Inside(Welcome to Hell)

[Hunter Rider]

Chapter 8

Cmill and a team arrived 15 minutes after Showtime's call,he entered the room in a long dark overcoat with a custom suit underneath

Showtime:"See you still dress to the nines no matter the occasion"

Cmill smiled.......the sexual chemistry between the 2 crackled

Cmill:"He gonna be ok ?"

The medic looked up from Showtimes knee

Medic:"He'll be fine,just needs to get to a hospital"

Showtime:"there's no time,we need to set a plan in motion now to get Bella back......we need to help Sarge and NDX escape"

Cmill:"What in the name of assjuice are you talking about ?"

Showtime:"I'll tell you on the way,we have to get to Mister J's house"

5 minutes later they were on the road in Cmill's Jag

Cmill:"So how ya been keeping ?........bunches"

Showtime:"Heh,i told you i hate that name,ive been fine thanks"

Cmill:"You really think letting this psycho out is gonna work ? can Sarge handle him ?"

Showtime:"I'm honestly not sure but it's the best hope we have"

Cmill:"About how it ended with us.."

Showtime:"Lets not rehash old ground"

Cmill:"I'm just saying,how does it work exactly ? I'm sorry i got so angry when you broke it off with me"

Showtime:"Fact is I'm bisexual Cmill,i can't be in a relationship that stifles my natural being.....I thought i could but i simply need a bit of both my friend"

Cmil:"Ok........were here"

They had called ahead and when they arrived Mister j was letting a nubile young blond many years his junior out of his house,he turned to Cmill and Showtime with his smoking jacket on and a pimp grin on his face,he turned his head back towards the gitl

Mister J:"Sorry about this Bebe"

BeBe:"Oh it's ok ****y,it happens to a lot of men your age"

Cmill and Showtime looked at J

Mister J:"Not quite what i meant Bebe"

He blushed

Bebe:"Not to worry ****y there'll be no charge"

she smiled and jumped in her VW Beetle.......j looked back at Cmill and Showtime

Mister J:"Heh...that Bebe....always the kidder"

Cmill:"Yeah Kid....er"

Mister J coughed

Mister J:"Ok what's the deal ?"

they went inside and filled j in on the details

Next morning Sarge was surprised to be told he had a visitor...his uncle

when he got to the visitors room he saw Mister J

Sarge:"Hey Uncle J"

Mister J:"Hey"

Sarge:"Didn't expect you to visit me"

Mister J:"Decided to pay my favourite nephew a visit"

j looked around him

Mister J :"Ok Sarge you are breaking out in thirty minutes"

Sarge:"What the **** ? there's no time to prepare"

Mister J:"There's gonna be a riot during rec break,use it to escape and take NDX with you"

Sarge:"But......."

Mister J:"they have Bella"

Sarge's face froze

Mister J:"When the riot breaks out get to the roof,there's a chopper there,you can wire and fly one right ?"

Sarge:"Errr.... ye......yes i can.......Ok i better go get ready"

He left the visitors room and went back to his Cell,NDX was there

NDX:"You ready for rec period ? i dunno this heat is pissing me off today,need some fresh air"

Sarge:"Yeah man...I'll follow you out"

NDX left the Cell and made his way to wait in line to be let into the yard for rec period

Sarge rummaged through his draw until he found the needle and bottle....he closed his eyes and took a deep breath.........then started tying a piece of cloth around his arm..................


They had only been in the yard a few moments when all hell broke loose and a group of prisoners went for the guards.......Sarge reacted quickly as the gunfire rang out from the walls above and the fighting pushed everyone back into the building

Sarge saw his opportunity and pulled a gun from a guards belt in the melee,he grabbed NDX's arm and pulled him out of the way of a stray bullet

Sarge:"Come on lets get the hell out of here"

they headed upwards to the roof,Sarge shot off the lock on the door leading to the helipad,he cracked the door to the chopper and set about wiring it

NDX:"where did you learn to do that ?"

Sarge:"I'm a mechanic"

NDX:"****,should have figured raping wasn't your day job hehehe"

Sarge grimaced and kept going,the blades whirred into action.......just then the door to the roof swung open and a young guard was pointing his gun at Sarge and NDX,Sarge's immediate reaction was to raise his gun at the guard......it was a Mexican standoff

Sarge looked at the rookie,his hand was shaking...Sarge's own palms were sweaty,the heroin was taking it's after high effect

Sarge:"Kid you do not want to do this,put the gun down and go inside,you don't have to die today"

Guard:"Y..y..you put y...y...your...yours down"

NDX:"Cap him,he hasn't got the balls to shoot"

Sarge:"Walk away kid...now"

the young guards hand twitched

BANG!!!!

Sarge stood,gun grasped in his hand,smoke coming out the barrel,his eyes closed

NDX:"Hahaha,nice shot,now lets go"

Sarge started to move towards the rookie

NDX:"What are you doing ?"

Sarge:"Getting his gun,get in the chopper and put the belt on"

Sarge went over and knelt next to the rookie,the wound was fatal,Sarge closed the young mans eyes and picked up the gun.

Sarge:"May god forgive me"

Sarge got into the chopper and they took off,as he looked down below the fighting was still going on and SWAT vans had arrived,they were leaving the prison,what part of his soul he had left there,only time would tell............


To Be Continued...........

 

[Mister J]

Showtime:"See you still dress to the nines no matter the occasion"

Cmill smiled.......the sexual chemistry between the 2 crackled

I KNEW IT!

They had called ahead and when they arrived Mister j was letting a nubile young blond many years his junior out of his house,he turned to Cmill and Showtime with his smoking jacket on and a pimp grin on his face,he turned his head back towards the gitl

Mister J:"Sorry about this Bebe"

BeBe:"Oh it's ok ****y,it happens to a lot of men your age"

Cmill and Showtime looked at J

Mister J:"Not quite what i meant Bebe"

He blushed

Bebe:"Not to worry ****y there'll be no charge"

Hmm. Guess I was out of Gatorade.

Sarge is ruthless ...and a mechanic ...and possibly addicted to smack. These are the type of lead protagonists we need to see more of.

 

[Showtime]

But...But...But...

 

[Badger]

Awesome, as always!

 

[Spider-Man Luvr28]

 

[Cinemaman]

That was the best chapter so far!!! I liked dialogue between Showtime and Cmill!

 

[tzarinna]

Poor Sarge, at least the young copper didn't suffer.
And poor Cmill got his hopes dashed.
Good stuff, Hunter.

 

[Angry Sentinel]

Sarge got into the chopper and they took off,as he looked down below the fighting was still going on and SWAT vans had arrived,they were leaving the prison,what part of his soul he had left there,only time would tell............

Dun dun Duhhhhhh!!!!

This line along with the title of this little ditty pretty much says it all. Sarges decline is very reminiscent of "Through a Scanner Darkly". And your overall theme makes me remember "What dreams may come", as it reminds me to wonder, is true 'Hell' a place we make for ourselves.

nicely done

 

[Retroman]

Sweet!

 

[Kmack]

Coooooolup:

 

[DBella]

Wow... so much going on in this chapter and some pretty surprising... uhhm... revelation. *ahem*

Cmill and Showtime? Hehehe.
Mister J... he likes 'em young, eh? "It happens a lot to men your age." I wonder what IT is.

PRISON BREAK!!!!! It's THAT important that NDX gets out I suppose. I know a little girl's life is important but is it more important than the life of the young rookie who could've had a family of his own... a wife, a young child, parents who love him as much as the parents of the little girl loves her? What a moral dilemma. I mean, who puts the value on people's life? And Sarge... to save a little girl's life, he had to become a murderer and a junkie. So sad...

O, Rob... now you got me all messed up inside.
Great job!

 

[Mister J]

Mister J... he likes 'em young, eh? "It happens a lot to men your age." I wonder what IT is.

She was selling magazine subscriptions and I simply forgot where my checkbook was and I was out of cash. She had to get going, so she left the promotional mags and I promised to square up later. That's why she didn't charge me.

Seriously.

 

[DBella]

She was selling magazine subscriptions and I simply forgot where my checkbook was and I was out of cash. She had to get going, so she left the promotional mags and I promised to square up later. That's why she didn't charge me.

Seriously.

Hahaha! Yeah... suuuuuuuure. We know what's really going on, Mister J. What kind of promotional mags I wonder...

 

[Hunter Rider]

Wow... so much going on in this chapter and some pretty surprising... uhhm... revelation. *ahem*

Cmill and Showtime? Hehehe.
Mister J... he likes 'em young, eh? "It happens a lot to men your age." I wonder what IT is.

PRISON BREAK!!!!! It's THAT important that NDX gets out I suppose. I know a little girl's life is important but is it more important than the life of the young rookie who could've had a family of his own... a wife, a young child, parents who love him as much as the parents of the little girl loves her? What a moral dilemma. I mean, who puts the value on people's life? And Sarge... to save a little girl's life, he had to become a murderer and a junkie. So sad...

O, Rob... now you got me all messed up inside.
Great job!

Thanks Bella

I'm glad you noticed Sarge's dilemma...i know it's just a fic but i am trying to write in a way that shows there is rarely no casualties when guys in his field make judgment calls on the spot to try and complete a mission and save a life,the costs are often a question with no answer

 

[DBella]

Thanks Bella

I'm glad you noticed Sarge's dilemma...i know it's just a fic but i am trying to write in a way that shows there is rarely no casualties when guys in his field make judgment calls on the spot to try and complete a mission and save a life,the costs are often a question with no answer

I know it's just a fic but I am sure people who actually work in that position have encountered something like that. Sarge's character... I can't say at this point if I consider him a "hero". Killing criminals in prison is one thing, but taking the life of an innocent rookie cop... that's... not right. I guess he had to make a split second decision on that one but still... it's unsettling. Why could he not just... I dunno... hurt the guy without killing him? A mission to save an innocent life that ends up sacrificing the life of another innocent. That totally blows.

 

[Hunter Rider]

I know it's just a fic but I am sure people who actually work in that position have encountered something like that. Sarge's character... I can't say at this point if I consider him a "hero". Killing criminals in prison is one thing, but taking the life of an innocent rookie cop... that's... not right. I guess he had to make a split second decision on that one but still... it's unsettling. Why could he not just... I dunno... hurt the guy without killing him? A mission to save an innocent life that ends up sacrificing the life of another innocent. That totally blows.

The way it felt when i was writing it is that Sarge knew if he didn't pull the trigger NDX would be onto the fact he was a fake and the girl was as good as dead,in his mind the decision was to either allow the little girl to die slowly and painfully at the hands of a sicko or take the rookie out cleanly,it is a decision that will haunt him from this point in.

 

[DBella]

The way it felt when i was writing it is that Sarge knew if he didn't pull the trigger NDX would be onto the fact he was a fake and the girl was as good as dead,in his mind the decision was to either allow the little girl to die slowly and painfully at the hands of a sicko or take the rookie out cleanly,it is a decision that will haunt him from this point in.

I bet it will for Sarge is not like NDX. I don't believe that he is. It sucks to be Sarge. RIP, rookie cop. His death better be worth it, Rob!

 

[Hunter Rider]

I bet it will for Sarge is not like NDX. I don't believe that he is. It sucks to be Sarge. RIP, rookie cop. His death better be worth it, Rob!

Ive got a payoff and retribution and more to come

 

[DBella]

Ive got a payoff and retribution and more to come

Brilliant!! Can't wait!!
Right now I want to pay my respect to the fallen heroes who work in that prison and died while on duty to protect us all from scumbags.
*prays*

 

[Mister J]

This all reminds me of when Daredevil and The Punisher broke out of prison. Is someone going to where a costume at some point ...or at least be blinded by toxic waste radiation ...or have their family gunned down by the mob?

 

[DBella]

Have patience, Mister J. In time, all your questions will be answered and I am sure that the best is yet to come.

 

[Angry Sentinel]

I know it's just a fic but I am sure people who actually work in that position have encountered something like that. Sarge's character... I can't say at this point if I consider him a "hero". Killing criminals in prison is one thing, but taking the life of an innocent rookie cop... that's... not right. I guess he had to make a split second decision on that one but still... it's unsettling. Why could he not just... I dunno... hurt the guy without killing him? A mission to save an innocent life that ends up sacrificing the life of another innocent. That totally blows.

Sorry to cut in, but I couldn't help but notice your referrence to the sacrificing of one life for another. What do you make of the scenario that played out in 'Saving Private Ryan'? The one where 5-6 guys were sent to bring home 1.

 

[DBella]

Sorry to cut in, but I couldn't help but notice your referrence to the sacrificing of one life for another. What do you make of the scenario that played out in 'Saving Private Ryan'? The one where 5-6 guys were sent to bring home 1.

But we're not talking about Saving Private Ryan!

With regards to the Rob's fanfic and the sacrifice of the rookie cop... I don't think it's like the one in SVP. Sarge killed the "good guy", the guy who's job is to make sure bad guys don't get out for the safety of the public. Sure... when the corrections officer signed up for the job, he knew of the dangers involved and that he might not make it home when his shift's over but I don't think he expected his life to be taken by one of his own fellow law enforcement officer. He's not the enemy. At the same time, althought I don't agree with what Sarge did, I can understand why he did what he did. Understanding doesn't mean acceptance. I don't have to accept Sarge's decision but I can understand it. Sarge had to do what he had to do to make sure the little girl is safe and is rescued and that NDX will get his just dessert. Justice is a funny thing sometimes...

With regards to SVP, the small group of soldiers were sent to bring home one of their own. In their quest to bring him home, they were attacked by the enemy. They were at war, the chances of them getting killed or wounded was always there whether or not they went on a mission to bring home one of their own. When you're in the frontline, the situation is less controlled than when you're in prison where the bad guys were behind bars. Also, the chance of getting killed by one of your own is MUCH less when you're a prison guard. All I'm saying is... it's just shocking when a cop knowingly kills another cop. Just as it's shocking if one soldier wearing the same uniform were to kill another at point blank.

 

[Hunter Rider]

Chapter 9

Sarge and NDX landed the chopper a few miles from the prison and headed to the motorway hiding in some near by bushes,NDX put his arm across Sarge's path

NDX:"Wait.....As soon as i spot the right car we'll make a move"

They waited a few minutes until a station wagon came into view

NDX:"Give me the gun"

Sarge hesitated and then handed it over

NDX staggered out into the middle of the road as a station Wagon approached..on seeing him it pulled over...Sarge could see the driver was a woman in her early 20's....there was an infant in the back,a girl no more than 3 years old

The Woman got out the car and approached NDX who was hunched over on the ground

BANG!!!!

Sarge's eyes opened widely....the woman fell...almost in slow motion to her knees...blood running out of her mouth and a hole leaking blood in her chest.....NDX stood up and made his way to car...the little girl was crying and screaming for her mom.....NDX cocked the gun

Sarge scrambled from his position and ran towards the car as NDX looked inside......Sarge ran as fast as he could but his legs felt like lead,he skidded to a halt as he got the bonnet

BANG!!!!!!!!!

Sarge:"NO!"

He fell to his knees

NDX pulled the young body out of the car and carried it over to the bushes near by and dumped it...Sarge felt his heart caving,he was hyper ventilating

NDX:"Help me with the woman,we gotta get going"

Sarge got up and felt the blood rushing to his head,he suddenly felt anger coursing through his veins,he spun NDX around and knocked the gun out of his hand and slammed him onto the bonnet of the car

Sarge:"What the **** did you do that for,she was just a kid for christ sake,we could have just tied them up here and took the car"

NDX:"That's for the weak,i leave no traces and make no exceptions,maybe you don't have the stomach for this after all,perhaps you are strictly minor league,not ready for the true highs i have to offer"

Every fibre of Sarge's being wanted to rip NDX's throat out but he started to think of the other little girl,the tragedy he had just witnessed would be repeated if he didn't find a way to coerce this vile monster into taking him there

Sarge:"It's not about having the guts,killing two innocent ppl is only gonna make the manhunt that much more dedicated especially since one of them was a kid"

NDX:"Innocent ? they were ****es...ok so one of them was a kid but she'd grow to be a ****e like her mother,trying to degrade and manipulate men for their own selfish ends"

Sarge released his grip on NDX....In that moment he realized NDX was even sicker than he had thought,looking at the twisted look on this thin man's face created greater fear than any monster a film maker could come up with,Evil isn't a visual,it comes from within and Sarge had no doubt what he was looking at was evil in it's purest form

Sarge:"Lets get in the car and get the **** out of here"

They drove off down the road and kept an eye open for any signs of
feds..of course Cmill and Showtime had made sure that they got a head start

After a few miles NDX spoke

NDX:"Pull over next to this store,i need to make a call"

Sarge pulled over and NDX went and made a call,when he returned he had a smile on his face

NDX:"Ok i got us a place to stay,seems some old friends of mine are moving on and that suits us just nicely"

Showtime was laying in his hospital bed when Cmill came into the room

Showtime:"Any news ?"

Cmill:"Not yet but we have got a big problem..."

Showtime:"I heard about young mathis,it's a real.."

Cmill:"No..it got worse.we just found 2 dead bodies at the side of a road in the near vaccinity.....one is a a 21 year old woman.....the other her 3 year old daughter"

Showtime:"Oh ****"

Cmill:"Their blood is on all our hands"

the 2 men sat in silence

NDX and Sarge pulled into a building in a rotten and decayed part of town,the type the tourist brochures never show when they show the land of dreams

NDX motioned Sarge to pull over and the two men entered the building,there was a selection of men in a dimly lit room playing cards..one of them was Retro,he got up and shook NDX's hand

Retro:"Good to see you man"

NDX:"What happened ?"

Retro:"Couple of Snooping Feds or some such branch found the underground section of the club,so we had to burn it down and get here,we are off to Mexico tomorrow to set up shop there...you should come,plenty of fresh meat heh"

NDX:"I will as soon as i finish my business here"

Retro:"Hey you are on the run right now,be careful"

NDX:"Oh i will be but i never leave a project unfinished"

Retro:"We'll talk more later,but lets get you 2 some clothes and while we are here how about some entertainment ?"

Sarge and NDX went to get changed,Sarge got a pair of jeans,a blue jumper and short blue jacket.

They met back up with the men in the room and all made their way to a secondary room further into the building,in it was a stage and a lamp hung above it..the men all took their seats and NDX motioned to Sarge to sit down......after a couple of minutes Klaus.retro's body guard drug two women pnto the stage,both had leather masks over their heads and were dressed in some kind of bondage bikini,he also brought with him a tray of "toys"......He then de masked the first women,a young blond....maybe 18...then he unmasked the second woman......It was Bella.......

Sarge sat staring at the stage,his heart racing the two women got on their knees and started putting on a "show",Bella crawled towards Sarge,her eyes filled with pain....his hand went for his gun but she made a motion with her eyes for him not to......Sarge sat like a zombie as the men around him hooted and hollored at the 2 girls being treat like animals in front of them...NDX shot Sarge a quizical look so Sarge started to smile and thenm laugh...the laughter coming from his throat was choking back the tears and need to vomit...........

After what seemed like an eternity the girls were lead off stage

Retro:"Ok time to hit the sack,we got a big day tomorrow"

Sarge thought quickly

Sarge:"Hey any chance i can get one of those b1tches for tonight ? i never sleep well in a strange bed heh"

Retro:"Hahah sure man why not,which one ?"

Sarge:"Ive always been a brunette fan"

Retro:"ok i'll send her up"

Sarge sat down on the bed in the dingy room he was taken to and put his head in his hands..after a few moments the door opened and Klaus ushered Bella into the room and then closed the door

they waited a few moments before speaking

Sarge:"Ok lets get you the **** out of here now"

Bella:"No,if you do that NDX will never lead you to the girl"

Sarge:"How many more must there be...at what point is it to many ?"

He slumped down on the bed

Bella:"What happened ?"

He relayed the story from the prison escape to the murder of the young mother and child before breaking down,Bella held him tight.herself also needing comfort

they just lay together for the next hour until there was a knock at the door,Klaus had come to take Bella back........

After she had gone Sarge took the needle and bottle out of his jacket pocket and laced up his arm.......Just one more time he told himself.............


To Be Continued

 

[Badger]

****ing awesome, Hunter. Best Chapter yet, IMO.