A Prayer for the dying

Whoa!!! So much action going on in that scene. Jolie made a very quick entrance and exited as quickly. No one is safe from the Cmill. Except no one is safe from the cannibal Cinemaman either, it seems. Not even cmill! :eek:

Can't wait to find out what happens to our anti-hero next.
 
dang, Cmill is the ****!:up:

Great chapter Hunter...loved it.
 
Cmill:"I'm sorry Emily,i just don't want you to lose sight of the value of human life and take it as something trivial......some of us have done that over time and it eventually eats away all that is good in you"

This is getting better with every chapter, man. A-ma-zing.
 
This is getting better with every chapter, man. A-ma-zing.
It is.

It also tells Emily: "Do what I say and not what I do". It can be quite confusing for a child though. Too deep for a kid to understand.
 
Cmill's gonna get it...

What a way to go, I'm betting Cmill wakes up with his ears missing while cinemaman enjoys a nice cianti and some fava beans.
 
Oh Snap. :wow:
I'm loving this Hunter. :yay:
Ooooo,I'm so ready to see what Cine has in store. ;)
 
Chapter 10


Cmill gradually came to,he was sitting in a chair at a dinner table,he couldn't move at all,he was paralysed,he looked along the table and saw Kmack and Emily sitting to his right with NDX on his left......a thin man stood at the foot of the table smiling at him

Cinemaman:"Finally you join us,i must say Ive admired your work over the years,you have a ruthless efficiency,.that's what puzzles me about this business,why are you throwing it all away for this little fleshsack ?"

Cmill:"I wouldn't expect you to understand because you're a sick ****ing lunatic"

Cineman scowled at Cmill and then smiled

Cinemaman:"Ha! i find it most amusing that someone like you is casting judgements,does a sane man travel to Colombia and kill over 50 ppl in his own little grudge war simply because he lacks the maturity to understand that collateral damage is part of the business he is in ?"

Cmill:"It's all in the motivations,what i did i did for justice,a justice that would never have been done if i hadn't carried it out"

Cinemaman:"Excuses,is that the line you're telling this Nun ? or is it one you have been telling yourself for so long you now believe it ? you're a KILLER!"

Cine got up in Cmills face and sneered at him

Cinemaman:"you are the same as me,you kill because it is what makes you tick,it's who you are and what drives you"

Kmack:
"Shut up! you're a sick twisted maniac that ate his parents,Cmill's humanity has been dented and damaged over the years but it's still there and the fact me and Emily are still alive is testament to that,you never had any to begin with and there in lies the difference"

Cinemaman skipped around the table to where Kmack and Emily were sitting

Cinemaman:"oooooo she's fiesty,i bet she tastes good"

he smelled her hair and then moved next to emily,Cmill's eyes flared

Cinemaman:"Well well well....looks like the iceman has melted little one,so what do you think.......is Cmill really a good guy ?"

Emily wanted to speak but couldn't for fear of crying she just looked at Cmill with tears in her eyes

Cmill:"It's ok sweetheart,it's gonna be ok"

NDX:"Yeah Emily,this b1tch is a second tier guy,just trying to make a name"

Cinemaman bolted around to where NDX was sitting.......Cmill knew what had just happened,Cine pulled a knife out and held it to NDX's face

Cinemaman:"What did you say ?"

NDX:"You heard me you Ed Gein wannabe mother****er"

Cinemaman snarled and sliced part of NDX's arm away

NDX:"ARRRGHHHHHHHHHHHH"

Cmill:"Shut your eyes Emily and don't open them until i say"

Cinemaman threw the bloody clump of flesh onto the table and then bit into NDX's stomach......blood gushed everywhere as NDX tried to scream but the blood in his throat stopped him

Cine chewed on the flesh and then stopped in his tracks,blood dripping from his mouth

Cinemaman:"I can't believe i fell for it,this isn't giving me any satisfaction,i see nothing in the old mans eyes but anger and even yours show no more than a wish to kill me"......he looked over at Emily and darted around the table next to her,and pushed her hair aside

Cinemaman:"Look at those soft cheeks...i bet they taste great"

Kmack started screaming

Cmill:"Emily keep your eyes shut,Cinemaman this is not the way,we have something that the ppl that hired you want,if you do this you'll never find it"

Cinemaman:
"Hahahahah you think i care about that.......say goodbye to Emily"

Cmill:"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"

BRATATATATATATATATATA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cinemamans body convulsed as it filled with bullets...he fell to the floor dead

the door burst open and in came Tza and Fran

Fran:"Holy **** it looks like a ****ing slaughterhouse in here"

Tza ran over to Emily and checked on her

Cmill:"We are all paralysed,it's starting to where off but you need to get NDX a doctor now"

Tzarinna:"Our boss is on the way she called it in.......here she is now"

A black SUV pulled up outside....SML got out and closed her door.......JAL sat in the backseat.......dead

SML walked into the dining room where everyone was standing with her arms behind her back,a gun in each hand

Fran:"Hey bos.........."

SML brought her hands from behind her back and in one fluid motion opened fire gunning down both Fran and Tza

Kmack stared wide eyed,even Cmill looked on shocked

SML sniffed and then took her phone out

SML:"Ive got them,send the chopper"

SML turned and looked at them and strolled up to the table

SML:"So you are what it's all about little girl" she said as she stroked Emily's cheek

SML:"I think you have something me and my friends want,why don't you give it to me ?"

Emily:"Bite me!"

SML's eyes turned to stone and she slapped Emily across the face

Kmack:"You b1tch!"

SML:"Now now nunny,that isn't very proper is it"

Just then the whirl of chopper blades could be heard.......it had arrived,SML turned to NDX and put 4 bullets in him

SML:"He was to far gone to make an effort"

Just then Sarge walked into the room with a couple of armed men

Sarge:"Nice job,lets go"

15 minutes later and the chopper landed on the roof pad of a mansion in Beverly Hills,the limbs were working again but Cmill was shackled and Emily and Kmack had guns pointed at them
They were all drug down some stairs and through a luxurious corridor into a big room where a man sat at a desk

Mister J:"So you are the mother****er that has been giving me all this grief!"

To Be Continued
 
frannie and tza came in just in the nick of time to save Emily from being devoured by Cinemaman but ended up dead in the hands of their treacherous boss, SML. Double-crossing b1tch! :mad: :up: :D

Another GREAT chapter, Rob. I love it!! :up: :heart:
 
Ok, that helped out a lot. There were too many characters hanging in the wings. Now we can get down to the nitty-gritty
 
frannie and tza came in just in the nick of time to save Emily from being devoured by Cinemaman but ended up dead in the hands of their treacherous boss, SML. Double-crossing b1tch! :mad: :up: :D

Another GREAT chapter, Rob. I love it!! :up: :heart:

:yay:
 
Best Chapter yet, IMO!! Awesome Hunter!!
 
Damn, I was going to tell Cine to call me but we're both ****ed. :( :) ;)
Another kick ass job. :p
 

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