cyclone
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but here are 5 voices... each having multiple lines... TDK's teaser had one line from bruce, one from alfred and one from joker... here its way too much talking behind a logo... you are telling a story here.. the tdk one was simply a message about the joker.
Ah ok man. How bout this 'revision';
BRUCE: Gotham, Alfred..... It's worse than it's ever been....
ALFRED: How much more do you think you can do, Sir?
BRUCE: I have to fight. I can bring this city back.
ALFRED: You said yourself, Sir; You can't stay in the shadows and make the difference.
BRUCE: But I have to try, Alfred. I have to believe this City can be saved.
ALFRED: Why, Sir? You've only ever acted for the good of Gotham, and now it hunts you like the very people you swore to protect it from. I've seen you come back bruised, beaten, and barely able to stand. Maybe it's time to put away the cowl.
BRUCE: I can't do that. I have to do this, because only I can Alfred.
ALFRED: One day Sir, you won't come back through those doors. Remember that each time you walk out of them. What happens when you're not around to fight for Gotham?
BRUCE: I can't ever let that happen.
ALFRED: But what if it does?
BANE: I will break you, Batman...
.....END.....
Bit better. A good intro to Bane I think. What do you think?