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This is a continuation thread, the old thread is [split]514417[/split]
I'm not going to bring CW into this only to say that it's core story line falls completely apart on any level of analysis (for obvious reasons of needing to fit into a specific template) whereas that is absolutely not the case in BvS.
The amount of illogical, poorly written and awful plot machinations in this film is mindboggling.
I will elaborate just on the 3rd act for this post.
1. Lex summons Superman to him and tells him to kill Batman or Martha dies. While in the midst of bringing Doomsday to life.
Why did Lex want Superman to kill Batman?
What threat was Batman? Or was he expecting Batman to kill Superman?
If the latter, why was he resurrecting Doomsday regardless?
2. Why didn't Superman talk things out with Batman? The reasoning for their fight was so poorly done. Esspecially on Superman's part. I mean really. He went to fight and kill Batman cause Lex had his mother? Why didn't he just fly straight to where she was kept and rescue her. Don't try and tell me he would not know where she was when he can hear everything and was conditioned to "listen to her heartbeat". [MOS]. Nor can you use the "They will kill her if a rescue is attempted" because they sure as hell knew someone was attempting a rescue. what with the direct violent assault where she was being held.
3. Why would Superman agree and allow this violent vigilante who only a moment prior was on the verge of slaying him go and save his own Mother? This was ridiculous and was the straw that broke the camels back for me in regards to the film's poor reasoning.
How can he possibly trust Batman to complete such a personal and urgent task? when he could do it far quicker and more efficiently.
Then it is not even mentioned when they meet up again. [As far as I can remember]. Absolutely ridiculous writing.
4. Why would Batman lead Doomsday to an area in the city that was more susceptible to disaster and potential death than the abandoned island Doomsday was on. It would of made far more sense to go and pick up the Spear and bring it to the fight than the other way around.
5. Why did Superman have to die? This was awfully executed in the fight. Why did Superman have to get the spear and how did he know he was going to die? Why the sacrifice when it could of been so easily avoided by some communication with his allies.
When Superman died, I felt nothing. NOTHING. It was so poorly executed. It was so unnecessary.
And then the film went on for another 10 minutes, trying desperately to tug at my heartstrings and feel heartbreak. Only for the completely obvious to happen and for Superman to not really be dead. How the writers thought that this was going to work I have no idea.
I believe the answers to all my questions above and why the reasoning, logic and execution of the story was so poor and divisive is because they had action set piece storyboards thought out before they had an actual script. The joining of the dots in the story and script came second to the action set pieces and visual ideas.
I have said it numerous times.
This film would have to be the most disappointing movie I have ever seen.
The amount of illogical, poorly written and awful plot machinations in this film is mindboggling.
I will elaborate just on the 3rd act for this post.
1. Lex summons Superman to him and tells him to kill Batman or Martha dies. While in the midst of bringing Doomsday to life.
Why did Lex want Superman to kill Batman?
What threat was Batman? Or was he expecting Batman to kill Superman?
If the latter, why was he resurrecting Doomsday regardless?
2. Why didn't Superman talk things out with Batman? The reasoning for their fight was so poorly done. Esspecially on Superman's part. I mean really. He went to fight and kill Batman cause Lex had his mother? Why didn't he just fly straight to where she was kept and rescue her. Don't try and tell me he would not know where she was when he can hear everything and was conditioned to "listen to her heartbeat". [MOS]. Nor can you use the "They will kill her if a rescue is attempted" because they sure as hell knew someone was attempting a rescue. what with the direct violent assault where she was being held.
3. Why would Superman agree and allow this violent vigilante who only a moment prior was on the verge of slaying him go and save his own Mother? This was ridiculous and was the straw that broke the camels back for me in regards to the film's poor reasoning.
How can he possibly trust Batman to complete such a personal and urgent task? when he could do it far quicker and more efficiently.
Then it is not even mentioned when they meet up again. [As far as I can remember]. Absolutely ridiculous writing.
4. Why would Batman lead Doomsday to an area in the city that was more susceptible to disaster and potential death than the abandoned island Doomsday was on. It would of made far more sense to go and pick up the Spear and bring it to the fight than the other way around.
5. Why did Superman have to die? This was awfully executed in the fight. Why did Superman have to get the spear and how did he know he was going to die? Why the sacrifice when it could of been so easily avoided by some communication with his allies.
When Superman died, I felt nothing. NOTHING. It was so poorly executed. It was so unnecessary.
And then the film went on for another 10 minutes, trying desperately to tug at my heartstrings and feel heartbreak. Only for the completely obvious to happen and for Superman to not really be dead. How the writers thought that this was going to work I have no idea.
I believe the answers to all my questions above and why the reasoning, logic and execution of the story was so poor and divisive is because they had action set piece storyboards thought out before they had an actual script. The joining of the dots in the story and script came second to the action set pieces and visual ideas.
I have said it numerous times.
This film would have to be the most disappointing movie I have ever seen.
"So I know I regularly fly across the planet if I hear that Lois is in danger, but I can't seem to find my mom within these city limits! I'll let the guy who just tried to kill me take care of that. Maybe he'll have a magic butler who'll conveniently pinpoint her location."
again, doesn't know his mother is in Gotham
As for Lois- I don't think its unreasonable that when she is in Africa on a dangerous assignment that he is purposely keeping an eye and ear on her- considering her knack for getting into trouble
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I've read your thoughts on CW, and your levels of hypocrisy are through the roof.
But... I wouldn't expect anything different. You're a rabid defender of Snyder's movie, with absolutely no desire for any kind of critical thinking towards it whatsoever. To you, it's faultless. No movie is faultless, and your refusal to see anything wrong with it pretty much invalidates any of your arguments. You're like a religious zealot.
I guess at least you're consistent.
The old man just didn't get the complex higher dimensions of the film.
Sweet, it's Jaxon time;
1) Lex: "Do you know the oldest lie in America senator, that power can be innocent". Without going into the entirety of Lex's motivation at it's core is that he can't believe the world is accepting of Superman when his view of the world is that anything that is all powerful can't be all good. And like everyone on this forum, goes out to prove to the world that he is right and we are wrong. Superman kills Batman, he is right, and the world sees (all powerful, not all good). Batman kills Superman, he is right, and the world sees (all good, but not all powerful).
Why Doomsday? Because he doesn't really think Batman will win, and he needs a contingency for Superman in that case. Even though he tricks Batman into the fight by arming him with the tools to stand a chance he really doesn't think that Batman could possibly win.
2) Superman reasoning: Superman tries to reason, as he does Batman launches attacks on him and starts jeering him, so Superman decides to subdue him first (he is running out of time quickly and realises Batman is not up for talking this out) but kryptonite is introduced pretty quickly into the fight and then it's all gloves off.
3) Batman tells Superman he needs to go and stop what's happening at the scout ship (obviously a Superman job) and Batman so distraught with the way he has acted honours a promise to a man he know realises is not the monster, and Batman starts down a better path. I don't need to explain the Martha moment again you can read that on any page.
4) WW: "why did you lead him back to the city"
Batman: "The port is abandoned. There's a weapon here that can kill it."
Superman and Wonder Woman are not present when Batman makes the decision to lead him closer to the spear.
5) Superman had to die to make this world fully appreciate his motivations, where doubt and anger at his existence and motives around the globe were growing. It was the right call for him to get the spear and end Doomsday quickly. He didn't know he would die, but he knew it was highly likely and completes his arc from Kal-el to Superman.
When the trinity are first together he says "it's a creature from another world, my world." (this is Kal-El speaking). A few minutes later with spear nearby he says to Lois "This is my world. You are my world." (this is Superman speaking).
again, doesn't know his mother is in Gotham
As for Lois- I don't think its unreasonable that when she is in Africa on a dangerous assignment that he is purposely keeping an eye and ear on her- considering her knack for getting into trouble
Again, there is precedence set for him being selective when he's using these powers.
I forgot why I stopped posting in this thread. But the last few pages have reminded me. Think I'll step out again - I feel bad for everyone that hangs around that hated the movie that really wanted to like it. I thought it was brilliant and has me excited for whats to come.
The plot dictated he not know where Martha is and that was the only reason he couldn't find her. If we went by the ground rules established by the movie he should have been able to locate his mother in less than five minutes and swooped in. I believe the fact that he didn't falls to plot induced stupidity otherwise referred to as PIS.
so Jaxon time is a poorly constructed response to reasonably identified criticisms.
oh you mean the ground rules established by the movie which show that he is not consistently using his elevated senses at all times?
k.
souperman said:Seriously duds, can't you read into anything? Are you SO literal that you can not understand the simple "descriptive" comment he meant by using the word coma?
I am sure everyone else understood that he was suggesting that since superman WILL return, his DEATH is really more "like" a coma...because he comes back!
Just a way of describing things bros.
Maybe m1ll3r, whatever the heck that means, works for Webster being a Brit and can't help himself, but what's your excuse aNarcHy2day?
Are you both related to Drax? Must be fun to have a face to face convo with you, correcting grammar and syntax all the time.
This is supposed to be a fun and enjoyable discussion. Points of view. Not a point game. There is no winner or loser. This is not a winner take all war. It is a discussion forum. Picking on phrasing is just weak. Some people just type fast. Sometimes they don't formulate their ideas completely because they are excited to post it. These posts are not thesis. They are not handed in to be graded...are they?
I didn't bother to edit myself so have fun analyzing the sentences.