The Create-A-Hero RPG Season II OOC Thread

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That's some kickarse work there, trust'...

I'm going to be making some changes to Hazard and Nightmare. Hazard largely because he looks like a flame dude with the color scheme and Nightmare just because of the design in some areas.
 
Create a Hero RPG SEASON II Application

Character you have created: Wraith

Alias: John Cade

Speech Color (Actually say what you're using, don't go "Like this", or what not): Georgia, Dark Blue

Character Alignment: Walking the Line

Identity:Secret

Character Personality (Give information on how your character acts, what he/she believes in, how they handle situations): Ruthless, Aggressive and cold. Wraith is merciless in how he handles criminals, believing in his own power to make criminals suffer the same crimes they themselves have commited. "An eye for an eye" pretty much sums up his take on the world.

Origin Info/Details: John Cade was a small time cop based in Lost Haven. After participating in a drugs bust at the home of crime boss Salvatore Fontaine, he was responsible for the accidental shooting of Fontaines daughter. Salvatore was locked away in maximum security but his two sons walked free. Cade instantly became earmarked by Fontaine Brothers and a month later he returned home from a long night shift to find both his sons and his wife hanging in his garage.

A note was stapled to the head of his wife, "Kindest Regards, The Fontaines."

Cade lost it, heading out into the night to confront the two sons but it was an ambush. In the rain soaked streets he was gunned down, but still alive. Lying in a pool of rainwater and blood Cade was alive long enough to feel his limbs being hacked away by the Fontaine brothers.

It was upon his death that Moses was blinded by blackness. He was told that he was he last in a bloodline spreading back across thousands of years. His ancestory was that of the Dark Light, a dark mystic power that transformed the wielder into a demonic form, into an Angel of Vengeance. He would be granted life and the opportunity to seek his revenge in exchange for souls of the damned. Cade agreed without hesitation.

Cade was ressurected, his body flowing with the Dark Light. His mission; to take the souls of the damned and bring them to task for their crimes.

Hero Type (Select one):Supernatural

Power Level (Select one below):City Level

Powers (Be Specific): Wraith has the power of Dark Light which is a dark energy that can be channelled and shot from his hands or through any weapon wielded by him. He also comes equipped with superhuman strength, a healing factor, enchanced agility and limited teleportation powers.

Attributes (Select one at each category):

Strength Level: 20

Speed/Reaction Timing Level: 20

Endurance at MAXIMUM Effort: 4

Agility: Normal Human

Intelligence: Average

Fighting Skill: Trained

Resources: Average

Weaknesses: Whilst having a healing factor, Wraith is still vunerable to all forms of attack, with heavier artillery, grenades and sufficiently strong enery blasts taking their toll on him.

Supporting Characters: Salvatore Fontaine, the mortal enemy of Vengeance and the man who ordered the hit on Cade. Gwen Cade, Johns wife. Rowan Kincaid, Professor of Dark Arts and advisor to Cade. Billy Stone, Cades former partner and best friend.

List a few reasons why you've created that character: He's dark, creepy and in the vain of Ghost Rider, Spawn and other cool mystical characters.

What can you bring to the RPG?: I hate this question so...ummmm... new characters :/

Do you know how to post pictures on the hype boards?:
Rico_Comic_Project2_by_cantas78.jpg



Sample Post (Minimum Four paragraphs containing dialogue):

It was upon these rain lashed streets that I found out who I truly was. I lay just a few feet from here, where the prying eyes of the law could not see. It was a place of filth, of grime and deviance. My lifeblood was soaking the slick black concrete of the road below. Splashing against a crumpled cigarette carton and an old newspaper that had become lodged on the bars of a drain cover.

For a long time I had believed that my life was worth something. I believed that the job I did was making a difference. Nowadays, I can say with a large amount of certainty that those beliefs were a ****ing joke.

The Fontaines. I can still see the sneering faces of those slimy little ****ers as they hacked off my arms, right before I bled to death. There time will come. Now though, I'm stood facing another just like them. He was in on it too. Just an errand boy with a squishy face and a look in his eye like he's about to piss his pants. He's just as guilty.

"Where are the Fontaines?" I ask, my voice a growl through gritted teeth.

"I-I don't know man! I really don't know!" He's squeaking, his voice scraping into a higher pitch as his life flashes before him.
"Tell me."

"I can't. They'll kill me! they'll ****in' kill me!"


I slam him into a wall, my fingers tightening against his jugular. I can feel him gulping for air as I lift him from his feet. "No they won't. Because I'm going to kill you. So how about before you swallow your last breath you do something worthwhile and decent with your life and condemn those mother****ers?"

"I-I can't! Please -oh God please- I got a wife man, kids too! Please!" He was crying.
Oh, and he'd finally pissed his pants. Pathetic bastard was loyal to a tee though.
"Yeah, I had a family too. Until you and your buddies came along. You want to know where my boys are? My boys are rotting in wooden six feet under the ground. Innocent children dead because of you mother ****ers. NOW TELL ME WHERE THEY ARE!"My fingers tighten, pushing against his flesh, bursting blood vessels.

"Oh God -they're- you can find 'em in their club, Blue Coyote, it's a strip bar down in south LH, they're in their mosty nights. Please don't kill me... please... pl-"

I snap his neck with a violent twist and fling his body into the trash. Even that is too good a resting place for this worthless piece of ****. The gentle patter of raindrops echoes through the silence as I watch the lifeless corpse soak into the ground at my feet. The night is young and the darkness screams for more bloodshed.

I'll happily provide it.

They call me Wraith.

The Angel of Vengeance.

 
Approved, but you might want to consider changing the name of the Fontaine Brothers, just to avoid confusion with the PC hero here named Fontaine.
 
Approved, but you might want to consider changing the name of the Fontaine Brothers, just to avoid confusion with the PC hero here named Fontaine.
I don't have a problem with it if that makes it any difference.

Plus I think Wraith was on here first and had his origin down before my guy jumped in.
 
I also played a former Haven cop turned superhero named Wraith earlier this season. He didn't have any powers, and was along the lines of The Spirit and The Shadow. Although I only played him for like two posts, you can go ahead and retcon him outta existence.
 
I also played a former Haven cop turned superhero named Wraith earlier this season. He didn't have any powers, and was along the lines of The Spirit and The Shadow. Although I only played him for like two posts, you can go ahead and retcon him outta existence.
Ah yeah.

Got confused. Thought that was Optikal's character and that he was just coming back into the game... heh.
 
Drastically changed Hazard's color scheme to better suit his name and powers and made some changes to Nightmare:

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Left to right: Leech, Hex, Tempest, Hazard, Doctor Vertigo, The Phantasm, Nightmare
 
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Tells ya what folks, to avoid confusion, I'll change my heros name and change the Fontaines name. Apologies for any inconvenience <3
 
Create a Hero RPG SEASON II Application

Character you have created: Raven

Alias: John Cade

Speech Color (Actually say what you're using, don't go "Like this", or what not): Georgia, Dark Blue

Character Alignment: Walking the Line

Identity:Secret

Character Personality (Give information on how your character acts, what he/she believes in, how they handle situations): Ruthless, Aggressive and cold. Raven is merciless in how he handles criminals, believing in his own power to make criminals suffer the same crimes they themselves have commited. "An eye for an eye" pretty much sums up his take on the world.

Origin Info/Details: John Cade was a small time cop based in Lost Haven. After participating in a drugs bust at the home of crime boss Salvatore Costello, he was responsible for the accidental shooting of Costellos daughter. Salvatore was locked away in maximum security but his two sons walked free. Cade instantly became earmarked by the Costello Brothers and a month later he returned home from a long night shift to find both his sons and his wife hanging in his garage.

A note was stapled to the head of his wife, "Kindest Regards, The Costellos."

Cade lost it, heading out into the night to confront the two sons but it was an ambush. In the rain soaked streets he was gunned down, but still alive. Lying in a pool of rainwater and blood Cade was alive long enough to feel his limbs being hacked away by the Costello brothers.

It was upon his death that John was blinded by blackness. He was told that he was the last in a bloodline spreading back across thousands of years. His ancestory was that of the Dark Light, a dark mystic power that transformed the wielder into a demonic form, into an Angel of Vengeance.

He would be granted life and the opportunity to seek his revenge in exchange for souls of the damned. Cade agreed without hesitation.

Cade was ressurected, his body flowing with the Dark Light. His mission; to take the souls of the damned and bring them to task for their crimes.

Hero Type (Select one):Supernatural

Power Level (Select one below):City Level

Powers (Be Specific): Raven has the power of Dark Light which is a dark energy that can be channelled and shot from his hands or through any weapon wielded by him. He also comes equipped with superhuman strength, a healing factor, enchanced agility and limited teleportation powers.

Attributes (Select one at each category):

Strength Level: 20

Speed/Reaction Timing Level: 20

Endurance at MAXIMUM Effort: 4

Agility: Normal Human

Intelligence: Average

Fighting Skill: Trained

Resources: Average

Weaknesses: Whilst having a healing factor, Raven is still vunerable to all forms of attack, with heavier artillery, grenades and sufficiently strong enery blasts taking their toll on him.

Supporting Characters: Salvatore Costello, the mortal enemy of Raven and the man who ordered the hit on Cade. Gwen Cade, Johns wife. Rowan Kincaid, Professor of Dark Arts and advisor to Cade. Billy Stone, Cades former partner and best friend.

List a few reasons why you've created that character: He's dark, creepy and in the vain of Ghost Rider, Spawn and other cool mystical characters.

What can you bring to the RPG?: I hate this question so...ummmm... new characters :/

Do you know how to post pictures on the hype boards?:
Rico_Comic_Project2_by_cantas78.jpg



Sample Post (Minimum Four paragraphs containing dialogue):

It was upon these rain lashed streets that I found out who I truly was. I lay just a few feet from here, where the prying eyes of the law could not see. It was a place of filth, of grime and deviance. My lifeblood was soaking the slick black concrete of the road below. Splashing against a crumpled cigarette carton and an old newspaper that had become lodged on the bars of a drain cover.

For a long time I had believed that my life was worth something. I believed that the job I did was making a difference. Nowadays, I can say with a large amount of certainty that those beliefs were a ****ing joke.

The Costellos. I can still see the sneering faces of those slimy little ****ers as they hacked off my arms, right before I bled to death. There time will come. Now though, I'm stood facing another just like them. He was in on it too. Just an errand boy with a squishy face and a look in his eye like he's about to piss his pants. He's just as guilty.

"Where are the Costellos?" I ask, my voice a growl through gritted teeth.

"I-I don't know man! I really don't know!" He's squeaking, his voice scraping into a higher pitch as his life flashes before him.
"Tell me."

"I can't. They'll kill me! they'll ****in' kill me!"


I slam him into a wall, my fingers tightening against his jugular. I can feel him gulping for air as I lift him from his feet. "No they won't. Because I'm going to kill you. So how about before you swallow your last breath you do something worthwhile and decent with your life and condemn those mother****ers?"

"I-I can't! Please -oh God please- I got a wife man, kids too! Please!" He was crying.
Oh, and he'd finally pissed his pants. Pathetic bastard was loyal to a tee though.

"Yeah, I had a family too. Until you and your buddies came along. You want to know where my boys are? My boys are rotting in wooden six feet under the ground. Innocent children dead because of you mother ****ers. NOW TELL ME WHERE THEY ARE!"My fingers tighten, pushing against his flesh, bursting blood vessels.

"Oh God -they're- you can find 'em in their club, Blue Coyote, it's a strip bar down in south LH, they're in their mosty nights. Please don't kill me... please... pl-"

I snap his neck with a violent twist and fling his body into the trash. Even that is too good a resting place for this worthless piece of ****. The gentle patter of raindrops echoes through the silence as I watch the lifeless corpse soak into the ground at my feet. The night is young and the darkness screams for more bloodshed.

I'll happily provide it.

They call me Raven.

The Angel of Vengeance.


There. Fixed :awesome:
 
Hey guys, sorry I haven't gotten any posts up as I'd planned. Just been real crazy between work and the holidays. I'll have something up in the next day or so.
 
That's kick-ass Trusty. Just a couple of things... could you add in the marking on his mask and maybe give him an open trench coat OR a tank top style shirt.
 
Now can you give him a receding hairline, take off his boots, bloody him up, and give him a machine gun? ;)
 
You are a wonderful guy, Trusty. Beautiful. Truly beautiful.
 
Per byrd's request here is one of this villains, Game Genie:

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Like I said, if you want MicroHeroes made of some of your heroes' villains just ask. Doing these MicroHeroes helps me stay active in CAH.
 
trustyside-kick said:
Oh yea. What were the changes again?

If it's not too much to ask, do you think you could make a slight tweak to Madlove's? I was looking at it and thought the face was just kinda off a bit...I was thinking giving him "softer" features and making him less square-jawed. He's kind of effeminate/androgynous. And maybe give him a smirk or smile to convey his smugness and overall *****iness

I could pm you reference pictures if that helps at all
 
Better?

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EDIT: And also, per byrd's request, here is Disco Chuck & some of the Disco Gang:

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