A Superhero I invented

[donaldthe3rd]

I like it

 

[UltimateJustin]

So this guy decedent from cavemen, right? How has he survived for so long if he comes from some type of homo-whatever? (Especially if man has evolved so much since its early incarnation.)

Also, another thing I don't get is this idea of him having light-skin. Early man, if you do some research, generally had darker skin to survive a hotter climate. The first incarnations of men first lived on the continent of Africa, after all. You might want to do some research into that.

Continuing down that path of thinking, I am also confused about another thing with this guy's bio. If he is a surviver of early man, would not the mystery of his people's disappearance mean that they evolved into modern man? Not much mystery there, just evolution. What is your thought process with this?

Whoops, you got me. I guess its back to the drawing board for me.

 

[spdrknight]

Its okay. Sometimes ideas need time to fully form. Keep working on it and think about how the ideas work together and create a cohesive whole.

 

[dusk20]

whats new?

 

[donaldthe3rd]

Well I'm still working on my series and coming up with some more characters that I want to post on here.

 

[donaldthe3rd]

This is weird cuz its been so long but even though its been a few months, I now realize that my character Renegade waspretty much identical to Wolverine. Sorry for any hassle I might have caused and I know now that you were all trying to help.

 

[dusk20]

haha.....donald, you mate are a gun Renegade was still a cool character.

 

[donaldthe3rd]

lol yeah, but off of someone elses popularity. but thanks all the same

 

[The Marvel]

I just came up with an idea for a Superhero myself.

Name--Ethan Clark.
Superhero Alias-- The Marvel
Powers-- Strength Supreme, Speed Supreme, Vison Supreme, Flight Supreme, Senses Supreme.
Universe-- He exists in a world where Superhero's dont have superpowers and are Batman type vigilantes, Ethan and a few other people are born with Superpowers from a mystic source.
Origin-- Ethan Clark was a social Pariah for most of his life due to his "abnormality's". When he was born he had White hair and was unusally smart at birth, when he was four he discovered that he could fly along with other powers. He grew up close friends with Mercury, the sidekick of the New Havens most famous vigilante, The Nite. He aspired to be a vigilante himself and even met some in person, but with Superpowers he could be better than a vigilante and wanted to be the worlds first Superhero. So at the age of 14 he and his parents made him a red and white costume and became The Marvel.

What do you guys think?

 

[donaldthe3rd]

Sounds pretty good so far . Do you have picture?

 

[The Marvel]

No, not right now.

 

[mrsparkle]

I just came up with an idea for a Superhero myself.

Name--Ethan Clark.
Superhero Alias-- The Marvel
Powers-- Strength Supreme, Speed Supreme, Vison Supreme, Flight Supreme, Senses Supreme.
Universe-- He exists in a world where Superhero's dont have superpowers and are Batman type vigilantes, Ethan and a few other people are born with Superpowers from a mystic source.
Origin-- Ethan Clark was a social Pariah for most of his life due to his "abnormality's". When he was born he had White hair and was unusally smart at birth, when he was four he discovered that he could fly along with other powers. He grew up close friends with Mercury, the sidekick of the New Havens most famous vigilante, The Nite. He aspired to be a vigilante himself and even met some in person, but with Superpowers he could be better than a vigilante and wanted to be the worlds first Superhero. So at the age of 14 he and his parents made him a red and white costume and became The Marvel.

What do you guys think?

Sounds alot like superman powerwise and even has Clark in his name.
Also "the marvel" isnt a particuarly original codename seeing as theres captain Marvel and Ms Marvel and Marvel girl. But I like the universe you have going keeping working on it.

 

[dusk20]

Born Jason Thom, he never knew his father as his mother and Jason moved away at a young age. as the years went on, Jason became a loner and distant even towards his mother whom he loved more than anything.

When Jason turned 17, he jumped in the car with his best friend and they ended up crashing into a tree. Jason survived the incident with minor injuries, but his friend spent 3 months in hospital.

as the year went on, Jason began to notice that he had abilities far greater than any normal man. Flight, super strength, healing and enhanced hearing were the powers he developed. at the same time though, his best friend was also showing these powers as well. the only different was that Jason wasn't suffering from constant headaches and pains.

towards the end of school year, Jason's best friend went crazy and in a fit of rage tore down half the school and then fled in horror. Jason went to look for his friend, but couldn't find him. when he later returned home, Jason found his mother sitting down talking with a man who claimed to be his father.

his father sat Jason down and explained everything. Jason was born as the result of Project Genesis. a secret government created DNA formula that would create the perfect human soldier. the intention was to inpregnate a select few and when the children grew, they would be recruited by the government into forming a super police.

Jason's father was incharge of Project Genesis and hid Jason from the government. however when the government began sniffing around Jason and his mother, his father used the car accident, and injected Jason's best friend with an advanced formula.

He knew the impact of what he'd done, but did it to protect Jason and his secret.

 

[donaldthe3rd]

Sounds pretty good, hope to see more.

 

[donaldthe3rd]

Heres just something I thought up this Transformer in class when my friends and I were talkn about the Transformers movie and the comics:

Name:Raymond Rideout (human), Ragnarok (transformer).
Class:Unknown.
Occupation:Galactic Guardian.
BirthPlace:Brooklyn, New York (human), Unknown (transformer).
Height:5'9 (human), 68 ft (transformer).
Weight:130 lbs (human), Unknown (transformer).
Powers/Abilities: As the first of his kind, he is capable of transforming into anything. He may transform from Robot form to a motorcycle to a wolf then back into his human form. His weapons may vary as he transforms from one form to another.

I'll post the rest tomorow

 

[SniktSteven]

This is weird cuz its been so long but even though its been a few months, I now realize that my character Renegade waspretty much identical to Wolverine. Sorry for any hassle I might have caused and I know now that you were all trying to help.

Nice to hear it, its good to hear you've been trying to be able to deal with critisicism better. As for Ragnarok, kik a$$ name lol and hope to see the rest when you post it.

 

[dusk20]

Sounds pretty good, hope to see more.

thanks mate.

now i just need an artist to bring my character to life