Hound55
Byfar The Most Evil Thing
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"It is good to meet girl in park, but better to park meat in girl." - Chinese proverb
God damn it...
*scrunches up sample post and starts over*
"It is good to meet girl in park, but better to park meat in girl." - Chinese proverb
I'll try and get a Batman post in tomorrow. Something came up today that's forced me to go out of town.
If Carnage gets approved for Spidey, I'll need to have a convo since my arc with Nightwing is going to heavily involve the former Titans.
I was planning on PMing you if I got accepted to make sure it was cool that I was using that in the story. I made it non essential should there be conflicts, but I thought it would be a good reason as to why Peter no longer works on a bigger team
(and a good post for that matter)
Primary Character:Red Robin - Tim WayneList Of Essential NPC's (Vital To Your Story):Anarky - Lonnie MachinList Of Non-Essential NPC's (Open To Widespread Use And Play):
Dr. Mid Nite - Charles McNider
The Shadowman - Jack Boniface
The Scarecrow - Jonathan CraneSuperboyYour Main Storyline's Premise:Tim is pretty well established in the superhero community, though not quite to the extent of either Nightwing or Batman, but if he died tomorrow what would his legacy be? Hes been asking himself that a lot lately because it turns out he has a tumor. Its been resulting in myoclonic seizures. He hasnt told Batman or anyone in the family except Alfred, but he has been seeing Dr. Mid Nite discreetly, theyve scheduled a surgery to remove the growth. Even if the tumor doesnt, there is a chance that the surgery could kill him. But hes thinking a lot about his personal future and his legacy. So hes decided that he wants to see if he can point a few of the Batfamilys enemies to the light.Why Are You Applying For This Character?:I love the Bat-Family. Tim has always been my favorite Robin, even though he hasnt been Robin for years. I want to approach some angles I havent seen approached before.Please Provide A Short Sample Post Using Characters From Your Intended
Storyline (At Least Two Paragraphs And A Single Line Of Dialogue):Theres blood everywhere. Everywhere.For Reference, Post A Picture Of How Your Character's Going To Look:
Even on the sheets of Jims hospital bed where hed been laying. Its not the first massacre Ive seen and, unfortunately, it probably wont be the last. Actually, now that I think about it, it might be, but lets not fixate on that for now.
"Medical and EMT are dead, too. Batman and I saw the traffic on the way over and it's too heavy for another ambulance. I'm gonna have to take her to a hospital myself."
Gordon looks pissed. He looks scared, but he mostly looks pissedlike he wants to wage war against the color green itself. And I am glad that hes not telekinetic, because I have never, in all my nineteen years, seen anyone shake his own head so deliberately.
"No, dammit. I'm fine, I can handle this. And besides, I'd rather take my chances with my car than with you carrying her thirty stories above ground."
Hes clearly letting his emotions get to him a bit. Im not exactly happy about this either. But I get where hes coming from. I cant imagine what these people mean to him. If nothing else, theres a shot for Montoya to make it. I assume that letting her live was an accident, but this is clearly a methodical sort of show-off who wants to play with peoples feelings. I look at Batman to see if I should just go ahead and take care of Renee or let Gordon take his chances.
"Leave her to the Commissioner. You're to stay out here for recon. I need a second pair of eyes to pick up on anything I've missed."
I guarantee that thats just a consolation to let Gordon rest his mind. But hes got a point--never know if there could be a second attack. Gordons clearly ill-equipped. Hell, I dont even know if Im equipped for this.