple. His Spider-Sense alerts him that it’s preparing to pounce. At the exact moment that the watcher makes its move, Spider-Man makes his. He collides with a large, reptilian monster. The Lizard. The couple runs off screaming as Spider-Man tussles with the Lizard. The fight ends with Spider-Man getting hurled into a tree and the Lizard fleeing. Spider-Man pursues the beast to a manhole and decides against tailing it. Instead he swings by the NYPD and waits.

When Captain Stacy leaves for the night, Spider-Man confronts him and asks him about any reports of animal attacks. Stacy shakes his head no. They’re still searching for the Shocker. Spider-Man swings back to the apartment to find Mary Jane’s bags packed and her asleep.

The next day, Connors isn’t in class. Gwen mentions that her father got some interesting reports early that morning about partially devoured sewage plant workers and a couple of joggers. Peter stops by the Connors house hold. Mrs. Connors asks Peter if he’s heard anything, anything at all about Curt. He tells her no. He was wondering why the doctor didn’t show up for the day’s lecture. The Connors child, Billy, tells Peter that he saw daddy outside that past night. Peter asks about that. Mrs. Connors tells him that Billy woke her up saying daddy was outside. She checked and saw no one. Figure Billy was dreaming.

That night Mary Jane leaves. After Peter sees her off, he swings by the Connors house and perches in a tree in the backyard. Soon the Lizard ambles into the yard. Spider-Man watches in silence as the Lizard sits before Billy’s window, watching his son with what appears to be some measure of intelligence. Afterward the Lizard leaves and Spider-Man follows him into the sewers. Suddenly the darkness is flooded with lights: the police lead by Captain Stacy has set up a trap to catch the Lizard. Lizard panics and begins tearing into the ranks of officers. Spider-Man must protect the Lizard from the officers, and the officer from the Lizard. Lizard manages to escape; Spider-Man follows him. Eventually they lose the police. Spider-Man follows the beast to a lair of sorts. The Lizard then turns and takes another way out of the sewers, leading back to the Connors house. There he smashes into the house and abducts Billy. The NYPD arrive, but by that time Billy is gone and Martha Connors is seriously wounded. Spider-Man returns to his apartment.

Peter makes plans to collect a sample of Connors’s skin and blood. He then suits up and heads back into the sewers, where he finds Billy left alone and sleeping. He hears a splashing down the tunnels and hides. Lizard returns with a dead fish and lays it beside Billy. Then Spider-Man makes his move. He gets his sample and flees. Later that day in the lab he manages to concoct an antidote to the serum Connors took. He returns to the sewers and fights Lizard a final time, administering the serum. The Lizard becomes Connors who doesn’t seem to remember a thing. He tells Connors about the transformation, about attacking his wife, about abducting his son.

MOAR TO COME!



I think thats sounds perfect. Would make an excellent movie. Id change two minor things however: 1st, Parts of the vultures wings actually shooting off doesnt sound right to me. Missiles shooting out of the wings, sure.
2nd, I dont think the lizard should bring billy a fish since reptilians are infamous for their lack of concern regarding their young. Reptiles fend for themselves from birth and never seem to play with or care for eachother at all.

^dude above, why wouldnt u have shocker? What the spiderman movies need is a simple fight that doesnt have some mind blowing revalation behind it or touching moment between the two characters. Spiderman is a vigilante damn it.... most of the time he spends in that suit should be fighting criminals. The shocker jail break is a nice random touch, and to me a random nature and subtle dramas (such as the problems between connors family) are trademark spidey.

Heres how spider-man from the movies would react to the shocker jail break.
Captain Stacy: Spiderman a criminal is attempting to fly the coop using some kind of sonic weaponry...
Spider-man: Let me guess... Uncle bens true killer.
Captain Stacy: Uh no...
Spiderman: Is he my aunt mays previous husband?
Captain Stacy: Um...
Spider-man: Maryjanes father? some one from Harry's family? Jameson, Connors? No?... hmm that's pretty much all the people I know on this planet. are u sure there's a jail break?
Captain Stacy: Its no one you know! He's just a criminal, who happens to be escaping right now and will endanger many lives! Dont you stop people like that?
Spider-man: Hmmm... has he kidnapped maryjane?
Captain Stacy: No.
Spider-man:Then Im sorry but I just dont see how I fit into this situation.... Im gonna go appear in a montage where all the coolest things I do are skipped passed.
 
I'd get rid of Tobey, kill off MJ, and put Spidey back together with that fine-ass Gwen Stacy. MJ was a bi*tch in Spider-Man 3. She deserved to be slapped. And all those MJ missions from the game? She needs to get her ass a damn car.
 
I'd like to leave Mary Jane out of a sPidey film. Say, she was offered a role in movie that was shooting out of state. Their relationship was in an unsteady place after three and they decided to take a break. Peter's reasons for not being in a relationship came true after her 3 kidnappings and MJ didn't wanna pass up this oppurtunity. Now his bet friend is dead and his girlfriend is gone.

Enter Flash Thompson. Back from a tour in the army and apologetic for the way he treated Peter back in high school.
 
I dunno, after the blunder that was Spidey 3 I'd keep the effects intense & visceral & put loads of action into the film & not have the film drag along too much. I really hope they don't screw it up again.
 
I'd like to see a movie with Lizard where Curt Connors is going through a slow transformation similar to David Cronenberg's The Fly. The monster in that movie was scary, but still you felt sympathy with it at the end.

Oh, and I think there's a question that needs to be answered if you use Lizard: If Connors is doing experiments only in hope to grow his arm back, why would he take such risks and not simply use an arm prosthesis?
 
From what I remember he was testing it on other things, then decided to use it on himself.

If it worked he could have changed the world, guess that's all the reason he needed.
 
Oh, and I think there's a question that needs to be answered if you use Lizard: If Connors is doing experiments only in hope to grow his arm back, why would he take such risks and not simply use an arm prosthesis?
well, he did it in the SSM cartoon. I don't think it is the same thing. maybe he doesn't even feel his prosthesis. and have a arm prosthesis when everyone else around you have a normal arm may not be a cool experience.
 
I'd like to see a movie with Lizard where Curt Connors is going through a slow transformation similar to David Cronenberg's The Fly. The monster in that movie was scary, but still you felt sympathy with it at the end.

Oh, and I think there's a question that needs to be answered if you use Lizard: If Connors is doing experiments only in hope to grow his arm back, why would he take such risks and not simply use an arm prosthesis?

Have it so that Conners is competing for a huge science grant and he really thinks he's gonna lose unless he produces amazing results. Maybe he's competing against a fellow professor, like Adrian Toomes, who's kind of a jerk, at the university and the one that wins basically gets to keep his job. Conners is always in his lab and doesn't spend enough time with his family, which causes a rift between him and his wife. He's on the verge of a breakthrough, the formula has worked on every mammal test. But Toomes always comes in to see Conners and plays mind tricks to knock down Conners self-confidence. Toomes keeps asking "how things are going at home", which gives him the nickname "Vulture" from other teachers and staff. All Conners has is a formula, as opposed to Toomes' actual magnetic anti-gravity harness. So Conners reasons his life will be back to normal after he wins the grant. He decides to take his own formula, against the wishes of his TA, Peter Parker. What he doesn't know is that Toomes sabotaged his formula when Conners took a call from his wife out in the hall, because Toomes will do whatever it takes to win.

So basically, Conners takes the risks because he believes he has no other options and to him, there is no risk.
 
Would be a good way to handle it, but already (sort of) done with Norman in SM1.
 
Well, since we are in a magical world of "How would you do it..." here goes...

First I would make Sony give the rights of the Spider-Man movies over to Marvel.

Second I would have Marvel set in motion a rehash of the cast.

Third I would not forget, at least the first two movies, and continue the story along but without mentioning too much about them.

Fourth the storyline would be based off of Kraven's Last Hunt

The end
 

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