Justice League Zack Snyder Directing Justice League - Part 6

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Nice man! Are you gonna keep working on it?? I'd like to see it when it's more polished :cwink:

Nah man, I'm just too lazy. I just did this for fun. and its hard Sorry :/

Also, I just LOVE Barry's demeanor in this one, THAT's how he should've been through the movie, still timid and nervous, but also heroic and "strong" (for lack of a better word); in the reshoots his heroics came to me as him doing what he's told to do, but not really taking initiative; at least in the parts shot by Snyder (that we know of) he's actually one to put himself in the line of fire despite his fear or hesitation...his "heroic nature" I guess it's what I mean. :ilv:

Absolutely! Loved Barry in this.

Nice touch re-inserting Snyder's Batman instead of Whedon's at the beginning

Yeah, love the Batman theme in BvS.
 
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Batfleck was going to be wearing his bat-goggles for the final fight before it was all reshot.

That group shot is the money shot way better than the final group shot in the actual movie.

Avengers group shot was sooo epic and cool

While the JL group shot was sooo plain

That pretty much the difference between the 2 films.
 
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Batfleck was going to be wearing his bat-goggles for the final fight before it was all reshot.

If I know Snyder's style (:o) I'd say it was gonna be an ascending shot while zooming out, and with the lighting flashing and reflecting we would've seen the "comic book eyes" on Batman...

....probably in a bit of slow motion...

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Considering the tactical batsuit cowl has what looks like circuitry around it, I think the bat-goggles would have hooked up to a circuit and lit up on their own like with the mech suit.
 
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I was referring to that shot of him overlooking the scoutship :oldrazz:

I know man :P

If I know Snyder's style (:o) I'd say it was gonna be an ascending shot while zooming out, and with the lighting flashing and reflecting we would've seen the "comic book eyes" on Batman...

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I just realised we never saw the Bat goggles light up like they promised. :csad:
 
Why is that demeaning?

I think HellYeah is forgetting that Clark didn't use the term "thirsty," but "hungry" instead. "Thirsty" was Martha accidentally misquoting Clark. Thirsty can be seen in a sexual way whereas as hungry is about Lois' insatiable appetite as a reporter and uncoverer of the truth.
 
I think HellYeah is forgetting that Clark didn't use the term "thirsty," but "hungry" instead. "Thirsty" was Martha accidentally misquoting Clark. Thirsty can be seen in a sexual way whereas as hungry is about Lois' insatiable appetite as a reporter and uncoverer of the truth.

To a point.

Both "thirsty" and "hungry" have been used as "urban slang" for ambitious and driven, and can also have a sexual connotation...like every word ever created, it seems.
 
To a point.

Both "thirsty" and "hungry" have been used as "urban slang" for ambitious and driven, and can also have a sexual connotation...like every word ever created, it seems.

Correct. Though I wonder what you are trying to say.
 
To a point.

Both "thirsty" and "hungry" have been used as "urban slang" for ambitious and driven, and can also have a sexual connotation...like every word ever created, it seems.

I don't think I've heard the word "thirsty" used for a journalist or an athlete or anything of that nature, someone who is a go-getter, whereas I've heard "hungry" used as a metaphor for this many, many times. I think that's the difference. If someone said, "Donovan Mitchell [likely the rookie of the year in the NBA] is a thirsty young player," I'd find that strange. I wouldn't take it sexually per se, I would just think someone misspoke. On the hand, if someone said, "Donovan Mitchell is a hungry young player," I would know exactly what was meant.

So in terms of the intended meaning for Lois, using "thirsty" in this context not only sounds strange, but the way the scene was played, it was played up in a sexual way given both of their reactions, which came across as unnecessary, especially when that could have been a more emotional scene between the two. Is it the worst thing in the world? Of course not. Just an unnecessary gag, which, by the way, just followed that tv news clip of the woman claiming her husband was abducted by aliens and she was cursing left and right... it just didn't give the scene the appropriate weight it should have had, imso.
 
I've heard, "thirsty for knowledge" used many times.

Agreed with the second part though.
 
I've heard, "thirsty for knowledge" used many times.

Agreed with the second part though.

Yes, but usually it's "a thirst for knowledge." But even if it's "thirsty for knowledge", notice the rest of the sentence: "...for knowledge." It doesn't leave room for misinterpretation. Joss didn't have Martha say, "Clark tells me you are a thirsty journalist." Joss had her say, "He said you are the thirstiest young woman he ever met." Then look at Lois' reaction, then Martha correcting herself with embarrassment. That's the difference. The scene was meant to be taken as sexual play on words in what could have been a more serious, weighty scene.

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Yes, but usually it's "a thirst for knowledge." But even if it's "thirsty for knowledge", notice the rest of the sentence: "...for knowledge." It doesn't leave room for misinterpretation. Joss didn't have Martha say, "Clark tells me you are a thirsty journalist." Joss had her say, "He said you are the thirstiest young woman he ever met." Then look at Lois' reaction, then Martha correcting herself with embarrassment. That's the difference. The scene was meant to be taken as sexual play on words in what could have been a more serious, weighty scene.

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Yes, which was why I said that I agreed with the second part :P
 
Yes, but usually it's "a thirst for knowledge." But even if it's "thirsty for knowledge", notice the rest of the sentence: "...for knowledge." It doesn't leave room for misinterpretation. Joss didn't have Martha say, "Clark tells me you are a thirsty journalist." Joss had her say, "He said you are the thirstiest young woman he ever met." Then look at Lois' reaction, then Martha correcting herself with embarrassment. That's the difference. The scene was meant to be taken as sexual play on words in what could have been a more serious, weighty scene.

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But it is a serious, weighty scene, at least it has serious, weighty elements. Lois is talking about her lack of ambition in her reporting. She's lost her drive. That's a serious thing.

"Thirsty for a story" is a fairly common phrase in the news industry, at least it's one I've heard referenced several times over the years.

The joke is just a bit of accidental levity to lighten an otherwise somber moment between two people.

Half the joke is the awkward use of "slang" by Clark's mother in the first place. It's a generational thing.
 
Yes, which was why I said that I agreed with the second part :P

I hear you. I was just also responding to the "thirsty for knowledge" part because the expression, almost all the time, is "thirst for knowledge." "Thirsty" has a different connotation. Even if you google "Thirsty for knowledge," you'll get a page full of links to the phrase "Thirst for knowledge." "Thirsty" can have sexual overtones, whereas "Thirst" doesn't necessarily have that connotation. That's all I was saying in response to the previous posts.
 
But it is a serious, weighty scene, at least it has serious, weighty elements. Lois is talking about her lack of ambition in her reporting. She's lost her drive. That's a serious thing.

"Thirsty for a story" is a fairly common phrase in the news industry, at least it's one I've heard referenced several times over the years.

The joke is just a bit of accidental levity to lighten an otherwise somber moment between two people.

Half the joke is the awkward use of "slang" by Clark's mother in the first place. It's a generational thing.

Again, notice the sentence you are using is completed with "...for a story." That's the qualifier. That's different than saying "you are a thirsty young woman."

You believe that this was a weighty scene with a little levity to lighten it up. I personally think it was a light scene trying to give the impression of weight or serious matters. It kind of reminded me of a Marvel scene (uh, is Flint around?). You can have a serious moment, but surrounding that scene are lighthearted or funny moments that take away from what could otherwise be a heavier moment given room to breathe. Think about how the scene starts, with the woman on TV screaming and cursing about her husband being kidnapped, talking about probes, etc, and then Lois and Martha talk just a little bit about what's going on, but hey, we can't get too serious, so we need to throw in a joke in there. Gotta make sure we keep it light enough. That may work for you, but given the grief these two women are going through, I think a scene between the two deserved more room to breathe and to be without the need to unnecessarily lighten it up artificially (which is to say, jokes that have nothing to do with their actual personalities, but merely meant to make the audience laugh).
 
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It kind of reminds me of this scene from Ant-Man:

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It's the most emotional and cathartic scene in the movie, Hope learns of her mom, she and her Dad come to an understanding, and then they have to cut that with Scott butting in to make the audience laugh. It took me right out of a scene that was otherwise very sweet... and this clip doesn't show the rest of the scene, but Scott continues to ruin the moment by acknowledging he ruined the moment as if the director is trying to lampshade the moment for us, but I don't think it works because, no, you still hurt the moment anyway. Lampshading it won't fix that in this case.
 
Again, notice the sentence you are using is completed with "...for a story." That's the qualifier. That's different than saying "you are a thirsty young woman."

But since this is a piece of dialogue in a movie, you have to think about the context. If Clark had said "Lois is thirsty" or some variation of this to his mother, he was either talking about how much she likes to drink, or how driven she is, likely in the only arena we've seen her in, which is her career, which is the context she and Martha are discussing.

You believe that this was a weighty scene with a little levity to lighten it up.

I think it's a scene. I think labeling it a weighty scene or a comedic scene misses the point. The scene is fairly balanced overall. There are a couple of serious moments and a couple of lighter or funnier ones.

I personally think it was a light scene trying to give the impression of weight or serious matters. It kind of reminded me of a Marvel scene (uh, is Flint around?). You can have a serious moment, but surrounding that scene are lighthearted or funny moments that take away from what could otherwise be a heavier moment given room to breathe. Think about how the scene starts, with the woman on TV screaming and cursing about her husband being kidnapped, talking about probes, etc, and then Lois and Martha talk just a little bit about what's going on, but hey, we can't get too serious, so we need to throw in a joke in there.

Even the woman screaming about her husband...yes, she's a bit over the top, but that's a scary thing to go through. The audience is meant to laugh at the joke, in part because she's ignorant about the nature of the aliens and there's an irony to it all, but she's experiencing very real fear and concern herself.

Using humor to soften the blow of uncomfortable moments is screen writing 101.

And most movies that aren't straight dramas operate on this type of principle.

It was done in MAN OF STEEL in places. It was done in BVS as well.

It's a movie. It's primary job as a piece of entertainment, is to entertain. A balance of drama and humor is how most movies accomplish that.

Gotta make sure we keep it light enough. That may work for you, but given the grief these two women are going through, I think a scene between the two deserved more room to breathe and be without the need to unnecessarily lighten it up artificially (which is to say, jokes that have nothing to do with their actual personalities, but merely meant to make the audience laugh).

Couple of things. They're not going through the immediate grief following Clark's loss. We saw that moment between them in BVS. Where JUSTICE LEAGUE picks up, it's obviously been a while. They've had time to do the serious grieving. Things have happened. They're not in the same stage of grief they were in right after Clark's death. So it doesn't have to be an extremely somber sequence...we already saw that tonally in BVS, and in the opening montage of JL. There are stages of grief and some people use humor to deal with it.

(which is to say, jokes that have nothing to do with their actual personalities, but merely meant to make the audience laugh).

Except that a statement about how driven Lois is does have to do with both her personality, and is also directly connected to her character conflict.
 
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But since this is a piece of dialogue in a movie, you have to think about the context. If Clark had said "Lois is thirsty" or some variation of this to his mother, he was either talking about how much she likes to drink, or how driven she is, likely in the only arena we've seen her in, which is her career, which is the context she and Martha are discussing.

Missing the point. The intended use of this scene was for sexual innuendo for the audience to laugh. Obviously Clark had been talking about Lois as a reporter since Martha follows that up with stating as much, and Clark didn't say "thirsty," that was Martha's mistake. I think this is one where I'm not even sure where you are coming from anymore.

I think it's a scene. I think labeling it a weighty scene or a comedic scene misses the point. The scene is fairly balanced overall. There are a couple of serious moments and a couple of lighter or funnier ones.

It's not about labeling, it's about letting certain scenes be what they are meant to be. So in the end, it comes down to preference. For me, and for others who have been critical of this scene, we would have liked to have seen this scene with more depth to it rather than just another scene for what feels like, to me, and I imagine others, perfunctory purposes. If it works for you, then fine, but others it did not and felt shallow.


Even the woman screaming about her husband...yes, she's a bit over the top, but that's a scary thing to go through. The audience is meant to laugh at the joke, in part because she's ignorant about the nature of the aliens and there's an irony to it all, but she's experiencing very real fear and concern herself.

I can't help but think you are being purposely obtuse here. The intention of this scene was to make people laugh, that's it. It's hard for it to feel scary when every other word is bleeped out and the audience is laughing instead of feeling for this woman. That can work in some movies, but given the tone set in MOS and BvS, it feels very odd here.

Using humor to soften the blow of uncomfortable moments is screen writing 101.

And most movies that aren't straight dramas operate on this type of principle.

It also matters when and how you do it. A dramatic scene can be ruined by forced humor, whereas that same dramatic scene can be given greater power or poignancy due to how humor is used. Is it artificial, forced humor or does it come naturally from the characters and the scene. Is the writer thinking, "Hmmm, I need to make the audience laugh here because their attention span isn't long?" If so, that's an issue. Movies like Lethal Weapon and the original Star Wars trilogy had plenty of humor. The LOTR trilogy also has plenty of humor, even during some of the darker moments, but they work in service of those scenes, not to undercut it. Very rarely was I take out of a moment during the LOTR trilogy because of humor. On the other hand, I often was taken out of scenes due to forced humor in the Hobbit trilogy or the Star Wars prequels because their humor was more sophomoric, more "look at me, look at me, I'm trying to make you laugh" rather than authentic, character moments or of genuine playfulness.

It was done in MAN OF STEEL in places. It was done in BVS as well.

Can't think of a single scene where I thought humor undercut a dramatic moment in these two movies. Perhaps the "I think he's kind of hot" was forced, but other than that, what else? "Is she with you?" wasn't over the top "ha ha." In fact, it works because each genuinely didn't know who this woman truly was, and it's only slightly humorous to the audience because we are in on it and they aren't.

It's a movie. It's primary job as a piece of entertainment, is to entertain. A balance of drama and humor is how most movies accomplish that.

Again, it's a matter of when and how. Entertainment doesn't have to mean "make you laugh." I love MOS and BvS and I am very entertained by those movies, but that doesn't mean I laughed a lot. Ant-Man had a lot of jokes, but I found it pretty empty. Each movie is different and you want to honor the tone you are setting for that movie, but even within that, it's ok to let a sad or emotional scene sit for a little bit without getting in your quota of jokes (such as in the Ant-Man example above).

Couple of things. They're not going through the immediate grief following Clark's loss. We saw that moment between them in BVS. Where JUSTICE LEAGUE picks up, it's obviously been a while. They've had time to do the serious grieving. Things have happened. They're not in the same stage of grief they were in right after Clark's death. So it doesn't have to be an extremely somber sequence...we already saw that tonally in BVS, and in the opening montage of JL. There are stages of grief and some people use humor to deal with it.

This scene takes place only a few months after the loss of Martha's son and Lois' would-be fiancee. We see clearly that both are still grieving, as anyone would be. And based on the dialogue, it seems that they don't see each other that often which would of course bring up strong feelings.

And they weren't using humor to deal with their grief, that's the point. Joss Whedon was. Martha's "thirsty" line wasn't a joke by Martha, it was simply dialogue added to her mouth by Joss. There's a huge difference.

Except that a statement about how driven Lois is does have to do with both her personality, and is also directly connected to her character conflict.

Again, this seems obtuse to me because nobody is even arguing this. This seems like debating for the sake of debating. The issue isn't that Lois is a hungry reporter, or that she has cut back on some of her aggressive reporting due to her still grieving, but the nature of how the scene was portrayed, more specifically, the way Joss tried to use HIS humor to make the scene less about their grief and commiserating and more about, "Hey, I can throw a Whedon-ism in there." It just didn't feel right in this scene nor in line with the tone of MOS or BvS that preceded this movie.
 
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Missing the point. The intended use of this scene was for sexual innuendo for the audience to laugh. Obviously Clark had been talking about Lois as a reporter since Martha follows that up with stating as much, and Clark didn't say "thirsty," that was Martha's mistake. I think this is one where I'm not even sure where you are coming from anymore.

No, the scene is about Lois and Martha bonding on several levels, and specifically about setting up Lois’ character conflict.

A few relatively short moments of that scene are about making the audience (as well as Lois and Martha, laugh). And even that has to do with them as characters. The laughter is about them comforting and relaxing each other, not just the audience.

It's not about labeling, it's about letting certain scenes be what they are meant to be.

I would imagine the filmmakers know what the scene is meant to be.

Since the scene is placed after several more serious and intense scenes and consists of a fairly casual conversation between two characters, odds are good that the scene is intended to allow the audience to come down from the tension of previous scenes, using some levity and humor.

So in the end, it comes down to preference. For me, and for others who have been critical of this scene, we would have liked to have seen this scene with more depth to it rather than just another scene for what feels like, to me, and I imagine others, perfunctory purposes. If it works for you, then fine, but others it did not and felt shallow.

It isn’t perfunctory, though, nor is it any more shallow than any of Lois Lane's interactions with Martha. In fact, it's probably the majority of the set up and development that Lois Lane receives in the film.

The scene has some depth to it. It’s even arguably the scene with the most depth and bonding that we’ve seen between Lois and Martha in this franchise, an emotional ring delivery scene aside. It’s also one of the few sequences we’ve seen in this franchise that specifically addresses why Lois does what she does.

I can't help but think you are being purposely obtuse here. The intention of this scene was to make people laugh, that's it. It's hard for it to feel scary when every other word is bleeped out and the audience is laughing instead of feeling for this woman. That can work in some movies, but given the tone set in MOS and BvS, it feels very odd here.

I can't help but think that you don't remember the actual scene. The television thing is a transition into the scene. It is not the meat of the scene itself. It's 45 seconds or so, at which point the focus turns to Lois and Martha for the remaining two minutes of the scene.

I didn’t say it was supposed to feel scary. It’s an action movie, not a horror movie.

But the audience can laugh and feel for the woman at the same time. The humor is not in her plight, it is in the fact that the reporters are treating her like a crazy person, but she’s actually right about what has happened. Her husband has been taken by aliens. She's legitimately concerned. It’s a nod to the “secret invasion” nature of the villain's plot.

I would suggest that you watch the scene again. The focus of the overall scene, from a story a character standpoint, is clearly not on making people laugh. It’s about Martha and Lois’s conflicts and them showing support and comforting each other.

It also matters when and how you do it. A dramatic scene can be ruined by forced humor, whereas that same dramatic scene can be given greater power or poignancy due to how humor is used. Is it artificial, forced humor or does it come naturally from the characters and the scene.

Well, in this case, the humor, after the alien invasion story, comes from the very nature of the scene’s conflict, which is that Lois has lost her ambition.

Is the writer thinking, "Hmmm, I need to make the audience laugh here because their attention span isn't long?" If so, that's an issue.

The writer is thinking that balancing a serious moment with a brief moment of levity is acceptable mainstream writing. It’s a brief moment of levity in a two minute plus sequence.

Movies like Lethal Weapon and the original Star Wars trilogy had plenty of humor. The LOTR trilogy also has plenty of humor, even during some of the darker moments, but they work in service of those scenes, not to undercut it.

I don’t think that it does undercut it in any real sense. They go right back to talking about what has happened. It’s a nice quiet moment with a quick laugh to break the ice and then they move right on.

Very rarely was I take out of a moment during the LOTR trilogy because of humor. On the other hand, I often was taken out of scenes due to forced humor in the Hobbit trilogy or the Star Wars prequels because their humor was more sophomoric, more "look at me, look at me, I'm trying to make you laugh" rather than authentic, character moments or of genuine playfulness.

I’ve already explained why the humor is character specific.

We’re not exactly talking about a fart joke here.

Can't think of a single scene where I thought humor undercut a dramatic moment in these two movies. Perhaps the "I think he's kind of hot" was forced, but other than that, what else? "Is she with you?" wasn't over the top "ha ha." In fact, it works because each genuinely didn't know who this woman truly was, and it's only slightly humorous to the audience because we are in on it and they aren't.

Which brings up an interesting perspective...using subtle humor, many people didn’t even recognize that there WAS humor in the films. WB made an attempt to broaden the film’s appeal by making the humor a little bit more evident.

Again, it's a matter of when and how. Entertainment doesn't have to mean "make you laugh."

Entertainment quite literally means to “provide with amusement or enjoyment”.

I would say making people laugh falls under “amusement”.

This scene takes place only a few months after the loss of Martha's son and Lois' would-be fiancee. We see clearly that both are still grieving, as anyone would be. And based on the dialogue, it seems that they don't see each other that often which would of course bring up strong feelings.

But they’re also having a fairly casual meeting. There is no indication that this is meant to be a particularly heavy scene.

And they weren't using humor to deal with their grief, that's the point. Joss Whedon was. Martha's "thirsty" line wasn't a joke by Martha, it was simply dialogue added to her mouth by Joss. There's a huge difference.

No, but she smiled at the memory and laughed a bit. She’s using humor, period, and it helped her to feel better. You can see it in Lane’s performance. It doesn't have to be humor specifically about Clark.

Again, this seems obtuse to me because nobody is even arguing this.

…you did.

That may work for you, but given the grief these two women are going through, I think a scene between the two deserved more room to breathe and to be without the need to unnecessarily lighten it up artificially (which is to say, jokes that have nothing to do with their actual personalities, but merely meant to make the audience laugh).
 
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I wonder did Superman fight Steppenwolf in the Zack Snyder cut at the end as much as he did in the Joss Whedon version? Other than Superman dodging Steppenwolf punch all his scenes at the end were reshoots. So I wonder what in the world happen in the Zack Snyder version that WB did not like?
 
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