A hero I invented

That isnt a biography thats just stats. A biography is his history.
 
That isnt a biography thats just stats. A biography is his history.


dude, I dont know why you dislike my character, besides its really not nice and if you go on, and on, I'll report you to a moderator.
 
Go right ahead, all I said was that he was like the Silver Srufer, and besides its my opinion so do what you like.
 
dude, I dont know why you dislike my character, besides its really not nice and if you go on, and on, I'll report you to a moderator.
Yeah, that's not really going to do anything. Donnie's got a point either way.
 
dude, I dont know why you dislike my character, besides its really not nice and if you go on, and on, I'll report you to a moderator.
:huh: What for?
 
dude, I dont know why you dislike my character, besides its really not nice and if you go on, and on, I'll report you to a moderator.

Easy there, kid. No one has said they dislike your characters (as many of just stated). We are trying to help you. Grow up and don't like what we are saying so hard.

And by the way, it would be really helpful if you could give us some background on your character. A history of some sort. What you have provided is merely stats, that doesn't tell us anything, really.
 
dude, I dont know why you dislike my character, besides its really not nice and if you go on, and on, I'll report you to a moderator.


You have to go, you are just way to young and immature to be here. The age limit is 13, you're 10, I don't know why they let you stay on here after all the people you have bugged since you've been here, all you do is troll WAH WAH WAH! If something legal happens SHH is responsible since you are under the required age,no?

They should have kicked you when you first started here, your first 60 posts are nothing but spam.

And so you know your character is no creation of yours, yea I said it, that goes to the kind people at Marvel. :whatever:
 
Heres a hero I made....

The Cosmic Surfer

Real Name: Alan Jeffery

Occupation: None


Citizenship: America

Place of Birth: New York

Skin colour: Metal Silver

Biograpy: Alan Jeffery lives with his mum and dad in America, New york. He got his super, cosmic powers from accidetly falling into Toxic Waste. He saves England, Loves flying around the world, And his secret identity is keept safe with his beloved mother and father. He faces the evil Venom,Toxin,Magneto,Galacticus,Carnage, And Other villains. The ultimate hero almost died when toxins hand turned in a staber but the Hero's Life just got saved by his faithel hero friends, Spider-Man and The hero who almost killed spider-man but turned good in the end, The New goblin.


Alan has many best friends called: Jacob Olley, Mike stubs, And the girl if his dreams Sara Savil. Everyday, alan stares at the beatiful 15 year old girl who is the same age and dated birthday girl who has the hair as beatiful as the sunshine, Lovely blue eyes, And a little secret, She also has a crush on alan. When the reporter, Eddie Brock Heard of this he got so angry that he turned into Venom and kidnapped her. 2 Weeks later Alan got so worried that he had to find out what happened. When he did he got so angry that he fought venom into a deadly battle. The Cosmic Surfer fought well against venom and brought peace to Sara. Later on in the future Sara found out who The Cosmic Surfer was and had a strong urge to marry alan.

Known Relatives: Ben Jeffery (Father) Jenny Jeffery (Mother)

Group Affiliation: None

Super Hero Partners: Spider-Man, The New goblin (As a good guy.)

Height: 5'5

weight: 130 pounds

Eyes: Brown

Hair: White


Powers: The Cosmic Surfer has cosmic like powers and Is made of metal (In transformination). He has a huge strengh leval which he can pick up 50 tons. He can also fly through building.



Likes: Flying around the world and fighting evil.


Enemies: Venom,Toxin,Magneto,Galacticus,Carnage, Other.
sounds cool
 
Does no one get that this is just one giant jab at Donalds "Invented" character? Hes mocking him. Or at least thats how I read it.

But in case this is in fact serious...It is a terrible idea.
 
Does no one get that this is just one giant jab at Donalds "Invented" character? Hes mocking him. Or at least thats how I read it.

But in case this is in fact serious...It is a terrible idea.

Yea I got it, thats why I called him a troll.
 
Actually WeaponZed its not a cheap knock off like this one here. I can admit that there are SIMILARITIES between the two but there are always similarities between every super-hero. Show me some solid eveidence that I copied Renegade from Wolverine which I didnt. Get a whole page of evidence cause your gonna need it to prove that hes just a knock off of Wolverine because so far theres just about no evidence proving it, so good luck with tha jack***.:yay:
 
Try to stop fighting and play nice everyone.....this place is for interacting with people who have similar interests as you.....there is no need for arguing like this.
 
I have also invented a superhero and done a lot of work on him, but it is still all in my head though. I would like to see him on the big screen one day, if you are interested I could write some of it down and show You the character. I just hope no one will steal my idea, but do you want to here more, then just contact me on this board or mail: [email protected]
Sincerly
Asif
p.s. I am from Denmark, so you have to forget my spelling. :yay:
 
Actually WeaponZed its not a cheap knock off like this one here. I can admit that there are SIMILARITIES between the two but there are always similarities between every super-hero. Show me some solid eveidence that I copied Renegade from Wolverine which I didnt. Get a whole page of evidence cause your gonna need it to prove that hes just a knock off of Wolverine because so far theres just about no evidence proving it, so good luck with tha jack***.:yay:


The "similarities" between your character and Wolverine are so massive that they stop being similarities and become COMPLETE rip offs.
And people have tossed loads of evidence at you and you just ignore it.
Your character seems like something a child would come up with. Its that ridicules and stupid.
Also by making that reply to my statement, your just proving the point of this thread.
 
You didnt answer my question. Show me proof. The only evidence anyone has ever shown me was when he really was exactly like Wolverine. Show so me some proff if you can, which I doubt.
 
You didnt answer my question. Show me proof. The only evidence anyone has ever shown me was when he really was exactly like Wolverine. Show so me some proff if you can, which I doubt.

All I have to say is Claws! That should be enough! Its just like if I made a character and gave him a shield and a mask with wings on the sides. Everyone should know who I'm talking about! Thats captain f***ing America.
But NO! He's Canadian, wears black and his name is *****. He fights evil by throwing his shield at his enemies.
You want to hear more reasons? To ****ing bad. I'll let you live with your delusions. Its way to annoying to even discuss this with you.

****STOP THE CURSING****
 
Just as I thought, you cant come up with one logical reason. Tsk tsk tsk:csad: , I thought you could do better than that. So just because he has 2 claws and Wolverine has 3 that makes him a rip off? Get real, thats a load of crap and you know it. Sure, even I'll admit that there is quite a bit of work ahead on this character but heck, every character needs improvment. Yes the claws are a similaritiy and I'll admit that, but that doesn't prove the fact that he rip off of Wolverine. So you can get all mad and have a heart attack over it, not my problem.
 

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