I think Roose's point is that there was no real reason to even include Chilton in the scene. It could've easily been Freddie and Will, no one else. Forcing Chilton in for the purpose of him being a surrogate to Freddie...honestly, I don't get why it was done either. I guess the writers just felt Freddie wasn't a major enough character for it to have an impact?
I have to say as a whole I am underwhelmed by the Red Dragon arc. Dolarhyde has been so terribly underdeveloped. There hasn't been a lot of logic behind his actions or natural evolution. In the book, everything Dolarhyde does (why he is killing, why he decides to stop, why he eats the Red Dragon, why he is driven back into killing, why he targets Will, etc)...it all has a natural progression. Fueller hasn't followed that progression. As such, a lot of it feels...empty or random. I mean, at the end, he just kidnaps Reba, because why not? We have to set up a climax for the story. In the novel there is a motivation for that, a catalyst, that makes him want to start killing again. I guess on the show it is Dr. Chilton and Will insulting him? Weak sauce, IMO. Dolarhyde is a much deeper character than he has been portrayed.
Honestly, I'm not even crazy about Armitage's portrayal. It has glimmers of something that could be good, but a lot of it is reduced to him breathing heavily and saying "I'M AM THE GREAT RED DRAGON!" in a melodramatic, Christian Bale-Batman voice.
This arc just feels poorly constructed. BeDelia, Hannibal's seeming cat and mouse game with Alana (that may or may not go anywhere), etc. These things feel like wastes of time that are taking away from what should be a very narrow and focused story.
The show is still beautifully shot, mostly well acted, and compelling..but the flaws are less hidden in this arc. But feel free to discard all of that mean ol'Matt just hates Hannibal.
