Inside(Welcome to Hell)

[Badger]

That's a great ending, Hunter. The whole story was one awesome ride, that I didn't want to end. Hope you'll be starting a new one soon.

 

[Badger]

I'll second that. t:

 

[Showtime]

Freakin sweet ending. I love the sequence where the bullet takes out Klaus and as he falls the knife flies by him and lodges into Retro. Nice job.

What will become of Showtime!

 

[tzarinna]

Damn it if Sarge and Bella don't make a great team.
Good stuff, I hope he can quit that habit.

 

[Kmack]

Talk about great endings! Excellent story hunter I can't wait for your next project hunter!

 

[Retroman]

*claps*
Awww...all good things come to an end i guess.That's one hell of an ending HR!!

 

[DBella]

That is one AMAZING finale, Rob! Sarge and Bella make a great team. I am glad this mission is over for all those involved but I get the feeling that for Sarge, it's not over yet. He still has some personal issues that he has to deal with. I hope that "one last time..." really is the last but somehow I doubt it. He may have a bit of a way to go to get back on track... I think Kmack will be able to help him. I hope so.

Oh... what Bella did to Klaus... yowza!!!

Once again, I applaud you for a BRILLIANT story and I can't wait for you to start on your next one.

 

[Angry Sentinel]

I keep reading the title and then reflecting on the story. There are so many different ways to take it. "Inside" leads you to think about being "locked-up", as Sarge was sent to jail. But it also lends itself to suggesting the inner turmoil and degradation Sarge creates for himself through his experience.

And of course, the 'Welcome to Hell' reminds me of the many imaginings of hell writers have presented us with, the obvious one being Jail. Yet somehow, I think you really are refering to the 'hell' of a drug addiction and all the turmoil it causes for everyone involved (poor Kmack).

Again you've painted such a layered/deep picture.

Good job, and like the rest waiting for the next one.