Well, the IESB review makes infinitely more sense than the LR article, but before delving into that, I have to say I love how this topic brings out so many Hulk fans who apparently were in hiding all of this time. People crawling out from everywhere... it's great.

Like, where were you when Ang Lee's Hulk was thoroughly dissected in other threads and why is now - in a thread that has nothing to do with Ang's Hulk - suddenly the right time to spill your brains over anything and everything that has to do with the Hulk?
Secondly, come on Sava... suicide attempts at the beginning and end? You
have to be proud of those. lol As for the deviation from the comics, I couldn't be happier. I just don't get why everything must be fully 100% saturated in gamma rays for people to be happy.
Anyway, the script. Here's my take on LR's version, with the aid of the IESB article:
Absolutely LOVE everything up to the point that ends with the sentence, "He stares sadly at a picture of a beautiful woman, his wife, BETTY ROSS." The pace, the setting, the mood, etc... it's perfect. From there, starting with the abrupt transition to the woman who inherits "gamma sickness from a South American soda," the details are choppy. LR's "Clutch" spy guy, for example, doesn't explain how gamma happens to get into the soda, but thankfully IESB bails us out. Mr. "Clutch" also doesn't tell us how Ross is able to track down Banner immediately thereafter, but again, IESB comes to the rescue.
Then, in the next paragraph, we have a character named "Major Cabot." Well, there's no such character with that name in the movie, but there's an actor named Christina Cabot who plays Major Kathleen 'Kat' Sparr. So that would seem to cast a shadow on the reliability/accuracy of LR's review, considering that their ace "scooper" was giving us real character names up to the point of being factually lazy about this supposed "Major Cabot."
Banner's fight with the punks... someone who posted here a while ago wanting such a scene gets his wish, it seems. I only remember the post and not the poster because he/she was met with the ridicule that it would be too cliche... too much meant for Spidey, Batman or other comic book heroes, not the Hulk. I think the scene works just fine and is a nice primer for subsequent Hulkouts.
My only real problem is with the super soldier serum as it pertains to the Abomination and that is, we've already seen it before with Norman Osborn/the Green Goblin on the big screen. For the Hulk, I think the serum is fine, so long as the script gives a nod to the first film and/or Hulk's accidental-type origins occurring in a lab.
Moving on, I LOVE how Blonsky progressively becomes the Abomination over the course of the script. And LOVE that he gets his butt kicked by the Hulk in their first encounter. I was worried that the script would follow too many of the ideas around here - namely that Abomb should give the Hulk a beating in their first encounter, then leave it up to the Hulk being madder/stronger in a second encounter in which Hulk defeats Abomb (e.g., the apparent death of Betty, for example, causing Hulk's increased anger/strength, which would be INCREDIBLY cliche and/or overall just too predictable). But absolutely love the idea that Blonsky
wants to take the serum. The LR review says he's "more than willing" to take it and "a little too happy with his power," and this only leaves it to our imagination just what a freakish beast he becomes, which IMO sets us up perfectly for his tango with the Hulk in NYC... which I'm hoping will be the mother of all fights.
^An interesting little wrinkle IMO. Will be curious to see how it's done.
^More Hulk dogs..?
No AD, it was 24 - one of your favorite shows. Good for a one-time use only IMO.