The Winter Soldier What you didn't like about Captain America: TWS - Flaws/Critiques

-My biggest problem was with Hydra though. It’s already been discussed at length the extent to which they’re infiltration softens the blow of the political criticism, so I won’t rehash that, but the sheer number of Hydra agents within SHIELD is a bit unbelievable to me. The reason being that Hydra doesn’t have any discernible ideology beyond world conquest, which is all well and good for people like Stern and Pierce who could feasibly profit by being in a position of power, but for lower level SHIELD agents, I find it difficult to believe Hydra has much to offer.

This.

Furthermore, I wasn’t convinced that Arnim Zola’s character was a natural progression from TFA. To me at least, he didn’t appear enamoured with Hydra and was simply interested in the scientific resources he had access to. He turned coat at the first opportunity, rather than die to protect the Skull’s pans. You could argue this was simply because Zola was always looking for an opportunity to usurp the Red Skull, but I think it’s quite a stretch to make that interpretation from Jones’ performance in TFA.

Agreed. This could have been a lot better handled in his exposition dump.

I also don’t think I understood the endgame of Insight. Assuming that Hydra was successful in killing everyone they considered a threat, where do they go from there? Wouldn’t that make SHIELD an obvious target for damn near everyone left standing in the aftermath? I certainly doubt the response of the new president to three helicarriers murdering thousands of innocent people, including his/her predecessor would be to give SHIELD more power. Maybe someone can explain this to me because it seems a stupid plan, and a waste of 70 years worth of careful infiltration/manipulation
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Exactly. Why would they do it in the first place.

It's an incredibly stupid plan.

Nothing screams espionage like announcing to the world that you're a threat.

Hydra's plan is really just way over the top. If they had said "Hydra spent 70 years infiltrating S.H.I.E.L.D. to develop all those contacts and GET intelligence and information on potential threats/allies, as well as the resources to strike on a global scale"...

That would a lot more sense.

It would still be a plan that was massive in scale.

And then the movie becomes about intelligence, period. About the potential for a serious breakdown in the world of espionage. About blackmail on a global scale.

Not about killing people that a magic computer program decides are threats...just because.
 
-Widow’s arc seemed to be a bit of a repeat of her Avengers arc, given she already owned up to her acquiescence and complicity in SHIELD’s dirty dealings in that film. I don’t think discovering that Hydra may have guided her hand in some of those actions would really shake her that much, unless she was naïve enough to think all her missions post Avengers were entirely benevolent.

Widow was willing to continue to get her hands (and soul) dirty for SHIELD after leaving the KGB because she thought it was for the right reasons. Turns out she may have swapped one tyrant for another.

-My biggest problem was with Hydra though. It’s already been discussed at length the extent to which they’re infiltration softens the blow of the political criticism, so I won’t rehash that, but the sheer number of Hydra agents within SHIELD is a bit unbelievable to me. The reason being that Hydra doesn’t have any discernible ideology beyond world conquest, which is all well and good for people like Stern and Pierce who could feasibly profit by being in a position of power, but for lower level SHIELD agents, I find it difficult to believe Hydra has much to offer.

I think the rank-and-file such as Rumlow may have actually bought the propaganda as spouted by Pierce, that HYDRA seeks to dominate to achieve some form of totalitarian world peace. Pierce himself may have bought the propaganda in part, suggesting he fell in with HYDRA because their methods work. Rumlow seemed a standup guy at the beginning.

While the upside may be a smarter treatment of the political commentary, relegating HYDRA to a bit role runs the risk of taking out too much of the comic-book elements, the fun bits. We may lose the character moments of Rumlow and Zola and have them turned into evil muscle A and evil scientist B.

I also don’t think I understood the endgame of Insight. Assuming that Hydra was successful in killing everyone they considered a threat, where do they go from there? Wouldn’t that make SHIELD an obvious target for damn near everyone left standing in the aftermath? I certainly doubt the response of the new president to three helicarriers murdering thousands of innocent people, including his/her predecessor would be to give SHIELD more power. Maybe someone can explain this to me because it seems a stupid plan, and a waste of 70 years worth of careful infiltration/manipulation.

My thinking is that HYDRA would abandon SHIELD soon after and let it take full blame, leaving little trace that it was actually behind the project. Then rise again behind the scenes in another corrupted upper echelon of power.
 
While the upside may be a smarter treatment of the political commentary, relegating HYDRA to a bit role runs the risk of taking out too much of the comic-book elements, the fun bits. We may lose the character moments of Rumlow and Zola and have them turned into evil muscle A and evil scientist B.

I kept trying to explain this, but some guys just want this deep, full blown politico exposition.

It's a CBM movie. Hydra's place was very natural and well fitting.
 
If they had said "Hydra spent 70 years infiltrating S.H.I.E.L.D. to develop all those contacts and GET intelligence and information on potential threats/allies, as well as the resources to strike on a global scale"...

Isn't that what HYDRA/Zola essentially did? Leveraging on SHIELD resources to build the algorithm?

And then the movie becomes about intelligence, period. About the potential for a serious breakdown in the world of espionage. About blackmail on a global scale.

And then the movie becomes a Jack Ryan flick; it becomes a different movie.

"the movie becomes about intelligence, period" could have been an awesome theme to explore but then, what do you take out of the movie currently to achieve this story?

Having HYDRA be the cause of SHIELD's dissolution and putting the Marvel heroes on the back foot was the greater plot need for the MCU world building. You could say it's a constraint on the storytelling. It's probably for this reason why Christopher Nolan wasn't keen on placing his Batman in a cinematic universe because he didn't want his story to be compromised.
 
Why did Computer Zola have to tell Captain and Natasha Hydra's entire plan? What purpose does that serve other than assisting them in help stop it? If Zola didn't tell them anything, they likely would have never found out the plan involving the Helicarriers and wouldn't be able to stop it.
 
Why did Computer Zola have to tell Captain and Natasha Hydra's entire plan? What purpose does that serve other than assisting them in help stop it? If Zola didn't tell them anything, they likely would have never found out the plan involving the Helicarriers and wouldn't be able to stop it.

He was stalling. He said so after explaining the plan and the missiles were heading for them.
 
Why not just make it so inserting the flash drive caused a bomb to explode in the room?

That would have required pre-planning, how would they have known Cap and Widow would get the flash drive and find the place?

What if they did make it like that as a precaution and Alexander wanted to insert the flash drive? It would only lead to more complications IMO.
 
Hydra doesn't have much to offer low level people?? We've seen from everything from the nazis to local police that regular people will join in on corruption and tyranny just for the sake of their own ego. There have even been studies that have shown that something like 1 in 4 people will torture or kill a stranger because someone they perceive as an authority figure asked them to. Being a thug in the New World Order means that you get to be the one beating people, rather than the person being beat down.
 
Plus there's the whole "safety replacing freedom" argument that even Rumlow brought up in the third act.
 
Overall I loved the movie but some of my complaints:

- Villains couldn't shoot straight. This is something I can be flexible on, but when I'm noticing it while I'm watching the movie for the first time, I think it's significant enough to be a problem. I can't believe none of those guys chasing fury with the automatic weapons failed to hit him once his window was broken. Also, WS should have had better aim: I'm willing to accept that in the end he was subconsciously avoiding kill shots on Cap, but he also failed to kill Nick Fury at Cap's apartment, and Natasha. This is a guy who shot and killed a target by shooting through Nat years ago. I can do the mental gymnastics that maybe he HYDRA had de-thawed and prepped him too soon/badly and he was off his game, but I shouldn't have to. (Overall though it's not a huge deal to me).

- also as a corollary to the above, it bothered me how Fury and Natasha didn't keep a better eye on Pierce once they had taken control of the room in the end. He shouldn't have been allowed to play with his phone. That's like amateur hero mistakes.

- Not enough Bucky. I would have liked to have seen a bit more of how things were from his perspective, and how Cap was being affected by the situation. IMO that should have become the emotional core of the movie, where you have the big STOP HYDRA as the main goal but Cap dealing with Bucky as the smaller personal one. I don't mind Bucky being one of many pieces in the story (and I don't have a problem with how his storyline ended), but I think he should have been bigger than he was.

- In relation to the above: Too many characters/plots. I respect where the movie was coming from -- and I'm glad it took the risk of juggling it all, but it was a bit much for me. I think if the writing had been tighter and better and some of the fat trimmed off it would have benefited a lot. For instance, Sitwell's whole angle took way too much time for what was supposed to just be the clue that pieced it together for Team Cap. The World Council also continues to bore me to tears. Do we really need to see this much of the civilian masters of SHIELD to know that they exist? It's just a waste of time imo.

Two minor quibbles:

- Zola. I wasn't totally sold on Zola as becoming such a HYDRA mastermind. I LIKED the scene with him and I LIKED Toby Jones's voice performance, but I have a hard time buying that this is the same Zola from TFA.

- I would have liked to see a reference to Cap liking to draw. I've always liked that inclusion in TFA and I think it's a nice character point. Cap was a little underdeveloped in this film IMO and that could have helped.

Going forward I vote to give Black Widow her own solo film and let her take some of this supporting cast with her: she can have Maria Hill and Nick Fury and whoever else from SHIELD that wants to go with her. And leave Cap 3 as a smaller, more personal film with a smaller cast: he can take Falcon and Agent 13 and focus on tracking down Bucky.
 
Plus there's the whole "safety replacing freedom" argument that even Rumlow brought up in the third act.

Right...people need to understand that a New World Order was coming, even if there was no Hydra. SHIELD as an organization was planning to have a fairly tyrannical police state. They were going to be killing people who had committed no crime. Odds are that Banner was on the kill list regardless. SHIELD planned to scare people into acting straight...Hydra just wanted to take an extra step. Cap's point was that both were wrong.
 
Hydra doesn't have much to offer low level people?? We've seen from everything from the nazis to local police that regular people will join in on corruption and tyranny just for the sake of their own ego. There have even been studies that have shown that something like 1 in 4 people will torture or kill a stranger because someone they perceive as an authority figure asked them to. Being a thug in the New World Order means that you get to be the one beating people, rather than the person being beat down.

Reading the most recent Dietrich Bonhoeffer biography gave me a real sense of how the Nazis gradually infiltrated German society first through offer of power and then through intimidation. The way they undermined centuries old institutions was not that different from what happened with SHIELD. It only took a few years to undermine the national church there and place their own supporters in key positions.
It wasn't just ego though, the Nazis did promise order and the revival of the German people. Hitler did found a cult and had a very large following of true believers.
 
I like this film a lot and love some aspects of it. I don't have any nitpicks with it either.
But I haven't bought into the hype which makes me wonder if there's something wrong about me. :(

I think the lack of anything "original" (apart from the dismantling of SHIELD) is what's keeping me from raving about it. It's a solid flick with great performances and action. However, most of it feels "familiar".
But I'm really happy that even though it's been framed as a conspiracy thriller, it's still at its heart a Cap movie.
 
I like this film a lot and love some aspects of it. I don't have any nitpicks with it either.
But I haven't bought into the hype which makes me wonder if there's something wrong about me. :(

I think the lack of anything "original" (apart from the dismantling of SHIELD) is what's keeping me from raving about it. It's a solid flick with great performances and action. However, most of it feels "familiar".
But I'm really happy that even though it's been framed as a conspiracy thriller, it's still at its heart a Cap movie.

Original in what way? Almost all these CBM's incorporate a theme are done a bajillion times in film. It always boils down to how the actors sell their characters.
 
Reading the most recent Dietrich Bonhoeffer biography gave me a real sense of how the Nazis gradually infiltrated German society first through offer of power and then through intimidation. The way they undermined centuries old institutions was not that different from what happened with SHIELD. It only took a few years to undermine the national church there and place their own supporters in key positions.
It wasn't just ego though, the Nazis did promise order and the revival of the German people. Hitler did found a cult and had a very large following of true believers.

True. As I've said before...after WW2 we brought lots of Nazis into America, and we had high level people/companies that worked with them...so Nazism was welcomed into our country with open arms. It is sheer luck that we didn't experience something like Hydra for real. I think that including Hydra in the story is an extra warning to us about how we do business with tyrants.
 
If you thought Hydra reduced the political criticism then you missed the point of Dr. Stranglove.

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And wargames for that matter.
 
Original in what way? Almost all these CBM's incorporate a theme are done a bajillion times in film. It always boils down to how the actors sell their characters.

Not sure myself really. It checked all the boxes to be sure. "Original" is probably not the best word. I know there's not much that's new under the sun but while I love the film (seen it twice and saving my pennies for other things that are coming up) I just wasn't wowed by it although I found the hand-to-hand combat scenes some of the best for the genre.

I know IM3 isn't really popular around these places but I really enjoyed the approach they took and there was actually quite a bit of cleverness in it. I thought the Mandarin thing was great. There seemed to be something special in their chaos.
 
Wait people are moaning about the economics of creating the Helicarriers in real world terms? Are you yanking my short and curleys? Seriously?

I just don't like the idea of power creep, even in comic book movies. I get that the point of a comic book movie is to have an exciting finale, but it almost seems like every movie is trying to top the last one; eventually, it's just going to seem ridiculous. I guess I can accept three Helicarriers, but if five newly built Helicarriers show up in AoU, I'm going to call BS.

-Falcon’s inclusion didn’t seem particularly organic to me. He may have benefited from having greater agency in the story.

Yeah, he was a cool guy, but he didn't really seem to have any personal motivation. They could have at least played up the bit about his last partner dying or something (although motivation-through-someone's-death is a bit overdone). Although building his relationship with Steve on their common ground as soldiers was good.

The reason being that Hydra doesn’t have any discernible ideology beyond world conquest, which is all well and good for people like Stern and Pierce who could feasibly profit by being in a position of power, but for lower level SHIELD agents, I find it difficult to believe Hydra has much to offer.

Well, HYDRA has always been pretty much a cult, right? That's how they get such fierce devotion from the lower level guys, through indoctrination.

Furthermore, I wasn’t convinced that Arnim Zola’s character was a natural progression from TFA. To me at least, he didn’t appear enamoured with Hydra and was simply interested in the scientific resources he had access to. He turned coat at the first opportunity, rather than die to protect the Skull’s pans. You could argue this was simply because Zola was always looking for an opportunity to usurp the Red Skull, but I think it’s quite a stretch to make that interpretation from Jones’ performance in TFA.

Yeah, he never really seemed evil on his own. Either he was hiding his true colours all along and biding his time, or his conversion into AI messed with his mind and made him more malevolent.

I also don’t think I understood the endgame of Insight. Assuming that Hydra was successful in killing everyone they considered a threat, where do they go from there? Wouldn’t that make SHIELD an obvious target for damn near everyone left standing in the aftermath? I certainly doubt the response of the new president to three helicarriers murdering thousands of innocent people, including his/her predecessor would be to give SHIELD more power. Maybe someone can explain this to me because it seems a stupid plan, and a waste of 70 years worth of careful infiltration/manipulation.

I thought it was a stupid plan, too, but as others have pointed out, we're to assume that the Insight Helicarriers were the ultimate weapon. If they were able to get in the air and triangulate, it'd be checkmate. Since we don't know the full extent of their capabilities, I guess we can assume that any response - fighter jets, missiles, nukes - would be deterred.

And then the movie becomes a Jack Ryan flick; it becomes a different movie.

That wouldn't have been so bad. Comic book superhero movies don't need to all follow the same big action blockbuster template, do they? If the MCU is going to continue for the next two decades, some variety is always nice. Iron Man 3 was cool because it experimented with other, more dramatic elements - we saw a lot of Tony Stark without a suit, facing down PTSD. CA2 also had some of that before it went into its huge action finale.

- also as a corollary to the above, it bothered me how Fury and Natasha didn't keep a better eye on Pierce once they had taken control of the room in the end. He shouldn't have been allowed to play with his phone. That's like amateur hero mistakes.

Given all the other things going on and the fact that they perceived him to not be a physical threat, that's understandable. Here's a plot hole - why didn't Pierce kill Natasha instead of the WSC members? As important world people, they're more valuable as hostages. They're also a lot less dangerous to keep close. I guess it can be argued that Pierce kept Natasha alive since Fury would be less likely to sacrifice a close friend than some suit. But it still kind of seems sloppy to me.

True. As I've said before...after WW2 we brought lots of Nazis into America, and we had high level people/companies that worked with them...so Nazism was welcomed into our country with open arms. It is sheer luck that we didn't experience something like Hydra for real. I think that including Hydra in the story is an extra warning to us about how we do business with tyrants.

To be fair, none of the ex-Nazis who worked for the US were actually devoted to the cause of Nazism. Sure, guys like Wernher von Braun were willing to use concentration camp slave labour to build their experiments, which is obviously pretty bad in itself, but none of them had any ideological aspirations, really.

Interestingly enough, von Braun was mentioned in IM3. I wonder if, in the MCU, he might have somehow been connected to HYDRA? I doubt it, but that'd be funny if this turns into a plot point later down the road.

Anyway, I used to share the opinion that the HYDRA reveal took some of the political edge off, but after reading some opinions here, I'm starting to agree that it doesn't change the fact that SHIELD allowed itself to be moved into that murky direction through unethical practices. Also, like somebody else said, it would be a completely different movie if Captain America was gunning down average American joes who thought they were following orders from the good guys. That's understandable for, say, Jason Bourne, who ended up being an international fugitive for it, but not Captain America (yes, I realise that he's been a fugitive in the comics, but it's too early for that to happen in the MCU). So by necessity, his enemies have to be devoted HYDRA henchmen.
 
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I agree HYDRA's final plan didn't make much sense. If we assume Fury, Cap, and no one else got suspicious, the rest of the world would have gotten suspicious after they killed 20 million people in 2 minutes. But overall still a great movie.
 
I agree HYDRA's final plan didn't make much sense. If we assume Fury, Cap, and no one else got suspicious, the rest of the world would have gotten suspicious after they killed 20 million people in 2 minutes. But overall still a great movie.

I think the idea was supposed to be - once those Helicarriers finished triangulation, HYDRA won, checkmate, GG, game over. The first targets would be those with the power to organise counterattacks, like the President of the United States. After that, they would be unstoppable. I think that we're supposed too suspend our disbelief and assume that the Insight Helicarriers had so many defences that nothing could take them out. (Except for Captain America, haha.)
 
It would be safe to assume all world political leaders, military leaders, and military members were on the short list for the Wave 1 wipeout. The world would be in chaos then, Hydra would have the world by the balls at that point. Pump out a bunch of misinformation and watch the rest of the living world fall in line. The WSC was obviously getting away with it right under everyone's noses to begin with. Who would know truth from fiction at that point? Whoever doesn't comply gets their one way ticket to Hades on Wave 2...
 
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Its biggest flaws were the opportunities not taken. I was surprised none of the vets took notice of Steve. He's the perfect person to talk about adjustment with. The senator could've had more to do besides being a Hydra reveal. And I don't see why Bucky had to slink off into the pines. Why do they need to keep building ambiguity around him? The people who held him captive are dead or arrested. SHIELD's dissolved for now. It makes more sense that he stick with Steve than mope on his own.

Other than that, almost everything else checks with me. Sure, the movie treats computers like magical self-operating wizardry, but it's just not that big of a deal.
 

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