The Create-A-Hero RPG Season II OOC Thread

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Cheers, man, that's awesome!

One thing though, could you extend the sleeves or silver up the wrists, because exposed skin is a bit out of character for him? Outside of that little quibble that's 100% perfect.

I was well aware of that...but I thought it just looked cooler having them rolled up for now. It's just a pic of his suit after all. :clown:
 
No issues came about from the last time I put a prayer in a post, but we have a different set of players this time around...so I hope no one takes offense because obviously religion is a touchy subject for some.
 
God, damned bible thumpin', religious nutjob! Don't you peddle your beliefs here! Take you're hoodoo and git out! :cmad:
 
lol Don't worry Trusty, nothing short of desecrating Chocolate Pudding offends me. Don't worry. ;)
 
Kk. Also...I know that part of my showing what day it is and what power Michael possesses is to change the color of his font...but this is the first time I've done a post that takes place on Sunday for him. Quite frankly...I've grown quite attached to the color and such for him.

So I will no longer be changing the color of the font for him. The gold color is here to stay. :oldrazz:
 
"Now that is the only pudding 240 dollars can buy"

I haven't laugh so hard since i was a little girl thank you.

For some reason i feel like having chocolate pudding.
 
"Now that is the only pudding 240 dollars can buy"

I haven't laugh so hard since i was a little girl thank you.

For some reason i feel like having chocolate pudding.



Pudding is so good that this magical thing we call internet had to make my post twice.
 
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I asked a buddy of my to do a commission of Michael for me, and here's the rough beginning sketch of his work (I 'shopped in the MicroHero for mere comparison):

archangelsketch.jpg


I can't wait til he's done. I'm real happy with the rough sketch. :woot:
 
2nd character time!

Create a Hero RPG SEASON II Application

Character you have created: Inspector Edmund "Ed" Smith
Alias: None

Speech Color: Trebuchet MS Bold and Blue

Character Alignment: Walking the Line

Identity:Known

Character Personality: Ed is a man who believes in absolute justice at all cost. He is also a man who believes organized crime is a sometimes nessecary evil for the citizens of Lost Haven. A man of his convictions, he hardly ever backs down from what he believes to be right.

Uniform/Costume: Ed is a middle aged man with dark hair, wears glasses, and, like most detectives, a suit and tie.

Origin Info/Details: A 20 year vet of the Lost Haven Police Department, Inspector Ed Smith is one of the Haven's top cops. He is famous in the police department for the solving of the famous Dr. Frankenstein murders 10 years ago. In those ten years, he has climbed the ladder like a rocket. He made captain at the age of 32 and, at 41, is in prime position to be named Chief of Detectives and Chief of Police all in the next ten years. Five years ago, Chief Finger approved Smith to form a "Mob Squad". Essentially, they kidnap would be gangsters setting up shop in Haven, take them to a run down motel, and beat them half to death before sending them home. He does this for two reasons. The first is to keep organized crime to a minimum. The second is to appease the current crime families in Lost Haven. He sees the current families as a needed force in the town, and works with them from time to time.

Hero Type (Select one): Normal

Power Level (Select one below):

1. Street Level (Ex. Punisher, Daredevil)
.

Powers (Be Specific): None. But Smith is a fair shot with a pistol and has a brilliant detective mind.

Attributes (Select one at each category):

Strength Level: Normal Human

Speed/Reaction Timing Level: Normal Human,

Endurance at MAXIMUM Effort: Normal Human

Agility: Normal Human

Intelligence: Politics, lit, history, music etc..: Average. Criminology: Genius

Fighting Skill: Trained

Resources:
Large
as in the entire LHPD police force is in his control, he only answers to Chief Finger.

Weaknesses : Regular Human, so everything pretty much.

Supporting Characters: Mike and Ike Eckling, twin brother police officers who are Ed's flunkies, doing everything the Inspector request. Smith's wife, Dena, and daughter Debra.

List a few reasons why you've created that character: I love playing Gordon, and this is my chance to play an anti-Gordon. I also enjoy James Ellroy's LA novels, and this character is an amalgam of my two favorite characters from his four novels. Brilliant Ed Exley and corupt Dudley Smith.

What can you bring to the RPG?: A cop!

Do you know how to post pictures on the hype boards?: Yes.

Sample Post (Minimum Four paragraphs containing dialogue):


Little Ulster

The Irish burg of Lost Haven. Turf for the McCreery Family, one of the Haven's five organized crime syndicates. While the Zano's specialize in money laundering, smuggling, and prostitution, the McCreery's are strong arm men, making their money off protection rackets and the drug trade.

Francis McCreery is the clan's leader, he's dumb as a rock and fat as a cow. In his sixty years on the planet, he has never done a decent thing for anyone other than himself. If I could, I'd put a bullet between his eyes. It's all I can do to sit across from him in his family owned pub.

"So, the Zano's want to talk to me?" He says in his slight Irish brogue. As a second generation immigrant, he's picked it up from his parents.

"That's correct. They sent me here as a peace offering. I understand the bad blood between your families. The war 10 years ago took your oldest son and Zano's youngest. The Zano's wish to put that to an end and work with your family."

"What's in it for us?" He says as his wife brings him a plate of chopped up meat only an Irishman would like.

"The Zano's are highly influential, as you can see by who they chose to serve as a message boy. They'll work with the local politicans and police to get them off your back and help you in your drug trade."

"What will he have to do?" McCreery says as he shovels the food into his mouth.

"The Zano's are in need of some muscle. They need help with unruly customers at their ****ehouses and maybe a few protection rackets. I'll let you two has out the details at the meeting tomorrow."

"I assume you'll be coming?"

"Yes. Me and my two officers will be there to make sure things don't get out of hand."

"Aww. My heart ****ing feels for you. I don't understand you, Smith. You're a goddamn hero cop, but yet you're as dirty as my ****e of a daughter."

"I'm not dirty."
I say with a scowl.

"I just tolerate scum like you because I see you as a nessecary evil. If you don't control Lost Haven's rackets, someone else will. I know you, I have files on you. I know how to manipulate you and pull your strings. Not just you, but all of you dumb criminals. You think you control this town, but you don't. I snap my fingers and you get twenty years and get knifed in jail. Remember that next time you call me dirty."

I grab McCreery by his collar with one hand, and grab a pile of the sheppards pie with my free hand and shove it into his mouth.

"Eat up, slimeball. Hearts and kidneys are good for the body."

I push out from the table and stand up while he chokes on his food. I'm out of the pub and into the backseat of the unmarked car with the Eckling twins up front.

"I'm done here, boys."

"Actually, sir. We picked up something on the scanner. You're needed at the SDS contaiment facility. Apparently there's a prison break. All those super-powered crazies rioting." Mike says.

I nod at Mike and reach over Ike and grab the scanner's mic.

"Central, this is Six-Adam-One. Send out an all priority alert to all SWAT members. Meet at Central and converge at the SDC CF. This is on direct orders from Deputy Chief Smith."

"10-4" The dispatcher sqwaks. I put the mic back and motion forward with my hand.

"Let's roll. Looks like we've got a super-riot on our hands."
 
2nd character time!

Create a Hero RPG SEASON II Application

Character you have created: Inspector Edmund "Ed" Smith
Alias: None

Speech Color: Trebuchet MS Bold and Blue

Character Alignment: Walking the Line

Identity:Known

Character Personality: Ed is a man who believes in absolute justice at all cost. He is also a man who believes organized crime is a sometimes nessecary evil for the citizens of Lost Haven. A man of his convictions, he hardly ever backs down from what he believes to be right.

Uniform/Costume: Ed is a middle aged man with dark hair, wears glasses, and, like most detectives, a suit and tie.

Origin Info/Details: A 20 year vet of the Lost Haven Police Department, Inspector Ed Smith is one of the Haven's top cops. He is famous in the police department for the solving of the famous Dr. Frankenstein murders 10 years ago. In those ten years, he has climbed the ladder like a rocket. He made captain at the age of 32 and, at 41, is in prime position to be named Chief of Detectives and Chief of Police all in the next ten years. Five years ago, Chief Finger approved Smith to form a "Mob Squad". Essentially, they kidnap would be gangsters setting up shop in Haven, take them to a run down motel, and beat them half to death before sending them home. He does this for two reasons. The first is to keep organized crime to a minimum. The second is to appease the current crime families in Lost Haven. He sees the current families as a needed force in the town, and works with them from time to time.

Hero Type (Select one): Normal

Power Level (Select one below):

1. Street Level (Ex. Punisher, Daredevil)
.

Powers (Be Specific): None. But Smith is a fair shot with a pistol and has a brilliant detective mind.

Attributes (Select one at each category):

Strength Level: Normal Human

Speed/Reaction Timing Level: Normal Human,

Endurance at MAXIMUM Effort: Normal Human

Agility: Normal Human

Intelligence: Politics, lit, history, music etc..: Average. Criminology: Genius

Fighting Skill: Trained

Resources: Large
as in the entire LHPD police force is in his control, he only answers to Chief Finger.

Weaknesses : Regular Human, so everything pretty much.

Supporting Characters: Mike and Ike Eckling, twin brother police officers who are Ed's flunkies, doing everything the Inspector request. Smith's wife, Dena, and daughter Debra.

List a few reasons why you've created that character: I love playing Gordon, and this is my chance to play an anti-Gordon. I also enjoy James Ellroy's LA novels, and this character is an amalgam of my two favorite characters from his four novels. Brilliant Ed Exley and corupt Dudley Smith.

What can you bring to the RPG?: A cop!

Do you know how to post pictures on the hype boards?: Yes.

Sample Post (Minimum Four paragraphs containing dialogue):


Little Ulster

The Irish burg of Lost Haven. Turf for the McCreery Family, one of the Haven's five organized crime syndicates. While the Zano's specialize in money laundering, smuggling, and prostitution, the McCreery's are strong arm men, making their money off protection rackets and the drug trade.

Francis McCreery is the clan's leader, he's dumb as a rock and fat as a cow. In his sixty years on the planet, he has never done a decent thing for anyone other than himself. If I could, I'd put a bullet between his eyes. It's all I can do to sit across from him in his family owned pub.

"So, the Zano's want to talk to me?" He says in his slight Irish brogue. As a second generation immigrant, he's picked it up from his parents.

"That's correct. They sent me here as a peace offering. I understand the bad blood between your families. The war 10 years ago took your oldest son and Zano's youngest. The Zano's wish to put that to an end and work with your family."

"What's in it for us?" He says as his wife brings him a plate of chopped up meat only an Irishman would like.

"The Zano's are highly influential, as you can see by who they chose to serve as a message boy. They'll work with the local politicans and police to get them off your back and help you in your drug trade."

"What will he have to do?" McCreery says as he shovels the food into his mouth.

"The Zano's are in need of some muscle. They need help with unruly customers at their ****ehouses and maybe a few protection rackets. I'll let you two has out the details at the meeting tomorrow."

"I assume you'll be coming?"

"Yes. Me and my two officers will be there to make sure things don't get out of hand."

"Aww. My heart ****ing feels for you. I don't understand you, Smith. You're a goddamn hero cop, but yet you're as dirty as my ****e of a daughter."

"I'm not dirty."
I say with a scowl.

"I just tolerate scum like you because I see you as a nessecary evil. If you don't control Lost Haven's rackets, someone else will. I know you, I have files on you. I know how to manipulate you and pull your strings. Not just you, but all of you dumb criminals. You think you control this town, but you don't. I snap my fingers and you get twenty years and get knifed in jail. Remember that next time you call me dirty."

I grab McCreery by his collar with one hand, and grab a pile of the sheppards pie with my free hand and shove it into his mouth.

"Eat up, slimeball. Hearts and kidneys are good for the body."

I push out from the table and stand up while he chokes on his food. I'm out of the pub and into the backseat of the unmarked car with the Eckling twins up front.

"I'm done here, boys."

"Actually, sir. We picked up something on the scanner. You're needed at the SDS contaiment facility. Apparently there's a prison break. All those super-powered crazies rioting." Mike says.

I nod at Mike and reach over Ike and grab the scanner's mic.

"Central, this is Six-Adam-One. Send out an all priority alert to all SWAT members. Meet at Central and converge at the SDC CF. This is on direct orders from Deputy Chief Smith."

"10-4" The dispatcher sqwaks. I put the mic back and motion forward with my hand.

"Let's roll. Looks like we've got a super-riot on our hands."

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Tomorrow for me... and then hopefully the day after as well...
 
Meh, Goddess is keeping up at a decent time. Fontaine only has 4 posts himself (after I wrote him into a corner with him sleeping during this major confrontation... genius...)
 
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