A Superhero I invented

[SammyLoLoc (SW)]

Here's a list of chracters that will appear throughout the cousre of the stories.

The AlterMen

Trace (main character)
Ohm
WARR
Clone
Cam
HotStreak

The Syndicate

Armagedon
Steam
Mantis
Windy
Quake

Children Of Genesis

Shockwave
Franky
NightBreed
Loz
Fate
Salena
FeLyne
Stretch
Jett
Stone
John

 

[donaldthe3rd]

thats sounds kool, i hope to see them sometime, if anyone would like to see some of my super-heroes i have created just got to my temporary website www.herocustomz.piczo.com

 

[SammyLoLoc (SW)]

Name: Patricia "Patsy" Kimizuka
Alias: OHM
Age:26
Nationality: Japanese
Place Of Birth: Tokyo, Japan
Height: 5'6
weight: 100
Eye color: Greyish Blue
Hair color: Dark Royal Blue
Abitlity: Controls electricity, and can manipulate anything powered by it.
Group: The AlterMen
Personality: Caring, considerate, headstrong, destructive.

Her Style: Patricia is "Japanese punk" in every aspect of the term. With her short dark blue hair that's always done up in crazy styles. To her small (generally dark color) wife beaters, and jackets. She wears two black studded leather wrist bands on her left and right wrist (those aren't for show). She wears a black belt with an oversized buckled shaped in the letter "O", relax fit (dark color) cargo pants, and black boots with metal buckles to the outside of them.

How she Aquired the ability: One of the first victims of The Purge Corp. viscious acts, Patricia was submited to the most painful torture of them all. Like most of the specimens, The Purge Corp. had specific plans for this one. Submited to numerous painful operations Patricia's body was injected with Nanos, that bored deep into her muscle structure, and the underlineing of her skin. In atempts to convert her body into a walking superconductor. This (though painful as it was) was just the begining. Many specimens before Patricia died during this process, only her and her sister survived. In the next stage of the operation Patricia was repeatedly electrocuted with high voltage currents. After each initial hit the current increased. Seeing that she was still alive meant that the Nanos were doing their job. Though each high voltage shock was highly painful, she remained concious. The Nanos succesfully transformed her body into a virtual "battery". Thrilled (but not satified) the scientist amped up the voltage even higher, until in an electrical charged explosion, Patricia vanished into the over headlights. Shorting out everything in the lab. Then in an explosion as the one before, she was found on the floor motionless....

Weakness: Though OHM can generate electrical energy and channel it into physical attacks, it's difficult to aim effectively. She uses studded wrist bands to focus the blasts.

 

[SammyLoLoc (SW)]

Name: Patricia "Patsy" Kimizuka
Alias: OHM
Age:26
Nationality: Japanese
Place Of Birth: Tokyo, Japan
Height: 5'6
weight: 100
Eye color: Greyish Blue
Hair color: Dark Royal Blue
Abitlity: Controls electricity, and can manipulate anything powered by it.
Group: The AlterMen
Personality: Caring, considerate, headstrong, destructive.

Her Style: Patricia is "Japanese punk" in every aspect of the term. With her short dark blue hair that's always done up in crazy styles. To her small (generally dark color) wife beaters, and jackets. She wears two black studded leather wrist bands on her left and right wrist (those aren't for show). She wears a black belt with an oversized buckled shaped in the letter "O", relax fit (dark color) cargo pants, and black boots with metal buckles to the outside of them.

How she Aquired the ability: One of the first victims of The Purge Corp. viscious acts, Patricia was submited to the most painful torture of them all. Like most of the specimens, The Purge Corp. had specific plans for this one. Submited to numerous painful operations Patricia's body was injected with Nanos, that bored deep into her muscle structure, and the underlineing of her skin. In atempts to convert her body into a walking superconductor. This (though painful as it was) was just the begining. Many specimens before Patricia died during this process, only her and her sister survived. In the next stage of the operation Patricia was repeatedly electrocuted with high voltage currents. After each initial hit the current increased. Seeing that she was still alive meant that the Nanos were doing their job. Though each high voltage shock was highly painful, she remained concious. The Nanos succesfully transformed her body into a virtual "battery". Thrilled (but not satified) the scientist amped up the voltage even higher, until in an electrical charged explosion, Patricia vanished into the over headlights. Shorting out everything in the lab. Then in an explosion as the one before, she was found on the floor motionless....

Weakness: Though OHM can generate electrical energy and channel it into physical attacks, it's difficult to aim effectively. She uses studded wrist bands to focus the blasts.

 

[Elektrafan3370]

Well I invented several.

name: Mike Whitely
A.K.A.: The Protector
weapon: sai
power: none
costume color: black
hair color: brown

history: His parents were killed in a fire that burned down their summer home. Him and his 2 older brothers, Jake and John, ran back to their other house. Jake was killed by a group called "The Destroyers" and John dissapeared leaving Mike at a karate school for orphans. There he learned the ways of the "sai" and "bo-staff" and "fist fighting" He later on, being kicked out of the school for anger issues, becomes an assassin. But one day, when waiting for the job package to come and his targets identified. He runs into a girl and her older brother. He soon finds out he is supposed to kill them but deciding not to after having thanksgiving with them. They go on the run from "The Destroyers" and then that is when Mike finds out the truth about his brother John and his where-abouts.

Name: Megan Elizabith
A.K.A.: The Vanquisher
weapon: sai, katana, throwing stars, etc.
Power: super human speed and agility
costume color: dark Purple
hair color: Brown

history
When her family dies and she lives on her own, at the age of 13, she looks for a job. Unable to find one she becomes and assassin and kills for hire. She then falls in love with a man she is supposed to kill and saves both from a group of assassins.

also on the horizon I am writing an "Elektra" movie. Don't worry it's not related to the movies DD and the other Elektra. I am making a way way way closer to the comics script. She will have black hair, dark red outfit, and the story includes 1 little change. Nina is related to McKinley. Elektra and McKinley are in love, which is the same as the original first series.
The Architect sends 4 assassins, also known as "The 4 Winds" comes to kill them but you know Elektra. She kicks their butts and moves on.

For whole synopsis and movie posters these movies check out www.freewebs.com/endlessadventureentertainment/

 

[SammyLoLoc (SW)]

the first kinda sounds similar to electra.

 

[dusk20]

Wow guys. You are doing a lot of work on these characters.

 

[SammyLoLoc (SW)]

I write novel lenght stories on my characters, so I try to be as creative as possible.

 

[WeaponZ2]

Edit

 

[dusk20]

I write novel lenght stories on my characters, so I try to be as creative as possible.

Thats cool man. I always try and do the same thing, but once i start, i look over every part of the character and go crazy trying to work them out.

 

[spdrknight]

I write novel lenght stories on my characters, so I try to be as creative as possible.

How many have your written?

 

[SammyLoLoc (SW)]

I have writin one complete story on my old cpu, but it crashed and wiped it out. So I'm re doing it. All those characters from the list are from a series of stroies called "Neo Genesis". I'm hanging on to false hopes of acually publishing my stories.

 

[SammyLoLoc (SW)]

donaldthe3rd do you think you can draw HotStreak for me, that would be cool.

 

[spdrknight]

I have writin one complete story on my old cpu, but it crashed and wiped it out. So I'm re doing it. All those characters from the list are from a series of stroies called "Neo Genesis". I'm hanging on to false hopes of acually publishing my stories.

Cool ! How long did it take you the first time? And how long was it, page wise and word wise?

 

[SammyLoLoc (SW)]

I kind of put things off/on hold very often, so it took me quite a while to finish. (I'm trying to get better at that). As for pages I can't remember. But Dean Koontz said in order for it to be considerd a novel it has to be at least 50,000 words.

 

[donaldthe3rd]

donaldthe3rd do you think you can draw HotStreak for me, that would be cool.

SammyLoLoc I'll try my best.

 

[spdrknight]

I kind of put things off/on hold very often, so it took me quite a while to finish. (I'm trying to get better at that). As for pages I can't remember. But Dean Koontz said in order for it to be considerd a novel it has to be at least 50,000 words.

I don't know if Dean Koontz said that, but I know that in the industry a manuscript is considered a novel if its word count is on average between 60,000 to 100,000 words. But I guess 50,000 is close enough. The industry is strange like that, there seems to be be no standard (from what I have seen at least).

Most of the stuff on the Hype is short though, I am not even sure if you could consider some of the works short stories.

 

[SammyLoLoc (SW)]

He didn't actually say it. It was in the back of one of his books, you "A word from the author"....

Thanks donaldthe3rd.

 

[LouFerignoDemon]

I made a comic universe once. Had something like 160 or so characters in it, all with different stories, a few major events, totally fleshed out. And then I got lazy.

I'm one of those people who loves to create, but hates to actually commit to writing it down. I would literally require a partner to do anything with it.

 

[Diamanthus]

I made a comic universe once. Had something like 160 or so characters in it, all with different stories, a few major events, totally fleshed out. And then I got lazy.

I'm one of those people who loves to create, but hates to actually commit to writing it down. I would literally require a partner to do anything with it.

I'll be your partner t:

 

[LouFerignoDemon]

I'll be your partner t:

I meant one with conviction.

 

[SammyLoLoc (SW)]

lol ouch.

I started writing down ideas for another story that I wanna do call "A.T.O.M.".
(see this is why I can never finish a story)

 

[LouFerignoDemon]

Nah, Diamanthus is the only person who knows me in the real world.

Plus, I had like a whole SLEW of characters, from quantum physics based (which was fun, because it's my specialty) to magic, to gods, to demons, to parallels to anything.

 

[Diamanthus]

hey, I got conviction but it all depends on if it catches my interest.

 

[SammyLoLoc (SW)]

quantum physics? I like psychology myself.