Odin's Lapdog
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instead of at night time, why not just on the cusp of dawn so he gets to see the sun rising while doing his thing...
probably less linear swinging
interaction with the frame of a constructed building would be nice... also interaction with non stationary objects (i would have loved for him to encorporate webslinging off the helicopters or perhaps sticking to the bottom of one for a while in the last film).
more dynamic comic book esque leg movement and body flicking, he looked like he was putting way WAY too much effort into it in the last film, far more effort than in the first, it should be effortless.
also going back to what someone said earlier about a ripped costume, i think it would be nice, so we can see the definition and muscle tone of his body while he swings and perhaps also his parts of his facial expression as well, imagine watching his stomach going taut or his arms tightening up at specific parts of his movement. even as far as seeing his muscles contracting when his web fluid duct is being used (it's the little details that make it worthwhile).
for the love of god put a sommersault in there inbetween a swing or something, it's only happened once in the last two films (right at the beginning of the second one which was arguably the weakest of all the swings seen).
perhaps the fact that mary jane was there would be a decent idea (although very obvious to someone trying to keep a low key of their relationship), but i feel if would draw too many parallels to superman and lois' flight in the first superman film.
also small factor such as the speeding up of the swing at the bottom of it and perhaps catching glimpses of left over webbing (come to think of it, the dissolving of spidey's webbing has not yet come into question over the last two films, absolutely shocking).
overall, what i would like to see him do is to hear some danger (let's assume it's right after he's gotten rid of the symbiote and needs to get a new costume) and do the final swing in a worn out battle outfit, so he says to whoever that he needs to go and get some new threads, so he webslings in a battle ruined outfit with muscle tone and facial expressions visible, passed a scene where the rhino (or someone) sees him and thrown a car at him, while still in one fluid motion, he web slings the car, twirls and swings it back to the rhino, continuing to move forward (camera now pans back at rhino where you see the car hitting him and exploding), parker makes his way up to the top of the daily bugle where he's hidden a spare costume, in a bag, he takes it out a mask, wacks it on (indicating he's now in new threads), jumps out of a windown and swings back into the rhino's direction which is where he swings into the camera and the film ends...
that would top the first one, no problem and that's all what we're asking for, something that would top what's come before it...
probably less linear swinging
interaction with the frame of a constructed building would be nice... also interaction with non stationary objects (i would have loved for him to encorporate webslinging off the helicopters or perhaps sticking to the bottom of one for a while in the last film).
more dynamic comic book esque leg movement and body flicking, he looked like he was putting way WAY too much effort into it in the last film, far more effort than in the first, it should be effortless.
also going back to what someone said earlier about a ripped costume, i think it would be nice, so we can see the definition and muscle tone of his body while he swings and perhaps also his parts of his facial expression as well, imagine watching his stomach going taut or his arms tightening up at specific parts of his movement. even as far as seeing his muscles contracting when his web fluid duct is being used (it's the little details that make it worthwhile).
for the love of god put a sommersault in there inbetween a swing or something, it's only happened once in the last two films (right at the beginning of the second one which was arguably the weakest of all the swings seen).
perhaps the fact that mary jane was there would be a decent idea (although very obvious to someone trying to keep a low key of their relationship), but i feel if would draw too many parallels to superman and lois' flight in the first superman film.
also small factor such as the speeding up of the swing at the bottom of it and perhaps catching glimpses of left over webbing (come to think of it, the dissolving of spidey's webbing has not yet come into question over the last two films, absolutely shocking).
overall, what i would like to see him do is to hear some danger (let's assume it's right after he's gotten rid of the symbiote and needs to get a new costume) and do the final swing in a worn out battle outfit, so he says to whoever that he needs to go and get some new threads, so he webslings in a battle ruined outfit with muscle tone and facial expressions visible, passed a scene where the rhino (or someone) sees him and thrown a car at him, while still in one fluid motion, he web slings the car, twirls and swings it back to the rhino, continuing to move forward (camera now pans back at rhino where you see the car hitting him and exploding), parker makes his way up to the top of the daily bugle where he's hidden a spare costume, in a bag, he takes it out a mask, wacks it on (indicating he's now in new threads), jumps out of a windown and swings back into the rhino's direction which is where he swings into the camera and the film ends...
that would top the first one, no problem and that's all what we're asking for, something that would top what's come before it...
