Inside(Welcome to Hell)

[Hunter Rider]

SLAM!

The gate closed behind Sarge,he walked along the corridor and into the main hub of the building holding his change of uniform and bed sheets passing Cells as he made his way to what would be his new home......he was inside.

Rancon prison,the new maximum security facility in Los Angeles,home to the worst of the worst and Sarge was in the middle of it.....As he glanced at the inmates who were watching him he thought to himself how far away he was from where he had been just two short days ago,on vacation with his wife and daughter.....

Ring ring ring...ring ring rin...

Sarge:"yo!"

Sarge was sitting on the couch with his wife Kmack

Mister J:"Sarge,i need you to come in"

The last words any agent wants to hear when on vacation and on the couch with his girl

Sarge:"ugh boss i'm on vacation,can't you get someone else ?"

Kmack glared at Sarge

Mister J:"No,i need you,this is a big one and time is a key"

Sarge:"*Sigh*.....ok ju"

Kmack grabbed the phone off Sarge

Kmack:"He can't come in because he is busy making love to his wife"

Sarge pulled the phone out of her hand and pushed her gently back along the couch and mouthed to her

Sarge:"What the F**k are you doing ?"

Mister J:"Sarge ? you got your phone back ? heheheh"

Sarge:"Yes sir....I'll be in within the hour"

Mister J:"Ok,see you then"

the line went dead and Sarge turned to Kmack who was staring a hole in him

Sarge:"What ?.....it's my job baby,do you really think i want to be hanging around with a bunch of agents tracking down scum instead of being with you ?"

Kmack's face softened

Kmack:"Guess not"

Sarge:"It sounded important and.."

Kmack leant forward and put her finger onto his lips to silence him

Kmack:"So we don't have time to make love but how about a f**k ?"

A grin came across Sarge's face as Kmack giggled.........

Sarge arrived at the Bureau offices 50 minutes later and made his way up to Mister J's office
when he got there Mister J was standing next to his Desk,in his chair was the FBI director Dew K Mosi and the DA Cmill

Dew:"Sit down Sarge"

Sarge sat

Dew:"Ive read your file,you are both a highly ranked field agent and a world class analyst of the criminal mind......I'll cut to the chase,3 days ago we apprehended a serial killer by the name of NDX"

Sarge's eyes showed he was aware of the man

Dew:"Yes......well as you know he has mutilated and murdered at least 28 women across the west coast,he kept them somewhere and tortured and raped them at his convenience before killing them and dumping the bodies"

Cmill:"He was insatiable,sometimes taking two girls at once,that's how we got him,he took a girl a week ago but an eyewitness saw enough of him to give us a description,we staked out clubs all across LA as that is where he always took the girls from and we got him attempting to abduct nineteen year old Alice miller.."

Dew:"Problem is when we searched his home and any other places connected to him we didn't find the first girl he kidnapped,Marie jackson"

Cmill:"We tried to do a deal with him,even taking the death penalty off the table but he just laughed"

Dew:"What we want you to do is go undercover at Rancon prison where he is being held,get close to him and find out where he has hidden her,wherever she is she is running out fo time with no food or water"

Cmill:"With your skills you should be able to get into his mind and gain his trust"

the whole time Mister J had stared grimly out the window,Sarge looked at him and Dew caught the glance the two shared

Dew:"I won't bulls**t you,once you are inside there is no way for us to protect you,the warden will know who you are but his guards won't,if the inmates find out you're a cop you're dead"

Cmill pushed a photo across the desk of a young girl,a pretty white girl who looked around 18/19

Cmill:"She's 15,she sneaked out with her friends and this is where it got her"

Dew:"Basically Sarge we are asking you to risk your life to save hers"

Sarge stared at the photo

Sarge:"I'll do it"........

Sarge stepped into his designated cell and made his bed up,just as he finished his cell mate came in

NDX:"Hey there newbie"

Sarge turned around to see a tall,thin,weasely faced man with round rimmed glasses staring at him.....he was in hell and he'd just met the devil

to Be Continued......

 

[The FallenAngel]

Finally back at it. And what a way to return.

 

[Showtime]

Oh man....I love the start of this. This could be the best one yet.

 

[Cinemaman]

Nice read

 

[green]

Yay, great start Hunter.

 

[Cmill216]

Looks fantastic. Looking forward to the rest.

 

[Badger]

Great start Hunter, can't wait for more!

 

[Spider-Man Luvr28]

Looks fantastic. Looking forward to the rest.

t:

 

[Fran]

Not bad.

 

[enterthemadness]

A good start. Keep it up, Hunter.

 

[NDX]

Now this could be fun.

 

[tzarinna]

and the magic begins.

 

[SoulManX]

Looking good so far...

 

[tzarinna]

Okay...I thought maybe I had unsubscribed.

 

[The FallenAngel]

Yeah...where the hell is the next part?!

 

[Hunter Rider]

Ive been in a slump guys but a chapter will arrive today

 

[Mister J]

That setup/intro is pretty good. The last line was killer.

Get it? Killer. HIYO!!!

 

[Hunter Rider]

Chapter 2

Sarge stared for a moment then introduced himself

NDX:"So what you in here for ? or are you innocent like these other schmucks ?"

Sarge:"What can i say,i had a few nights of fun with some ladies and then they used the whole "I said no" gag"

NDX:"That's b/c they need to be dominated but feel the counter need for this equality crap"

Sarge:"Exactly man.......so whats the set up here ?"

NDX:"Lets walk,i'll give you the guided tour......how come you didn't ask why i am in here ?"

Sarge:"Well you're famous"

A smirk rose at the corner of NDX's mouth....Sarge took note,appealing to his ego was gonna be a strategy.

They took a stroll around the cell block and NDX pointed out some of the key players.

NDX:"That over there is green,a surgeon who killed his female patients on the operating table then ****ed their corpses"

he motioned towards a a middle aged man with a thick gray beard reading a novel about dragon warriors.

Sarge:"With all his money he couldn't get live broads ?"

NDX:"Oh yeah......he just preferred them dead.....Guy in the left hand corner over there looking shifty is Badgerphil.....he's the blocks fixer....killed his wife for the insurance money"

Sarge:"Whose the redneck ?"

Sarge directed his eyes towards a small nervy looking guy wearing a wife beater......he had a southern flag tattoo on his upper right arm and a wired look on his face.

NDX:"That's FA,his parents were also mother and Son,he's a little unstable and not that bright"

Sarge:"What'd he do ?"

NDX:"2 years ago he blew his trailer up with his girlfriend jolene in it........she'd forgot to put his beer in the ice bucket......after that he got on his bike and rode the highways murdering and robbing until he was caught"

Just then a large albino man came up to them,it was enterthemadness

ETM:"Whose this ?"

he eyed Sarge cautiously

NDX:"This is Sarge,just arrived today"

ETM:"Huh....ok"

Sarge noticed cut marks on ETM's arms as they moved on

Sarge:"What's with the cuts on his arms ?"

NDX:"His nickname is Johnny 99,he killed porn actresses for over 3 years across LA before getting busted,he made a cut on his arm for each one he killed.......he was cleaning up the filth that plagues us y'know ? those b1tches just tease."

Sarge:"Yeah man,i feel that.....but why Johnny 99 ? i only see around 30 cuts ?"

NDX:"You haven't seen his stomach...."

They continued on to the recreation room where two men were playing pool

NDX:"The big guy with the shaved head is Farmer,he's a member of the Arian Nation and the other is Cinemaman,a hired killer of the corbino crime family,he's a transfer here,just arrived 2 days ago so you're not the only newbie"

Sarge froze.......he had been on the task force that had brought in Cine,he had been the agent to catch him in a daring rooftop chase in Manhattan.

Sarge:"Lets go back to the cell,i wanna settle in,i got the lay of the land here"

NDX looked slightly puzzled

NDX:"Sure...i'll follow you back later,im gonna get a book"

Sarge struggled to sleep that night,not only was he in one of the worst places on the face of the Earth but his cover would be blown the moment he and Cine locked eyes.

The Next morning it was time to face the shower block,everyone looked nervous as they entered
Sarge showered with his back to the wall......at breakfast a guard came up to the table NDX and Sarge were eating at

Sava:"Sarge,on your feet,the governor wants to see you"

Sarge got up and followed the guard to the office of the Governor

Showtime was sitting at his desk with his head guard Doc Ock standing behind him

Showtime was a firm but fair governor who had a reputation for running a well oiled machine,Doc was the guard the prisoners feared,known for dishing out beatings on a whim and the organiser of some other less than legal practices within the prison.

Showtime"Doc you can take care of that matter we were discussing now"

Doc nodded and moved past Sarge to exit the room stopping as he opened the door.

Doc:"Enjoy your stay Sarge"

He smiled a disingenuous smile

Showtime waited for Doc to leave and then offered Sarge a seat,he could tell by the wired look in Sarge's eyes that something was wrong

Showtime:"This will be our only meeting,as you know i am the only one here that knows your true identity,if we are to keep it a secret we can't keep bringing you in this office,if you wish to talk to me you are gonna have to manufacture a reason to be sent here"

Sarge:"Ok........ we have a huge problem"

Sarge relayed the Cine issue to Showtime

Showtime:"I'll contact your ppl.....your sister will be here this afternoon with details on what to do......until hen keep your head down"

To Be Continued

 

[The FallenAngel]

NDX:"That's FA,his parents were also mother and Son,he's a little unstable and not that bright"

Great chapter hunter. t:

 

[tzarinna]

Glad you're back.
Love all the crazy characters.

 

[Spider-Man Luvr28]

Ooooooooooh. Bout time you wrote a chapter.

 

[Showtime]

I love seeing my name in lights. I love the prison angle man. This is going to get good.

 

[NDX]

Damn good Hunter. And about time.

Great chapter hunter. t:

You know it fits you, right?

 

[Cmill216]

Cinemaman,a hired killer of the corbino crime family,he's a transfer here,just arrived 2 days ago so you're not the only newbie"

Ha. I always love Cine's characters.

Excellent stuff, hunter. Let's keep up with the updates.

 

[Retroman]

Muy bueno!