A Superhero I invented

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So Donald have you created any new Super Villains lately? I have just finished the newest sketch of Nightavenger. I also finished a story with the first appearnce of one of his major enemies. I will be writing the next story where he takes on a gang soon.
 
Yes actually I've created a handful of new heroes and villains. heres just one of my new ones but I'm still working on his history.

[FONT=Verdana, Verdana]Super-Villain Name--Deadbolt
Real Name--Jack Moffat
Aliases--None
Identity--Known to police.
Occupation--Former Body Builder, Criminal
Citizenship--American
Place of Birth--New York City, New York
Known Relatives--Unknown
Group Affiliation--
Education--4 years of high school

Height--7'0
Weight--450 lbs
Eyes--Brown
Hair--None

Powers--Super Strength and Super Speed

Abilities--Jack is an accomplished and proffessional body builder, with 18 world titles

Arch enemies--Renegade
 
^^^If he's seven feet tall, he's not gonna clock in at 200 pounds if he's a pro bodybuilder. He'll weigh upwards of 450, possibly as high as 600.

I'm not even a bodybuilder, I just work out to stay built, and I'm 185, working to 200, and I'm only 5'10".
 
Didn't really figure all his muscle could weigh that much lol, but thanks for the info.:woot:
 
I am in the middle of the first fight where Nightavenger takes on the gang. I also thought of a new Super Villain.
 
I am in the middle of the first fight where Nightavenger takes on the gang. I also thought of a new Super Villain.

There is substance behind your character and the plot itself, right? It is not just mindless action?
 
Im also working on a series of comics, I'v started to sell them at my local comic book store. And Ghostrider87 showed me his new super villain, hes not bad, great actually.
 
I'm also working on a series of comics, I've started to sell them at my local comic book store. And Ghostrider87 showed me his new super villain, hes not bad, great actually.

Thats cool your going to the lengths of producing the comic and putting it out there. Major Props, Dude. You should do something online though, that way you could reach a wider readership.

Me, I'm getting my first book ready to go to the printers (we're in the editing process right now, grammar and spelling). Till that all finished, in a few months, promotion is underway. But thats what you have to do, just go and make yourself and your material known. Marketing is key with any product after all.
 
Drop the character alltogether. It's way too much like Wolverine. And by Way too much, I mean a complete carbon copy of Wolverine

he sounds just like wolverine, except the age. Why don't you just write a wolverine story.
 
Hey, donaldthe3rd, is Renegade the character you have been placing on the racks at your local comic book store?
 
Yeah, but with some other super heroes and villains that I made but are soon to get their own titles.

Well rscal I know where your coming from. But like I've posted on here before, there are a great many differences between Renegade and Wolverine. If it be his powers that you are refering to, then yes there are some similarities but heck what super-hero doesnt have the same or close to same power as another. If its his costume then theres no way their like eachother really. But anyways yes there are some similarities but a great many differences between the two. And like I've also recently said there is almost no two super-heroes that don't share the same super power.
 
I agree with you on that. Almost every new hero that is in comics now days all share similar powers with a hero that has been around for years...only they call the power something else.
 
I made my own superhero long ago. He's an interesting character with one of those names you'd get from the Golden Age of comics (which is why I'm afraid that he's already been done) but anyways, his name is DINOMAN. I've altered his origin quite a bit.

It's a classic origin, as a kid, his parent are killed by a "ganglord" and the kid is thrown into "exile" for years as he grows up in the streets, turning his home into his "playground" like it's usually said. Anyways, he grows up, gets a job, and starts making money, but he still lives on the street. He dawns the costume and becomes "Dinoman". He swears vengeance on the man who killed his parents.

We soon find out that the name of the ganglord is "Bobo". (funny name) He originally had a design very similar to Kingpin, but then I changed it. He almost resembles "Nosferatu". He's big, fat, and has a hunched back. He begins waves of crime searching for Dinoman who has been taking out his henchman. Events lead to one another, and Dinoman and Bobo meet face to face. They duel, leaving Dinoman as the loser, and Bobo supposedly dead.

I've come up with other characters such as:

Dr.Lazer!
and
Frogger

Dr.Lazer: Scientist who develops a formula to turn him into a floating mass of electricity at will.

Frogger: Human who has been mutated into a frog due to radioactive incidents. He's dubbed the name Frogger, due to his many attacks on the streets.

There's a lot more, but that's just a little taste of it.
 
:woot:I like your Dinoman, don't think that that name has been used before so thats good. I like the whole turning the streets into his home thing. If he has powers, what are they?
 
There is substance behind your character and the plot itself, right? It is not just mindless action?

Yes it is not just mindless action. Nightavenger is helping a dance instructor who was getting attacked by a gang. The gang wants to destroy the studio so they can claim it as another part of their turf. There is going to be three different battles before Nightavenger or the gang can claim victory.
 
Heres yet again another guy I've just recently whipped together in one of my cimics Iv made, I dont have his history done yet but here's his bio stats:

Super Name--Napalm
[FONT=Arial, Monoco] Real Name--Nathan Noles
Aliases--none
Identity--Secret
Occupation--Inventor
Citizenship--American
Place of Birth--Coney Island, New York
Known Relatives--Unknown
Group Affiliation--Super Soldiers
Education--4 years of high school

Height--5'10
Weight--150 lbs
Eyes--Blue
Hair--Black

Powers--Nathan posseses the ability to absorb energy around himself and charge his body full of that
[/FONT][FONT=Arial, Monoco]energy that when released causes a great explosion. Nathan can also release this energy through his eyes at will.

Abilities--Nathan has a genius IQ and is a successful inventor.
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I agree with Ghostrider87, mindless action is when you commit an action that is completely uncalled for or pointless, what Nightavenger is doing is helping someone for a cause.
 
Dinoman really has no power. You could consider him as a sort of Batman type character. He uses ninja weapons, guns, and his own self made things such as jet pac wings. He doesn't have a name, because he was too young to even have one when his parents were born. His origin is faded, so that's what keeps this guy fighting, not just to kill Bobo, but to find out who he is. He invents his own ego human to get by in the real world as a human being. I drew some cool sketches last year of some of the characters. Dinoman is a very interesting character. When I get the chance, i'll either write a comic, a novel, or a script on him, just for fun. You never know, he might be the superhero of tomorrow, just like any of our creations.
 
Thats kool, having the mysterious past and trying to make a life for himself. Sounds really good. Do you have any pictures that you could post on here?
 
A good rule which I try to keep by with my writings:

If, when introduced, you immediately hear, "This sounds a lot like so-and-so," then it does.

Change or drop it, while considering certain circumstances.
 

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