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A God Named Sparkles?
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This is a story I'm writing for what I think should happen when Venom returns in USM. This first chapter is just a story version of the issue "Father's Pride".
Prologue
Previously
Peters head began buzzing. He was in his classroom, in the evening, and his head was buzzing like mad. Oh God, he thought, Im losing control of my powers! He turned and looked at MJ. She was staring out of the window, a look of terror across her face. Peter turned and looked too, and saw a figure crouched down on the playing field. It was the suit. I am such an idiot! The suit has a biological memory! Peter guessed to himself. He slipped out of the door and went out into the playing field. He stood in front of the beast. It opened its mouth.
You shouldnt have lied, Peter. He was shocked. The animal knew his name! The suit began slipping down from the suits head.
Eddie ?
Our fathers died to create me, now you will too!
The slime covered Peters old friends face again, and the two began watching the others every move, though neither were moving.
Eddie, please tell me you didnt do this to yourself on purpose. Peter said. Eddie, well, the creature that was Eddie, before the Venom engulfed him, shot a tendril at him. He dodged, and grabbed the tendril.
Listen to me, Eddie, youre smarter than this. Peter shouted, This isnt you, its the suit. Ive been behind it, I know what its doing to you. Let me help you before you do something youre going to regret.
Our fathers died to create meAnd now you will too!!
Yeah . you said that already.
Now you will!!! Venom leapt at him.
Eddie, Peter said, while dodging tendril attacks, stop it or youllArgh!! A tendril wrapped around Peters neck. Now Im fighting Super villains on the school grounds?! Without my costume or my web shooters? I gotta get off campus. Peter thought, Why did Eddie
Argh! Venom snapped Peter toward him.
Eddie, snap out of it!! Come on! Youre in there! Snap out of it! Fight it! Peter pleaded, tugging on the tendril around his neck, I dont want to slap you one. Eddie, you dont know how strong I am. Seriously. Eddie, fight this thing!! Come on!! I did it, you can do it! You can!! Fight!!
Whyyyyy?! Nyarrgh! Venom cried, as Eddie obviously started trying to fight it. Oh man, hes going to die in there! I only escaped by the skin of my teeth and I have big time Spider-powers! Eddie began to try and fight the Venom suit, How do I get him out of there?! Thwack! The suit was back in control, and it used a tendril to knock Peter away. Venom walked over.
All right, you know whatthat is it!! Peter shouted. He leapt up behind Venom onto a wall, trying to get him away from the school. Venom followed, but Peter was far ahead, hiding on a building top. He watched as Venom began to swing across the city, and began to ask questions in his head. How could he do that to himself? Did he do that to himself on purpose? Hes kinda acting like he did. And hes so angry at me, so angry that hed would kill me? Is he really like that? Or is it the suit? Venom turned and saw him. Oh man, here we go. They leapt at each other, and began punching as they plummeted toward the ground. The smashed through some power lines, right into the roof of a car. Venom took the hit, and peter bounced off. He leapt up to Venom and saw the suit away from Eddies head.
Eddie?
Ughh . Peter .?
Eddie, come on man. Come on. Oh thank god . Peters spider sense went off .As the suit recovered Eddies head. The suit covered Peter to, and he saw black. Then he saw the street again, and felt the suit covering him.
How does it feel now? The suit was saying, Look at you now! A thief and a liar! You knew Parker; you knew my father was a genius!! It needs youIt needs you to survive! It needs you! This is all your fault .
Peter saw black. I have to fight this!
No! Peter lurched out of Venom, and fell onto the road.
Needs you Needs you You hear me ParkGaargh! Peter smacked Venom in the mouth with a tire.
Sit down Eddie! Peter shouted.
You lied to me!
Okay, duly noted! Peter replied, Then the cops arrived.
Put your hands on your heads, then come over here! One ordered. Venom turned and roared at them.
What is that?! The cops began firing on Venom. Peter leapt up on the wall out of the way, as bullets flew through Venoms body. Then he saw it. The broken power cable.
Eddie . Peter said to himself, as Venoms foot landed on the sparks of Electricity.
NNRAGHH! Venom screamed, as blue bolts of Electric erupted from his chest. There was an explosion of Electricity, and all that was left in Venoms place was a pile of blue smoke.
Ultimate Spider-man:
Venoms Back!
Previously
Peters head began buzzing. He was in his classroom, in the evening, and his head was buzzing like mad. Oh God, he thought, Im losing control of my powers! He turned and looked at MJ. She was staring out of the window, a look of terror across her face. Peter turned and looked too, and saw a figure crouched down on the playing field. It was the suit. I am such an idiot! The suit has a biological memory! Peter guessed to himself. He slipped out of the door and went out into the playing field. He stood in front of the beast. It opened its mouth.
You shouldnt have lied, Peter. He was shocked. The animal knew his name! The suit began slipping down from the suits head.
Eddie ?
Our fathers died to create me, now you will too!
The slime covered Peters old friends face again, and the two began watching the others every move, though neither were moving.
Eddie, please tell me you didnt do this to yourself on purpose. Peter said. Eddie, well, the creature that was Eddie, before the Venom engulfed him, shot a tendril at him. He dodged, and grabbed the tendril.
Listen to me, Eddie, youre smarter than this. Peter shouted, This isnt you, its the suit. Ive been behind it, I know what its doing to you. Let me help you before you do something youre going to regret.
Our fathers died to create meAnd now you will too!!
Yeah . you said that already.
Now you will!!! Venom leapt at him.
Eddie, Peter said, while dodging tendril attacks, stop it or youllArgh!! A tendril wrapped around Peters neck. Now Im fighting Super villains on the school grounds?! Without my costume or my web shooters? I gotta get off campus. Peter thought, Why did Eddie
Argh! Venom snapped Peter toward him.
Eddie, snap out of it!! Come on! Youre in there! Snap out of it! Fight it! Peter pleaded, tugging on the tendril around his neck, I dont want to slap you one. Eddie, you dont know how strong I am. Seriously. Eddie, fight this thing!! Come on!! I did it, you can do it! You can!! Fight!!
Whyyyyy?! Nyarrgh! Venom cried, as Eddie obviously started trying to fight it. Oh man, hes going to die in there! I only escaped by the skin of my teeth and I have big time Spider-powers! Eddie began to try and fight the Venom suit, How do I get him out of there?! Thwack! The suit was back in control, and it used a tendril to knock Peter away. Venom walked over.
All right, you know whatthat is it!! Peter shouted. He leapt up behind Venom onto a wall, trying to get him away from the school. Venom followed, but Peter was far ahead, hiding on a building top. He watched as Venom began to swing across the city, and began to ask questions in his head. How could he do that to himself? Did he do that to himself on purpose? Hes kinda acting like he did. And hes so angry at me, so angry that hed would kill me? Is he really like that? Or is it the suit? Venom turned and saw him. Oh man, here we go. They leapt at each other, and began punching as they plummeted toward the ground. The smashed through some power lines, right into the roof of a car. Venom took the hit, and peter bounced off. He leapt up to Venom and saw the suit away from Eddies head.
Eddie?
Ughh . Peter .?
Eddie, come on man. Come on. Oh thank god . Peters spider sense went off .As the suit recovered Eddies head. The suit covered Peter to, and he saw black. Then he saw the street again, and felt the suit covering him.
How does it feel now? The suit was saying, Look at you now! A thief and a liar! You knew Parker; you knew my father was a genius!! It needs youIt needs you to survive! It needs you! This is all your fault .
Peter saw black. I have to fight this!
No! Peter lurched out of Venom, and fell onto the road.
Needs you Needs you You hear me ParkGaargh! Peter smacked Venom in the mouth with a tire.
Sit down Eddie! Peter shouted.
You lied to me!
Okay, duly noted! Peter replied, Then the cops arrived.
Put your hands on your heads, then come over here! One ordered. Venom turned and roared at them.
What is that?! The cops began firing on Venom. Peter leapt up on the wall out of the way, as bullets flew through Venoms body. Then he saw it. The broken power cable.
Eddie . Peter said to himself, as Venoms foot landed on the sparks of Electricity.
NNRAGHH! Venom screamed, as blue bolts of Electric erupted from his chest. There was an explosion of Electricity, and all that was left in Venoms place was a pile of blue smoke.
