The Dark Knight Rises The Opening Sequence.

but here are 5 voices... each having multiple lines... TDK's teaser had one line from bruce, one from alfred and one from joker... here its way too much talking behind a logo... you are telling a story here.. the tdk one was simply a message about the joker.

Ah ok man. How bout this 'revision';

BRUCE: Gotham, Alfred..... It's worse than it's ever been....
ALFRED: How much more do you think you can do, Sir?
BRUCE: I have to fight. I can bring this city back.
ALFRED: You said yourself, Sir; You can't stay in the shadows and make the difference.
BRUCE: But I have to try, Alfred. I have to believe this City can be saved.
ALFRED: Why, Sir? You've only ever acted for the good of Gotham, and now it hunts you like the very people you swore to protect it from. I've seen you come back bruised, beaten, and barely able to stand. Maybe it's time to put away the cowl.
BRUCE: I can't do that. I have to do this, because only I can Alfred.
ALFRED: One day Sir, you won't come back through those doors. Remember that each time you walk out of them. What happens when you're not around to fight for Gotham?
BRUCE: I can't ever let that happen.
ALFRED: But what if it does?
BANE: I will break you, Batman...
.....END.....

Bit better. A good intro to Bane I think. What do you think?
 
Ah ok man. How bout this 'revision';

BRUCE: Gotham, Alfred..... It's worse than it's ever been....
ALFRED: How much more do you think you can do, Sir?
BRUCE: I have to fight. I can bring this city back.
ALFRED: You said yourself, Sir; You can't stay in the shadows and make the difference.
BRUCE: But I have to try, Alfred. I have to believe this City can be saved.
ALFRED: Why, Sir? You've only ever acted for the good of Gotham, and now it hunts you like the very people you swore to protect it from. I've seen you come back bruised, beaten, and barely able to stand. Maybe it's time to put away the cowl.
BRUCE: I can't do that. I have to do this, because only I can Alfred.
ALFRED: One day Sir, you won't come back through those doors. Remember that each time you walk out of them. What happens when you're not around to fight for Gotham?
BRUCE: I can't ever let that happen.
ALFRED: But what if it does?
BANE: I will break you, Batman...
.....END.....

Bit better. A good intro to Bane I think. What do you think?
i like it but i dont think bane and batman should meet right at the beginning of the film, especially if its just the opening sequence but i think that would work well as a scene later on in the film though since i'm assuming bane will be more established by then
 
i like it but i dont think bane and batman should meet right at the beginning of the film, especially if its just the opening sequence but i think that would work well as a scene later on in the film though since i'm assuming bane will be more established by then

Sorry man, I stated in my original post a page back that this wouldn't be the opening sequence, just a teaser trailer like the first TDK one.
 
Sorry man, I stated in my original post a page back that this wouldn't be the opening sequence, just a teaser trailer like the first TDK one.

Yeah, I thought your dialogue flowed very well, I could imagine that being used in a teaser trailer.
 
Sorry man, I stated in my original post a page back that this wouldn't be the opening sequence, just a teaser trailer like the first TDK one.
oops my mistake, then honestly i'm all for it:awesome: i wouldnt mind bane breaking into the batcave
 
Ah ok man. How bout this 'revision';

BRUCE: Gotham, Alfred..... It's worse than it's ever been....
ALFRED: How much more do you think you can do, Sir?
BRUCE: I have to fight. I can bring this city back.
ALFRED: You said yourself, Sir; You can't stay in the shadows and make the difference.
BRUCE: But I have to try, Alfred. I have to believe this City can be saved.
ALFRED: Why, Sir? You've only ever acted for the good of Gotham, and now it hunts you like the very people you swore to protect it from. I've seen you come back bruised, beaten, and barely able to stand. Maybe it's time to put away the cowl.
BRUCE: I can't do that. I have to do this, because only I can Alfred.
ALFRED: One day Sir, you won't come back through those doors. Remember that each time you walk out of them. What happens when you're not around to fight for Gotham?
BRUCE: I can't ever let that happen.
ALFRED: But what if it does?
BANE: I will break you, Batman...
.....END.....

Bit better. A good intro to Bane I think. What do you think?

Alfred sure does say 'Sir' alot. :woot:
 
I'd like to see some nice top-view shots and Talia doing a little bust to get bane out of prison when he gets himself out just days before she arrives.
 
Catwoman during a heist, fouled by Batman, but she escapes nonetheless. The GCPD is in on the mask. It's at night.
 
Catwoman during a heist, fouled by Batman, but she escapes nonetheless. The GCPD is in on the mask. It's at night.

I have a feeling it will be a Catwoman scene as well. The opening scene of TDK was an intro to the Joker, and it was amazing. This can be an opening scene to Catwoman.

And hopefully, Nolan will release the first 7 mins before some random movie again, like he did with I am Legend. That was a crazy ass preview.
 
I think the opening sequence should be like TDK, setting up the story, have Batman on the run, have the news against him, show Gordon and Batman interect and then bring in catwoman.
 

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