hellfiremaster
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I think the movie showed in my mind at least, that you cannot take a horrific entity, such as devils, demons and skeletons and make them candied. No doubt about it, not even by Marvel.
My opening scene would look like this... The evil that went into the scroll would have shown as horrific violence. Throat slashing, shootings, babies getting tossed into the well, I would have set the tone by showing how evil the scroll was. Then as Slade was running from Memphisto, he would have been chased by Memphisto in demonic form showing a narrow escape...
Penance stare.. you needed to have a side by side shot of GR and the victim as hellfire shoots from GR's eyes, into that of the victim. Also you needed to show the smoke coming from the victim after the burn.
Memphisto and blackhearts entrance into this plane, would have been as demons morphing into their "humanized" forms, every time. The exchange with young Johnny would have been much darker. Bartons death would have been horrific, witnessed by Johnny. As Johnny watched his step father die, I would have had a close up of the demonic Memphisto laughing as Johnny saw him. Blackhearts entry into the saloon would have been much more in the lines of From Dusk till Dawn. The three element demons would have given GR some fight. I know in the GR comics there are fights where GR comes back looking like hell. Torn up, tattered, and leaking hellfire. These fights would have exemplified this. His battle with Blackheart would have been epic, resulting in the death of Roxanne. Setting up his keeping of the powers against Memphisto's wishes.
There are somethings that translate well into film and there are things that do not. It appears that someone may have given up his soul for money.. and a pg rating...
HFM
My opening scene would look like this... The evil that went into the scroll would have shown as horrific violence. Throat slashing, shootings, babies getting tossed into the well, I would have set the tone by showing how evil the scroll was. Then as Slade was running from Memphisto, he would have been chased by Memphisto in demonic form showing a narrow escape...
Penance stare.. you needed to have a side by side shot of GR and the victim as hellfire shoots from GR's eyes, into that of the victim. Also you needed to show the smoke coming from the victim after the burn.
Memphisto and blackhearts entrance into this plane, would have been as demons morphing into their "humanized" forms, every time. The exchange with young Johnny would have been much darker. Bartons death would have been horrific, witnessed by Johnny. As Johnny watched his step father die, I would have had a close up of the demonic Memphisto laughing as Johnny saw him. Blackhearts entry into the saloon would have been much more in the lines of From Dusk till Dawn. The three element demons would have given GR some fight. I know in the GR comics there are fights where GR comes back looking like hell. Torn up, tattered, and leaking hellfire. These fights would have exemplified this. His battle with Blackheart would have been epic, resulting in the death of Roxanne. Setting up his keeping of the powers against Memphisto's wishes.
There are somethings that translate well into film and there are things that do not. It appears that someone may have given up his soul for money.. and a pg rating...
HFM