ok then well this is a Bio and a history I made of him just recently:
Universe--(Does not have one yet)
Real Name--Raymond Jewls. Jr
Aliases--none
Identity--unknown
Occupation--none
Citizenship--Canadian
Place of Birth--St. John, New Brunswick
Known Relatives--Raymond Jewls. Sr (Father), Jessica Jewls(mother), Michael Jewls(brother), Klinton Jewls(brother)
Group Affiliation--(none so far)
Education--Still a highschool student
Height--5'11
Weight--150 lbs
Eyes--Brown
Hair--Black
Powers--Two retractable bone claws at the back of each hand.
Minimum Healing Factor.
Extra sensory allows him to sense other life forms around him, and upcoming danger.
Born and raised in Saint John, New Brunswick of Canada, Raymond Jewls grew up in an average home. Two loving, caring affectionate parents and two other older and younger brothers. While growing up in such a caring home, Raymond grew to understand the difference between right and wrong, and that his actions had their consequences. One day at the school that he attended he found himself in class when a small group of anti-mutant terrorists hijacked the school.
Struck with fear Raymond followed their routine they had practiced for emergencies like like these. Raymond started to fell as if they were all in grave danger, as if his head was going off like a fire alarm. Suddenly the window in the door of the classroom was shattered by bullets and a hand reached in to open the door. The terrorrist took hostages. Raymond stood up over his terrified peers and tried his best to convince the man to let them live. Uncaring of what he had to say the terrorist shot Raymond in the head.
This is when Raymond's powers first appeared. Activated by his anger, and need to save his peers. Slowly but surely the bullet gauged deep within his head was pushed out by his slow healing factor. Raymond arose not thinking of what had just happened and without a thought he lept out towards the killer. Raymond roared in pain as two bone claws on each hand tore through his flesh and sunk into the terrorist's chest.
The screams of pain and horror drew the rest of the group of terrorists towards Raymond. Raymond then again without a thought and choice slaughtered them. His claws then retracted back into his forearms and what was done, was done. The students his classroom could only watch as Raymond forced himself painfully out of the school and into the nearby forest.
From there he watched the police, ambulance and news crews arrive. Raymond still aching with the pains and horrific memories of what had happened, his curiosity called him closer to the news crews, ambulance and police. But it only brought him pain to see the ambulance being filled with injured and killed students. Now Raymond had blamed himself for what had happened. Raymond disgusted by this he drove himself further into the wilderness. He started to smell and hear things that he couldn't understand. He reached a peak of a hill where he could see the city below him, but now he could see far out past the horizon, far better than his sight before. Not understanding what was happening to him, he still felt fill filled with blame, pain, regret and loss, Raymond decided to use this power he weilded for a better use to make sure that this would not happen again. So he took on the name Renegade and set forth on his adventure that has yet to be seen.
tell me what you think of it so far and if you wnat to see a picture of his costume then go to www.Marvel-comics.piczo.com and at the bottom of the pages it will say Renegade. Thanks.
