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A Superhero I invented

Well, physics is my forte in the real world. Though, really, I can do just about anything with enough foreknowledge for my mind to work out.

Psychology, I'm not so good at though.
 
Whoa, I forgot to welcome you to the Hype. O.o

I'm usually a lot more collected than this.

Either way, I couldn't really stand psychology that much. Physics was just...more...relatable to me?
 
Like... with physics, I was capable of literally developing a lot of the theories (or at least their basic principles) before hearing about them. But it stops at sciences. Literatures, languages, and social things totally escape me.
 
Well, I guess my whole life. I've always studied it unknowingly in my youth, and then finally isolated it as a study in mid middle school.
 
I haven't been into psychology that long.
But history, and mythology I've pretty much been into that stuff my whole life.
 
This yet again is another one of my super heroes, so come with the feed back please.

Super Hero Name--Trooper
Real Name--Brock Masters
Aliases--
Identity--Known to few.
Occupation--Former American Military Operative
Citizenship--American-Canadian
Place of Birth--New York City, New York
Known Relatives--Unknown
Group Affiliation--The Super Soldiers
Education--4 years of high school

Height--6'8
Weight--200 lbs
Eyes--Brown
Hair--Black

Powers--Brock has enhanced strength, speed, endurance, and agility of a man his size. His gun-arm is capable of creating a blast of energy that is fed by his own energy, so when in use of this incredibly powerful attack he loses a great deal of energy which may rarely render him unconscious. He also is able of firing off at least 300 bullets per second.

Abilities--Excellent marksman. Has been extensively trained in the use of hand weapons such as various types of guns and knives. Also some training in hand to hand combat.

Weapons--When Brock's left arm, just below the elbow was taken from the rest of Brock's body he was given a 3 barrel gun in place of his old arm. This "gun-arm" is capable of firing off 1000 rounds per second if he wishes. He is also capable of creating a large energy blast by using his own energy to create it but rarely it will leave him unconscious.

Arch enemies--General

Born in the rough end of New York city, Brock Masters always tried his best to stay on the long and narrow, always dreaming of the day he could become a soldier in the U.S Army. As a late teen he joined the reserves and soon enough was sent on his way to fight in Operation Desert Storm. While away in combat, Brock had viewed terrible deaths and casualties of his fellow soldiers. Brock had fought hard against the enemy troops and had raised far above any of the other commanding officers. He was soon promoted to a special class of soldiers that were of a top secret identity. These few soldiers that had been in this certain class were known as Alpha Five. Alpha Five had consisted of the U.S Armies most valuable soldiers and had trained them to no extent for them to be the ultimate soldiers. After weeks of training and fighting enemy troops where ever they appeared, Alpha Five was sent to defuse a top secret enemy bomb targeting a near by village full of innocent people. Alpha Five had been informed that the terrorist group behind this plot were known as the Espion Corp, a sick and twisted corporation that tested its diabolic super human serums, and other experiments on countless innocents to unlock the perfect soldier. Alpha Five fought their way through the waves of on coming enemies until they reached the bomb. Brock who had been trained in the defusing of bombs stepped forth to finish the job, but suddenly the bomb exploded killing everyone in the room but miraculously Brock survived the explosion but lost his left arm from the elbow down in the blast. The hours passed into the night and Brock awoke to find himself on a laboratory table and in the place of his arm was a a large, cold, metal three barrel gun. Brock horrified and shocked escaped from the empty laboratory and was soon confronted by enemy guards and troops. He fought his way out miraculously but was quite unsure how he was able to fire the gun. Overcome with pain and fear Brock collapsed after running non stop through the desert and was found earlier the next morning by his commanding officer through a tracking device put on him. Brock left the army soon after and migrated to the Western regions of Canada in search of a better life than what the military offered and it was there he came to meet Blacksting who alongside other super heroes were on a mission of their own. When Brock and Blacksting met, Blacksting could see that he was in need of a better life and helped him recover his darkened past. Brock traveled with the others and in time grew to be known as Trooper. He and Blacksting soon after formed the team the Super Soldiers, which consisted of five heroes. He dawned a green and brown camo-like costume in memory of his army days. There on after he fought alongside his fellow heroes, so that he may one day take the life of the organized evil that took his arm and friends all that time ago.
 
:woot: Thanks, I've been making alot of characters latley and want to post most of them here.
 
Name: Evan Landing
Alias: Steam
Age:19
Nationality: American
Place Of Birth: Boston
Height: 5'9
weight: 150
Eye color: Drk Green
Hair color: Blonde
Abitlity: Power over water
Group: The Syndicate
Personality: Quiet, Deadly
His Style: Evan is a pretty basic guy, he wears a white t shirt and blue jeans.

How He Aquired the ability: Steam is one of the thirteen specimens in the "Children Of Genesis" project. Since the earlier NanoTech experiments proved to be "unstable" and at times fatal. The Purge Corp. began working on how to alter a specimen geneticly. This procedure combined some of the most briliant minds in the world, the outcome was the "Alter Gene" This gene once injected into the body, infuses itself to the DNA strand. Working like a virus it consumes and converts the DNA. Unlike the test subjects of the NanoTech alteration, these new "Class Two Meta-Human's" abilities grow, and evole over time. In some test subjects it took months, sometimes weeks, for them to develope abilities. Some painful, others extraordinary. With Steam, he is somehow able to make water bend to his desire. He has demonstrated the ability to freeze moisture in the air, and form them into ice shards. Or use the precentage of water in the human body to drown someone from the inside out. Using sheer will power.

Weakness: As of right now none of the "Class Two Meta-Humans" display any weakness. Their power seems limitless.
 
Sounds pretty sweet, have you or anyone else here ever made a comic book and sell it?
 
Name: Rebecca De'Mour
Alias: Mantis
Age:20
Nationality: Italian
Place Of Birth: Red Hook, New York
Height: 5'5
weight: 97
Eye color: Hazel
Hair color: Black
Parents: Mother (Dead), Father (Dead)
Abitlity: Heightend agility, and "Manta Blades" that protrude through her forearms.
Group: The Syndicate
Personality: Sarcastic, straight forward, displays a hard exterior. But underneath it all she's a scared little girl.
Nemesis: Jessica Eley (ShockWave)

h style. Her short black hair falls over her eyes slightly, but not enough to cover her black eye shadow. She wears a skin tight leather jacket that ends just under her bust line. And has slit sleeves to allow her "Manta Blades" to retract without restraint. She wears low cut leather pants that have three diamond shaped holes down the left leg
and a sliver waist neckless draped over her hip with a cross at the end. (It belonged to her father, she took it after she killed him) She also wears black calf lenght boots.

Info about her ability: Also a specimen of "The Children Of Genesis" program, Mantis' alteration started with her bone structure. Though she retains a "normal" human bone structure, it's stronger, tougher. The things that would break a normal person's arm, would only piss her off. Weeks later she then developed these type of blades that strangely resemble the blades of a praying mantis. That extend from her bones. Three on each forearm 3 inches wide, and a foot long. These "Manta Blades" seemed to be formed out of a toughen organic material as strong as the toughest metal. Test show they're razor sharpe and can cut through almost anything.

Weakness: "Class Two Meta-Humans" have not shown any weekness at this time.
 
This yet again is another one of my super heroes, so come with the feed back please.

Super Hero Name--Trooper
Real Name--Brock Masters
Aliases--
Identity--Known to few.
Occupation--Former American Military Operative
Citizenship--American-Canadian
Place of Birth--New York City, New York
Known Relatives--Unknown
Group Affiliation--The Super Soldiers
Education--4 years of high school

Height--6'8
Weight--200 lbs
Eyes--Brown
Hair--Black

Powers--Brock has enhanced strength, speed, endurance, and agility of a man his size. His gun-arm is capable of creating a blast of energy that is fed by his own energy, so when in use of this incredibly powerful attack he loses a great deal of energy which may rarely render him unconscious. He also is able of firing off at least 300 bullets per second.

Abilities--Excellent marksman. Has been extensively trained in the use of hand weapons such as various types of guns and knives. Also some training in hand to hand combat.

Weapons--When Brock's left arm, just below the elbow was taken from the rest of Brock's body he was given a 3 barrel gun in place of his old arm. This "gun-arm" is capable of firing off 1000 rounds per second if he wishes. He is also capable of creating a large energy blast by using his own energy to create it but rarely it will leave him unconscious.

Arch enemies--General

Born in the rough end of New York city, Brock Masters always tried his best to stay on the long and narrow, always dreaming of the day he could become a soldier in the U.S Army. As a late teen he joined the reserves and soon enough was sent on his way to fight in Operation Desert Storm. While away in combat, Brock had viewed terrible deaths and casualties of his fellow soldiers. Brock had fought hard against the enemy troops and had raised far above any of the other commanding officers. He was soon promoted to a special class of soldiers that were of a top secret identity. These few soldiers that had been in this certain class were known as Alpha Five. Alpha Five had consisted of the U.S Armies most valuable soldiers and had trained them to no extent for them to be the ultimate soldiers. After weeks of training and fighting enemy troops where ever they appeared, Alpha Five was sent to defuse a top secret enemy bomb targeting a near by village full of innocent people. Alpha Five had been informed that the terrorist group behind this plot were known as the Espion Corp, a sick and twisted corporation that tested its diabolic super human serums, and other experiments on countless innocents to unlock the perfect soldier. Alpha Five fought their way through the waves of on coming enemies until they reached the bomb. Brock who had been trained in the defusing of bombs stepped forth to finish the job, but suddenly the bomb exploded killing everyone in the room but miraculously Brock survived the explosion but lost his left arm from the elbow down in the blast. The hours passed into the night and Brock awoke to find himself on a laboratory table and in the place of his arm was a a large, cold, metal three barrel gun. Brock horrified and shocked escaped from the empty laboratory and was soon confronted by enemy guards and troops. He fought his way out miraculously but was quite unsure how he was able to fire the gun. Overcome with pain and fear Brock collapsed after running non stop through the desert and was found earlier the next morning by his commanding officer through a tracking device put on him. Brock left the army soon after and migrated to the Western regions of Canada in search of a better life than what the military offered and it was there he came to meet Blacksting who alongside other super heroes were on a mission of their own. When Brock and Blacksting met, Blacksting could see that he was in need of a better life and helped him recover his darkened past. Brock traveled with the others and in time grew to be known as Trooper. He and Blacksting soon after formed the team the Super Soldiers, which consisted of five heroes. He dawned a green and brown camo-like costume in memory of his army days. There on after he fought alongside his fellow heroes, so that he may one day take the life of the organized evil that took his arm and friends all that time ago.

I like this guy
 
Thanks:woot:......Theres something that I've had on my mind now about one of my old creations Renegade. As some of you might know, when i first posted him on here I quickly realized that he was to much like Wolverine. But I got to thinking besides the powers and history is he like Wolverine? Since I've been working on this character for about 5 years now I think I know quite a bit about him. I got to think how his personality his like Wolverine's. So when I compared the two together I realized that they were two completely different people.
  • While Wolverine would pop his claws in any fight he is faced with, Renegade would only use his claws if he had no other choice but would resort to hand-to-hand combat instead.
  • Wolverine is a wise man from being all over the world, has a rough, long history. Renegade hasn't even graduated yet, but is sill at the top of his class, and yet hasn't even had as much experience in the super-hero business as Wolverine.
  • Wolverine is rough around the edges, but has a heart of gold, but if he is angered he can show his mean side. Renegade is the comdeian out of all of my heroes. He can be foolish and comical but also serious and ready to take charge.
So thats why I think that Wolverine and Renegade are so different. Not because Wolverine has 3 claws while Renegade has 2. But because they are 2 entirely different people.
 
good points Donald, but give them time now.

Just give them time to find something in your post to bag you about and they will. Almost like a pack of dogs they'll attack.


But with Renegade, at least you were brave enough to put it on the threads. I've got about 25 characters i've created that i won't post on here because people will say they're to much like other heroes already out there.

But be honest, how many 'different' heroes have different powers? I'd say maybe 100 in the marvel universe before copies are made with slight background and an extra power thrown in.
 
that's true. people make it difficult to create new characters without them being compared to existing heroes.
 
While Wolverine would pop his claws in any fight he is faced with, Renegade would only use his claws if he had no other choice but would resort to hand-to-hand combat instead.
Claws man, claws. It will make anything look like a rip-off of Wolverine.

Wolverine is a wise man from being all over the world, has a rough, long history. Renegade hasn't even graduated yet, but is sill at the top of his class, and yet hasn't even had as much experience in the super-hero business as Wolverine.
I wouldn't call Wolverine wise. X-23 is literally a clone of Wolverine and she's about the same age as your Renegade character.

Wolverine is rough around the edges, but has a heart of gold, but if he is angered he can show his mean side. Renegade is the comdeian out of all of my heroes. He can be foolish and comical but also serious and ready to take charge.
Whedon's Wolverine is pretty funny
 

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