The Fight Sequences in Spider-Man 3!

[Overman27pj]

Now someone script the fight secquence between visionary, Jon, and MEHZEB!!!

 

[M.E.H.Z.E.B]

Now someone script the fight secquence between visionary, Jon, and MEHZEB!!!

Sorry to disappoint you. There will be no fighting.

 

[TheReturnOfP]

Yah, MEHZEB thinks he would win a fight anyways cuz of his 7,272 posts...

 

[M.E.H.Z.E.B]

Yah, MEHZEB thinks he would win a fight anyways cuz of his 7,272 posts...

No question of winning - coz there'll be no fighting.

 

[thejon7]

Now someone script the fight secquence between visionary, Jon, and MEHZEB!!!

why would i start a fight 4 no reason
anyways i now that this fight sequence may not be in the film but here it is:
Spider-Man vs. symbiote Spider-Man(Nightmare):
Spider-Man lands in the middle of a background which only has the colour blue in it, Spidey looks around and then a black suited Spider-Man jumped on him and started chocking Spidey! Spidey kicked him off and tried to run away but the black suited Spidey easilly caught him with his webline and dragged him along the blue floor, until Spidey spun his webline at the imposter, pulled him down to the ground as they both flipped to their feet. They both were evenly matched opponents as they leaped at each other at the same time and landed to floor. Imposter Spidey got to his feet first as Spidey dragged himself away from the imposter in fear but the imposter leaped towards Spidey and stopped on his back with both feet while in the air. Spidey tried to get to his feet but the imposter had kicked Spidey with both feet which had sent Spidey himself right back down to the ground!
The imposter Spidey shot large web-blasts towards Spidey which had hit Spidey's head, Spidey slowly got to his feet as the imposter Spidey leaped towards Spidey but Spidey leaped out of the way spun two weblines in front of the imposter and catapulted himself towards the imposter which had sent both of them threw the blue background!
Spidey had been hanging upside-down from his webline and was starring himself right in the face but then he relised that in the reflection he didn't see what he had looked like now... he had seen his old, normal self.
Spidey dropped down from the webline and looked around his hand, it was black like the imposter he had been fighting! Or was he the imposter that was yet to come? Spidey relised that the fight he had was just a dream, but this... this was reality for Spider-Man!
"...what's happened to me?" Spidey asked himself as he jumped from the buiding wall and started to web-swing down threw the streets and right beside the passing cars. "...this power... it... it makes me feel free, is this a dream? All I know is that this power... that is now mine... feel's good, when you loss youself to it!"
Spidey web-swinged higher in the air until he landed on another building and looked towards Mannhattan's largest tower, then Spidey dropped from the webline and landed on the balcony of the building where he walked into and he could hear church music and someone familier talking. Spidey jogged towards the voice and relised that it had been his foe, Eddie Brock Jr, the man who had been trying desperatly to destroy Peter's job at the Daily Bugle. Spidey listened as Eddie was about to talk...
"...it's Brock sir, Eddie Brock Jr, I come here humbled... and was willing... to ask you for just one thing: ...I want you to kill Peter Parker," explained Eddie as Spidey watched Eddie and began to breathe angerly, until he ran back away from the speach and jumped off the balcony and started to web-swing away.

 

[StylishHokie21]

Nice work guys! Keep it up!

 

[Sentinel X]

Peter vs. Mary Jane

Mary Jane looked at her plate, she knew Peter had worked hard so they could spend their time together at the beautiful elegant resturante but there was something different about Peter. She looked at him, he was becoming darker and ful of spite. He was become something else, not the Peter she knew and loved.

"You're not hungry?" He asked.

She shook her head, no. She finally looked at him, into his dark eyes.
"What happened to us?"

"What do you mean?" He asked.

"We used to be inseperable, we used to love each other" She held his hand gently "I don't want to lose you Peter."

"MJ, not now." He said firmly.

"Now, Peter! We have to talk to each other. Tell me whats wrong, we can fix it together." She fixed her gaze at him, he didn't answer.
"Say something!"

"What do you want me to say!" He hollered, he grabbed the attention of some of the customers and waiters at the resturant. She let go of his hand, tears welled up in her eyes.

"Can't we talk anymore without screaming, why can't things just be the way they were?" She whispered.

His face was cold emotionless, unphased by her cascading tears.

"Right now, Im look at a man in front of me who looked exactly like a man I loved, and I still do" she said, trying to get eye contact. "Peter, I know about her, okay?" She said, he didn't seem to care. "This Gwen..you can't let her get between us. I forgive you..we've all done terrible things to each other...but we have to forgive each other for everything we ever were, when we're nothing"

"I happen to love 'This Gwen'!" He retorted, She put her head down ashamed. "Just like you still love Harry"

She looked up at him. "I don't." She lied, she knew she still has feeling for him but he could never mean what Peter meant to her. "I love you"

Peter shook his head. "I don't need you to" He retorted.

Her face went cold, she tried hard to fight back her tears. She nodded, she understood, it was over. No matter how much she loved him, he no longer need her. Albeit so, she still couldn't just let him go.

Peter shook his head, he stood up walking away, throwing his engagement ring on the floor

"Peter," She said, her voice muffled by a silent sob. She got up and walked toward him. "Don't walk away from me."

"Just leave me alone!!" He snapped back, he grabbed her head and pushed her back.

People in the resturant gasped in shock, it was quiet.
Through a small opening on Peter's shirt, a black liquid like substance began to difuse through his chest. What have I done He thought to himself. He covered up his chest, and looked at MJ in shock.

"MJ, I-I didn't mean to." He whispered at him. All eyes were on him, they glared at him with distgust.

"Peter" She whispered as she slowly turned her head to look at him. A monster had taken over him. She didn't know what to beleive.

"Im sorry, you have to understand" He said. He was becoming emotionally stable, everything he every shared with her, every second they spent in love was going down the drain.

"Whats happen to you?" She softly silibated.
A few waiters and waitresses came to her aid, helping her stand back up.

Peter shook his head, he ran out of the resturant. He could feel the alien substance slowly diffuse through his body. He had to stop it, he had to stop whatever took over him.

 

[M.E.H.Z.E.B]

Peter vs. Mary Jane

Mary Jane looked at her plate, she knew Peter had worked hard so they could spend their time together at the beautiful elegant resturante but there was something different about Peter. She looked at him, he was becoming darker and ful of spite. He was become something else, not the Peter she knew and loved.

"You're not hungry?" He asked.

She shook her head, no. She finally looked at him, into his dark eyes.
"What happened to us?"

"What do you mean?" He asked.

"We used to be inseperable, we used to love each other" She held his hand gently "I don't want to lose you Peter."

"MJ, not now." He said firmly.

"Now, Peter! We have to talk to each other. Tell me whats wrong, we can fix it together." She fixed her gaze at him, he didn't answer.
"Say something!"

"What do you want me to say!" He hollered, he grabbed the attention of some of the customers and waiters at the resturant. She let go of his hand, tears welled up in her eyes.

"Can't we talk anymore without screaming, why can't things just be the way they were?" She whispered.

His face was cold emotionless, unphased by her cascading tears.

"Right now, Im look at a man in front of me who looked exactly like a man I loved, and I still do" she said, trying to get eye contact. "Peter, I know about her, okay?" She said, he didn't seem to care. "This Gwen..you can't let her get between us. I forgive you..we've all done terrible things to each other...but we have to forgive each other for everything we ever were, when we're nothing"

"I happen to love 'This Gwen'!" He retorted, She put her head down ashamed. "Just like you still love Harry"

She looked up at him. "I don't." She lied, she knew she still has feeling for him but he could never mean what Peter meant to her. "I love you"

Peter shook his head. "I don't need you to" He retorted.

Her face went cold, she tried hard to fight back her tears. She nodded, she understood, it was over. No matter how much she loved him, he no longer need her. Albeit so, she still couldn't just let him go.

Peter shook his head, he stood up walking away, throwing his engagement ring on the floor

"Peter," She said, her voice muffled by a silent sob. She got up and walked toward him. "Don't walk away from me."

"Just leave me alone!!" He snapped back, he grabbed her head and pushed her back.

People in the resturant gasped in shock, it was quiet.
Through a small opening on Peter's shirt, a black liquid like substance began to difuse through his chest. What have I done He thought to himself. He covered up his chest, and looked at MJ in shock.

"MJ, I-I didn't mean to." He whispered at him. All eyes were on him, they glared at him with distgust.

"Peter" She whispered as she slowly turned her head to look at him. A monster had taken over him. She didn't know what to beleive.

"Im sorry, you have to understand" He said. He was becoming emotionally stable, everything he every shared with her, every second they spent in love was going down the drain.

"Whats happen to you?" She softly silibated.
A few waiters and waitresses came to her aid, helping her stand back up.

Peter shook his head, he ran out of the resturant. He could feel the alien substance slowly diffuse through his body. He had to stop it, he had to stop whatever took over him.

Supremely written. I applaud your effort, and am waiting impatiently for the next one. Bravo!

 

[Mr. Socko]

Is Venom going to fight? Anyone know?

 

[Climperoonie]

The Construction site battle-part 1
Peter sat down, he was crying. MJ, the woman he loved, had just walked out on him. She couldn't cope with everything. He hated the alien symbiote. It had driven a wedge between him and MJ, and he hated it. He wished that John Jameson had never brought it to Earth. He wanted to go out there, beg MJ to come back, but he couldn't. He loved her, but this was what she wanted. He suddenly broke down into sobs as he heard her call over a taxi.

MJ got in the back of the taxi.
"Where to miss?" The driver asked.
"The airport, please."
"Sure thing." The drivers voice had become gruff, like he had a cold.
"Are you alright?" She asked.
"Never better!" The last thing she remembered was vicious teeth and big white eyes.

Peter heard a distant scream and his Spider-sense went off.
"MJ!" He knew that it was her in danger, somehow, he knew.
He pulled his old suit out of the cupboard, and put it on.

Harry Osborn had just been discharged from the hospital for the second time. The first time, he had been knocked unconscious in his first battle with Peter, the second time, Peter had thrown a pumpkin bomb straight in his face. He heard a noise, and looked out the window to see the figure of Spider-man swing off into the city skyline.
"Peter." He scowled, and walked into the goblin lair.
His old gear had been destroyed before Peter had thrown the bomb, and so had his "Sky Stick". He looked in a glass closet. The only costume he had. The costume that was his Dad's.

MJ woke up, air hitting her face. She opened her eyes to see the pavement, getting closer. She screamed, but all of a sudden a massive, black web broke her fall. She was thankful, but she passed out again, just as a black figure scooped her up.

Spider-man had lost the taxi, but suddenly he was thrown into a wall. He saw a familiar green figure. Was Norman still alive? Peter asked himself, No, it must be Harry.
"Why are you doing this, Harry?" Spider-man asked.
"Payback x2! One for murdering my Dad, two for throwning a bomb in my face."
"Harry, you don't understand, I didn't kill your fa-"
"Enough with your lies!" Harry pulled out a pumpkin bomb, but Spider-man dodged. The blast caught his arm though, ripping a finger off of his glove.
"Harry, someone's got MJ!"
"MJ? Fine. I'll help you, but after we save her, it's back to buisness."

MJ found herself in another black web that was between two buildings. She looked round, and saw a figure on top of the scafolding of a nearby construction site. She thought it might be Peter, but one-He was rid of his black suit, and two-He would never kidnap her. She couldn't help thinking that there was something familiar about it's voice, something like-Eddie Brock? That creature was Eddie Brock? She heard a zooming and turned back the other way to see-The Green goblin and Spider-man? Working together? The Goblin zoomed over to her and pulled off his mask, to reveal Harry Osborn!
"It's alright MJ, me and Peter have got a temporary alliance to save you." He said.
"Oh thank God!" She said.
Spider-man came over and started cutting the web, and when that was done he took her over to a building top and put her down.
"It's gonna be alright now-" A bomb smashed Spider-man flying, and Harry came back after him.
"Harry, please!" MJ started sobbing, but Harry didn't hear.
He was to busy beating up Spider-man. Suddenly a massive rod skewerd Harry through the chest and through him into the wall.
"HARRY!" Spider-man screamed.
He ran over to see if Harry was alright. He was alive-barely.
"P-Peter...I-I'm sorry, I just wanted to..." Harry Osborn died in Spider-man's arms. A friend. Spider-man started to cry under his mask. He looked over at the attacker. A twisted version of himself when he wore the black suit. He had a big white Spider symbol on his chest, jagged eye patches, and a massive, grinning mouth filled with razor sharp teeth. He was Venom.
To be continued....

 

[Spider-ManHero12]

Is Venom going to fight? Anyone know?

yes he is in the battle royal at the construction site.

 

[thejon7]

Bruce Campbell and Stan Lee's Role in Spider-Man 3(Bruce Campbell: Quentin Beck and Stan Lee: casting person):
"Come on Sam... I need that job," cried special effects wizard Quentin Beck.
"No Quentin... the job has already been taken," said Sam Raimi; the man who was directing the film Spider-Man. "...get a grip okay Quentin?"
"It's not fare... it's just not fare, who got the job for the special effects spot? Who?" asked Quentin Beck.
"Thats really none of your buisness Quentin," said Avi Arad; the man who had been producing the film.
"Ahh... shut up Avi," offended Quentin as Peter Parker walked into the set studio.
"...ahh come on! I've been studing the actions of Spider-Man himself... I even gave him the name he has now: Spider-Man, I think that you should reconsider your decision... because your making a big mistake," threatened Quentin Beck as he was pulled out of the set studio by the security guard. "THIS ISN'T FARE! I WANT THAT PART, YOUR NOT GONNA GET AWAY WITH THIS! YOUR GONNA PAY... ALL OF YOU!!!" yelled Quentin Beck.
"...that guy sure seems crazy," replied Peter as both Sam Raimi and Avi Arad turned around.
"Oh... there he is... the man that we've been waiting for: Peter Parker. Welcome Peter," greeted Sam.
"Thanks sir, so... I heard that you wanted me to play a role for this film?" asked Peter.
"Oh yes... yes very much! Just speak to the man who's casting. He's over there," answered Avi Arad as he pointed towards a man who had been talking to this beautiful girl, Peter walked towards the man.
"Hello, I heard your casting?" wondered Peter.
"Oh yes my boy... Stan's the name and casting is my game," joked the person who was casting who claimed his name was: Stan.
Peter and the beautiful woman both laughed at the quote Stan had made.
"So let's go... we don't have a lot of time! We have to go to dinner," claimed Stan.
"Oh... well- I wasn't expecting to be having dinner, but... okay," agreed Peter.
"Don't worry Stan... I'll go," said the beautiful girl.
"YES!" yelled Stan. "So... let's get going!"
"...okay," giggled Peter.

The three of them crossed the road and went walked along the sidewalk.
"...so, what's your name?" asked Peter to the beautiful woman.
"Gwen... Gwen Stacy," answered the beautiful woman who claimed that her name was: Gwen Stacy.
"Are you playing a role in the film?" asked Peter.
"Yeah... and also I'm gonna be the host of the Spider-Man festival that their having today," answered Gwen.
"...that's today?" asked Peter again.
"Boy you sure ask a lot of questions for a grown man," replied Gwen. "And yes... the festival's today," answered Gwen.
"Yep... that's me: Peter "Ask alot of Questions" Parker," smiled Peter as Gwen and Stan laughed.
"Now that's funny," laughed Stan.

Peter, Gwen and Stan all we're sitting in the restaurant ready to get they're food that they had just ordered.
"So Stan... which role do you think I should play?" asked Peter.
"Well... if you ask me... I think that you: Peter Parker should be playing the main role as: SPIDER-MAN!" answered Stan as Peter was shocked to have heard the response.
"... but Stan... come on! I'm just a nerding kid from Queens... I don't deserve this," replied Peter.
"Ahh come on Peter, you're perfect for the role," influenced Gwen, but before Peter could answer: police cars were passing by the restaurant window and Peter's spider-sense warned him of danger in the area.
Peter stood to his feet and said, "I have to go..." to both Gwen and Stan.
"...well where is he going? Back to Queens?" joked Stan as Gwen had a woried look on her face.

 

[thejon7]

The Construction site battle-part 1
Peter sat down, he was crying. MJ, the woman he loved, had just walked out on him. She couldn't cope with everything. He hated the alien symbiote. It had driven a wedge between him and MJ, and he hated it. He wished that John Jameson had never brought it to Earth. He wanted to go out there, beg MJ to come back, but he couldn't. He loved her, but this was what she wanted. He suddenly broke down into sobs as he heard her call over a taxi.

MJ got in the back of the taxi.
"Where to miss?" The driver asked.
"The airport, please."
"Sure thing." The drivers voice had become gruff, like he had a cold.
"Are you alright?" She asked.
"Never better!" The last thing she remembered was vicious teeth and big white eyes.

Peter heard a distant scream and his Spider-sense went off.
"MJ!" He knew that it was her in danger, somehow, he knew.
He pulled his old suit out of the cupboard, and put it on.

Harry Osborn had just been discharged from the hospital for the second time. The first time, he had been knocked unconscious in his first battle with Peter, the second time, Peter had thrown a pumpkin bomb straight in his face. He heard a noise, and looked out the window to see the figure of Spider-man swing off into the city skyline.
"Peter." He scowled, and walked into the goblin lair.
His old gear had been destroyed before Peter had thrown the bomb, and so had his "Sky Stick". He looked in a glass closet. The only costume he had. The costume that was his Dad's.

MJ woke up, air hitting her face. She opened her eyes to see the pavement, getting closer. She screamed, but all of a sudden a massive, black web broke her fall. She was thankful, but she passed out again, just as a black figure scooped her up.

Spider-man had lost the taxi, but suddenly he was thrown into a wall. He saw a familiar green figure. Was Norman still alive? Peter asked himself, No, it must be Harry.
"Why are you doing this, Harry?" Spider-man asked.
"Payback x2! One for murdering my Dad, two for throwning a bomb in my face."
"Harry, you don't understand, I didn't kill your fa-"
"Enough with your lies!" Harry pulled out a pumpkin bomb, but Spider-man dodged. The blast caught his arm though, ripping a finger off of his glove.
"Harry, someone's got MJ!"
"MJ? Fine. I'll help you, but after we save her, it's back to buisness."

MJ found herself in another black web that was between two buildings. She looked round, and saw a figure on top of the scafolding of a nearby construction site. She thought it might be Peter, but one-He was rid of his black suit, and two-He would never kidnap her. She couldn't help thinking that there was something familiar about it's voice, something like-Eddie Brock? That creature was Eddie Brock? She heard a zooming and turned back the other way to see-The Green goblin and Spider-man? Working together? The Goblin zoomed over to her and pulled off his mask, to reveal Harry Osborn!
"It's alright MJ, me and Peter have got a temporary alliance to save you." He said.
"Oh thank God!" She said.
Spider-man came over and started cutting the web, and when that was done he took her over to a building top and put her down.
"It's gonna be alright now-" A bomb smashed Spider-man flying, and Harry came back after him.
"Harry, please!" MJ started sobbing, but Harry didn't hear.
He was to busy beating up Spider-man. Suddenly a massive rod skewerd Harry through the chest and through him into the wall.
"HARRY!" Spider-man screamed.
He ran over to see if Harry was alright. He was alive-barely.
"P-Peter...I-I'm sorry, I just wanted to..." Harry Osborn died in Spider-man's arms. A friend. Spider-man started to cry under his mask. He looked over at the attacker. A twisted version of himself when he wore the black suit. He had a big white Spider symbol on his chest, jagged eye patches, and a massive, grinning mouth filled with razor sharp teeth. He was Venom.
To be continued....

i like it but i dont like the part where Harry throws a pumpkin bomb at Spidey because u said that it blew someone's finger off and thats just weird, and second in that same scene Spidey just says: MJ's in trouble and then Harry just agrees to help Spidey(again thats weird) like i think that they should have had a little arguement about who's gonna save her and stuff like that so that it wont sound so: weird and confusing. but other that that... good job!

 

[Sentinel X]

Supremely written. I applaud your effort, and am waiting impatiently for the next one. Bravo!

Thanks...Im glad you enjoyed it

 

[Spider-ManHero12]

symbiote peter vs. harry fight in mansion.

harry is drinking and hears a noise. out of no where peter jumps down and grabs harry and throws him across the mansion. harrys father appears in the mirror and says, "kill him son....kill him!". harry grabs the dagger from the table and goes to hit petr but peter webs the dagger out of his hand. peter kicks harry right through the glass mirror into the goblin room. harry grabs his sword and tries to hit peter with it.

peter is dodging the sword hits and harry is hitting the walls with the sword creating sparks everywhere. harry says to peter, "peter! what are you doing!". peter just says, "trying to kill you!". harrys eyes widen and he gets punched in the face by peter. peter just stares and says, "you really made a big mistake thias time harry!". harry goes to hit peter with his sword again but peter smacks the sword out of harrys hand. harry just backs up and there are daggers on the wall.

harry throws one at peter and then another but peter is dodging them. peter grabs harry and throws him into the glass shelf where the pumpkin bombs are. harry grabs a pumpkin bomb and throws it at peter but peter webs the pumpkin bomb and throws it back at harry exploding in harrys face. harry is kocked out and peter is walking out of the room with the camera zooming in at the black coatume behind peters shir. the room is covered with smoke and peter just leaves.

 

[thejon7]

symbiote peter vs. harry fight in mansion.

harry is drinking and hears a noise. out of no where peter jumps down and grabs harry and throws him across the mansion. harrys father appears in the mirror and says, "kill him son....kill him!". harry grabs the dagger from the table and goes to hit petr but peter webs the dagger out of his hand. peter kicks harry right through the glass mirror into the goblin room. harry grabs his sword and tries to hit peter with it.

peter is dodging the sword hits and harry is hitting the walls with the sword creating sparks everywhere. harry says to peter, "peter! what are you doing!". peter just says, "trying to kill you!". harrys eyes widen and he gets punched in the face by peter. peter just stares and says, "you really made a big mistake thias time harry!". harry goes to hit peter with his sword again but peter smacks the sword out of harrys hand. harry just backs up and there are daggers on the wall.

harry throws one at peter and then another but peter is dodging them. peter grabs harry and throws him into the glass shelf where the pumpkin bombs are. harry grabs a pumpkin bomb and throws it at peter but peter webs the pumpkin bomb and throws it back at harry exploding in harrys face. harry is kocked out and peter is walking out of the room with the camera zooming in at the black coatume behind peters shir. the room is covered with smoke and peter just leaves.

cool, great job spidermanhero 12

 

[Spider-ManHero12]

cool, great job spidermanhero 12

thanks.

 

[thejon7]

thanks.

No problem dude, the only problem with it was that it was too darn short! But it was still a great fight sequence.

 

[Climperoonie]

thejon7, I mean that the finger of his GLOVE was blown off. I said this in the story. Also, that took me the best part of 2 hours to write, so I'm a bit insulted.

 

[thejon7]

thejon7, I mean that the finger of his GLOVE was blown off. I said this in the story. Also, that took me the best part of 2 hours to write, so I'm a bit insulted.

im sorry... i didn't mean to insult u

 

[rockportspidey]

i like it but i dont like the part where Harry throws a pumpkin bomb at Spidey because u said that it blew someone's finger off and thats just weird, and second in that same scene Spidey just says: MJ's in trouble and then Harry just agrees to help Spidey(again thats weird) like i think that they should have had a little arguement about who's gonna save her and stuff like that so that it wont sound so: weird and confusing. but other that that... good job!

I agree about the finger getting blown off thing, but at the same time, I loved the sequence written about how his old costume was destroyed so he had to break up the Green Ranger suit. That's awesome. I'd be so pumped if that happened in the moviet:

 

[Spider-ManHero12]

No problem dude, the only problem with it was that it was too darn short! But it was still a great fight sequence.

if i rewrite it later i will make it longer.

 

[thejon7]

I agree about the finger getting blown off thing, but at the same time, I loved the sequence written about how his old costume was destroyed so he had to break up the Green Ranger suit. That's awesome. I'd be so pumped if that happened in the moviet:

yeah i like that 2 but i wasn't looking to insult any1 when i made that quote

if i rewrite it later i will make it longer.

sweet

 

[Climperoonie]

thejon7-It's alright, I just worked hard on it.
rockportspidey-Thanks, but just so people know, I mean that one of Spider-man's fingers are poking through a hole in the glove.

 

[Sentinel X]

thejon7, I mean that the finger of his GLOVE was blown off. I said this in the story. Also, that took me the best part of 2 hours to write, so I'm a bit insulted.

I don't think he was trying to insult you. To be honest it did sound weird at first, I thought you meant his actual finger got blown off, but now that you've explained it, I understand what you meant